Comments received on poems by aDarkerMind
The Second Day of Spring
aDarkerMind said:
very kind words Teddy
and very much appreciated;
May 5th, 2024 06:37
aDarkerMind said:
very kind words Teddy
and very much appreciated;
May 5th, 2024 06:37
through gemini skies of all who walk devine
Teddy.15 said:
Your truly stunning imagery a little slice of heaven, are you putting a new spin on grief, I\'ll have some of this. Even without a touch or smell it\'s all still here right in front of us. Gorgeous 🌹
May 4th, 2024 02:36
Teddy.15 said:
Your truly stunning imagery a little slice of heaven, are you putting a new spin on grief, I\'ll have some of this. Even without a touch or smell it\'s all still here right in front of us. Gorgeous 🌹
May 4th, 2024 02:36
through gemini skies of all who walk devine
Lorenz said:
I know very well the gemini skies !
May 3rd, 2024 12:38
Lorenz said:
I know very well the gemini skies !
May 3rd, 2024 12:38
To Walk Old Ways Alone
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. Your writing reminds me of Cormac McCarthy. Powerful.
April 29th, 2024 09:59
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. Your writing reminds me of Cormac McCarthy. Powerful.
April 29th, 2024 09:59
To Walk Old Ways Alone
Teddy.15 said:
I can see a very very special lady within these lines, pain never stops just eases. This poem is truly and magnificently beautiful. kudos Melvin. 🌹
April 29th, 2024 00:14
Teddy.15 said:
I can see a very very special lady within these lines, pain never stops just eases. This poem is truly and magnificently beautiful. kudos Melvin. 🌹
April 29th, 2024 00:14
polarity of thought
2781 said:
\"And he saw that there was no man, and wondered that there was no intercessor:
April 26th, 2024 23:51
2781 said:
\"And he saw that there was no man, and wondered that there was no intercessor:
April 26th, 2024 23:51
polarity of thought
Thomas W Case said:
Breath taking. Brilliant work and word choice.
April 26th, 2024 15:35
Thomas W Case said:
Breath taking. Brilliant work and word choice.
April 26th, 2024 15:35
What Spirit Holds The Shape?
Teddy.15 said:
Just beautiful dear Melvin, mesmerized by each line. 🌹
April 24th, 2024 15:04
Teddy.15 said:
Just beautiful dear Melvin, mesmerized by each line. 🌹
April 24th, 2024 15:04
What Spirit Holds The Shape?
Lorenz said:
A journey into verbal reefs that defy analysis ...
April 24th, 2024 14:42
Lorenz said:
A journey into verbal reefs that defy analysis ...
April 24th, 2024 14:42
Unfamiliar Things
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous. My heart skips a beat when I read your brilliant poetry.
April 22nd, 2024 19:25
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous. My heart skips a beat when I read your brilliant poetry.
April 22nd, 2024 19:25
Unfamiliar Things
Teddy.15 said:
Sometimes I have the same feeling, and it\'s usually from my gut. Wow Melvin, how to draw imagery into poetry. Powerful and I\'m thinking I should be worried because if you are worried we should all be worried. 🌹
April 22nd, 2024 13:51
Teddy.15 said:
Sometimes I have the same feeling, and it\'s usually from my gut. Wow Melvin, how to draw imagery into poetry. Powerful and I\'m thinking I should be worried because if you are worried we should all be worried. 🌹
April 22nd, 2024 13:51
what may be now
Teddy.15 said:
Outstanding as ever dearest Melvin, life goes on my dear dear friend. 💜
April 21st, 2024 09:31
Teddy.15 said:
Outstanding as ever dearest Melvin, life goes on my dear dear friend. 💜
April 21st, 2024 09:31
of sentiment untold
Lorenz said:
Dark\' you are the \"logos\"\' in the labyrinth !
April 16th, 2024 12:26
Lorenz said:
Dark\' you are the \"logos\"\' in the labyrinth !
April 16th, 2024 12:26
of sentiment untold
Teddy.15 said:
Absolutely beautiful, the music adds to the atmosphere of this dear Melvin, actually my new favourite from you. Stunning in emotional imagery loved your ending. 🌹
April 16th, 2024 01:02
Teddy.15 said:
Absolutely beautiful, the music adds to the atmosphere of this dear Melvin, actually my new favourite from you. Stunning in emotional imagery loved your ending. 🌹
April 16th, 2024 01:02
of sentiment untold
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous imagery and use of language.
April 15th, 2024 19:06
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous imagery and use of language.
April 15th, 2024 19:06
beneath a shade of 3 o\'clock
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful. Great work, as always.
April 4th, 2024 10:43
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful. Great work, as always.
April 4th, 2024 10:43
a more amicable approach
Teddy.15 said:
Just wonderful imagery drawn into each line. 🌹
April 1st, 2024 12:00
Teddy.15 said:
Just wonderful imagery drawn into each line. 🌹
April 1st, 2024 12:00
a more amicable approach
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. Your use of language and imagery is tremendous. I\'m reminded of Neruda. You paint the scene well.
March 31st, 2024 20:56
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. Your use of language and imagery is tremendous. I\'m reminded of Neruda. You paint the scene well.
March 31st, 2024 20:56
My Inanimate Sounds
Lorenz said:
An expression that borrows from a psychic force freed from the weight of reason ! (André Breton )
March 24th, 2024 14:21
Lorenz said:
An expression that borrows from a psychic force freed from the weight of reason ! (André Breton )
March 24th, 2024 14:21
Another Side Of This
Lorenz said:
\'Sleeping with a crucifix hanging upside-down ! The sentence delighted me !
November 26th, 2023 14:07
Lorenz said:
\'Sleeping with a crucifix hanging upside-down ! The sentence delighted me !
November 26th, 2023 14:07
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