Comments received on poems by Trenz Pruca
Grab the Day
Fay Slimm. said:
Howe true your last sentence Trenz - - this day will not come again so grabbing it makes lots of sense.
October 7th, 2020 13:17
Fay Slimm. said:
Howe true your last sentence Trenz - - this day will not come again so grabbing it makes lots of sense.
October 7th, 2020 13:17
Grab the Day
Goldfinch60 said:
So true each day and each moment are so special.
Andy
October 7th, 2020 04:44
Goldfinch60 said:
So true each day and each moment are so special.
Andy
October 7th, 2020 04:44
Grab the Day
Lorna said:
Good ones for keeping spirits up even in virus days.......
October 7th, 2020 03:59
Lorna said:
Good ones for keeping spirits up even in virus days.......
October 7th, 2020 03:59
Grab the Day
dusk arising said:
In these times of lockdown and shielding many of us are finding a lot more time on our hands that we have ever experienced before in our adult lives.
Your piece has found the right time in all our lives for us to focus on your words.
But there is so much danger, especially for unfit older people like me, so we find ourselves somewhat limited to go out there and make life happen.
October 6th, 2020 22:18
dusk arising said:
In these times of lockdown and shielding many of us are finding a lot more time on our hands that we have ever experienced before in our adult lives.
Your piece has found the right time in all our lives for us to focus on your words.
But there is so much danger, especially for unfit older people like me, so we find ourselves somewhat limited to go out there and make life happen.
October 6th, 2020 22:18
Homage to Halas
Lorna said:
Thing is we always think things will stay and they never do .... everything is a memory... even just this minute that you read this..... depressing isn\'t it.
October 3rd, 2020 04:49
Lorna said:
Thing is we always think things will stay and they never do .... everything is a memory... even just this minute that you read this..... depressing isn\'t it.
October 3rd, 2020 04:49
Love is not splendid
Lorna said:
That\'s \"at worst\" Trenz - not at best! But you have captured at worst!
October 2nd, 2020 05:32
Lorna said:
That\'s \"at worst\" Trenz - not at best! But you have captured at worst!
October 2nd, 2020 05:32
Love is not splendid
L. B. Mek said:
alarmingly those blisters manifest during swimming practise and that empty room exists somewhere deep within, meaning that hollowness is prominent even when busily surrounded by smiling faces,
a great gem you\'ve penned
October 2nd, 2020 04:11
L. B. Mek said:
alarmingly those blisters manifest during swimming practise and that empty room exists somewhere deep within, meaning that hollowness is prominent even when busily surrounded by smiling faces,
a great gem you\'ve penned
October 2nd, 2020 04:11
Song of a poor scavenger.
L. B. Mek said:
there is so many ways to view the truth in the term: My way, as \'My\' is so intertwined with all the influences that curate our sense of self, though in your two exquisite stanzas you have outlined the simple pride in owning the choices we make in life.
No: not all of us need to adhere to society\'s tick boxes of assembly line - picket fenced - picture perfect family portraits: for our existence to be \'perfectly suited\' to our unique wants and needs...
sorry if I read too much into your writing and tarnished its meaning, a brilliant write!
September 28th, 2020 04:46
L. B. Mek said:
there is so many ways to view the truth in the term: My way, as \'My\' is so intertwined with all the influences that curate our sense of self, though in your two exquisite stanzas you have outlined the simple pride in owning the choices we make in life.
No: not all of us need to adhere to society\'s tick boxes of assembly line - picket fenced - picture perfect family portraits: for our existence to be \'perfectly suited\' to our unique wants and needs...
sorry if I read too much into your writing and tarnished its meaning, a brilliant write!
September 28th, 2020 04:46
Song of a poor scavenger.
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, so much of value is just thrown away in the society that we now live.
Andy
September 27th, 2020 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, so much of value is just thrown away in the society that we now live.
Andy
September 27th, 2020 00:56
Song of a poor scavenger.
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh how true these few well chosen words on what is wasted daily by the many can become of use to happy scavengers. Such song of the poor is so very telling.
September 26th, 2020 16:14
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh how true these few well chosen words on what is wasted daily by the many can become of use to happy scavengers. Such song of the poor is so very telling.
September 26th, 2020 16:14
Before I fall asleep
jarcher54 said:
Oh my. You nailed it.
The night that does not end
Bearing fast down on them
Like an angry train
Yes, tied to the tracks, or maybe frozen in our own tracks, watching the locomotive in the distance relentlessly heading our way. I don\'t know whether to praise this poem or curse you for it.
September 25th, 2020 00:26
jarcher54 said:
Oh my. You nailed it.
The night that does not end
Bearing fast down on them
Like an angry train
Yes, tied to the tracks, or maybe frozen in our own tracks, watching the locomotive in the distance relentlessly heading our way. I don\'t know whether to praise this poem or curse you for it.
September 25th, 2020 00:26
Steamboat Willie
Dove said:
Just pucker your Lips and blow! or is that inhale
Smilez!!!!
September 24th, 2020 14:10
Dove said:
Just pucker your Lips and blow! or is that inhale
Smilez!!!!
September 24th, 2020 14:10
From the Old Sailor on the Death of his Friend Sylvie.
Trenz Pruca said:
I am sure he did also. Thank you.
September 22nd, 2020 16:50
Trenz Pruca said:
I am sure he did also. Thank you.
September 22nd, 2020 16:50
From the Old Sailor on the Death of his Friend Sylvie.
Dove said:
Your every word pure from the heart! The message at the end, just beautiful! We should smile for the memories, and not cry for the loss! I do both! Reminds me of my father, first time he ever cried was when we buried my mother! I’m sure he smiled at her memories!
September 22nd, 2020 13:29
Dove said:
Your every word pure from the heart! The message at the end, just beautiful! We should smile for the memories, and not cry for the loss! I do both! Reminds me of my father, first time he ever cried was when we buried my mother! I’m sure he smiled at her memories!
September 22nd, 2020 13:29
From the Old Sailor on the Death of his Friend Sylvie.
L. B. Mek said:
\'I loved Sylvie not because of who she was, but because of who I was when I was with her… to the world she may be only one person, but to me, she was the world…
maybe God wants us to meet a few wrong people before meeting the right one so that when we finally meet the person, we will know how to be grateful.
I don’t want to cry because it is over, let me smile because it happened…\'
such depth, such bravery to face pain and dig through its poisons to produce a timeless diamond for any who may be suffering with the debilitating suffocation that loss inevitably brings,
an astounding work of inked wisdom and pure authenticity!
September 22nd, 2020 04:52
L. B. Mek said:
\'I loved Sylvie not because of who she was, but because of who I was when I was with her… to the world she may be only one person, but to me, she was the world…
maybe God wants us to meet a few wrong people before meeting the right one so that when we finally meet the person, we will know how to be grateful.
I don’t want to cry because it is over, let me smile because it happened…\'
such depth, such bravery to face pain and dig through its poisons to produce a timeless diamond for any who may be suffering with the debilitating suffocation that loss inevitably brings,
an astounding work of inked wisdom and pure authenticity!
September 22nd, 2020 04:52
From the Old Sailor on the Death of his Friend Sylvie.
Trenz Pruca said:
Thanks Andy
September 22nd, 2020 00:51
Trenz Pruca said:
Thanks Andy
September 22nd, 2020 00:51
From the Old Sailor on the Death of his Friend Sylvie.
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words Trenz, those we love who pass leave their memories within us and they can never be taken away so that person will be with you forever.
Andy
September 21st, 2020 23:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words Trenz, those we love who pass leave their memories within us and they can never be taken away so that person will be with you forever.
Andy
September 21st, 2020 23:58
Endless daze, sweaty nights
Dove said:
You definitely have a way with words! Love your poetry!
September 20th, 2020 10:45
Dove said:
You definitely have a way with words! Love your poetry!
September 20th, 2020 10:45
Virago
jarcher54 said:
Maybe it\'s irrelevant but as a kid I had a stallion named Castro... I would not geld him, so he was wild and only I could ride him, bareback because he refused a saddle and without a bit because he would not let it in between his clenched teeth. After I left home for college my father sold him to a family with several young girls. They castrated him and turned him into a gentle cantering pony. I bet they have his picture in their scrapbooks. I have only memories of clinging to his mane as he streaked through underbrush and leapt over ravines and fences completely out of my control. Not a picture of that in my scrapbook.
September 20th, 2020 01:38
jarcher54 said:
Maybe it\'s irrelevant but as a kid I had a stallion named Castro... I would not geld him, so he was wild and only I could ride him, bareback because he refused a saddle and without a bit because he would not let it in between his clenched teeth. After I left home for college my father sold him to a family with several young girls. They castrated him and turned him into a gentle cantering pony. I bet they have his picture in their scrapbooks. I have only memories of clinging to his mane as he streaked through underbrush and leapt over ravines and fences completely out of my control. Not a picture of that in my scrapbook.
September 20th, 2020 01:38
Virago
Trenz Pruca said:
Thank you. Good for you. I am glad you seem to have a happy life. Keep it up...
September 19th, 2020 20:03
Trenz Pruca said:
Thank you. Good for you. I am glad you seem to have a happy life. Keep it up...
September 19th, 2020 20:03
Virago
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - I too am WO-MAN and it is true that Most Men need reining in ! When I (28) met Brian (4 Years ago) he was 33 and different. Maybe it was because He was Older and had a better understanding of WO-MAN than Youner Men. I didnt have to *Rein Him in* He was more interested in my Mind & Spirit than just my Body. We have been married six Months & enjoyng the Journey to Perfect Love and find equal pleasure in each other ! None of our other Loves were as compatible as we are with each other - Amen ! Thanks for sharing. Please check our Site & Fusions - Thanks A & B.
Blessings & Joy & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey Cat ! ! !
September 19th, 2020 18:10
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - I too am WO-MAN and it is true that Most Men need reining in ! When I (28) met Brian (4 Years ago) he was 33 and different. Maybe it was because He was Older and had a better understanding of WO-MAN than Youner Men. I didnt have to *Rein Him in* He was more interested in my Mind & Spirit than just my Body. We have been married six Months & enjoyng the Journey to Perfect Love and find equal pleasure in each other ! None of our other Loves were as compatible as we are with each other - Amen ! Thanks for sharing. Please check our Site & Fusions - Thanks A & B.
Blessings & Joy & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey Cat ! ! !
September 19th, 2020 18:10
The Avatar
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Good! Four syllables, five lines, and abbab end rhymes - with this structure you can communicate what the world truly longs for: His Love.
September 19th, 2020 12:42
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Good! Four syllables, five lines, and abbab end rhymes - with this structure you can communicate what the world truly longs for: His Love.
September 19th, 2020 12:42
The Avatar
L. B. Mek said:
purposely written so that it can be customised in meaning to the experiences and perspectives of each reader,
wonderfully imaginative
September 19th, 2020 03:31
L. B. Mek said:
purposely written so that it can be customised in meaning to the experiences and perspectives of each reader,
wonderfully imaginative
September 19th, 2020 03:31
« Return to the profile of Trenz Pruca
