Comments received on poems by Trenz Pruca
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Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Trenz, that desire is within us all.
Andy
September 19th, 2020 00:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Trenz, that desire is within us all.
Andy
September 19th, 2020 00:17
Endless daze, sweaty nights
Trenz Pruca said:
Thank you very much. I appreciate your support.
September 16th, 2020 14:15
Trenz Pruca said:
Thank you very much. I appreciate your support.
September 16th, 2020 14:15
Endless daze, sweaty nights
Fay Slimm. said:
Admirable opening on a description of insomnia which filled with good metaphor needs reading again - so into my faves with this Endless Daze Sweaty Nights - -- very well captured Trenz
September 16th, 2020 02:19
Fay Slimm. said:
Admirable opening on a description of insomnia which filled with good metaphor needs reading again - so into my faves with this Endless Daze Sweaty Nights - -- very well captured Trenz
September 16th, 2020 02:19
Endless daze, sweaty nights
L. B. Mek said:
\'It\'s a long night till morning,
Dream breasted, shadow stalked.\'
what an opening!
brilliant imagery and infused with natural dramatics, forcing readers to re-read and contemplate the layers in its meaning
September 16th, 2020 01:33
L. B. Mek said:
\'It\'s a long night till morning,
Dream breasted, shadow stalked.\'
what an opening!
brilliant imagery and infused with natural dramatics, forcing readers to re-read and contemplate the layers in its meaning
September 16th, 2020 01:33
Three Haiku
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA here - Good Evening *TP* we love 5 7 5 Haiku and you have shared three very elegant ones with lovely themes !
OAK TREE - Englands National Tree & everyone BEAUTIFUL
LEAVING FRIENDS - Is always a SAD experience
SENIORS BIRTHDAYS - Enjoyable but never long enough !
Blessings & Peace to YOOU & YOURS
Love Angela - Brian & Smokey Cat 🧡💜🤎
Please check Peace Perfect Peace - Thanks ABC !!!
September 14th, 2020 15:21
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA here - Good Evening *TP* we love 5 7 5 Haiku and you have shared three very elegant ones with lovely themes !
OAK TREE - Englands National Tree & everyone BEAUTIFUL
LEAVING FRIENDS - Is always a SAD experience
SENIORS BIRTHDAYS - Enjoyable but never long enough !
Blessings & Peace to YOOU & YOURS
Love Angela - Brian & Smokey Cat 🧡💜🤎
Please check Peace Perfect Peace - Thanks ABC !!!
September 14th, 2020 15:21
Ennui
Michael Edwards said:
A question that comes to us all from time to time - fine write Trenz.
September 13th, 2020 00:33
Michael Edwards said:
A question that comes to us all from time to time - fine write Trenz.
September 13th, 2020 00:33
I live on borrowed things
L. B. Mek said:
I connect with this write on so many levels, brilliantly insightful and unerringly acute brevity!
September 12th, 2020 03:30
L. B. Mek said:
I connect with this write on so many levels, brilliantly insightful and unerringly acute brevity!
September 12th, 2020 03:30
I live on borrowed things
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Trenz, we all live on borrowed things, we cannot take them with us.
Andy
September 12th, 2020 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Trenz, we all live on borrowed things, we cannot take them with us.
Andy
September 12th, 2020 01:41
I live on borrowed things
MelissaJA said:
Short and to the point, yet says so much! Well done
September 11th, 2020 23:11
MelissaJA said:
Short and to the point, yet says so much! Well done
September 11th, 2020 23:11
I live on borrowed things
Dove said:
Very sweet, and deep words! Love the rhythm
September 11th, 2020 20:45
Dove said:
Very sweet, and deep words! Love the rhythm
September 11th, 2020 20:45
Wanderer
ron parrish aka wordman said:
and it drives you nuts because you can`t recreate it
September 11th, 2020 17:45
ron parrish aka wordman said:
and it drives you nuts because you can`t recreate it
September 11th, 2020 17:45
I live on borrowed things
ron parrish aka wordman said:
great message and very true
September 11th, 2020 13:12
ron parrish aka wordman said:
great message and very true
September 11th, 2020 13:12
Wanderer
AwHec8 said:
Wow! Talk about a Poem that starts with a feel like it was here as long as the Earth.
Can we please have the rest?
Great Write there Trenz Pruca. Don
September 11th, 2020 07:45
AwHec8 said:
Wow! Talk about a Poem that starts with a feel like it was here as long as the Earth.
Can we please have the rest?
Great Write there Trenz Pruca. Don
September 11th, 2020 07:45
Wanderer
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Even the part you still have is superb muse, like a seafaring poem, you can build on it. Yet it reads as a fine complete poem even without its other half. Kudos!!
Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
September 11th, 2020 00:54
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Even the part you still have is superb muse, like a seafaring poem, you can build on it. Yet it reads as a fine complete poem even without its other half. Kudos!!
Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
September 11th, 2020 00:54
Wanderer
Dove said:
It’s a beautiful start to a journey! A little hint of a magical soul, with reality splashing
Through its pursuits of adventure!
There’s a Movie out there, of a struggling writer, who finds a manuscript! And published it as his own! He meets an old man, who tells his story and realizes he was the writer of the manuscript!
I hope memories spurs the rest of your work!
September 10th, 2020 18:52
Dove said:
It’s a beautiful start to a journey! A little hint of a magical soul, with reality splashing
Through its pursuits of adventure!
There’s a Movie out there, of a struggling writer, who finds a manuscript! And published it as his own! He meets an old man, who tells his story and realizes he was the writer of the manuscript!
I hope memories spurs the rest of your work!
September 10th, 2020 18:52
Wanderer
Trenz Pruca said:
Thank you. I wrote the poem on paper many years ago. During my travels, it was lost leaving only this scrap.
September 10th, 2020 14:47
Trenz Pruca said:
Thank you. I wrote the poem on paper many years ago. During my travels, it was lost leaving only this scrap.
September 10th, 2020 14:47
THE BIG STORM
Michael Edwards said:
You have a style of your own - a joy
to read.
September 9th, 2020 13:29
Michael Edwards said:
You have a style of your own - a joy
to read.
September 9th, 2020 13:29
THE BIG STORM
dusk arising said:
@They say\' is only man trying to gainsay nature. But nature will have its way and man may not survive. For we are only abusing the what will be after all.
September 9th, 2020 11:51
dusk arising said:
@They say\' is only man trying to gainsay nature. But nature will have its way and man may not survive. For we are only abusing the what will be after all.
September 9th, 2020 11:51
THE BIG STORM
Goldfinch60 said:
Nature has its own way of doing things, can anybody really interpret it?
Andy
September 9th, 2020 03:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Nature has its own way of doing things, can anybody really interpret it?
Andy
September 9th, 2020 03:18
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