Comments received on poems by Jayasree



From My Heart
iAli said:

There is sweetness everywhere if you are just willing to look.😄🙃

September 5th, 2021 10:05

The Journey
Caring dove said:

Very lovely ! 🙂” to be one with the sea , to kiss the grains of sand “ I especially love these lines

Beautiful poem

September 5th, 2021 09:19

The Journey
Accidental Poet said:

Very beautiful Jayasree. 👍

September 5th, 2021 07:43

The Journey
Eugene S. said:

A vision of beauty in all of its simplicity. Such a treasure in your words.

September 5th, 2021 07:42

Riding The Clouds
Accidental Poet said:

AKA \"The Golden Hour\" A half hour before and after the Sun rises or sets. Magical at both beginning and end of day. As is your beautiful poem here Jayasree. Love the imagery.

September 4th, 2021 09:07

Words
Caring dove said:

Beautiful poem ) love how you have used the idea of the butterfly to speak of words which fly away

September 4th, 2021 00:45

Frozen Dreams
Caring dove said:

Your poems are lovely 🙂

September 4th, 2021 00:43

Riding The Clouds
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful words Jayasree.

Andy

September 4th, 2021 00:32

Riding The Clouds
Caring dove said:

I love nature too . Lovely poem.., jayasree 🙂

September 4th, 2021 00:27

Frozen Dreams
Goldfinch60 said:

But those dreams are still there and will awake when nightime falls.

Andy

August 29th, 2021 01:34

Change The World
breeze said:

well written but the truth is that without black there is no white, without darkness there is no light, without peace there is no fight, without ying there is no yang.
it just helps to appreciate what we have or what we had. thats the nature of things.


August 22nd, 2021 20:13

Change The World
Goldfinch60 said:

You are not alone in your wished Jayasree. One day that beacon of hope will brighten ALL our lives.

Andy

August 22nd, 2021 00:27

Change The World
Accidental Poet said:

Countless are those who feel as you do Jayasree. Unfortunately, there are many who just don\'t get it, and probably never will. But the positivity you show here is like a breath of fresh air, that ray of hope. A wonderfully inspiring write. 😉

August 21st, 2021 08:58

Change The World
Caring dove said:

Such kindness in your words . If only we could make the world a happier place .

Lovely poem

August 21st, 2021 01:57

Words
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true Jayasree, those words that come into our minds are fleeting and need to be written down immediately.

Andy

August 16th, 2021 23:56

Words
dusk arising said:

Where would we be without those fine words. Fine phrases we stitch and embroider. Thoughts into words, a challenge we accept each time inspiration flows.
I use a notepad app on my phone to capture words and phrases and most of the time compose using a word processor on laptop. For me that\'s so much easier than pen and paper for i am constantly making alterations.
Love the way youve composed this piece.

August 16th, 2021 07:39

The Walk
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true Jayasree, walking with Nature is always wonderful.

Andy

August 16th, 2021 00:32

The Walk
Thekkinkkattil said:

Walking into your heart to make depair disppear is what you have done .Very positive.A good read

August 15th, 2021 08:14

The Falling Colours
L. B. Mek said:

wonderful picture
like the positive and colourful theme,
thanks for sharing

July 20th, 2021 02:28

The Falling Colours
Caring dove said:

Beautiful poem 🙂

July 19th, 2021 09:16

Night Over The Desert
Jayasree said:

Thank you all so much :)

July 19th, 2021 05:23

Night Over The Desert
Thekkinkkattil said:

Night in the desert depicted nicely

July 18th, 2021 11:16

Night Over The Desert
Accidental Poet said:

Expertly crafted Jayasree. ; )

July 18th, 2021 10:03

Of insects and birds and animals
Accidental Poet said:

The children of Mother Nature, harmless and beautiful. As is this poem. ; )

July 18th, 2021 09:49

Of insects and birds and animals
Goldfinch60 said:

All life in nature is so very important in our world, if only homo sapiens would realise this.

Andy

July 18th, 2021 00:33

Of insects and birds and animals
Caring dove said:

Beautiful poem 🙂 such lovely words

July 17th, 2021 09:22

Of insects and birds and animals
Saxon Crow said:

A good poem and I think some inspiration here. Thank you

July 17th, 2021 08:28

Autumn
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful and so right Jayasree, here in the UK autumn is my favourite time of the year, Natures Artwork is so diverse and so wonderful.

Andy

June 24th, 2021 00:38

Autumn
Accidental Poet said:

And in the Literary survey of Kerala Sahitya Academy it belongs. ; )

June 23rd, 2021 17:54

Autumn
SureshG said:

Well penned

June 23rd, 2021 12:34

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