Comments received on poems by Trenz Pruca



It is Autumn now
L. B. Mek said:

I\'m hot blooded by nature and so tend to favour cooler climates but somehow I still relate to the \'unease\' you mention, thought provoking,
good read

November 21st, 2020 05:37

It is Autumn now
orchidee said:

A nice write Trenz.

November 21st, 2020 02:52

It is Autumn now
Goldfinch60 said:

Autumn is my favourite time of the year. That slight chill in the air is revitalising to us all.

Andy

November 21st, 2020 01:55

Short stories light our lives
Trenz Pruca said:

Thank you, but for some, there are fewer remaining then for others.

November 18th, 2020 15:55

Short stories light our lives
Trenz Pruca said:



November 18th, 2020 15:53

Short stories light our lives
Trenz Pruca said:

Thank you.

November 18th, 2020 15:53

Short stories light our lives
L. B. Mek said:

what language is this? forgive my ignorance I just found the alphabet so elegant, I studied Greek a little in my youth and this remined of it (or maybe I\'m just imagining things)

November 17th, 2020 05:10

Short stories light our lives
Goldfinch60 said:

Those short stories are chapters in our lives and we all have many chapters yet to read.

Andy

November 17th, 2020 01:37

Short stories light our lives
Doggerel Dave said:

Thanks mate, that really did it for me.
Dave

November 16th, 2020 20:27

I AM
FineB said:

Hello Trenz,

An excellent write.

We are all individuals so divinely unique and beautiful in our own special ways.

Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB

October 30th, 2020 05:45

I AM
Fay Slimm. said:

I can relate to each line in this superb conception of the life we all share - we are all these wondrous things and more. I am adding this gem to my favourites dear Trenz.

October 29th, 2020 05:40

I AM
L. B. Mek said:

wonderfully self empowering,
Indeed: You are!
I wrote something similar once, so I connect with your words, deep

October 29th, 2020 05:10

I AM
dusk arising said:

I\'m just a beautiful tree which was reincarnated as a human being... i\'ll get over it I hope.

October 29th, 2020 02:42

I AM
Goldfinch60 said:

Ditto.

Andy

October 29th, 2020 02:20

My Memoir in honor of Taliesin
jarcher54 said:

As Goldfinch suggests, you\'ll be remembered as much as the greatest lords and ladies. Memory is a collective, and you\'ve made things of beauty here and probably in your life at large that will leave ripples for ages. Maybe you\'ll be remembered faintly and mythically, like Taliesin himself. I love poems that are thumbnail biographies, and this one is as wistful and intense as they come. Your piece reminds me of Omar Khayyam\'s quattrain:

Think, in this batter’d Caravanserai
Whose Doorways are alternate Night and Day,
How Sultan after Sultan with his Pomp
Abode his Hour or two and went his way.

October 17th, 2020 11:15

Moses was a strange man
Lorna said:

Oh this made me laugh so hard........ best to analyze too deeply all those old stories eh?

October 15th, 2020 05:26

Moses was a strange man
L. B. Mek said:

2020 and we still look down at those pigeons with their miniscule brain sizes: as they soar above us..
then look up at the majesty of our chosen Deity\'s and judge their entity in comparison to our fallible likeness\'...
or seat back, armed with the foresight of history\'s hindsight from the samples of hand-me-down literature that we so easily accept as fact, judging with our perfectly blinkered eyesight\'s that so clearly detail the shortcoming in other\'s, while barely glimpsing at a mirror for more than a minute - for fear of the truth\'s it could reveal...
amazing to think of the amount of land on earth that still remains unclaimed and barren, while we elbow and nudge our way through life in our clusters of conformity, ensuing the unending continuation of conflict - derived purely from the fact that we cant give each other a modicum of space: even here in this untameable magnitude we so tellingly titled the world wide \'web\'

October 15th, 2020 03:59

Moses was a strange man
Goldfinch60 said:

There is a challenge to \"Thou must not kill\" the actual translation is \"Thou shalt not murder\" which gives a completely different view on the commandment.

Andy

October 15th, 2020 00:11

Moses was a strange man
blue orchid said:

christianity gives us,and by us i mean myself and my brothers and sisters in christ,something to believe in,eventhough we can\'t see it,that\'s faith,something to holdi onto,something worth living and dying for,something so massive that we don\'t understand that we fall down at christs feet and weep for he cleanses our souls and washes away our sins and set\'s our hearts free.moses had went 40 years in the wilderness to punish the people who disobeyed god.He is the father of the world and punishes the disobedient,just like most earthly fathers would because they love us\".for god so loved the world he gave his only begotten son,so that whosoever believeth in him shall not parish but have everlasting life\"\" john 3:16 Christianityi is alive and thriving. kindest regards melissa crown


October 14th, 2020 19:53

Moses was a strange man
dusk arising said:

Christianity is full of dual standards. Once realised and one\'s questions start to nag one\'s brain, then christianity can be seen for what it was designed for by some clever men back then when the world was flat...... as a power base... based upon fear..... to control people.
It\'s a rather well designed religion because many people are still sucked in as children and afraid to address the dual standards and glaring contradictions such as you identify, but there are many others.
Along the way christianity has tried to drag its heels into reality, for example - 300 years after Galilieo proved the earth was round the christian church lifted the title of \'Heretic\' from his name for disagreeing with their \'flat world\' stories. Of course there are many more contradictions and shameful facts about christianity such as it\'s support of slavery for around 300 years and its providing hiding places for peadophiles.

Accepting that christianity is a farce does NOT mean one is rejecting God. It means you are rejecting the falseness of the way christianity claims to be God\'s way.

A clear message in your piece today which may lead some to begin asking themselves questions about falseness in christian teaching, belief and practice. Into my favourites.

October 14th, 2020 15:03

Let me
Lorna said:

I am not seeing English lettering.... looks like ? Greek? Sorry I can\'t read what others must be seeing....... this never happened before......

October 13th, 2020 06:11

Let me
Goldfinch60 said:

May the world start to live by your words blue.

Andy

October 13th, 2020 00:47

Let me
blue orchid said:

you speak the truth,great write

October 12th, 2020 17:15

The Great Debate.
L. B. Mek said:

what an acute portrait you have penned in that first stanza, would be funny: if not such a sobering reflection of reality

October 12th, 2020 05:49

My Memoir in honor of Taliesin
Lorna said:

This is a bit heart wrenching........good one.

October 12th, 2020 05:27

My Memoir in honor of Taliesin
L. B. Mek said:

outside of the last two lines, there is a balance of multiply angled interpretations from the unblinkered introspection that have produced this brave portrait of the reflection - you have outlined of yourself, I can imagine looking back at these words at a later date will be a fulfilling landmark, in that commonly yearned journey for self-realisation,
Happy Birthday and best wishes for the year ahead

October 12th, 2020 05:05

My Memoir in honor of Taliesin
Goldfinch60 said:

But you will be remembered. I too have been through many years and gone through many of the things that you describe but we are both still here and I intend to go on for a great deal longer.

Andy

October 12th, 2020 00:31

The Great Debate.
Romantic Bloom said:

I read an internet article, that had a tally on the amount of lies he told, every time he said something, a new lie sputtered,

Take care

October 11th, 2020 13:29

Before I fall asleep
Mark_2011 said:

I can relate to this.

October 11th, 2020 04:57

The Great Debate.
Goldfinch60 said:

How he was ever voted into office amazes me, he is such a lying idiot who would be better employed as a clown in a circus!

Andy

October 11th, 2020 00:38

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