Comments received on poems by Jayasree



Shards of my soul
jayohess said:

think this hits me in a different way than you but thank you! beautiful.

December 17th, 2022 03:35

Changes
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine words Jay, it has not rained here in UK for quite a while and many areas in the country now have a hosepipe ban in place.

Andy

August 7th, 2022 00:25

Changes
Jayasree said:

Thank you.πŸ™‚
So many people affected, landslides and flashfloods.

August 6th, 2022 19:49

Changes
tallisman said:

It’s a nightmare. Good write, thanks for sharing😊

August 6th, 2022 12:08

Let Me
tallisman said:

Beautifully written!

July 31st, 2022 15:48

SHADOWS
Jayasree said:

Thank you very much dear Mek πŸ™‚πŸŒ»πŸ¦‹

July 28th, 2022 03:29

SHADOWS
L. B. Mek said:

Beautiful flow and theme
a lovely read
thanks for sharing, dear poet

July 28th, 2022 02:49

SHADOWS
tallisman said:

People forget that they are part of it, but it is wonderful that you have the ability to see it in such a wonderful way. So many of us seem to have lost the ability to appreciate what is around us. Good write and thank you for sharing

July 28th, 2022 00:55

Thumper
L. B. Mek said:

may that bundle of joy, rest in peace
I\'m sorry for your loss
often, our pets highlight the beauty
in our family, life..
thanks for sharing

May 2nd, 2022 05:58

Thumper
dusk arising said:

Aww porr little thing only lived a few days. Where was Thumper rescued from.
A nice tribute to a family friend, and an important write helping your son know about and learn about dealing with deaths.

May 2nd, 2022 05:01

Let Me
Goldfinch60 said:

Let me as well Jayasree. I too love being with Nature\'s wonder.

Andy

May 1st, 2022 00:42

Let Me
Rozina said:

Such a beautiful description of the wonders of Nature.

April 30th, 2022 17:57

Let Me
Accidental Poet said:

Wonderfully penned Jayasree. πŸ˜‰

April 30th, 2022 10:42

TREES
Rocky Lagou said:

Great imagery and I really felt like I was in this natural paradise. It\'s wonderfully done!

March 28th, 2022 12:59

TREES
dean langmuir said:

Nice one,take care.

March 28th, 2022 07:29

Fireflies In The Enchanted Forest
KRWonder said:

Such unique insects us humans actually like😁. This was a wonderfully captured moment and I felt transported their with you. Thank you for sharing!

March 10th, 2022 22:09

Music Of The Night
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true Jayasree, sitting out in the evening brings such wonderful sights and sounds to us.

Andy

February 13th, 2022 01:35

Music Of The Night
Rozina said:

Lovely lines!Thank you.

February 12th, 2022 22:20

Fireflies In The Enchanted Forest
L. B. Mek said:

if the recounted portrayal words, read
so mesmeric
I can\'t help but imagine
what experiencing, such
a fleeting
moment of Nature\'s magic
must be like...
(such a flawlessly executed write
showcases your poetic skill/growth
brilliantly!)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet

February 3rd, 2022 06:33

Fireflies In The Enchanted Forest
FallenAngel1πŸ•Š said:

This is really beautiful Jayasree. I was on a all day bicycle ride one time,I got lost after loosing the sun,..my sence of direction lolπŸ˜‚ I thought I was hilucinating when I started to see the little lights in the farmers fields. When I realized they were fireflies,I knew I was really lost. I\'d never seen them before. I live in Toronto😊

February 3rd, 2022 00:29

Fireflies In The Enchanted Forest
Rozina said:

An enchanting poem about fireflies.

February 3rd, 2022 00:27

The Day She Smiled
FallenAngel1πŸ•Š said:

Great words with a great image,what more can one ask for. Absolutely stunning!!!πŸŒŸπŸŒŸπŸŒŸπŸŒΉβœŒοΈπŸ•Š

January 26th, 2022 10:43

The Day She Smiled
Rozina said:

Full of magic and surrounded by happiness. Lovely lines.

January 26th, 2022 08:39

The Day She Smiled
dusk arising said:

Lovely poetry, and I know the feeling of pleasure you describe for all that surrounds us once you have found where you fit into it all.

January 26th, 2022 05:57

The Day She Smiled
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words Jay, just the sort of day that I would love.

Andy

January 26th, 2022 05:32

My Secret Garden
L. B. Mek said:

Congratulations! dear Poet
and what a scenic work
of worded, picturesque: Art
you\'ve chosen to share
to celebrate, such a wonderful accomplishment!
Whishing you, continued success
and all the very Best!
fly high, so we too can share
in the poetry
your mountain peak, vantage of life
will inspire...
thank you! for choosing to share

January 24th, 2022 07:21

My Secret Garden
Rozina said:

Congratulations! A beautiful mind with lovely thoughts.

January 24th, 2022 04:48

My Secret Garden
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Beautiful poem πŸ™‚πŸŒΈπŸŒΈ

January 24th, 2022 01:51

My Secret Garden
dusk arising said:

Beautiful thought created this lovely piece.
In my mind my muse leads me through a forest of simple pleasures encouraging me to pause in places afresh and meld with my surroundings to feel their spirit voices.

January 23rd, 2022 23:31

Stars In A Jar
James Alexander said:

Imaginatively and beautifully written.

December 22nd, 2021 11:15

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