Then Can I Sleep? Perhaps.
NafisaSB said:

darker sentiments throwing light on some unspoken things - wow..

December 3rd, 2024 01:01

Where No Light Breaks
TobaniNataiella said:

A very interesting read, thank you

December 2nd, 2024 20:58

Then Can I Sleep? Perhaps.
sorenbarrett said:

Fun read, full of twisted metaphors a maze like poem of symbolic, blind alleys, false turns and mind-boggling images.

November 26th, 2024 20:15

Then Can I Sleep? Perhaps.
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wow! Pure brilliance! The ghastly smell, whatever it is...death perhaps?...certainly had its way at the end! An amazingly brilliant, olfactory ending to what was already a brilliant, sensory-rich, experience. I also loved the reference to Dylan and Cohen! Wonderfully done, Melvin! Wonderfully done! 🌹👏❤️

November 26th, 2024 16:51

Then Can I Sleep? Perhaps.
Teddy.15 said:

The smell of death itself perhaps, superbly done dear Melvin, not a line I didn\'t love. Kudos and then some 🌹


November 26th, 2024 15:11

As If By Chance
Cassie58 said:

Wonderful to find a write from you Melvin. Always rich in poetic expression. Much enjoyed poet.

November 24th, 2024 17:10

As If By Chance
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, DM.

November 24th, 2024 14:54

As If By Chance
sorenbarrett said:

I really like this poem. It has that haunting phrase that comes back and repeats. Very nicely written.

November 24th, 2024 07:17

Where No Light Breaks
jarcher54 said:

I must say I was carried along by the force of your images... I don\'t understand them all, but I feel them, and that\'s more interesting.

November 11th, 2024 01:57

By Night\'s Secluded Light
Teddy.15 said:

Sinking into the hollow or drowning comes to mind, so very powerful and your imagery well, always so original. Wonderful poetry dear Melvin. 🌹

October 24th, 2024 03:01

By Night\'s Secluded Light
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting collection of disjointed thoughts that often occur in my own mind. Many of these appear to have deeper meaning. A lovely write that give many ideas

October 23rd, 2024 12:43

So Red The Nose
Teddy.15 said:

I felt every last word and it left me somewhat drunk fabulous dearest Melvin. 🌹

October 21st, 2024 14:35

So Red The Nose
Tristan Robert Lange said:

I am honored to be the first to reply to this, unless one beats me as I am typing! This is a mind-blowingly 🤯 great poem! The stream-of-consciousness style really made me feel as if I was drifting off into an absinthe-doused dream of these profound thoughts.This is one of my more fave poems ever, let alone a fave on here. Existential as hell! I find a home in this! Great write. I could feel every single word! 🖤❤️🖤

October 21st, 2024 13:19

I Have Turned Around Now, Twice
sorenbarrett said:

Another dark poem from the prince of darkness. One line after another of the unthinkable and like from a nightmare comes the incubus who calmly sits on a chair beside the bed awaiting the awakening. Great lines and images

October 18th, 2024 15:09

Today
MaxSmith said:

Very well crafted, and enjoyable read.

Nice work Melvin

October 8th, 2024 15:55