Comments received on poems by Jerry Reynolds
Haibun Odyssey-2
L. B. Mek said:
\'nature will be\'
\'the vision of her\'
\'in dark hollows,
a chauvinist mind strokes\'
\'fucking with a boy’s mother
came with consequences.\'
\'His lust for her was better known
than his contempt.\'
\'select a wrong pitch
a ruthless critic of your choice\'
\'\'nature will be\'
\'the vision of her\'
(forgive my overzealous and rude
reimagining of your
poignant and heartachingly empathetic write, Jerry
I just, wanted to share with you
those insightful lines
which impacted me the most)..
thank you! for choosing to share
your poetic wisdom, dear poet
July 30th, 2021 04:15
L. B. Mek said:
\'nature will be\'
\'the vision of her\'
\'in dark hollows,
a chauvinist mind strokes\'
\'fucking with a boy’s mother
came with consequences.\'
\'His lust for her was better known
than his contempt.\'
\'select a wrong pitch
a ruthless critic of your choice\'
\'\'nature will be\'
\'the vision of her\'
(forgive my overzealous and rude
reimagining of your
poignant and heartachingly empathetic write, Jerry
I just, wanted to share with you
those insightful lines
which impacted me the most)..
thank you! for choosing to share
your poetic wisdom, dear poet
July 30th, 2021 04:15
Haibun Odyssey-2
Neville said:
who was it said two into one dont go
......................... dunno .......................
... but they sure got that one wrong...
Never known two in a row sir, not from anyone ... well done ..
Neville
July 29th, 2021 11:57
Neville said:
who was it said two into one dont go
......................... dunno .......................
... but they sure got that one wrong...
Never known two in a row sir, not from anyone ... well done ..
Neville
July 29th, 2021 11:57
A Haibun Odyssey
L. B. Mek said:
\'a Jim Crow way of life: collapsing\'..
and buried away, it shall forever stay!
hopefully...
\'let us all endeavour, to turn History\'s
Ugly
into Poetry\'s: transcendent beauty\'...
(\'Jim Crow was more
than a series of rigid anti-black laws.
It was a way of life. Under Jim Crow\')
from: Jim Crow Museum*
(a poignant read Jerry
and such a vivid scene;
you know you\'ve executed
your depiction, well
when we all, walk away
with a bad taste, lingering - within us
all fckng Day!)
July 29th, 2021 03:15
L. B. Mek said:
\'a Jim Crow way of life: collapsing\'..
and buried away, it shall forever stay!
hopefully...
\'let us all endeavour, to turn History\'s
Ugly
into Poetry\'s: transcendent beauty\'...
(\'Jim Crow was more
than a series of rigid anti-black laws.
It was a way of life. Under Jim Crow\')
from: Jim Crow Museum*
(a poignant read Jerry
and such a vivid scene;
you know you\'ve executed
your depiction, well
when we all, walk away
with a bad taste, lingering - within us
all fckng Day!)
July 29th, 2021 03:15
A Haibun Odyssey
Neville said:
you are a clever so and so ..
Haibuns are as rare as rocking horse poo around these parts ..
I have always enjoyed the mix of prose n haiku and the way they often interrelate ... yours is a great example sir .... :)
July 28th, 2021 14:32
Neville said:
you are a clever so and so ..
Haibuns are as rare as rocking horse poo around these parts ..
I have always enjoyed the mix of prose n haiku and the way they often interrelate ... yours is a great example sir .... :)
July 28th, 2021 14:32
A Haibun Odyssey
Jerry Reynolds said:
Thanks, Dusk.
I really appreciate you taking the time to look. I wrote the poem for my baby sister, a student of Greek myth, who wanted me to write something about growing up in the 1950s in the south.
July 28th, 2021 08:50
Jerry Reynolds said:
Thanks, Dusk.
I really appreciate you taking the time to look. I wrote the poem for my baby sister, a student of Greek myth, who wanted me to write something about growing up in the 1950s in the south.
July 28th, 2021 08:50
A Haibun Odyssey
dusk arising said:
Initially i read this enthralling piece not knowing what a haibun or a bleacher were. Google clarified for me. Reading again i really like the way you have put this together and it\'s story line.
July 28th, 2021 08:28
dusk arising said:
Initially i read this enthralling piece not knowing what a haibun or a bleacher were. Google clarified for me. Reading again i really like the way you have put this together and it\'s story line.
July 28th, 2021 08:28
Unfinished Dream
Goldfinch60 said:
May that metaphor show complete understanding and togetherness Jerry.
Andy
July 28th, 2021 00:59
Goldfinch60 said:
May that metaphor show complete understanding and togetherness Jerry.
Andy
July 28th, 2021 00:59
Walking the dog
Goldfinch60 said:
There smell takes them to many places for you to follow Jerry.
Andy
July 27th, 2021 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
There smell takes them to many places for you to follow Jerry.
Andy
July 27th, 2021 00:43
Walking the dog
deep_carrot said:
This describes my pup’s gremlin crawl/leash pulling so perfectly! Good stuff!!
July 26th, 2021 18:26
deep_carrot said:
This describes my pup’s gremlin crawl/leash pulling so perfectly! Good stuff!!
July 26th, 2021 18:26
Walking the dog
Fay Slimm. said:
Nothing like a dog to smell out your past and resurrect those memories Jerry - - - grass everywhere holds many a secret and oh what tales it could tell.
July 26th, 2021 16:54
Fay Slimm. said:
Nothing like a dog to smell out your past and resurrect those memories Jerry - - - grass everywhere holds many a secret and oh what tales it could tell.
July 26th, 2021 16:54
Dead from the start
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is always there Jerry but many just do not see it.
Andy
July 24th, 2021 00:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is always there Jerry but many just do not see it.
Andy
July 24th, 2021 00:23
Dead from the start
Doggerel Dave said:
No dispute there, Jerry - when it comes to the human condition, I\'m a pessimist too.
July 23rd, 2021 19:14
Doggerel Dave said:
No dispute there, Jerry - when it comes to the human condition, I\'m a pessimist too.
July 23rd, 2021 19:14
Dead from the start
Neville said:
it happens ........... and sometimes, just like that ......... Neat mate, very neat indeed :)
July 23rd, 2021 17:13
Neville said:
it happens ........... and sometimes, just like that ......... Neat mate, very neat indeed :)
July 23rd, 2021 17:13
Dead from the start
Saxon Crow said:
I completely get what you\'re not saying Jerry.
July 23rd, 2021 14:06
Saxon Crow said:
I completely get what you\'re not saying Jerry.
July 23rd, 2021 14:06
Dead from the start
Jerry Reynolds said:
Thanks, Orchi.
Good see.
Perish the thought (even though I had it.)
It’s limited- should have chosen another category.
There it\'s edited.
July 23rd, 2021 09:55
Jerry Reynolds said:
Thanks, Orchi.
Good see.
Perish the thought (even though I had it.)
It’s limited- should have chosen another category.
There it\'s edited.
July 23rd, 2021 09:55
Dead from the start
orchidee said:
I\'m \'liking\' the poem Jerry, though not the thought that there may be no love at all.
July 23rd, 2021 09:22
orchidee said:
I\'m \'liking\' the poem Jerry, though not the thought that there may be no love at all.
July 23rd, 2021 09:22
Line Dancing
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah wow this is sensational and sublime sassy muse. Kudos!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
July 22nd, 2021 11:27
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah wow this is sensational and sublime sassy muse. Kudos!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
July 22nd, 2021 11:27
Line Dancing
Neville said:
the mind boggles .. in a nice way .. probably ............... :)
July 18th, 2021 07:30
Neville said:
the mind boggles .. in a nice way .. probably ............... :)
July 18th, 2021 07:30
Active Messaging
Neville said:
its amazing what ya can find laying in the sidewalk these days ..
see it, write it down quick before another comes along ...
pretty darn neat sir if you ask me .. :)
July 16th, 2021 16:18
Neville said:
its amazing what ya can find laying in the sidewalk these days ..
see it, write it down quick before another comes along ...
pretty darn neat sir if you ask me .. :)
July 16th, 2021 16:18
Active Messaging
Saxon Crow said:
Amusing and melancholic all at once. Nicely written Jerry
July 16th, 2021 14:23
Saxon Crow said:
Amusing and melancholic all at once. Nicely written Jerry
July 16th, 2021 14:23
Active Messaging
SureshG said:
One only has to read your poem to know that there isn’t an event that cannot be written about, very entertaining indeed.
July 16th, 2021 12:58
SureshG said:
One only has to read your poem to know that there isn’t an event that cannot be written about, very entertaining indeed.
July 16th, 2021 12:58
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