Comments received on poems by aDarkerMind
No Flesh My Iron Lung
Cassie58 said:
Captivating stanzas Melvin.
Drawn to the lines
my plastic is your primrose
my seed no lesser soul
too many sad goodbyes
The lines are heavy and the imagery most
unusual. The mood is melancholic. Thank you for sharing.
July 19th, 2024 16:15
Cassie58 said:
Captivating stanzas Melvin.
Drawn to the lines
my plastic is your primrose
my seed no lesser soul
too many sad goodbyes
The lines are heavy and the imagery most
unusual. The mood is melancholic. Thank you for sharing.
July 19th, 2024 16:15
No Flesh My Iron Lung
Teddy.15 said:
A soulmate on the other side of where we be is all I see. This is one that makes my heart heavy, so very very beautiful. 🌹
July 19th, 2024 13:33
Teddy.15 said:
A soulmate on the other side of where we be is all I see. This is one that makes my heart heavy, so very very beautiful. 🌹
July 19th, 2024 13:33
All The Nonesense And The Noise
Teddy.15 said:
Absolutely stunning my dear friend, I cannot choose a favourite line, an oscar also for you dearest Melvin. Ps I\'m loving the poetry I\'m reading. 🌹
July 19th, 2024 03:29
Teddy.15 said:
Absolutely stunning my dear friend, I cannot choose a favourite line, an oscar also for you dearest Melvin. Ps I\'m loving the poetry I\'m reading. 🌹
July 19th, 2024 03:29
All The Nonesense And The Noise
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic work. You nailed this.
July 19th, 2024 00:00
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic work. You nailed this.
July 19th, 2024 00:00
Glockenspiel, My Dorset
Neville said:
Having stumbled upon this by chance, I now think today is going to be a good one .. a compelling read throughout sir Mind .. Neville
July 18th, 2024 03:09
Neville said:
Having stumbled upon this by chance, I now think today is going to be a good one .. a compelling read throughout sir Mind .. Neville
July 18th, 2024 03:09
Too Cold The Clientele\'s Philosophy
Teddy.15 said:
Trust is one of the greatest tools we can own but to trust is even greater. Magnificent once again. 🌹
July 17th, 2024 15:43
Teddy.15 said:
Trust is one of the greatest tools we can own but to trust is even greater. Magnificent once again. 🌹
July 17th, 2024 15:43
Glockenspiel, My Dorset
Thad Wilk said:
Beautifully composed,
strong feelings & message,
deep and thought provoking!
Thanks for sharing my friend!
Best regards, peace Thad
July 17th, 2024 10:00
Thad Wilk said:
Beautifully composed,
strong feelings & message,
deep and thought provoking!
Thanks for sharing my friend!
Best regards, peace Thad
July 17th, 2024 10:00
They Are Not You
Bella Shepard said:
As life changes us, and time reshapes our form, we often drift to thoughts of the past, and what was once, but is no more. It can\'t be helped, it is our human way. There is a sad and yet beautiful sentiment in the way you have phrased this poem, who else could have done it but you.
July 16th, 2024 14:47
Bella Shepard said:
As life changes us, and time reshapes our form, we often drift to thoughts of the past, and what was once, but is no more. It can\'t be helped, it is our human way. There is a sad and yet beautiful sentiment in the way you have phrased this poem, who else could have done it but you.
July 16th, 2024 14:47
They Are Not You
Thad Wilk said:
A very poignant 😢
and evocative
poetic pictorial,
strong feelings
and thoughts
eloquently penned
my friend! 👍
Best regards ✌️. Thad
July 15th, 2024 19:23
Thad Wilk said:
A very poignant 😢
and evocative
poetic pictorial,
strong feelings
and thoughts
eloquently penned
my friend! 👍
Best regards ✌️. Thad
July 15th, 2024 19:23
They Are Not You
Cassie58 said:
the black rook reels me in
The mood here is heavy in this piece with perhaps thoughts of those now departed. I read several times. You create an ambience of quiet, solemn reflection. I find your poetic expression always refreshingly original Melvin. Thank you for sharing.
July 15th, 2024 14:26
Cassie58 said:
the black rook reels me in
The mood here is heavy in this piece with perhaps thoughts of those now departed. I read several times. You create an ambience of quiet, solemn reflection. I find your poetic expression always refreshingly original Melvin. Thank you for sharing.
July 15th, 2024 14:26
They Are Not You
Teddy.15 said:
Dearest Melvin, I saw the entire burial. I also felt profound loneliness wondering what it\'s all about. 🌹
July 15th, 2024 12:40
Teddy.15 said:
Dearest Melvin, I saw the entire burial. I also felt profound loneliness wondering what it\'s all about. 🌹
July 15th, 2024 12:40
Above The Water-Mark
Bella Shepard said:
Dark and sinister, you pait a picture, with wonderful imagery, of what is pervasive in our sad world. We do \"wait with baited breath\", we must. A very powerful write my friend!
July 15th, 2024 08:34
Bella Shepard said:
Dark and sinister, you pait a picture, with wonderful imagery, of what is pervasive in our sad world. We do \"wait with baited breath\", we must. A very powerful write my friend!
July 15th, 2024 08:34
Above The Water-Mark
Cassie58 said:
Such a contrast between the final lines and the earlier text. Your imagery is sharp and unique. So creative are you with words. Another fine offering.
July 14th, 2024 07:24
Cassie58 said:
Such a contrast between the final lines and the earlier text. Your imagery is sharp and unique. So creative are you with words. Another fine offering.
July 14th, 2024 07:24
From Back To Front It Seems
Teddy.15 said:
Wow Melvin this is such a magnificent piece.
bad weather days where
sways our quantum steps
an anger from the footsteps of an ox
Love these lines dear friend. A powerful and beautiful poetic art. 🌹
July 14th, 2024 03:07
Teddy.15 said:
Wow Melvin this is such a magnificent piece.
bad weather days where
sways our quantum steps
an anger from the footsteps of an ox
Love these lines dear friend. A powerful and beautiful poetic art. 🌹
July 14th, 2024 03:07
Above The Water-Mark
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful dear Melvin, last lines always so powerful. 🌹
July 14th, 2024 03:01
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful dear Melvin, last lines always so powerful. 🌹
July 14th, 2024 03:01
From Back To Front It Seems
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, your poem is captivating! The free-flowing style and vivid imagery create a dreamlike quality that\'s truly engaging. I especially love the \"mushroom heart\" metaphor - it\'s so evocative. Your unique voice shines through, blending abstract concepts with concrete details beautifully. Your style is refreshingly original! Thanks for sharing!
July 13th, 2024 22:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, your poem is captivating! The free-flowing style and vivid imagery create a dreamlike quality that\'s truly engaging. I especially love the \"mushroom heart\" metaphor - it\'s so evocative. Your unique voice shines through, blending abstract concepts with concrete details beautifully. Your style is refreshingly original! Thanks for sharing!
July 13th, 2024 22:46
To Accommodate This Mind
Cassie58 said:
I especially love the wording in your final stanza Melvin. A fine piece of poetry. Much enjoyed. Have a happy weekend.
July 12th, 2024 13:38
Cassie58 said:
I especially love the wording in your final stanza Melvin. A fine piece of poetry. Much enjoyed. Have a happy weekend.
July 12th, 2024 13:38
To Accommodate This Mind
Thomas W Case said:
As good as it gets. Superb work, my friend.
July 11th, 2024 22:59
Thomas W Case said:
As good as it gets. Superb work, my friend.
July 11th, 2024 22:59
To Accommodate This Mind
Teddy.15 said:
who knows which is brighter than a word.
let rave the dance of leprechaun and ghost
This is wonderful a profound
Hey top of the morning dearest Melvin, you know a Gentleman who is lost will always find his way in the end. You are one of my most inspiring poets Sir. 🌹
July 11th, 2024 02:31
Teddy.15 said:
who knows which is brighter than a word.
let rave the dance of leprechaun and ghost
This is wonderful a profound
Hey top of the morning dearest Melvin, you know a Gentleman who is lost will always find his way in the end. You are one of my most inspiring poets Sir. 🌹
July 11th, 2024 02:31
Better Now The Geese Are Gone
Thad Wilk said:
Fantastic poem,
another beauty that
showcases your
amazing poetic talents!
Thank you for sharing
with us,, much enjoyed!!
Best regards, peace Thad
July 10th, 2024 15:37
Thad Wilk said:
Fantastic poem,
another beauty that
showcases your
amazing poetic talents!
Thank you for sharing
with us,, much enjoyed!!
Best regards, peace Thad
July 10th, 2024 15:37
Better Now The Geese Are Gone
Thomas W Case said:
I love your imagery and the way you pain this picture. Truly brilliant.
July 10th, 2024 14:14
Thomas W Case said:
I love your imagery and the way you pain this picture. Truly brilliant.
July 10th, 2024 14:14
Better Now The Geese Are Gone
Neville said:
a most impressive poem and with such great depth, it resonates .. furthermore, I have an issue with geese every year both when they are arriving in magnificent skeins and on their noisy departure .. they blitzkrieg our old house with all manner of regurgitated fruit and vegetables .. tis terribly dangerous and otherwise disconcerting my friend .. Neville
July 10th, 2024 09:19
Neville said:
a most impressive poem and with such great depth, it resonates .. furthermore, I have an issue with geese every year both when they are arriving in magnificent skeins and on their noisy departure .. they blitzkrieg our old house with all manner of regurgitated fruit and vegetables .. tis terribly dangerous and otherwise disconcerting my friend .. Neville
July 10th, 2024 09:19
Better Now The Geese Are Gone
Teddy.15 said:
So very powerful and brilliant. Beautiful last lines. 🌹
July 10th, 2024 05:32
Teddy.15 said:
So very powerful and brilliant. Beautiful last lines. 🌹
July 10th, 2024 05:32
Your Miracle, My Vinegar
orchidee said:
Good write M.
I thought it was gonna be about vinegar as some miracle cleaner, getting stains out, etc! lol.
July 9th, 2024 04:53
orchidee said:
Good write M.
I thought it was gonna be about vinegar as some miracle cleaner, getting stains out, etc! lol.
July 9th, 2024 04:53
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