Comments received on poems by NafisaSB
my lovely days have gone..
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!!!
\'Satiated as I am, with life’s joys and sorrows
I am no longer concerned with waiting for the morrows.
Once I was young, ah, once I was young,
Once I was humble, and once highly-strung
Life then for me was sheer enchantment and joy
It lasted much longer than an unbreakable toy.
Today, I sit back and reflect on the past
Which was boundless, corner-less, and oh, so vast\'
April 18th, 2022 05:42
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!!!
\'Satiated as I am, with life’s joys and sorrows
I am no longer concerned with waiting for the morrows.
Once I was young, ah, once I was young,
Once I was humble, and once highly-strung
Life then for me was sheer enchantment and joy
It lasted much longer than an unbreakable toy.
Today, I sit back and reflect on the past
Which was boundless, corner-less, and oh, so vast\'
April 18th, 2022 05:42
Life - 2 main aspects
Caring dove said:
Great writing ! Great last line 🙂 I think life should be more happiness than sadness ..
April 17th, 2022 01:04
Caring dove said:
Great writing ! Great last line 🙂 I think life should be more happiness than sadness ..
April 17th, 2022 01:04
Goodbye
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m not sure I understand..
but whatever you\'re up to
stay safe, dear poet
thanks for sharing
April 15th, 2022 04:38
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m not sure I understand..
but whatever you\'re up to
stay safe, dear poet
thanks for sharing
April 15th, 2022 04:38
the Super \"Super Powers\"
L. B. Mek said:
and all, \'Voted\'
in-to power...
just
an all round, demoralising
theme, to contemplate
dear poet, thanks for sharing
(and I so agree, with every
infuriatedly bristling syllable
you\'ve inked!)
April 14th, 2022 04:04
L. B. Mek said:
and all, \'Voted\'
in-to power...
just
an all round, demoralising
theme, to contemplate
dear poet, thanks for sharing
(and I so agree, with every
infuriatedly bristling syllable
you\'ve inked!)
April 14th, 2022 04:04
the Super \"Super Powers\"
voices of ghosts said:
no kidding, that is exactly how it works
April 13th, 2022 18:28
voices of ghosts said:
no kidding, that is exactly how it works
April 13th, 2022 18:28
The traveler
L. B. Mek said:
\'How I crave for a kind look.\'
(such a relatable read
really like your brave portrait, of yearning
for something
we once were so quick, to move-on
from..
a great write, dear Poet
thanks for sharing)
\'Should auld acquaintance be forgot,
And never brought to mind?
Should auld acquaintance be forgot,
And auld lang syne!
Chorus - For auld land syne, my dear,
For auld lang syne,
We\'ll tak a cup o\' kindness yet,
For auld lang syne.\'
as said best, by that great Burns
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-4686 )
April 12th, 2022 05:31
L. B. Mek said:
\'How I crave for a kind look.\'
(such a relatable read
really like your brave portrait, of yearning
for something
we once were so quick, to move-on
from..
a great write, dear Poet
thanks for sharing)
\'Should auld acquaintance be forgot,
And never brought to mind?
Should auld acquaintance be forgot,
And auld lang syne!
Chorus - For auld land syne, my dear,
For auld lang syne,
We\'ll tak a cup o\' kindness yet,
For auld lang syne.\'
as said best, by that great Burns
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-4686 )
April 12th, 2022 05:31
My treasure trove
L. B. Mek said:
\'And though my throne is grassy
I am not one who rues it.\'
loved the humility, imbued
in your song of victorious, acceptance
may whatever God you choose to believe-in
reward your humanist, openness
and
the love and respect
your poetry alludes to
for those, brethren
with differing ideal\'s, to yours..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
hope you have a peaceful week
April 11th, 2022 05:43
L. B. Mek said:
\'And though my throne is grassy
I am not one who rues it.\'
loved the humility, imbued
in your song of victorious, acceptance
may whatever God you choose to believe-in
reward your humanist, openness
and
the love and respect
your poetry alludes to
for those, brethren
with differing ideal\'s, to yours..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
hope you have a peaceful week
April 11th, 2022 05:43
moonlight
voices of ghosts said:
very beautiful 👏
that is the power of the moon .....
April 10th, 2022 11:01
voices of ghosts said:
very beautiful 👏
that is the power of the moon .....
April 10th, 2022 11:01
moonlight
Caring dove said:
Nature can calm is sometimes . A lovely poem .. like your choice of words
April 10th, 2022 01:10
Caring dove said:
Nature can calm is sometimes . A lovely poem .. like your choice of words
April 10th, 2022 01:10
Why study?
spilleronsheet said:
Good one dear friend…truly understand…i too always forget…as if all goes in some kind of abyss…cause when i draw my hands to fetch I don’t remember anything to write on that sheet of mine…
April 9th, 2022 09:39
spilleronsheet said:
Good one dear friend…truly understand…i too always forget…as if all goes in some kind of abyss…cause when i draw my hands to fetch I don’t remember anything to write on that sheet of mine…
April 9th, 2022 09:39
My grandchildren
L. B. Mek said:
\'Their wriggling and their giggling
On which we dote and thrive\'..
so happy for you!
(to recognise, a child\'s light
gracing your life
is to introduce, our existence\'s
unadulterated: Beauty
in-to your hopes and dreams)
thank you!
for this soothing read, dear Poet
April 8th, 2022 05:38
L. B. Mek said:
\'Their wriggling and their giggling
On which we dote and thrive\'..
so happy for you!
(to recognise, a child\'s light
gracing your life
is to introduce, our existence\'s
unadulterated: Beauty
in-to your hopes and dreams)
thank you!
for this soothing read, dear Poet
April 8th, 2022 05:38
My grandchildren
Goldfinch60 said:
The joy of grandchildren is so wonderful, may those memories always remain with us.
Andy
April 8th, 2022 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
The joy of grandchildren is so wonderful, may those memories always remain with us.
Andy
April 8th, 2022 01:16
Cupid rides pillion
L. B. Mek said:
\'It’s not the silly ‘puppy love’ of youth
But the stark, plain and wholesome truth
For sun may sleep and death may die
But we’ll be together – she and I\'..
such a great read, what poetic flow!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
worthy of being favourably compared
to one of the best, love poem
dedications:
\'Annabel Lee\', by Poe
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-22550 )
April 5th, 2022 04:21
L. B. Mek said:
\'It’s not the silly ‘puppy love’ of youth
But the stark, plain and wholesome truth
For sun may sleep and death may die
But we’ll be together – she and I\'..
such a great read, what poetic flow!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
worthy of being favourably compared
to one of the best, love poem
dedications:
\'Annabel Lee\', by Poe
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-22550 )
April 5th, 2022 04:21
An advice to sweethearts..
L. B. Mek said:
kinda like life, eh?
why not make the best of it
whilst we still can, I say
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 4th, 2022 05:20
L. B. Mek said:
kinda like life, eh?
why not make the best of it
whilst we still can, I say
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 4th, 2022 05:20
An advice to sweethearts..
Crowns4Christ said:
So true,but so worth it when your love is true
April 4th, 2022 01:45
Crowns4Christ said:
So true,but so worth it when your love is true
April 4th, 2022 01:45
A bride\'s steps
Christina8 said:
I like your rhymes and the meaning of hope, etc, behind each step a bride takes. Great job!
April 3rd, 2022 11:02
Christina8 said:
I like your rhymes and the meaning of hope, etc, behind each step a bride takes. Great job!
April 3rd, 2022 11:02
happy caring mode
L. B. Mek said:
interesting message and relatable read
thanks for sharing
April 1st, 2022 05:00
L. B. Mek said:
interesting message and relatable read
thanks for sharing
April 1st, 2022 05:00
Ageing
Rocky Lagou said:
A lovely piece. Those are the \"golden years\" of life and it\'s a moment to truly live life to the fullest. Continue living the perks!
March 31st, 2022 10:12
Rocky Lagou said:
A lovely piece. Those are the \"golden years\" of life and it\'s a moment to truly live life to the fullest. Continue living the perks!
March 31st, 2022 10:12
Ageing
L. B. Mek said:
\'in my, often flawed
but ever, humbled
opinionated - opinion\'
this, is brilliant!
reminded me
of one of my favourite poems
\'Warning\' by Jenny Joseph
( https://www.scottishpoetrylibrary.org.uk/poem/warning/ )
thank you!
for choosing to share, dear Poet
March 31st, 2022 05:05
L. B. Mek said:
\'in my, often flawed
but ever, humbled
opinionated - opinion\'
this, is brilliant!
reminded me
of one of my favourite poems
\'Warning\' by Jenny Joseph
( https://www.scottishpoetrylibrary.org.uk/poem/warning/ )
thank you!
for choosing to share, dear Poet
March 31st, 2022 05:05
in the street
Rocky Lagou said:
Really nice epitome of life and the different things going on at the same time. It\'s a nice reflection and vividly displayed.
March 30th, 2022 10:33
Rocky Lagou said:
Really nice epitome of life and the different things going on at the same time. It\'s a nice reflection and vividly displayed.
March 30th, 2022 10:33
Anger
L. B. Mek said:
(acutely poignant
a great write!
thanks for sharing
and inspiring
my little scribbled reply)
\'sparks, emanating
eyes enraged enough
to carpet, skies
thunderously bleak\'
March 25th, 2022 06:10
L. B. Mek said:
(acutely poignant
a great write!
thanks for sharing
and inspiring
my little scribbled reply)
\'sparks, emanating
eyes enraged enough
to carpet, skies
thunderously bleak\'
March 25th, 2022 06:10
Bitterness - the perfume
dean langmuir said:
You captured alot,my poem today is along the same lines,how smell dictates way more than we think.take care.
March 21st, 2022 08:13
dean langmuir said:
You captured alot,my poem today is along the same lines,how smell dictates way more than we think.take care.
March 21st, 2022 08:13
night
Caring dove said:
It’s very beautiful ! Really like the words used in this !
March 19th, 2022 01:39
Caring dove said:
It’s very beautiful ! Really like the words used in this !
March 19th, 2022 01:39
A sportsman
L. B. Mek said:
what encouraging words,
an uplifting message..
thanks for sharing
March 18th, 2022 05:25
L. B. Mek said:
what encouraging words,
an uplifting message..
thanks for sharing
March 18th, 2022 05:25
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