Comments received on poems by aDarkerMind
Fourteen Days Of June
Teddy.15 said:
My heart be with you in these days of june, June a very hard month for me too. Absolutely painful I felt all your emotions and the depth of each tear dear Melvin. 🌹
May 23rd, 2024 00:44
Teddy.15 said:
My heart be with you in these days of june, June a very hard month for me too. Absolutely painful I felt all your emotions and the depth of each tear dear Melvin. 🌹
May 23rd, 2024 00:44
My Heart a Grave
MrNobody40 said:
Honestly. That\'s really good. Thank you for sharing.
May 21st, 2024 11:43
MrNobody40 said:
Honestly. That\'s really good. Thank you for sharing.
May 21st, 2024 11:43
The Moon has no Balloons
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. Beautiful and moving tribute to the lovely Teddy. We must keep on keeping on. Trolls be damned.
May 19th, 2024 14:48
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. Beautiful and moving tribute to the lovely Teddy. We must keep on keeping on. Trolls be damned.
May 19th, 2024 14:48
The Moon has no Balloons
Teddy.15 said:
Wow magnificent, and in honour of my plight, probably the kindest act anyone could have done for me today, I\'m not alone and i know it, many thanks to you dear Melvin, and may this beautiful poem get all its fame. i would hope the moon of balloons pops and what was inside that balloon showers every troll and every weak and jealous writer of words with the means to extinguish the way in which they work at making others feel worthless. kudos and truly out of a moments of misery you and I have marvelous work to show. Thank you thank you. ❤️
May 19th, 2024 10:33
Teddy.15 said:
Wow magnificent, and in honour of my plight, probably the kindest act anyone could have done for me today, I\'m not alone and i know it, many thanks to you dear Melvin, and may this beautiful poem get all its fame. i would hope the moon of balloons pops and what was inside that balloon showers every troll and every weak and jealous writer of words with the means to extinguish the way in which they work at making others feel worthless. kudos and truly out of a moments of misery you and I have marvelous work to show. Thank you thank you. ❤️
May 19th, 2024 10:33
A Paragraph of Sadness
Teddy.15 said:
Melvin, your last stanza is phenomenal dear Poet. Love this. 🌹
May 17th, 2024 12:42
Teddy.15 said:
Melvin, your last stanza is phenomenal dear Poet. Love this. 🌹
May 17th, 2024 12:42
To Dance With Isadora
Teddy.15 said:
What a beautiful title, I\'m thinking they don\'t make them like the old days. Utterly stunning poetry love love your last lines. 🌹
May 13th, 2024 13:46
Teddy.15 said:
What a beautiful title, I\'m thinking they don\'t make them like the old days. Utterly stunning poetry love love your last lines. 🌹
May 13th, 2024 13:46
I Have Driven Green This Age Where Muscles Dry
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. Your use of language and flow is brilliant on fire, as Teddy said.
May 12th, 2024 10:48
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. Your use of language and flow is brilliant on fire, as Teddy said.
May 12th, 2024 10:48
I Have Driven Green This Age Where Muscles Dry
Teddy.15 said:
Wow wow and wow, your poetic pen is on fire your imagery glorious in richness and your last lines, well My dear Melvin, sounds as if you should be reading this in the Shakespeare theatre, and then some. 🌹
May 12th, 2024 06:18
Teddy.15 said:
Wow wow and wow, your poetic pen is on fire your imagery glorious in richness and your last lines, well My dear Melvin, sounds as if you should be reading this in the Shakespeare theatre, and then some. 🌹
May 12th, 2024 06:18
How In My Absence Spoils What Cannot Be
Teddy.15 said:
I feel such a desperate longing within these words, absolutely stunning, I always feel I\'ve read these before, maybe you are reposting or maybe we are just floating in the world crossing paths spun from words. Either way dear Melvin your poetry is top class dear friend. 🌹
May 11th, 2024 06:26
Teddy.15 said:
I feel such a desperate longing within these words, absolutely stunning, I always feel I\'ve read these before, maybe you are reposting or maybe we are just floating in the world crossing paths spun from words. Either way dear Melvin your poetry is top class dear friend. 🌹
May 11th, 2024 06:26
My Heart a Grave
Teddy.15 said:
Magnificent, and I felt every last word right to the full stop at the end, Kudos my dear Melvin, you brought me right there to my mother\'s grave side. 🌹
May 10th, 2024 12:25
Teddy.15 said:
Magnificent, and I felt every last word right to the full stop at the end, Kudos my dear Melvin, you brought me right there to my mother\'s grave side. 🌹
May 10th, 2024 12:25
My Heart a Grave
Aradhya said:
so very beautiful and tragic, with such great depth, dear poet!
\"how many wreaths of satin lie in wait?
I see no logic in the single rose that burns
where mother sleeps away her fond farewell.\"
so very touching!
May 10th, 2024 12:20
Aradhya said:
so very beautiful and tragic, with such great depth, dear poet!
\"how many wreaths of satin lie in wait?
I see no logic in the single rose that burns
where mother sleeps away her fond farewell.\"
so very touching!
May 10th, 2024 12:20
My Heart a Grave
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful writing. Deep, like the deepest ocean. Beautiful work.
May 10th, 2024 10:17
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful writing. Deep, like the deepest ocean. Beautiful work.
May 10th, 2024 10:17
a tadpole dance with he who cannot sing
Neville said:
how extraordinarily noir sir .. and impressive too I might add ..
May 9th, 2024 16:50
Neville said:
how extraordinarily noir sir .. and impressive too I might add ..
May 9th, 2024 16:50
a tadpole dance with he who cannot sing
Teddy.15 said:
What a wonderful piece as ever, your words astound my heart, your last stanza wow, such imagery. Kudos 🌹
May 9th, 2024 14:08
Teddy.15 said:
What a wonderful piece as ever, your words astound my heart, your last stanza wow, such imagery. Kudos 🌹
May 9th, 2024 14:08
Possession
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. Reminds me of Cormac McCarthy. Brilliant.
May 8th, 2024 09:13
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. Reminds me of Cormac McCarthy. Brilliant.
May 8th, 2024 09:13
through gemini skies of all who walk devine
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful writing with brilliant imagery.
May 6th, 2024 14:44
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful writing with brilliant imagery.
May 6th, 2024 14:44
The Second Day of Spring
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous imagery and use of the senses.
May 5th, 2024 13:53
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous imagery and use of the senses.
May 5th, 2024 13:53
The Second Day of Spring
aDarkerMind said:
very kind words Teddy
and very much appreciated;
May 5th, 2024 06:37
aDarkerMind said:
very kind words Teddy
and very much appreciated;
May 5th, 2024 06:37
through gemini skies of all who walk devine
Teddy.15 said:
Your truly stunning imagery a little slice of heaven, are you putting a new spin on grief, I\'ll have some of this. Even without a touch or smell it\'s all still here right in front of us. Gorgeous 🌹
May 4th, 2024 02:36
Teddy.15 said:
Your truly stunning imagery a little slice of heaven, are you putting a new spin on grief, I\'ll have some of this. Even without a touch or smell it\'s all still here right in front of us. Gorgeous 🌹
May 4th, 2024 02:36
through gemini skies of all who walk devine
Lorenz said:
I know very well the gemini skies !
May 3rd, 2024 12:38
Lorenz said:
I know very well the gemini skies !
May 3rd, 2024 12:38
To Walk Old Ways Alone
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. Your writing reminds me of Cormac McCarthy. Powerful.
April 29th, 2024 09:59
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. Your writing reminds me of Cormac McCarthy. Powerful.
April 29th, 2024 09:59
To Walk Old Ways Alone
Teddy.15 said:
I can see a very very special lady within these lines, pain never stops just eases. This poem is truly and magnificently beautiful. kudos Melvin. 🌹
April 29th, 2024 00:14
Teddy.15 said:
I can see a very very special lady within these lines, pain never stops just eases. This poem is truly and magnificently beautiful. kudos Melvin. 🌹
April 29th, 2024 00:14
polarity of thought
2781 said:
\"And he saw that there was no man, and wondered that there was no intercessor:
April 26th, 2024 23:51
2781 said:
\"And he saw that there was no man, and wondered that there was no intercessor:
April 26th, 2024 23:51
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