Comments received on poems by Jayasree
Cleansing The Mind
Doggerel Dave said:
I believe you are right, Jay. Has to be worked at though. Your little guide would certainly help.
June 20th, 2021 00:53
Doggerel Dave said:
I believe you are right, Jay. Has to be worked at though. Your little guide would certainly help.
June 20th, 2021 00:53
Cleansing The Mind
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have \'down\' times but they do not last long if you just look at the good things in our lives, they far outweigh the bad.
Andy
June 20th, 2021 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have \'down\' times but they do not last long if you just look at the good things in our lives, they far outweigh the bad.
Andy
June 20th, 2021 00:39
The Party In The Forest
Doggerel Dave said:
Fun funny fantasy which someone approaching his second childhood enjoyed.
Many thanks.
June 20th, 2021 00:35
Doggerel Dave said:
Fun funny fantasy which someone approaching his second childhood enjoyed.
Many thanks.
June 20th, 2021 00:35
The Party In The Forest
SureshG said:
A very light hearted, fun read for any age
June 19th, 2021 19:12
SureshG said:
A very light hearted, fun read for any age
June 19th, 2021 19:12
The Party In The Forest
Saxon Crow said:
Nothing loke an ugly bugs ball to keep the forest alive. A very cheerful poem
June 19th, 2021 14:22
Saxon Crow said:
Nothing loke an ugly bugs ball to keep the forest alive. A very cheerful poem
June 19th, 2021 14:22
The Party In The Forest
dusk arising said:
I like it. I\'ve had dreams like this.
June 19th, 2021 08:50
dusk arising said:
I like it. I\'ve had dreams like this.
June 19th, 2021 08:50
The Party In The Forest
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful fun write Jayasree, I was there at that party just sitting in the background watching it with absolute delight.
Andy
June 19th, 2021 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful fun write Jayasree, I was there at that party just sitting in the background watching it with absolute delight.
Andy
June 19th, 2021 01:38
Live And Let Live
subregi said:
Hope peoples of all countries read and follow your poetic advice! Nice poem.
June 18th, 2021 07:52
subregi said:
Hope peoples of all countries read and follow your poetic advice! Nice poem.
June 18th, 2021 07:52
Live And Let Live
dusk arising said:
Now wouldn\'t it be wonderful to follow your wise words and emerge post pandemic into a caring loving world.
June 18th, 2021 07:45
dusk arising said:
Now wouldn\'t it be wonderful to follow your wise words and emerge post pandemic into a caring loving world.
June 18th, 2021 07:45
Live And Let Live
L. B. Mek said:
\'Seeds of hope and kindness
sprouting, in the mind\'s garden\'..
Amen!
June 18th, 2021 03:50
L. B. Mek said:
\'Seeds of hope and kindness
sprouting, in the mind\'s garden\'..
Amen!
June 18th, 2021 03:50
Live And Let Live
orchidee said:
Good write J.
There\'s still horrible cruelty to animals and to people goes on, we know. But also much good.
June 18th, 2021 01:39
orchidee said:
Good write J.
There\'s still horrible cruelty to animals and to people goes on, we know. But also much good.
June 18th, 2021 01:39
Live And Let Live
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful words Jayasree and the lines
\"to share the world selflessly
with all the other creatures\"
are so very meaningful - maybe one day all life will live in harmony.
Andy
June 18th, 2021 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful words Jayasree and the lines
\"to share the world selflessly
with all the other creatures\"
are so very meaningful - maybe one day all life will live in harmony.
Andy
June 18th, 2021 01:09
The Frangipani Tree
L. B. Mek said:
\'luminescent and exotic,
glow like lit lamps
on the lone tree\'..
wonderful imagery, yet again
thanks for sharing
June 17th, 2021 05:46
L. B. Mek said:
\'luminescent and exotic,
glow like lit lamps
on the lone tree\'..
wonderful imagery, yet again
thanks for sharing
June 17th, 2021 05:46
The Frangipani Tree
Saxon Crow said:
Lovely poem Jayasree. Especially since frangipani pan cake is my fav!
June 17th, 2021 05:04
Saxon Crow said:
Lovely poem Jayasree. Especially since frangipani pan cake is my fav!
June 17th, 2021 05:04
The Frangipani Tree
dusk arising said:
That\'s quite beautiful. I sight I would like to see.
One for my favourites.
June 17th, 2021 01:55
dusk arising said:
That\'s quite beautiful. I sight I would like to see.
One for my favourites.
June 17th, 2021 01:55
Blessings
SureshG said:
The answer you seek ….. is still elusive,
Your ending lines……..are all conclusive.
June 16th, 2021 11:16
SureshG said:
The answer you seek ….. is still elusive,
Your ending lines……..are all conclusive.
June 16th, 2021 11:16
Blessings
Jayasree said:
Thank you all so much. Some days it\'s like that, but one gets over it. Writing and doing things which you like a lot gets you back on your feet in no time. We are resilient.
June 16th, 2021 05:49
Jayasree said:
Thank you all so much. Some days it\'s like that, but one gets over it. Writing and doing things which you like a lot gets you back on your feet in no time. We are resilient.
June 16th, 2021 05:49
Blessings
Goldfinch60 said:
Those blessings are yours and that search in life will find you more and they too can be brought into such wonderful words like these are Jayasree.
Andy
June 16th, 2021 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Those blessings are yours and that search in life will find you more and they too can be brought into such wonderful words like these are Jayasree.
Andy
June 16th, 2021 01:07
Blessings
dusk arising said:
You sit still and take stock of your blessings but still there is something missing. Or is it somebody missing. A quandary indeed.
Maybe writing more poetry on this subject will help, poetry is so cathartic.
June 16th, 2021 01:05
dusk arising said:
You sit still and take stock of your blessings but still there is something missing. Or is it somebody missing. A quandary indeed.
Maybe writing more poetry on this subject will help, poetry is so cathartic.
June 16th, 2021 01:05
A Quilt Of Memories
suchitra said:
Quilt made of different types of memories making it colorful. Loved the analogy.
June 15th, 2021 18:33
suchitra said:
Quilt made of different types of memories making it colorful. Loved the analogy.
June 15th, 2021 18:33
Winter In Bahrain
SureshG said:
I can recall many a winter skiing, but as always expected, the freezing chill and ah! the hot toddy.
Most would not think of winter in the desert, but sand absorbs cold just as it does heat, and thus the temps can vary 40+ degrees every day.
Loved your poem
June 15th, 2021 11:52
SureshG said:
I can recall many a winter skiing, but as always expected, the freezing chill and ah! the hot toddy.
Most would not think of winter in the desert, but sand absorbs cold just as it does heat, and thus the temps can vary 40+ degrees every day.
Loved your poem
June 15th, 2021 11:52
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