Comments received on poems by Jayasree
The Frangipani Tree
Saxon Crow said:
Lovely poem Jayasree. Especially since frangipani pan cake is my fav!
June 17th, 2021 05:04
Saxon Crow said:
Lovely poem Jayasree. Especially since frangipani pan cake is my fav!
June 17th, 2021 05:04
The Frangipani Tree
dusk arising said:
That\'s quite beautiful. I sight I would like to see.
One for my favourites.
June 17th, 2021 01:55
dusk arising said:
That\'s quite beautiful. I sight I would like to see.
One for my favourites.
June 17th, 2021 01:55
Blessings
SureshG said:
The answer you seek ….. is still elusive,
Your ending lines……..are all conclusive.
June 16th, 2021 11:16
SureshG said:
The answer you seek ….. is still elusive,
Your ending lines……..are all conclusive.
June 16th, 2021 11:16
Blessings
Jayasree said:
Thank you all so much. Some days it\'s like that, but one gets over it. Writing and doing things which you like a lot gets you back on your feet in no time. We are resilient.
June 16th, 2021 05:49
Jayasree said:
Thank you all so much. Some days it\'s like that, but one gets over it. Writing and doing things which you like a lot gets you back on your feet in no time. We are resilient.
June 16th, 2021 05:49
Blessings
Goldfinch60 said:
Those blessings are yours and that search in life will find you more and they too can be brought into such wonderful words like these are Jayasree.
Andy
June 16th, 2021 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Those blessings are yours and that search in life will find you more and they too can be brought into such wonderful words like these are Jayasree.
Andy
June 16th, 2021 01:07
Blessings
dusk arising said:
You sit still and take stock of your blessings but still there is something missing. Or is it somebody missing. A quandary indeed.
Maybe writing more poetry on this subject will help, poetry is so cathartic.
June 16th, 2021 01:05
dusk arising said:
You sit still and take stock of your blessings but still there is something missing. Or is it somebody missing. A quandary indeed.
Maybe writing more poetry on this subject will help, poetry is so cathartic.
June 16th, 2021 01:05
A Quilt Of Memories
suchitra said:
Quilt made of different types of memories making it colorful. Loved the analogy.
June 15th, 2021 18:33
suchitra said:
Quilt made of different types of memories making it colorful. Loved the analogy.
June 15th, 2021 18:33
Winter In Bahrain
SureshG said:
I can recall many a winter skiing, but as always expected, the freezing chill and ah! the hot toddy.
Most would not think of winter in the desert, but sand absorbs cold just as it does heat, and thus the temps can vary 40+ degrees every day.
Loved your poem
June 15th, 2021 11:52
SureshG said:
I can recall many a winter skiing, but as always expected, the freezing chill and ah! the hot toddy.
Most would not think of winter in the desert, but sand absorbs cold just as it does heat, and thus the temps can vary 40+ degrees every day.
Loved your poem
June 15th, 2021 11:52
Winter In Bahrain
dusk arising said:
Aaaah winter and no mention of snow, black ice, heavy frosts and freezing fog. I could enjoy my winters without those.
But you make a winter sound so exciting, maybe after the pandemic i could find the lovely new kind of winter you describe just an air fare away.
June 15th, 2021 07:08
dusk arising said:
Aaaah winter and no mention of snow, black ice, heavy frosts and freezing fog. I could enjoy my winters without those.
But you make a winter sound so exciting, maybe after the pandemic i could find the lovely new kind of winter you describe just an air fare away.
June 15th, 2021 07:08
Winter In Bahrain
Saxon Crow said:
Lovely perspective on something taken for granted... And moaned about!
June 15th, 2021 05:50
Saxon Crow said:
Lovely perspective on something taken for granted... And moaned about!
June 15th, 2021 05:50
Winter In Bahrain
L. B. Mek said:
Bahrain, should enlist you
for their advertising campaigns..
immersivity imbued, into each purposed syllable
and drawn-breath, line break..
brilliant!
June 15th, 2021 05:22
L. B. Mek said:
Bahrain, should enlist you
for their advertising campaigns..
immersivity imbued, into each purposed syllable
and drawn-breath, line break..
brilliant!
June 15th, 2021 05:22
Winter In Bahrain
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Jayasree, those new experiences can be so wonderful in our lives.
Andy
June 15th, 2021 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Jayasree, those new experiences can be so wonderful in our lives.
Andy
June 15th, 2021 01:12
A Quilt Of Memories
SureshG said:
A quilt, a collage, a kaleidoscope all define moments and events that you have stitched so poetically here.
June 14th, 2021 12:05
SureshG said:
A quilt, a collage, a kaleidoscope all define moments and events that you have stitched so poetically here.
June 14th, 2021 12:05
A Quilt Of Memories
dusk arising said:
Each night we sleep below a quilt of our life experiences don\'t we.
Nicely written.
June 14th, 2021 06:29
dusk arising said:
Each night we sleep below a quilt of our life experiences don\'t we.
Nicely written.
June 14th, 2021 06:29
A Quilt Of Memories
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderfully inventive piece of imagery Jay which tells how memory should colour our moments.
June 14th, 2021 02:37
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderfully inventive piece of imagery Jay which tells how memory should colour our moments.
June 14th, 2021 02:37
A Quilt Of Memories
orchidee said:
Good write J. The tapestry of life, etc (similar sayings also).
June 14th, 2021 01:45
orchidee said:
Good write J. The tapestry of life, etc (similar sayings also).
June 14th, 2021 01:45
Whispering Dreams
SureshG said:
You have beautifully proved a picture where a soul is free to be in any realm, though yet only in dreams.
June 13th, 2021 13:12
SureshG said:
You have beautifully proved a picture where a soul is free to be in any realm, though yet only in dreams.
June 13th, 2021 13:12
Whispering Dreams
dusk arising said:
Love those dreams spurring you on. Where would we poets be without wonderful dreams.
June 13th, 2021 11:00
dusk arising said:
Love those dreams spurring you on. Where would we poets be without wonderful dreams.
June 13th, 2021 11:00
Whispering Dreams
Saxon Crow said:
Nicely penned. We are the dream and creator all in one
June 13th, 2021 01:07
Saxon Crow said:
Nicely penned. We are the dream and creator all in one
June 13th, 2021 01:07
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