Comments received on poems by Trenz Pruca
An Unfinished Life and Poem
Neville said:
a most original and altogether compelling poem if I may say so Trenz .. and thoroughly enjoyed too :)
July 12th, 2021 15:58
Neville said:
a most original and altogether compelling poem if I may say so Trenz .. and thoroughly enjoyed too :)
July 12th, 2021 15:58
Under the Battered Cap
L. B. Mek said:
wide-lensed in scope
comprehensive, in depth of profound insight
relatable in choice wording, to maximise accessibility;
quite simply, a wonderful Poetic portrait
of poignantly incisive commentary!
thank you, dear poet
July 8th, 2021 04:38
L. B. Mek said:
wide-lensed in scope
comprehensive, in depth of profound insight
relatable in choice wording, to maximise accessibility;
quite simply, a wonderful Poetic portrait
of poignantly incisive commentary!
thank you, dear poet
July 8th, 2021 04:38
Under the Battered Cap
Fay Slimm. said:
Believing we have control is a step in the right direction but oh what a battered cap we all wear - - I like the penultimate line too - - All that happens matters - - and so it does my friend and true.
July 7th, 2021 13:50
Fay Slimm. said:
Believing we have control is a step in the right direction but oh what a battered cap we all wear - - I like the penultimate line too - - All that happens matters - - and so it does my friend and true.
July 7th, 2021 13:50
Under the Battered Cap
Neville said:
I like this too .. several great ideas in a single poetic bundle ..
July 7th, 2021 13:49
Neville said:
I like this too .. several great ideas in a single poetic bundle ..
July 7th, 2021 13:49
Life’s a river of memory and yearning.
Jon Nakapalau said:
Wonderful - inspired.
June 14th, 2021 17:53
Jon Nakapalau said:
Wonderful - inspired.
June 14th, 2021 17:53
I revel in obscure facts
L. B. Mek said:
sing, scream, ink as loud as you can
till all that\'s left
is that hoarse gravely whisper
of your actual, unfaced - truth
and then: begin... again!
as many times, as it takes
because, my friend
what else is there
for us Few, who Choose
to refuse hate: as A way of Life
June 10th, 2021 04:01
L. B. Mek said:
sing, scream, ink as loud as you can
till all that\'s left
is that hoarse gravely whisper
of your actual, unfaced - truth
and then: begin... again!
as many times, as it takes
because, my friend
what else is there
for us Few, who Choose
to refuse hate: as A way of Life
June 10th, 2021 04:01
I revel in obscure facts
Goldfinch60 said:
We must all be ready for that moment when it comes no matter what that moment brings.
Andy
June 10th, 2021 00:17
Goldfinch60 said:
We must all be ready for that moment when it comes no matter what that moment brings.
Andy
June 10th, 2021 00:17
I revel in obscure facts
Doggerel Dave said:
Really liked this poem, Trenz, despite that I found it something of an enigma. Person or personification?
Separate issue: History, if we can agree to define as human activity, is rarely if ever random.
June 9th, 2021 20:29
Doggerel Dave said:
Really liked this poem, Trenz, despite that I found it something of an enigma. Person or personification?
Separate issue: History, if we can agree to define as human activity, is rarely if ever random.
June 9th, 2021 20:29
I revel in obscure facts
Accidental Poet said:
Your life is yours to live, not someone\'s to live for you. Great write Trenz. ; )
June 9th, 2021 19:39
Accidental Poet said:
Your life is yours to live, not someone\'s to live for you. Great write Trenz. ; )
June 9th, 2021 19:39
I revel in obscure facts
A Boy With Roses said:
\"I dance on the edge of a volcano\"
THIS LINE ALONE IS AS WINSOME AS MY CRUSHES SMILE
June 9th, 2021 17:21
A Boy With Roses said:
\"I dance on the edge of a volcano\"
THIS LINE ALONE IS AS WINSOME AS MY CRUSHES SMILE
June 9th, 2021 17:21
Naida\'s Evening
L. B. Mek said:
reminds me of tiptoeing out
with the door left ajar, after putting
an energetic troublemaker to bed
then silently, pensively
lurking outside the door
looking back, just to insure
they were not feigning being asleep
cos you know
if they don\'t get that timely rest
the waking-up wars, in the morning
will be unending... lol
(sorry for I\'ve hijacked
your original meaning for this write
to some unfathomed realm, of interpretation) lol
thanks for sharing, dear poet
June 7th, 2021 05:54
L. B. Mek said:
reminds me of tiptoeing out
with the door left ajar, after putting
an energetic troublemaker to bed
then silently, pensively
lurking outside the door
looking back, just to insure
they were not feigning being asleep
cos you know
if they don\'t get that timely rest
the waking-up wars, in the morning
will be unending... lol
(sorry for I\'ve hijacked
your original meaning for this write
to some unfathomed realm, of interpretation) lol
thanks for sharing, dear poet
June 7th, 2021 05:54
Naida\'s Evening
Neville said:
... there is most definitely something here that works for me ..
... intrigue till the very end ...
June 6th, 2021 16:48
Neville said:
... there is most definitely something here that works for me ..
... intrigue till the very end ...
June 6th, 2021 16:48
You and I
tmjackson1968 said:
I like this!
...we have no idea what we\'ve cost each other...
Something to think about.
Thank you!
June 1st, 2021 16:08
tmjackson1968 said:
I like this!
...we have no idea what we\'ve cost each other...
Something to think about.
Thank you!
June 1st, 2021 16:08
You and I
L. B. Mek said:
\'We prefer the adventure of discovery
to the safety of knowledge;\'
\'Words, actions, even intent
depends upon
who does the viewing\'..
Amen!
profound observations, so accessibly worded
really well executed, dear poet
June 1st, 2021 04:49
L. B. Mek said:
\'We prefer the adventure of discovery
to the safety of knowledge;\'
\'Words, actions, even intent
depends upon
who does the viewing\'..
Amen!
profound observations, so accessibly worded
really well executed, dear poet
June 1st, 2021 04:49
You and I
dusk arising said:
Wonderful, all encompassing, poetry.
Yes this is me, within your words, and all who have ever crossed my path.
Often in my thoughts are \'how does that person view my world, their world, our world\'.
You cover such a huge subject today and im thrilled to place this piece into my favourites when I have enjoyed re-reading it a few more times.
June 1st, 2021 02:33
dusk arising said:
Wonderful, all encompassing, poetry.
Yes this is me, within your words, and all who have ever crossed my path.
Often in my thoughts are \'how does that person view my world, their world, our world\'.
You cover such a huge subject today and im thrilled to place this piece into my favourites when I have enjoyed re-reading it a few more times.
June 1st, 2021 02:33
You and I
Neville said:
... a compelling introduction to your work my friend .. enjoyed write from one end to the very other ...
June 1st, 2021 01:17
Neville said:
... a compelling introduction to your work my friend .. enjoyed write from one end to the very other ...
June 1st, 2021 01:17
You and I
jarcher54 said:
A fine, compassionate exploration of sameness/otherness, misunderstanding, and failure to perceive or imagine beyond our self-centered point of view. I like this very much.
May 31st, 2021 22:21
jarcher54 said:
A fine, compassionate exploration of sameness/otherness, misunderstanding, and failure to perceive or imagine beyond our self-centered point of view. I like this very much.
May 31st, 2021 22:21
You and I
Doggerel Dave said:
I don\'t know if you and I sing the same songs Trenz, but I’ll tell you this – I really liked your piece. Many ideas floating in there each worthy of separate contemplation.
May 31st, 2021 22:09
Doggerel Dave said:
I don\'t know if you and I sing the same songs Trenz, but I’ll tell you this – I really liked your piece. Many ideas floating in there each worthy of separate contemplation.
May 31st, 2021 22:09
When We Did things Like This,
Neville said:
a series of splendid self disclosive recollections ..
my teepee was the one with the broken mandolin next to the kettle sitting on a pile of discarded roaches ................................... All Good Things,
Neville
May 29th, 2021 01:03
Neville said:
a series of splendid self disclosive recollections ..
my teepee was the one with the broken mandolin next to the kettle sitting on a pile of discarded roaches ................................... All Good Things,
Neville
May 29th, 2021 01:03
When We Did things Like This,
Doggerel Dave said:
A great evocation of that time and place, Trenz.
As for advice to the lovelorn, I don’t know what to say….. commiserations?
Enjoyed the read very much. 😊
May 29th, 2021 00:21
Doggerel Dave said:
A great evocation of that time and place, Trenz.
As for advice to the lovelorn, I don’t know what to say….. commiserations?
Enjoyed the read very much. 😊
May 29th, 2021 00:21
Naida -The love of my waning years.
L. B. Mek said:
brilliant!
who says that intricate halted-breath intimacy, is just for the young
what a defiant statement you\'ve penned, dear poet
tantalising words of wholesome sensuality, smashing that stereotype
into judgmental realms of ignorance\'s, obscurity:
\'fear stalls and fails away \'
\'only your breath on my neck\'..
May 24th, 2021 06:13
L. B. Mek said:
brilliant!
who says that intricate halted-breath intimacy, is just for the young
what a defiant statement you\'ve penned, dear poet
tantalising words of wholesome sensuality, smashing that stereotype
into judgmental realms of ignorance\'s, obscurity:
\'fear stalls and fails away \'
\'only your breath on my neck\'..
May 24th, 2021 06:13
Naida -The love of my waning years.
Goldfinch60 said:
Yesterday has passed, tomorrows not here yet so each moment is so precious in that breath on your neck.
Andy
May 24th, 2021 00:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Yesterday has passed, tomorrows not here yet so each moment is so precious in that breath on your neck.
Andy
May 24th, 2021 00:18
To be old
L. B. Mek said:
\'To be old is\'
\'an example;
a folly
of misplaced ambitions\'
\'a repository: of wisdom.\'
(wonderful shorty, dear Poet
forgive me for rearranging your lines
I mean no disrespect, by doing so
just sharing the wisdom
your poem: conveyed to me)
May 17th, 2021 06:59
L. B. Mek said:
\'To be old is\'
\'an example;
a folly
of misplaced ambitions\'
\'a repository: of wisdom.\'
(wonderful shorty, dear Poet
forgive me for rearranging your lines
I mean no disrespect, by doing so
just sharing the wisdom
your poem: conveyed to me)
May 17th, 2021 06:59
Life’s a river of memory and yearning.
Doggerel Dave said:
Good stuff , Trenz - something which is greeted with deep recognition by me.
My only antidote is to keep repeating to self, \'Live for the here and now\'.
May 11th, 2021 05:15
Doggerel Dave said:
Good stuff , Trenz - something which is greeted with deep recognition by me.
My only antidote is to keep repeating to self, \'Live for the here and now\'.
May 11th, 2021 05:15
Life’s a river of memory and yearning.
L. B. Mek said:
\'Reread them
now and then
confirming
my existence.
Forgetting
one’s past
is a form of death.\'
truly wise words you share, dear poet
May 11th, 2021 04:50
L. B. Mek said:
\'Reread them
now and then
confirming
my existence.
Forgetting
one’s past
is a form of death.\'
truly wise words you share, dear poet
May 11th, 2021 04:50
Life’s a river of memory and yearning.
Goldfinch60 said:
So true but what you need to remember that with age our brains are so full that when we gain new knowledge some of the old knowledge falls off the other end.
Andy
May 11th, 2021 00:30
Goldfinch60 said:
So true but what you need to remember that with age our brains are so full that when we gain new knowledge some of the old knowledge falls off the other end.
Andy
May 11th, 2021 00:30
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