Comments received on poems by aDarkerMind



Another Side Of This
Lorenz said:

\'Sleeping with a crucifix hanging upside-down ! The sentence delighted me !


November 26th, 2023 14:07

Another Side Of This
Thomas W Case said:

Great imagery and use of language.

November 26th, 2023 09:56

beneath a shade of 3 o\'clock
aDarkerMind said:

thank you Ellen.

very kind.

November 25th, 2023 17:45

beneath a shade of 3 o\'clock
Ellen Marsell said:

\"what do I now
deep beneath a shade of 3 o\'clock?\"
Some extraordinary impression after reading it. You just sit in a daze and then read it again.
That\'s great!

November 25th, 2023 17:36

a silent rage of anguish
Thomas W Case said:

Brilliant use of language and flow. Superb work.

November 20th, 2023 14:33

a silent rage of anguish
Teddy.15 said:

You just ripped everything from my gut. Wow it just gets better and better. Absolutely beautiful poetry. I see every detail and hear every whisper. ❤️

November 19th, 2023 17:27

a silent rage of anguish
aDarkerMind said:

and sinks a little deeper day by day!

November 19th, 2023 10:39

a silent rage of anguish
Lorenz said:

Poetry is a dagger that lacerates souls !

November 19th, 2023 10:19

A Pocketful of Catacombs
jarcher54 said:

Streets of London has inspired and haunted me for decades... one of my all-time go-to songs for solace and inspiration... your striking Alice is a wonderful reimagination... getting lost in your catacomb-poem is pretty cool too!


November 18th, 2023 19:39

an energy of change
jarcher54 said:

Chilling... and HOW did you know June 14 is my birthday?

November 18th, 2023 19:27

sixteen years
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic use of language, great work.

November 18th, 2023 09:24

sixteen years
Tiffany_Arnold said:

Beautiful!!!!

November 17th, 2023 13:45

High Above Verbena
Lil said:

Great writing!!!

November 15th, 2023 14:41

High Above Verbena
aDarkerMind said:

thank you my friend

November 15th, 2023 13:27

High Above Verbena
Thomas W Case said:

Great imagery and use of language.

November 15th, 2023 13:20

a letter from the torso of sublime
Lil said:

Love this your do talented but how many shades of dark??

November 14th, 2023 18:56

each day a daydream
Thomas W Case said:

Brilliant.

November 13th, 2023 19:38

each day a daydream
Tiffany_Arnold said:

👏👏👏👏👏

November 13th, 2023 15:46

Not Pity\'s Sake; Nor Anger;
Thomas W Case said:

Brilliant. Reminds me of Cohen. Great mood setting.

November 12th, 2023 14:59

Not Pity\'s Sake; Nor Anger;
Teddy.15 said:

Beautifully dark 🖤

Every last line... Extraordinary with imagery

November 12th, 2023 04:50

an energy of change
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic. I love the abstract vibe.

November 11th, 2023 09:32

an energy of change
Teddy.15 said:

Simply marvellous 🩷

November 11th, 2023 09:28

protocol and weather
Teddy.15 said:

Your last lines wow.

where does our hunger hide?

in our country clouded

bent and buckled

fishing for a lobster in a heart.

So many metaphor in this. Beautiful dear friend. 🩷

November 11th, 2023 01:43

Canto; In a Summers Sleep
Thomas W Case said:

I love your use of language. The flow is great.

November 8th, 2023 20:53

Canto; In a Summers Sleep
Teddy.15 said:

lol very romantic 💜 poetry of love uniquely entwined. I\'m loving your new twist on poetry.

November 8th, 2023 15:39

a semicolon pause
Teddy.15 said:

Exquisite poetry throughout. Your last lines kudos.

where kneels

so shall I beg

a proud horn of circumspect

with a keg of ale

drinking through the torture of a dream;

Love this stanza. 🤗

November 8th, 2023 03:49

a semicolon pause
Yassin Tamam said:

vividly visual, adoring the pauses, the breaks and the deep breaths i can feel while i am reading it. beautifully done

November 7th, 2023 16:13

made up of this and that
Teddy.15 said:

Beautiful ❤️

November 6th, 2023 02:22

made up of this and that
Thomas W Case said:

Superb work my friend.

November 5th, 2023 19:04

jazz
Thomas W Case said:

Superb my friend. Reminds me of Cohen.

November 4th, 2023 19:18

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