Comments received on poems by aDarkerMind
Comes the Fiddlers Three
aDarkerMind said:
thank you Michael for your kind words. very kind of you;
March 22nd, 2021 11:59
aDarkerMind said:
thank you Michael for your kind words. very kind of you;
March 22nd, 2021 11:59
Comes the Fiddlers Three
L. B. Mek said:
what assured write of tempered commentary, insightfully historical in context and with pin-point accuracy to timely relevance..
a great read!
March 22nd, 2021 06:33
L. B. Mek said:
what assured write of tempered commentary, insightfully historical in context and with pin-point accuracy to timely relevance..
a great read!
March 22nd, 2021 06:33
Comes the Fiddlers Three
Michael Edwards said:
Love this - needs another read and will pop it in my saves - such imagery.
March 21st, 2021 14:55
Michael Edwards said:
Love this - needs another read and will pop it in my saves - such imagery.
March 21st, 2021 14:55
Bring Port To The Table and Mourn
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing read DM, the last stanza says a great deal.
Andy
March 17th, 2021 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing read DM, the last stanza says a great deal.
Andy
March 17th, 2021 01:22
Bring Port To The Table and Mourn
Jerry Reynolds said:
Dark write, D.M. Good read.
March 16th, 2021 09:51
Jerry Reynolds said:
Dark write, D.M. Good read.
March 16th, 2021 09:51
Bring Port To The Table and Mourn
aDarkerMind said:
thank you L B Mek. I do appreciate your comments.
March 16th, 2021 05:35
aDarkerMind said:
thank you L B Mek. I do appreciate your comments.
March 16th, 2021 05:35
Bring Port To The Table and Mourn
L. B. Mek said:
harrowing imagery utilised skilfully, a thought provoking read..
thanks for sharing
March 16th, 2021 05:27
L. B. Mek said:
harrowing imagery utilised skilfully, a thought provoking read..
thanks for sharing
March 16th, 2021 05:27
Reflections
Goldfinch60 said:
Resting against that aging tree gives us more energy to continue in our life and I am so fortunate to have found them to keep me going into old age.
Sunny side up please.
Andy
March 16th, 2021 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Resting against that aging tree gives us more energy to continue in our life and I am so fortunate to have found them to keep me going into old age.
Sunny side up please.
Andy
March 16th, 2021 01:16
Three Blind Mice
Jerry Reynolds said:
Harsh write, Melvin. Great images, good read.
March 13th, 2021 11:55
Jerry Reynolds said:
Harsh write, Melvin. Great images, good read.
March 13th, 2021 11:55
Spring Wool
L. B. Mek said:
\'wear this winter coat a day.
this feinted wool
with arthritic hands and denatured fangs
how quick we forget
that in days past she sang;\'..
a great read, thanks for sharing dear poet
March 12th, 2021 05:48
L. B. Mek said:
\'wear this winter coat a day.
this feinted wool
with arthritic hands and denatured fangs
how quick we forget
that in days past she sang;\'..
a great read, thanks for sharing dear poet
March 12th, 2021 05:48
It is Now Six O\'clock
L. B. Mek said:
bold - impactful,
demanding - distilling,
judgemental of judges,
empathetic of the judged,
angled to shine perspective
on those most maligned within society\'s hypocritical traditions..
daring!
a poem, I wish I had the ability to pen..
March 11th, 2021 04:55
L. B. Mek said:
bold - impactful,
demanding - distilling,
judgemental of judges,
empathetic of the judged,
angled to shine perspective
on those most maligned within society\'s hypocritical traditions..
daring!
a poem, I wish I had the ability to pen..
March 11th, 2021 04:55
And Who Gave Death a Feather?
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
inexcusable to deny the mastery displayed in this work based on its edgy message or concept,
from one wannabe poet
to you: dear accomplished wordsmith,
let me just say, I will find my poetic journey as having surpassed my highest-peak of dreams, if I was to ever pen a work of such impassioned, free-flowing verve and unmistakeable grandeur..
thank you for sharing!
March 9th, 2021 06:03
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
inexcusable to deny the mastery displayed in this work based on its edgy message or concept,
from one wannabe poet
to you: dear accomplished wordsmith,
let me just say, I will find my poetic journey as having surpassed my highest-peak of dreams, if I was to ever pen a work of such impassioned, free-flowing verve and unmistakeable grandeur..
thank you for sharing!
March 9th, 2021 06:03
With Wanting Eyes
aDarkerMind said:
thank you very much L.B.Mek.
a comment as strong as that has made me a happy man. very kind.
March 8th, 2021 09:32
aDarkerMind said:
thank you very much L.B.Mek.
a comment as strong as that has made me a happy man. very kind.
March 8th, 2021 09:32
With Wanting Eyes
L. B. Mek said:
\'heavy is her ploughing horse
both in loudest thought or quietistic slumber
taunts the palate of the hungry Raven
with feathers torn between fate and hunger.\'
not sure how literal to translate your words as you\'re obviously highly skilled and I presume innuendo is only one of the many poetic tools you\'re showcasing with this write, but
what is unquestionable is your wonderful ability for inking uniquely evocative language..
thanks for choosing to share dear poet
March 8th, 2021 04:36
L. B. Mek said:
\'heavy is her ploughing horse
both in loudest thought or quietistic slumber
taunts the palate of the hungry Raven
with feathers torn between fate and hunger.\'
not sure how literal to translate your words as you\'re obviously highly skilled and I presume innuendo is only one of the many poetic tools you\'re showcasing with this write, but
what is unquestionable is your wonderful ability for inking uniquely evocative language..
thanks for choosing to share dear poet
March 8th, 2021 04:36
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