Comments received on poems by aDarkerMind
a letter from the torso of sublime
Hey! said:
Love this your do talented but how many shades of dark??
November 14th, 2023 18:56
Hey! said:
Love this your do talented but how many shades of dark??
November 14th, 2023 18:56
Not Pity\'s Sake; Nor Anger;
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant. Reminds me of Cohen. Great mood setting.
November 12th, 2023 14:59
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant. Reminds me of Cohen. Great mood setting.
November 12th, 2023 14:59
Not Pity\'s Sake; Nor Anger;
Teddy.15 said:
Beautifully dark 🖤
Every last line... Extraordinary with imagery
November 12th, 2023 04:50
Teddy.15 said:
Beautifully dark 🖤
Every last line... Extraordinary with imagery
November 12th, 2023 04:50
an energy of change
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic. I love the abstract vibe.
November 11th, 2023 09:32
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic. I love the abstract vibe.
November 11th, 2023 09:32
protocol and weather
Teddy.15 said:
Your last lines wow.
where does our hunger hide?
in our country clouded
bent and buckled
fishing for a lobster in a heart.
So many metaphor in this. Beautiful dear friend. 🩷
November 11th, 2023 01:43
Teddy.15 said:
Your last lines wow.
where does our hunger hide?
in our country clouded
bent and buckled
fishing for a lobster in a heart.
So many metaphor in this. Beautiful dear friend. 🩷
November 11th, 2023 01:43
Canto; In a Summers Sleep
Thomas W Case said:
I love your use of language. The flow is great.
November 8th, 2023 20:53
Thomas W Case said:
I love your use of language. The flow is great.
November 8th, 2023 20:53
Canto; In a Summers Sleep
Teddy.15 said:
lol very romantic 💜 poetry of love uniquely entwined. I\'m loving your new twist on poetry.
November 8th, 2023 15:39
Teddy.15 said:
lol very romantic 💜 poetry of love uniquely entwined. I\'m loving your new twist on poetry.
November 8th, 2023 15:39
a semicolon pause
Teddy.15 said:
Exquisite poetry throughout. Your last lines kudos.
where kneels
so shall I beg
a proud horn of circumspect
with a keg of ale
drinking through the torture of a dream;
Love this stanza. 🤗
November 8th, 2023 03:49
Teddy.15 said:
Exquisite poetry throughout. Your last lines kudos.
where kneels
so shall I beg
a proud horn of circumspect
with a keg of ale
drinking through the torture of a dream;
Love this stanza. 🤗
November 8th, 2023 03:49
a semicolon pause
Yassin Tamam said:
vividly visual, adoring the pauses, the breaks and the deep breaths i can feel while i am reading it. beautifully done
November 7th, 2023 16:13
Yassin Tamam said:
vividly visual, adoring the pauses, the breaks and the deep breaths i can feel while i am reading it. beautifully done
November 7th, 2023 16:13
jazz
Teddy.15 said:
Jazz has so many faces as you have beautifully composed in this poetry, I personally love soft jazz. When I was a child I felt my life was surrounded by messy jazz which I can still hear today in dark moments. A fantastic creative piece here dearest Melvin, you have tormented and elated my very mind in less than 60 seconds.
To say you inspire is an understatement ❤️
November 4th, 2023 15:41
Teddy.15 said:
Jazz has so many faces as you have beautifully composed in this poetry, I personally love soft jazz. When I was a child I felt my life was surrounded by messy jazz which I can still hear today in dark moments. A fantastic creative piece here dearest Melvin, you have tormented and elated my very mind in less than 60 seconds.
To say you inspire is an understatement ❤️
November 4th, 2023 15:41
Under Once Of Bone When Salem Slept
Thomas W Case said:
Superb as always. The mind is strange. My mind thinks, the Beatles and great classic poetry, Lord Byron vibe.
November 3rd, 2023 12:40
Thomas W Case said:
Superb as always. The mind is strange. My mind thinks, the Beatles and great classic poetry, Lord Byron vibe.
November 3rd, 2023 12:40
a letter from the torso of sublime
Teddy.15 said:
Wow ❤️ what a poet you are.
November 1st, 2023 14:42
Teddy.15 said:
Wow ❤️ what a poet you are.
November 1st, 2023 14:42
No Deeper Than A Six
Teddy.15 said:
Amazing imagery and filled with emotions tragic and less so by the end your last lines are fabulous ❤️
October 31st, 2023 01:48
Teddy.15 said:
Amazing imagery and filled with emotions tragic and less so by the end your last lines are fabulous ❤️
October 31st, 2023 01:48
No Deeper Than A Six
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant. Again, you amaze me. Thomas W. Case amazed...wow. Here\'s the thing, you take flash snapshots and create mood, fucking smells, sounds tastes. You bring memory flooding back like the rose colored coat my mom had on the day she died, the smell of cigarettes and tuna casserole....frozen clothes on the clothesline. I had to take down after i picked up my car from the grocery store that she died in....genius. You take the reader right to the heart of the poem, if he has heard sound...
October 30th, 2023 17:10
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant. Again, you amaze me. Thomas W. Case amazed...wow. Here\'s the thing, you take flash snapshots and create mood, fucking smells, sounds tastes. You bring memory flooding back like the rose colored coat my mom had on the day she died, the smell of cigarettes and tuna casserole....frozen clothes on the clothesline. I had to take down after i picked up my car from the grocery store that she died in....genius. You take the reader right to the heart of the poem, if he has heard sound...
October 30th, 2023 17:10
A Pocketful of Catacombs
rhmn_7 said:
I really like how you give a beautiful flow to your words, great work!
October 29th, 2023 07:40
rhmn_7 said:
I really like how you give a beautiful flow to your words, great work!
October 29th, 2023 07:40
A Pocketful of Catacombs
Teddy.15 said:
Bones are all that\'s left in the end, what superb poetry from you as always, what\'s it all about this life! So thought provoking dear Melvin. Bravo ❤️
October 29th, 2023 06:38
Teddy.15 said:
Bones are all that\'s left in the end, what superb poetry from you as always, what\'s it all about this life! So thought provoking dear Melvin. Bravo ❤️
October 29th, 2023 06:38
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