And Who Gave Death a Feather?
L. B. Mek said:

Brilliant!
inexcusable to deny the mastery displayed in this work based on its edgy message or concept,
from one wannabe poet
to you: dear accomplished wordsmith,
let me just say, I will find my poetic journey as having surpassed my highest-peak of dreams, if I was to ever pen a work of such impassioned, free-flowing verve and unmistakeable grandeur..
thank you for sharing!

March 9th, 2021 06:03

With Wanting Eyes
L. B. Mek said:

\'heavy is her ploughing horse
both in loudest thought or quietistic slumber
taunts the palate of the hungry Raven
with feathers torn between fate and hunger.\'
not sure how literal to translate your words as you\'re obviously highly skilled and I presume innuendo is only one of the many poetic tools you\'re showcasing with this write, but
what is unquestionable is your wonderful ability for inking uniquely evocative language..
thanks for choosing to share dear poet

March 8th, 2021 04:36

Who Lights The Way?
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, D.M.

March 5th, 2021 08:32