Comments received on poems by aDarkerMind
the smile that couldn\'t see
Thomas W Case said:
Well crafted. The flow is fantastic, and as always, great use of language.
October 19th, 2023 11:32
Thomas W Case said:
Well crafted. The flow is fantastic, and as always, great use of language.
October 19th, 2023 11:32
the smile that couldn\'t see
aDarkerMind said:
yes it is Maxine.
a little jumbled here and there tho.
thank you.
October 18th, 2023 15:06
aDarkerMind said:
yes it is Maxine.
a little jumbled here and there tho.
thank you.
October 18th, 2023 15:06
Hanging Lines
Thomas W Case said:
You paint the picture so well with your word choice and imagery.
October 17th, 2023 16:08
Thomas W Case said:
You paint the picture so well with your word choice and imagery.
October 17th, 2023 16:08
Hanging Lines
Teddy.15 said:
Sounds like a plea to the dark side to give you some peace and quiet. you paint your very own masterpiece every time. ❤️
October 17th, 2023 15:28
Teddy.15 said:
Sounds like a plea to the dark side to give you some peace and quiet. you paint your very own masterpiece every time. ❤️
October 17th, 2023 15:28
The Figure 8
Thomas W Case said:
I love your use of language to paint flash scenes great job.
October 17th, 2023 13:15
Thomas W Case said:
I love your use of language to paint flash scenes great job.
October 17th, 2023 13:15
one trip to moon and back
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful I love your use of language.
October 15th, 2023 12:17
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful I love your use of language.
October 15th, 2023 12:17
one trip to moon and back
Teddy.15 said:
No matter how far we come there is always something holding us back. ❤️ a fabulous rendition of a darker side. ❤️
October 15th, 2023 09:31
Teddy.15 said:
No matter how far we come there is always something holding us back. ❤️ a fabulous rendition of a darker side. ❤️
October 15th, 2023 09:31
I Have Never Seen a Ghost So White
Thomas W Case said:
You have painted a grim scene with your keen use of language and imagery. Fantastic work.
October 15th, 2023 01:11
Thomas W Case said:
You have painted a grim scene with your keen use of language and imagery. Fantastic work.
October 15th, 2023 01:11
To a Face We Cannot See
Thomas W Case said:
You use language well to pint the scene you desire. Nice work.
October 15th, 2023 01:07
Thomas W Case said:
You use language well to pint the scene you desire. Nice work.
October 15th, 2023 01:07
I Cannot Sleep
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant use of language to paint your scene.
October 14th, 2023 01:14
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant use of language to paint your scene.
October 14th, 2023 01:14
Should Silence Sing
Thomas W Case said:
Great poem. I love your use of language and poetic technique in this one. Great flow.
October 13th, 2023 20:02
Thomas W Case said:
Great poem. I love your use of language and poetic technique in this one. Great flow.
October 13th, 2023 20:02
what colour air we breathe
Thomas W Case said:
I really like the way you use imagery to paint the picture with words.
October 12th, 2023 16:30
Thomas W Case said:
I really like the way you use imagery to paint the picture with words.
October 12th, 2023 16:30
somewhere deep, inside the stomach of a crow
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic use of language and imagery. I like your style Sir.
October 12th, 2023 15:41
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic use of language and imagery. I like your style Sir.
October 12th, 2023 15:41
somewhere deep, inside the stomach of a crow
Teddy.15 said:
somewhere deep
inside the stomach of a crow
satire breeds it\'s vengeance
biting through a walnuts scant remains;
See this makes me think of all that I\'ve been through to find my satire ❤️ so damn clever sir. Your last lines kudos and that in the middle fabulous. Imagery that would scare anyone but not me.
October 12th, 2023 13:23
Teddy.15 said:
somewhere deep
inside the stomach of a crow
satire breeds it\'s vengeance
biting through a walnuts scant remains;
See this makes me think of all that I\'ve been through to find my satire ❤️ so damn clever sir. Your last lines kudos and that in the middle fabulous. Imagery that would scare anyone but not me.
October 12th, 2023 13:23
No Heart on Hand
Teddy.15 said:
Some what cracked inside the nut with no where to go, I feel your lost and Ive certainly been so in time that\'s passed. Extraordinary write as ever. ❤️
October 8th, 2023 13:56
Teddy.15 said:
Some what cracked inside the nut with no where to go, I feel your lost and Ive certainly been so in time that\'s passed. Extraordinary write as ever. ❤️
October 8th, 2023 13:56
One Backward Step
L. B. Mek said:
\'two inside the engine
wrapped as horse-meat
safe from sound\'
few realise the depth of this line
since most have forgot
where the term horsepower
came from...
!Brilliant!
(we fall forwards
while leaping backwards
wishing on a faithless prayer
warped mindsets, decrying reality
waning hope\'s clinging to nihilism\'s
ease
Why care, when \'Fck It\' is answer
enough..)
I read and learn wise Poet
October 6th, 2023 06:09
L. B. Mek said:
\'two inside the engine
wrapped as horse-meat
safe from sound\'
few realise the depth of this line
since most have forgot
where the term horsepower
came from...
!Brilliant!
(we fall forwards
while leaping backwards
wishing on a faithless prayer
warped mindsets, decrying reality
waning hope\'s clinging to nihilism\'s
ease
Why care, when \'Fck It\' is answer
enough..)
I read and learn wise Poet
October 6th, 2023 06:09
One Backward Step
Teddy.15 said:
Extraordinary, your imagery is quite something. ❤️
October 6th, 2023 00:39
Teddy.15 said:
Extraordinary, your imagery is quite something. ❤️
October 6th, 2023 00:39
A Postcard of Conception
Teddy.15 said:
Missing someone, Melvin, your last 10 lines just make me want to weep. ❤️ like an arrow through the heart.
October 2nd, 2023 11:04
Teddy.15 said:
Missing someone, Melvin, your last 10 lines just make me want to weep. ❤️ like an arrow through the heart.
October 2nd, 2023 11:04
To a Face We Cannot See
Teddy.15 said:
Being my authentic self is so important, and as you have taught me on many occasions to write from my heart, I see that you take your own advice. There is far too much competitiveness in the world dear Melvin personally I prefer uniqueness, and you got that my dear friend. ❤️
September 30th, 2023 13:08
Teddy.15 said:
Being my authentic self is so important, and as you have taught me on many occasions to write from my heart, I see that you take your own advice. There is far too much competitiveness in the world dear Melvin personally I prefer uniqueness, and you got that my dear friend. ❤️
September 30th, 2023 13:08
pyramids of albatross
Teddy.15 said:
A friendship dead a buried.
all Satan\'s men came gathering lips and verse
singing death it\'s happiness for a quiet introvert;
who sings so who remembers something less?
Move over Dante! Your lines are genius.
❤️
September 30th, 2023 02:39
Teddy.15 said:
A friendship dead a buried.
all Satan\'s men came gathering lips and verse
singing death it\'s happiness for a quiet introvert;
who sings so who remembers something less?
Move over Dante! Your lines are genius.
❤️
September 30th, 2023 02:39
pyramids of albatross
Saxon Crow said:
Clearly, you\'ve got the gift my friend.
September 29th, 2023 14:55
Saxon Crow said:
Clearly, you\'ve got the gift my friend.
September 29th, 2023 14:55
A Better Man
Teddy.15 said:
The magic of your poetry touches my soul dear Melvin.
September 28th, 2023 12:10
Teddy.15 said:
The magic of your poetry touches my soul dear Melvin.
September 28th, 2023 12:10
Should Silence Sing
Teddy.15 said:
Dearest Melvin silence is one of the most powerful ways we can comunicate, yet this poem is anything but silent, amazing lines ripping a soul to shreds. ❤️ your last lines as always are most beautiful.
September 27th, 2023 00:54
Teddy.15 said:
Dearest Melvin silence is one of the most powerful ways we can comunicate, yet this poem is anything but silent, amazing lines ripping a soul to shreds. ❤️ your last lines as always are most beautiful.
September 27th, 2023 00:54
Where Hides Conspiracy
Teddy.15 said:
As it seems we can no longer trust anyone dear Melvin. So damn powerful my friend. ❤️
September 25th, 2023 14:26
Teddy.15 said:
As it seems we can no longer trust anyone dear Melvin. So damn powerful my friend. ❤️
September 25th, 2023 14:26
I Cannot Sleep
L. B. Mek said:
!BRILLIANT!
\'locking horns the ladybirds of wine and cenotaph\'
\'two barrels to the street-wise,
two knives but still a city sleeps his spies;\'
\'clip my heels and trade my wide awake for ice-box glee;
dismember me
a stomach full of pebbles
and asking Sylvia remembers me;\'
(finale wishes
in an oven bake of a despairing plea delivered
in gluttonously vivid poetic imagery)
I humbly bow
to your superior talent
oh lauded Poet!
(some of your lines thrilled me
like Sylvia
and her inking thumb\'s cutting poetry..)
September 25th, 2023 02:53
L. B. Mek said:
!BRILLIANT!
\'locking horns the ladybirds of wine and cenotaph\'
\'two barrels to the street-wise,
two knives but still a city sleeps his spies;\'
\'clip my heels and trade my wide awake for ice-box glee;
dismember me
a stomach full of pebbles
and asking Sylvia remembers me;\'
(finale wishes
in an oven bake of a despairing plea delivered
in gluttonously vivid poetic imagery)
I humbly bow
to your superior talent
oh lauded Poet!
(some of your lines thrilled me
like Sylvia
and her inking thumb\'s cutting poetry..)
September 25th, 2023 02:53
I Cannot Sleep
Lorenz said:
thanks for your favour !
find a compromise with your nights !
September 24th, 2023 06:45
Lorenz said:
thanks for your favour !
find a compromise with your nights !
September 24th, 2023 06:45
I Cannot Sleep
Teddy.15 said:
somewhere between an angel and the soldiers of elite;
enemies have I?
none bar those who march backward beyond;
invite me and be dared;
My dear Melvin being in the middle of anything can sometimes be overwhelming, I see a battle here but in the end you will find the peace you so desperately seek and deserve ❤️
September 24th, 2023 02:04
Teddy.15 said:
somewhere between an angel and the soldiers of elite;
enemies have I?
none bar those who march backward beyond;
invite me and be dared;
My dear Melvin being in the middle of anything can sometimes be overwhelming, I see a battle here but in the end you will find the peace you so desperately seek and deserve ❤️
September 24th, 2023 02:04
I Have Never Seen a Ghost So White
L. B. Mek said:
\'coincidence or planned I cannot guess of who or who,
a morning sun of sedative
white sea alive and ticking second hand,
second hand to widows tears of he of high command;
like shadow to the fog
an arctic kick through the cancer of the cold,\'
!!!Brilliant!!!
(reading your work makes
ich, itch to ink
bring the german out of me)
lol
September 22nd, 2023 03:29
L. B. Mek said:
\'coincidence or planned I cannot guess of who or who,
a morning sun of sedative
white sea alive and ticking second hand,
second hand to widows tears of he of high command;
like shadow to the fog
an arctic kick through the cancer of the cold,\'
!!!Brilliant!!!
(reading your work makes
ich, itch to ink
bring the german out of me)
lol
September 22nd, 2023 03:29
Charlie Six
L. B. Mek said:
\'Epsom now a stop-watch for the turning age of man.\'
brevity, I name thee a place
seeped in the salt of my woes
(it is a crime your poetry
is not celebrated dear friend)
Brilliant!
and so raw and brave
you and Sylvia would write
one hell of a Poem!
Thank you for sharing your talent, dear Poet
it is an honour to read your work
(i\'m sorry if I sound fake
but I genuinely mean it)
September 22nd, 2023 03:25
L. B. Mek said:
\'Epsom now a stop-watch for the turning age of man.\'
brevity, I name thee a place
seeped in the salt of my woes
(it is a crime your poetry
is not celebrated dear friend)
Brilliant!
and so raw and brave
you and Sylvia would write
one hell of a Poem!
Thank you for sharing your talent, dear Poet
it is an honour to read your work
(i\'m sorry if I sound fake
but I genuinely mean it)
September 22nd, 2023 03:25
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