Comments received on poems by Jayasree
BUD
L. B. Mek said:
beautifully worded, a juxtaposition in Art
between a panting\'s subtle nuances and how a Poet - transmutes
the hope fuelled words, it inspires:
see for me, that painting tells a harrowing tale
where there\'s no shadows
for all those vibrantly-striving budding rainbow of flowers;
and that congealed figure
of childhood innocence, blurrily shapes
a shadow\'s pooling: chrysalis...
May 24th, 2021 05:09
L. B. Mek said:
beautifully worded, a juxtaposition in Art
between a panting\'s subtle nuances and how a Poet - transmutes
the hope fuelled words, it inspires:
see for me, that painting tells a harrowing tale
where there\'s no shadows
for all those vibrantly-striving budding rainbow of flowers;
and that congealed figure
of childhood innocence, blurrily shapes
a shadow\'s pooling: chrysalis...
May 24th, 2021 05:09
VADAKKUMNATHAN
PrEm Ji said:
I visited this temple in 2008. It was a magical experience.
May 24th, 2021 05:08
PrEm Ji said:
I visited this temple in 2008. It was a magical experience.
May 24th, 2021 05:08
TWILIGHT
L. B. Mek said:
\'The shadows deepening, dusk painting the sky: a longing in me,
Twilight falling in myriad hues: a poignant desire,\'
as enthralling a read, as that idyllic twilight you depict..
my, what a gifted Poet you are
thank you for choosing to share, your unquestionable talent..
(please, forgive me
for rearranging your lines a little, I sincerely meant no disrespect
just couldn\'t control my overzealous, selfish - desire
to share with you how your poetry, spoke to me)
May 24th, 2021 04:13
L. B. Mek said:
\'The shadows deepening, dusk painting the sky: a longing in me,
Twilight falling in myriad hues: a poignant desire,\'
as enthralling a read, as that idyllic twilight you depict..
my, what a gifted Poet you are
thank you for choosing to share, your unquestionable talent..
(please, forgive me
for rearranging your lines a little, I sincerely meant no disrespect
just couldn\'t control my overzealous, selfish - desire
to share with you how your poetry, spoke to me)
May 24th, 2021 04:13
VADAKKUMNATHAN
dusk arising said:
Reading your words this morning took me to a place of peace and mindfulness.
A very enjoyable read. Thank you.
May 24th, 2021 03:47
dusk arising said:
Reading your words this morning took me to a place of peace and mindfulness.
A very enjoyable read. Thank you.
May 24th, 2021 03:47
BUD
dusk arising said:
Now that is quite, quite beautiful.
Into my favourites for sure.
May 23rd, 2021 04:42
dusk arising said:
Now that is quite, quite beautiful.
Into my favourites for sure.
May 23rd, 2021 04:42
TWILIGHT
Goldfinch60 said:
Those sun rays will always be with you at the beginning of each new day.
Andy
May 23rd, 2021 01:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Those sun rays will always be with you at the beginning of each new day.
Andy
May 23rd, 2021 01:03
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