Comments received on poems by Jayasree
Winter In Bahrain
dusk arising said:
Aaaah winter and no mention of snow, black ice, heavy frosts and freezing fog. I could enjoy my winters without those.
But you make a winter sound so exciting, maybe after the pandemic i could find the lovely new kind of winter you describe just an air fare away.
June 15th, 2021 07:08
dusk arising said:
Aaaah winter and no mention of snow, black ice, heavy frosts and freezing fog. I could enjoy my winters without those.
But you make a winter sound so exciting, maybe after the pandemic i could find the lovely new kind of winter you describe just an air fare away.
June 15th, 2021 07:08
Winter In Bahrain
Saxon Crow said:
Lovely perspective on something taken for granted... And moaned about!
June 15th, 2021 05:50
Saxon Crow said:
Lovely perspective on something taken for granted... And moaned about!
June 15th, 2021 05:50
Winter In Bahrain
L. B. Mek said:
Bahrain, should enlist you
for their advertising campaigns..
immersivity imbued, into each purposed syllable
and drawn-breath, line break..
brilliant!
June 15th, 2021 05:22
L. B. Mek said:
Bahrain, should enlist you
for their advertising campaigns..
immersivity imbued, into each purposed syllable
and drawn-breath, line break..
brilliant!
June 15th, 2021 05:22
Winter In Bahrain
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Jayasree, those new experiences can be so wonderful in our lives.
Andy
June 15th, 2021 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Jayasree, those new experiences can be so wonderful in our lives.
Andy
June 15th, 2021 01:12
A Quilt Of Memories
SureshG said:
A quilt, a collage, a kaleidoscope all define moments and events that you have stitched so poetically here.
June 14th, 2021 12:05
SureshG said:
A quilt, a collage, a kaleidoscope all define moments and events that you have stitched so poetically here.
June 14th, 2021 12:05
A Quilt Of Memories
dusk arising said:
Each night we sleep below a quilt of our life experiences don\'t we.
Nicely written.
June 14th, 2021 06:29
dusk arising said:
Each night we sleep below a quilt of our life experiences don\'t we.
Nicely written.
June 14th, 2021 06:29
A Quilt Of Memories
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderfully inventive piece of imagery Jay which tells how memory should colour our moments.
June 14th, 2021 02:37
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderfully inventive piece of imagery Jay which tells how memory should colour our moments.
June 14th, 2021 02:37
A Quilt Of Memories
orchidee said:
Good write J. The tapestry of life, etc (similar sayings also).
June 14th, 2021 01:45
orchidee said:
Good write J. The tapestry of life, etc (similar sayings also).
June 14th, 2021 01:45
Whispering Dreams
SureshG said:
You have beautifully proved a picture where a soul is free to be in any realm, though yet only in dreams.
June 13th, 2021 13:12
SureshG said:
You have beautifully proved a picture where a soul is free to be in any realm, though yet only in dreams.
June 13th, 2021 13:12
Whispering Dreams
dusk arising said:
Love those dreams spurring you on. Where would we poets be without wonderful dreams.
June 13th, 2021 11:00
dusk arising said:
Love those dreams spurring you on. Where would we poets be without wonderful dreams.
June 13th, 2021 11:00
Whispering Dreams
Saxon Crow said:
Nicely penned. We are the dream and creator all in one
June 13th, 2021 01:07
Saxon Crow said:
Nicely penned. We are the dream and creator all in one
June 13th, 2021 01:07
The Green Moth
Goldfinch60 said:
I can totally agree with your words, nature is so wonderful when you set it free Jayasree.
Andy
June 12th, 2021 03:00
Goldfinch60 said:
I can totally agree with your words, nature is so wonderful when you set it free Jayasree.
Andy
June 12th, 2021 03:00
The Green Moth
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh I do that with a variety of invertebrate interlopers (not huntsmans though – they are OK). Not usually by hand – use open ended plastic container and thin cardboard.
An appreciative little poem about a little moth, Jay. Liked.
June 12th, 2021 02:17
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh I do that with a variety of invertebrate interlopers (not huntsmans though – they are OK). Not usually by hand – use open ended plastic container and thin cardboard.
An appreciative little poem about a little moth, Jay. Liked.
June 12th, 2021 02:17
The Green Moth
Saxon Crow said:
I love moths. Much more beautiful than butterflies
June 12th, 2021 01:36
Saxon Crow said:
I love moths. Much more beautiful than butterflies
June 12th, 2021 01:36
Little Gems
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful caring and loving words. I am sure that those little ones have seen the glory of life that emanates from you Jayasree.
Andy
June 12th, 2021 00:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful caring and loving words. I am sure that those little ones have seen the glory of life that emanates from you Jayasree.
Andy
June 12th, 2021 00:28
Little Gems
SureshG said:
Especially the very young ones, with that innocence and hope filled thirst. Every drop of word you speak, a new world opens up for them. You are the shinning light that keeps them immersed.
Lovely poem, lovely profession
June 11th, 2021 12:53
SureshG said:
Especially the very young ones, with that innocence and hope filled thirst. Every drop of word you speak, a new world opens up for them. You are the shinning light that keeps them immersed.
Lovely poem, lovely profession
June 11th, 2021 12:53
Little Gems
L. B. Mek said:
\'They are precious gems
to be cut and polished\'
and set: Free
to shine, while Blossoming
into the Who
of what they choose to Become..
I laud your profession, truly!
I despise its systemic, need
to rid children
of their sprouting wings
to prioritise
manufacturing, like minded
society cogs...
I implore any, gifted with the possibility
to thwart this morbid, inevitability
at every: opportunity...!
June 11th, 2021 05:15
L. B. Mek said:
\'They are precious gems
to be cut and polished\'
and set: Free
to shine, while Blossoming
into the Who
of what they choose to Become..
I laud your profession, truly!
I despise its systemic, need
to rid children
of their sprouting wings
to prioritise
manufacturing, like minded
society cogs...
I implore any, gifted with the possibility
to thwart this morbid, inevitability
at every: opportunity...!
June 11th, 2021 05:15
Little Gems
dusk arising said:
I smiled widely reading your words and was genuinely filled with the warmth of love. I have two very young granddaughters and thought of them, their soft little hands in mine.
You really do capture the young freshness of innocent enthusiasm in our beautiful youngsters in your words today.
A must for my favouriites.
June 11th, 2021 04:10
dusk arising said:
I smiled widely reading your words and was genuinely filled with the warmth of love. I have two very young granddaughters and thought of them, their soft little hands in mine.
You really do capture the young freshness of innocent enthusiasm in our beautiful youngsters in your words today.
A must for my favouriites.
June 11th, 2021 04:10
Never Too Late
Goldfinch60 said:
So true life is a blessing and every day we arise is a wonderful day Jayasree.
Andy
June 10th, 2021 23:58
Goldfinch60 said:
So true life is a blessing and every day we arise is a wonderful day Jayasree.
Andy
June 10th, 2021 23:58
Never Too Late
Doggerel Dave said:
\"Everything changes. You can make
A fresh start with your final breath.\"
- Bertolt Brecht.
Good one, Jay
June 10th, 2021 20:50
Doggerel Dave said:
\"Everything changes. You can make
A fresh start with your final breath.\"
- Bertolt Brecht.
Good one, Jay
June 10th, 2021 20:50
Never Too Late
L. B. Mek said:
so true, dear poet
words of hope
that can be appreciated, even by those
who see \'God\' as a word of antiquity or myth..
thank you
June 10th, 2021 04:31
L. B. Mek said:
so true, dear poet
words of hope
that can be appreciated, even by those
who see \'God\' as a word of antiquity or myth..
thank you
June 10th, 2021 04:31
Never Too Late
dusk arising said:
And my, how you bloom with your finely woven words here on MPS.
Regrets should be left where they fell for hopes and wishes abound. The future is a smile ahead.
June 10th, 2021 04:27
dusk arising said:
And my, how you bloom with your finely woven words here on MPS.
Regrets should be left where they fell for hopes and wishes abound. The future is a smile ahead.
June 10th, 2021 04:27
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