Comments received on poems by Trenz Pruca
In the Desert I Saw a Beacon.
Goldfinch60 said:
May that light be forever with you Trenz.
Andy
December 31st, 2021 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
May that light be forever with you Trenz.
Andy
December 31st, 2021 01:42
Let Us Walk Holding Hands
Doggerel Dave said:
Verbal communication redundant - perfect harmony, perfect connection.
Thank you so very much, Trenz.
November 16th, 2021 06:34
Doggerel Dave said:
Verbal communication redundant - perfect harmony, perfect connection.
Thank you so very much, Trenz.
November 16th, 2021 06:34
Let Us Walk Holding Hands
L. B. Mek said:
scenic enough, to be counted
as a cherished memento postcard
of life..
beautiful imagery!
thanks for sharing dear poet
November 16th, 2021 05:22
L. B. Mek said:
scenic enough, to be counted
as a cherished memento postcard
of life..
beautiful imagery!
thanks for sharing dear poet
November 16th, 2021 05:22
Let Us Walk Holding Hands
spilleronsheet said:
It’s beautiful dear poet
The words so well stringed
The sweetness of love felt and fragrance of first love spread by
November 16th, 2021 01:25
spilleronsheet said:
It’s beautiful dear poet
The words so well stringed
The sweetness of love felt and fragrance of first love spread by
November 16th, 2021 01:25
Three AM.
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
so life affirmingly, empowering!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
September 28th, 2021 03:59
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
so life affirmingly, empowering!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
September 28th, 2021 03:59
Three AM.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful dreams Trenz and so good for you to be you.
Andy
September 28th, 2021 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful dreams Trenz and so good for you to be you.
Andy
September 28th, 2021 00:33
Lying to Oneself
L. B. Mek said:
maybe through ignorance, dear poet?
we make it through, by not knowing half of what we\'re doing, and by wilfully choosing to ignore - our awareness of the other half..
consciousness, is rarely seen at puberty stages, at best we gain some awareness of wrongfulness
but we lack the complexity to categorise what that wrongness constitutes to us, personally..
this is how nature plans it, this is how humanity became the ruling species on earth, because we allowed ourselves to evolve as sponges to experience
and its by living through and surviving our mistakes, we gain the capacity to cultivate our empathetic consciousness, in most
as a by-product to all those belatedly regretted: conscious realisation,
that in turn - over time, when utilised proactively, help us
create some semblance of wisdom..
that\'s the cause and effect in our life of suffering
sadly, nature knows
we learn more, from the pain we survive, that the triumph\'s we\'re gifted...
(sorry dear poet
your write got me started on another opinionated ramble
forgive my rudeness,
hopefully you see it as a sign of how impactful your words were to read)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
September 16th, 2021 04:36
L. B. Mek said:
maybe through ignorance, dear poet?
we make it through, by not knowing half of what we\'re doing, and by wilfully choosing to ignore - our awareness of the other half..
consciousness, is rarely seen at puberty stages, at best we gain some awareness of wrongfulness
but we lack the complexity to categorise what that wrongness constitutes to us, personally..
this is how nature plans it, this is how humanity became the ruling species on earth, because we allowed ourselves to evolve as sponges to experience
and its by living through and surviving our mistakes, we gain the capacity to cultivate our empathetic consciousness, in most
as a by-product to all those belatedly regretted: conscious realisation,
that in turn - over time, when utilised proactively, help us
create some semblance of wisdom..
that\'s the cause and effect in our life of suffering
sadly, nature knows
we learn more, from the pain we survive, that the triumph\'s we\'re gifted...
(sorry dear poet
your write got me started on another opinionated ramble
forgive my rudeness,
hopefully you see it as a sign of how impactful your words were to read)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
September 16th, 2021 04:36
Lying to Oneself
Doggerel Dave said:
Puberty? The memory grows dim...mercifully...
You raise an interesting proposition though, Trenz: It must be consciousness which manufactures the lies, but would also be aware that they are lies.....
September 15th, 2021 19:13
Doggerel Dave said:
Puberty? The memory grows dim...mercifully...
You raise an interesting proposition though, Trenz: It must be consciousness which manufactures the lies, but would also be aware that they are lies.....
September 15th, 2021 19:13
Where white lies become black truths
L. B. Mek said:
no dear poet, you are not
and by sharing your wonderful poem
you\'ve reminded me, neither am I..
what a gift, in a read! thank you
September 2nd, 2021 02:56
L. B. Mek said:
no dear poet, you are not
and by sharing your wonderful poem
you\'ve reminded me, neither am I..
what a gift, in a read! thank you
September 2nd, 2021 02:56
Where white lies become black truths
Neville said:
These words were very much enjoyed..
clearly well constructed ..
I particularly liked the narrative approach which often works for me .. Neville ..
September 2nd, 2021 01:11
Neville said:
These words were very much enjoyed..
clearly well constructed ..
I particularly liked the narrative approach which often works for me .. Neville ..
September 2nd, 2021 01:11
I have little talent for friendship
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, there truly is
it just needs, One - kind gesture: to remind us...
and thank you! for wording my dose of \'reminder\' for today!
loved the unassuming tone and flow
of your hopeful positivity, nothing pushy or overbearing
just a gentle nudge..
this is such an invigorating read, dear poet
August 27th, 2021 03:28
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, there truly is
it just needs, One - kind gesture: to remind us...
and thank you! for wording my dose of \'reminder\' for today!
loved the unassuming tone and flow
of your hopeful positivity, nothing pushy or overbearing
just a gentle nudge..
this is such an invigorating read, dear poet
August 27th, 2021 03:28
I have little talent for friendship
Accidental Poet said:
I\'m with Robert, always believing in hope. 👍
August 26th, 2021 18:48
Accidental Poet said:
I\'m with Robert, always believing in hope. 👍
August 26th, 2021 18:48
I have little talent for friendship
dusk arising said:
I have been very much a loner without much need for being included in..... then along came my grandchildren... can\'t get enough of them.
August 26th, 2021 17:43
dusk arising said:
I have been very much a loner without much need for being included in..... then along came my grandchildren... can\'t get enough of them.
August 26th, 2021 17:43
One Of My Teeth Fell Out Yesterday.
Trenz Pruca said:
I have no idea how it appears on your computer, but it was not written in Greek, perhaps not English either. Anyway, here is a copy. Let\'s see what language it comes up as:
One of my teeth
Fell out.
Yesterday,
A gold one
Full of rot
I thought
Loss of ones teeth
Was simply
An example
Of the God of Aging’s
Determination
To degrade us
Into our graves.
When we were young
Our minds flew about us
As though untethered
From our bodies.
Now, in our dotage
Our minds observe
Our bodies
Escape us
Piece by piece
Neuron by neuron.
August 20th, 2021 23:05
Trenz Pruca said:
I have no idea how it appears on your computer, but it was not written in Greek, perhaps not English either. Anyway, here is a copy. Let\'s see what language it comes up as:
One of my teeth
Fell out.
Yesterday,
A gold one
Full of rot
I thought
Loss of ones teeth
Was simply
An example
Of the God of Aging’s
Determination
To degrade us
Into our graves.
When we were young
Our minds flew about us
As though untethered
From our bodies.
Now, in our dotage
Our minds observe
Our bodies
Escape us
Piece by piece
Neuron by neuron.
August 20th, 2021 23:05
One Of My Teeth Fell Out Yesterday.
Doggerel Dave said:
Sorry, Trenz - I encounter this problem from time to time and complain on the same page but no one to date has provided a satisfactory explanation. Or any explanation at all.
Your piece appears to be in, quite possibly Greek - not sure, but it is certainly not in English,. Yet others on the evidence of this page can read it..
So - did you write this as it appears? Is this the fault of my PC, do you believe? Am I completely missing something here?
August 20th, 2021 19:46
Doggerel Dave said:
Sorry, Trenz - I encounter this problem from time to time and complain on the same page but no one to date has provided a satisfactory explanation. Or any explanation at all.
Your piece appears to be in, quite possibly Greek - not sure, but it is certainly not in English,. Yet others on the evidence of this page can read it..
So - did you write this as it appears? Is this the fault of my PC, do you believe? Am I completely missing something here?
August 20th, 2021 19:46
One Of My Teeth Fell Out Yesterday.
Neville said:
as unique as your dentistry .. and that\'s the tooth and nothing but the tooth ............................................... :)
August 20th, 2021 16:48
Neville said:
as unique as your dentistry .. and that\'s the tooth and nothing but the tooth ............................................... :)
August 20th, 2021 16:48
Under a High Stamped Tin Ceiling.
Trenz Pruca said:
Thank you Dave. Yes, that is also my favorite part of the poem.
August 6th, 2021 22:07
Trenz Pruca said:
Thank you Dave. Yes, that is also my favorite part of the poem.
August 6th, 2021 22:07
Under a High Stamped Tin Ceiling.
Doggerel Dave said:
\"He assimilates......osmosis.\" is the stanza that does it for me, Trenz. Receptivity and openness the key.
August 6th, 2021 19:56
Doggerel Dave said:
\"He assimilates......osmosis.\" is the stanza that does it for me, Trenz. Receptivity and openness the key.
August 6th, 2021 19:56
Under a High Stamped Tin Ceiling.
Neville said:
there are of course other ways ... but
consciousness always does it for all of us ................................................. :)
enjoyed to the very hilt Trenz ..
August 6th, 2021 17:15
Neville said:
there are of course other ways ... but
consciousness always does it for all of us ................................................. :)
enjoyed to the very hilt Trenz ..
August 6th, 2021 17:15
Conservation of Reality -- Homage to Sir Terry Pratchett.
Goldfinch60 said:
Magic is exactly what you say in life Trenz.
Andy
July 25th, 2021 00:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Magic is exactly what you say in life Trenz.
Andy
July 25th, 2021 00:45
Conservation of Reality -- Homage to Sir Terry Pratchett.
Doggerel Dave said:
I want to come to grips with this, Trenz. Proposition which forms the body of your piece is neat and clear.
Now I\'ve never read Terry Pratchett - I realize he is a much revered SF/fantasy writer... so what is the connection?
July 24th, 2021 22:21
Doggerel Dave said:
I want to come to grips with this, Trenz. Proposition which forms the body of your piece is neat and clear.
Now I\'ve never read Terry Pratchett - I realize he is a much revered SF/fantasy writer... so what is the connection?
July 24th, 2021 22:21
Burke Agonistes.
Goldfinch60 said:
It may well happen but in the day you can get away from them where you may not be able to in your dreams.
Andy
July 17th, 2021 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
It may well happen but in the day you can get away from them where you may not be able to in your dreams.
Andy
July 17th, 2021 00:26
Burke Agonistes.
Neville said:
it happens .. tho tiz good, tiz very good ........... :)
July 16th, 2021 13:11
Neville said:
it happens .. tho tiz good, tiz very good ........... :)
July 16th, 2021 13:11
An Unfinished Life and Poem
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, that last stanza
worded my own truth, dear poet
thanks for sharing, such a relatable read
July 13th, 2021 05:06
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, that last stanza
worded my own truth, dear poet
thanks for sharing, such a relatable read
July 13th, 2021 05:06
An Unfinished Life and Poem
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'d settle for that, Trenz. Much in a very neat little package. Last stanza, depending on how much I\'ve harmed myself (moderate amounts occasionally only) a worthwhile claim.
PS: \"More then (than) I have\"?
July 12th, 2021 19:26
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'d settle for that, Trenz. Much in a very neat little package. Last stanza, depending on how much I\'ve harmed myself (moderate amounts occasionally only) a worthwhile claim.
PS: \"More then (than) I have\"?
July 12th, 2021 19:26
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