Comments received on poems by aDarkerMind
My Heart a Grave
Teddy.15 said:
Magnificent, and I felt every last word right to the full stop at the end, Kudos my dear Melvin, you brought me right there to my mother\'s grave side. 🌹
May 10th, 2024 12:25
Teddy.15 said:
Magnificent, and I felt every last word right to the full stop at the end, Kudos my dear Melvin, you brought me right there to my mother\'s grave side. 🌹
May 10th, 2024 12:25
My Heart a Grave
Aradhya said:
so very beautiful and tragic, with such great depth, dear poet!
\"how many wreaths of satin lie in wait?
I see no logic in the single rose that burns
where mother sleeps away her fond farewell.\"
so very touching!
May 10th, 2024 12:20
Aradhya said:
so very beautiful and tragic, with such great depth, dear poet!
\"how many wreaths of satin lie in wait?
I see no logic in the single rose that burns
where mother sleeps away her fond farewell.\"
so very touching!
May 10th, 2024 12:20
My Heart a Grave
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful writing. Deep, like the deepest ocean. Beautiful work.
May 10th, 2024 10:17
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful writing. Deep, like the deepest ocean. Beautiful work.
May 10th, 2024 10:17
a tadpole dance with he who cannot sing
Neville said:
how extraordinarily noir sir .. and impressive too I might add ..
May 9th, 2024 16:50
Neville said:
how extraordinarily noir sir .. and impressive too I might add ..
May 9th, 2024 16:50
a tadpole dance with he who cannot sing
Teddy.15 said:
What a wonderful piece as ever, your words astound my heart, your last stanza wow, such imagery. Kudos 🌹
May 9th, 2024 14:08
Teddy.15 said:
What a wonderful piece as ever, your words astound my heart, your last stanza wow, such imagery. Kudos 🌹
May 9th, 2024 14:08
Possession
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. Reminds me of Cormac McCarthy. Brilliant.
May 8th, 2024 09:13
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. Reminds me of Cormac McCarthy. Brilliant.
May 8th, 2024 09:13
through gemini skies of all who walk devine
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful writing with brilliant imagery.
May 6th, 2024 14:44
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful writing with brilliant imagery.
May 6th, 2024 14:44
The Second Day of Spring
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous imagery and use of the senses.
May 5th, 2024 13:53
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous imagery and use of the senses.
May 5th, 2024 13:53
The Second Day of Spring
aDarkerMind said:
very kind words Teddy
and very much appreciated;
May 5th, 2024 06:37
aDarkerMind said:
very kind words Teddy
and very much appreciated;
May 5th, 2024 06:37
through gemini skies of all who walk devine
Teddy.15 said:
Your truly stunning imagery a little slice of heaven, are you putting a new spin on grief, I\'ll have some of this. Even without a touch or smell it\'s all still here right in front of us. Gorgeous 🌹
May 4th, 2024 02:36
Teddy.15 said:
Your truly stunning imagery a little slice of heaven, are you putting a new spin on grief, I\'ll have some of this. Even without a touch or smell it\'s all still here right in front of us. Gorgeous 🌹
May 4th, 2024 02:36
through gemini skies of all who walk devine
Lorenz said:
I know very well the gemini skies !
May 3rd, 2024 12:38
Lorenz said:
I know very well the gemini skies !
May 3rd, 2024 12:38
To Walk Old Ways Alone
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. Your writing reminds me of Cormac McCarthy. Powerful.
April 29th, 2024 09:59
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. Your writing reminds me of Cormac McCarthy. Powerful.
April 29th, 2024 09:59
To Walk Old Ways Alone
Teddy.15 said:
I can see a very very special lady within these lines, pain never stops just eases. This poem is truly and magnificently beautiful. kudos Melvin. 🌹
April 29th, 2024 00:14
Teddy.15 said:
I can see a very very special lady within these lines, pain never stops just eases. This poem is truly and magnificently beautiful. kudos Melvin. 🌹
April 29th, 2024 00:14
polarity of thought
2781 said:
\"And he saw that there was no man, and wondered that there was no intercessor:
April 26th, 2024 23:51
2781 said:
\"And he saw that there was no man, and wondered that there was no intercessor:
April 26th, 2024 23:51
polarity of thought
Thomas W Case said:
Breath taking. Brilliant work and word choice.
April 26th, 2024 15:35
Thomas W Case said:
Breath taking. Brilliant work and word choice.
April 26th, 2024 15:35
What Spirit Holds The Shape?
Teddy.15 said:
Just beautiful dear Melvin, mesmerized by each line. 🌹
April 24th, 2024 15:04
Teddy.15 said:
Just beautiful dear Melvin, mesmerized by each line. 🌹
April 24th, 2024 15:04
What Spirit Holds The Shape?
Lorenz said:
A journey into verbal reefs that defy analysis ...
April 24th, 2024 14:42
Lorenz said:
A journey into verbal reefs that defy analysis ...
April 24th, 2024 14:42
Unfamiliar Things
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous. My heart skips a beat when I read your brilliant poetry.
April 22nd, 2024 19:25
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous. My heart skips a beat when I read your brilliant poetry.
April 22nd, 2024 19:25
Unfamiliar Things
Teddy.15 said:
Sometimes I have the same feeling, and it\'s usually from my gut. Wow Melvin, how to draw imagery into poetry. Powerful and I\'m thinking I should be worried because if you are worried we should all be worried. 🌹
April 22nd, 2024 13:51
Teddy.15 said:
Sometimes I have the same feeling, and it\'s usually from my gut. Wow Melvin, how to draw imagery into poetry. Powerful and I\'m thinking I should be worried because if you are worried we should all be worried. 🌹
April 22nd, 2024 13:51
what may be now
Teddy.15 said:
Outstanding as ever dearest Melvin, life goes on my dear dear friend. 💜
April 21st, 2024 09:31
Teddy.15 said:
Outstanding as ever dearest Melvin, life goes on my dear dear friend. 💜
April 21st, 2024 09:31
of sentiment untold
Lorenz said:
Dark\' you are the \"logos\"\' in the labyrinth !
April 16th, 2024 12:26
Lorenz said:
Dark\' you are the \"logos\"\' in the labyrinth !
April 16th, 2024 12:26
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