Comments received on poems by aDarkerMind
Another Side Of This
Thomas W Case said:
Great imagery and use of language.
November 26th, 2023 09:56
Thomas W Case said:
Great imagery and use of language.
November 26th, 2023 09:56
beneath a shade of 3 o\'clock
aDarkerMind said:
thank you Ellen.
very kind.
November 25th, 2023 17:45
aDarkerMind said:
thank you Ellen.
very kind.
November 25th, 2023 17:45
beneath a shade of 3 o\'clock
Ellen Marsell said:
\"what do I now
deep beneath a shade of 3 o\'clock?\"
Some extraordinary impression after reading it. You just sit in a daze and then read it again.
That\'s great!
November 25th, 2023 17:36
Ellen Marsell said:
\"what do I now
deep beneath a shade of 3 o\'clock?\"
Some extraordinary impression after reading it. You just sit in a daze and then read it again.
That\'s great!
November 25th, 2023 17:36
a silent rage of anguish
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant use of language and flow. Superb work.
November 20th, 2023 14:33
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant use of language and flow. Superb work.
November 20th, 2023 14:33
a silent rage of anguish
Teddy.15 said:
You just ripped everything from my gut. Wow it just gets better and better. Absolutely beautiful poetry. I see every detail and hear every whisper. ❤️
November 19th, 2023 17:27
Teddy.15 said:
You just ripped everything from my gut. Wow it just gets better and better. Absolutely beautiful poetry. I see every detail and hear every whisper. ❤️
November 19th, 2023 17:27
a silent rage of anguish
aDarkerMind said:
and sinks a little deeper day by day!
November 19th, 2023 10:39
aDarkerMind said:
and sinks a little deeper day by day!
November 19th, 2023 10:39
a silent rage of anguish
Lorenz said:
Poetry is a dagger that lacerates souls !
November 19th, 2023 10:19
Lorenz said:
Poetry is a dagger that lacerates souls !
November 19th, 2023 10:19
A Pocketful of Catacombs
jarcher54 said:
Streets of London has inspired and haunted me for decades... one of my all-time go-to songs for solace and inspiration... your striking Alice is a wonderful reimagination... getting lost in your catacomb-poem is pretty cool too!
November 18th, 2023 19:39
jarcher54 said:
Streets of London has inspired and haunted me for decades... one of my all-time go-to songs for solace and inspiration... your striking Alice is a wonderful reimagination... getting lost in your catacomb-poem is pretty cool too!
November 18th, 2023 19:39
an energy of change
jarcher54 said:
Chilling... and HOW did you know June 14 is my birthday?
November 18th, 2023 19:27
jarcher54 said:
Chilling... and HOW did you know June 14 is my birthday?
November 18th, 2023 19:27
a letter from the torso of sublime
Hopeless/the problem said:
Love this your do talented but how many shades of dark??
November 14th, 2023 18:56
Hopeless/the problem said:
Love this your do talented but how many shades of dark??
November 14th, 2023 18:56
Not Pity\'s Sake; Nor Anger;
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant. Reminds me of Cohen. Great mood setting.
November 12th, 2023 14:59
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant. Reminds me of Cohen. Great mood setting.
November 12th, 2023 14:59
Not Pity\'s Sake; Nor Anger;
Teddy.15 said:
Beautifully dark 🖤
Every last line... Extraordinary with imagery
November 12th, 2023 04:50
Teddy.15 said:
Beautifully dark 🖤
Every last line... Extraordinary with imagery
November 12th, 2023 04:50
an energy of change
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic. I love the abstract vibe.
November 11th, 2023 09:32
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic. I love the abstract vibe.
November 11th, 2023 09:32
protocol and weather
Teddy.15 said:
Your last lines wow.
where does our hunger hide?
in our country clouded
bent and buckled
fishing for a lobster in a heart.
So many metaphor in this. Beautiful dear friend. 🩷
November 11th, 2023 01:43
Teddy.15 said:
Your last lines wow.
where does our hunger hide?
in our country clouded
bent and buckled
fishing for a lobster in a heart.
So many metaphor in this. Beautiful dear friend. 🩷
November 11th, 2023 01:43
Canto; In a Summers Sleep
Thomas W Case said:
I love your use of language. The flow is great.
November 8th, 2023 20:53
Thomas W Case said:
I love your use of language. The flow is great.
November 8th, 2023 20:53
Canto; In a Summers Sleep
Teddy.15 said:
lol very romantic 💜 poetry of love uniquely entwined. I\'m loving your new twist on poetry.
November 8th, 2023 15:39
Teddy.15 said:
lol very romantic 💜 poetry of love uniquely entwined. I\'m loving your new twist on poetry.
November 8th, 2023 15:39
a semicolon pause
Teddy.15 said:
Exquisite poetry throughout. Your last lines kudos.
where kneels
so shall I beg
a proud horn of circumspect
with a keg of ale
drinking through the torture of a dream;
Love this stanza. 🤗
November 8th, 2023 03:49
Teddy.15 said:
Exquisite poetry throughout. Your last lines kudos.
where kneels
so shall I beg
a proud horn of circumspect
with a keg of ale
drinking through the torture of a dream;
Love this stanza. 🤗
November 8th, 2023 03:49
a semicolon pause
Yassin Tamam said:
vividly visual, adoring the pauses, the breaks and the deep breaths i can feel while i am reading it. beautifully done
November 7th, 2023 16:13
Yassin Tamam said:
vividly visual, adoring the pauses, the breaks and the deep breaths i can feel while i am reading it. beautifully done
November 7th, 2023 16:13
jazz
Teddy.15 said:
Jazz has so many faces as you have beautifully composed in this poetry, I personally love soft jazz. When I was a child I felt my life was surrounded by messy jazz which I can still hear today in dark moments. A fantastic creative piece here dearest Melvin, you have tormented and elated my very mind in less than 60 seconds.
To say you inspire is an understatement ❤️
November 4th, 2023 15:41
Teddy.15 said:
Jazz has so many faces as you have beautifully composed in this poetry, I personally love soft jazz. When I was a child I felt my life was surrounded by messy jazz which I can still hear today in dark moments. A fantastic creative piece here dearest Melvin, you have tormented and elated my very mind in less than 60 seconds.
To say you inspire is an understatement ❤️
November 4th, 2023 15:41
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