Comments received on poems by Jayasree



The Green Moth
Goldfinch60 said:

I can totally agree with your words, nature is so wonderful when you set it free Jayasree.

Andy

June 12th, 2021 03:00

The Green Moth
Doggerel Dave said:

Yeh I do that with a variety of invertebrate interlopers (not huntsmans though – they are OK). Not usually by hand – use open ended plastic container and thin cardboard.
An appreciative little poem about a little moth, Jay. Liked.


June 12th, 2021 02:17

The Green Moth
orchidee said:

A fine write of these creatures J.

June 12th, 2021 01:48

The Green Moth
Saxon Crow said:

I love moths. Much more beautiful than butterflies

June 12th, 2021 01:36

Little Gems
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful caring and loving words. I am sure that those little ones have seen the glory of life that emanates from you Jayasree.

Andy

June 12th, 2021 00:28

Little Gems
SureshG said:

Especially the very young ones, with that innocence and hope filled thirst. Every drop of word you speak, a new world opens up for them. You are the shinning light that keeps them immersed.
Lovely poem, lovely profession

June 11th, 2021 12:53

Little Gems
L. B. Mek said:

\'They are precious gems
to be cut and polished\'
and set: Free
to shine, while Blossoming
into the Who
of what they choose to Become..
I laud your profession, truly!
I despise its systemic, need
to rid children
of their sprouting wings
to prioritise
manufacturing, like minded
society cogs...
I implore any, gifted with the possibility
to thwart this morbid, inevitability
at every: opportunity...!

June 11th, 2021 05:15

Little Gems
dusk arising said:

I smiled widely reading your words and was genuinely filled with the warmth of love. I have two very young granddaughters and thought of them, their soft little hands in mine.
You really do capture the young freshness of innocent enthusiasm in our beautiful youngsters in your words today.
A must for my favouriites.

June 11th, 2021 04:10

Little Gems
Jayasree said:

Thank you all so much :)

June 11th, 2021 02:55

Little Gems
orchidee said:

A fine write J.

June 11th, 2021 01:40

Little Gems
Saxon Crow said:

A lovely, happy, precious poem.

June 11th, 2021 01:38

Never Too Late
Goldfinch60 said:

So true life is a blessing and every day we arise is a wonderful day Jayasree.

Andy

June 10th, 2021 23:58

Never Too Late
Doggerel Dave said:

\"Everything changes. You can make
A fresh start with your final breath.\"
- Bertolt Brecht.

Good one, Jay

June 10th, 2021 20:50

Never Too Late
L. B. Mek said:

so true, dear poet
words of hope
that can be appreciated, even by those
who see \'God\' as a word of antiquity or myth..
thank you

June 10th, 2021 04:31

Never Too Late
dusk arising said:

And my, how you bloom with your finely woven words here on MPS.

Regrets should be left where they fell for hopes and wishes abound. The future is a smile ahead.

June 10th, 2021 04:27

Hope
L. B. Mek said:

a wonderful song, to serenade our hope
thanks for sharing

June 10th, 2021 02:42

Never Too Late
orchidee said:

It\'s not too late for me to say this is a fine poem J.!

June 10th, 2021 01:30

Never Too Late
Saxon Crow said:

A really beautiful poem Jay. Faved

June 10th, 2021 01:26

Hope
Accidental Poet said:

Within you is a miracle waiting to happen. Beautiful write Jayasree ; )

June 9th, 2021 19:44

Hope
Trenz Pruca said:

Good enjoyable poem. thank you.

June 9th, 2021 17:35

Hope
Jayasree said:

Thank you all for the good words and encouragement. My heart\'s full of gratitude . So happy to read all your comments.

June 9th, 2021 09:53

Hope
dusk arising said:

How true, tears are such cleansing droplets of repair. A new world opens when the tears stop.

A lovely positive piece.

June 9th, 2021 02:53

Hope
orchidee said:

Good write J.

June 9th, 2021 01:01

Hope
Goldfinch60 said:

May those golden threads and pearls keep away that sadness forever.

Andy

June 9th, 2021 00:55

Hope
Saxon Crow said:

Lovely poem Jayasree. There is beauty in every lesson

June 9th, 2021 00:41

Hope
Caring dove said:

Beautiful poem 🙂 I love your words

June 9th, 2021 00:35

The Sound Of Music
Jayasree said:

Thank you all :)

June 9th, 2021 00:12

The Sound Of Music
Goldfinch60 said:

Music has always been in my long life and it is always with me.

Andy

June 8th, 2021 15:02

The Sound Of Music
Caring dove said:

Lovely poem 🙂🙂

June 8th, 2021 06:54

Forest
subregi said:

Nice word picture!

June 8th, 2021 02:25

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