Comments received on poems by NafisaSB
Peace
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
\'if only Peace
was our collective
religion...\'
(thanks for sharing)
March 17th, 2022 04:46
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
\'if only Peace
was our collective
religion...\'
(thanks for sharing)
March 17th, 2022 04:46
breathes there a flower
Rocky Lagou said:
Very vivid and the meaning is present. It\'s intense to see the distress of the flower but also the beauty it possesses. Great job.
March 16th, 2022 09:11
Rocky Lagou said:
Very vivid and the meaning is present. It\'s intense to see the distress of the flower but also the beauty it possesses. Great job.
March 16th, 2022 09:11
rejuvenate our land
L. B. Mek said:
\'Let us learn a lesson
To balance nature with nurture.
Weave it in the fabric
Of our daily lives\'..
timely and Important words
thanks for sharing
March 10th, 2022 05:04
L. B. Mek said:
\'Let us learn a lesson
To balance nature with nurture.
Weave it in the fabric
Of our daily lives\'..
timely and Important words
thanks for sharing
March 10th, 2022 05:04
Don\'t keep on running
sally said:
very nice and optimistic poem, right life is short and we should enjoy every beautiful detail on it : )
March 9th, 2022 06:57
sally said:
very nice and optimistic poem, right life is short and we should enjoy every beautiful detail on it : )
March 9th, 2022 06:57
Don\'t keep on running
Caring dove said:
Good writing .. I think it’s difficult when we feel sad in life because nobody wants to feel that way .. but maybe there’s reasons behind sadness ..
March 9th, 2022 01:35
Caring dove said:
Good writing .. I think it’s difficult when we feel sad in life because nobody wants to feel that way .. but maybe there’s reasons behind sadness ..
March 9th, 2022 01:35
fascinating colors
L. B. Mek said:
personally
I will just be happy
if I didn\'t have to \'LITERALLY\'
hear the word \'LITERALLY\'
in every sentence: \'LITERALLY\'...!
(good on you for trying, dear poet
me, I\'m more cynical
and like Rick Rubin
and his fake funeral for the word \'Def\'
I have already come to terms
to the exponentially limitless
demise
of the English language..
I mean, here we are
the most widely educated generation
in the history of humanity
and the best eloquence
we come across
\'on da daily\'
is so inanely, trite
\'innit tho, for reals... reals\'
.
.
\'LITERALLY!\'
(and no, \'slang\'
or other people\'s \'supposed\' culture
has little to do
with the universal dummying down
of language
in our universities and state offices)
lol
or I\'m just an old cranky, has-been
ranting
for the sake of ranting, who knows
March 7th, 2022 06:15
L. B. Mek said:
personally
I will just be happy
if I didn\'t have to \'LITERALLY\'
hear the word \'LITERALLY\'
in every sentence: \'LITERALLY\'...!
(good on you for trying, dear poet
me, I\'m more cynical
and like Rick Rubin
and his fake funeral for the word \'Def\'
I have already come to terms
to the exponentially limitless
demise
of the English language..
I mean, here we are
the most widely educated generation
in the history of humanity
and the best eloquence
we come across
\'on da daily\'
is so inanely, trite
\'innit tho, for reals... reals\'
.
.
\'LITERALLY!\'
(and no, \'slang\'
or other people\'s \'supposed\' culture
has little to do
with the universal dummying down
of language
in our universities and state offices)
lol
or I\'m just an old cranky, has-been
ranting
for the sake of ranting, who knows
March 7th, 2022 06:15
O leaders
L. B. Mek said:
so timely and worded
with that sincerity
of insightfully arrowed, precision..
thanks for sharing!
(I laud your control and capacity
to express yourself eloquently
while penning
what must have been such an emotional write,
even if the only emotion, present
was that uncontainable
infuriatedly bristling
utterly dispiriting, frustration)
March 3rd, 2022 05:49
L. B. Mek said:
so timely and worded
with that sincerity
of insightfully arrowed, precision..
thanks for sharing!
(I laud your control and capacity
to express yourself eloquently
while penning
what must have been such an emotional write,
even if the only emotion, present
was that uncontainable
infuriatedly bristling
utterly dispiriting, frustration)
March 3rd, 2022 05:49
O leaders
Doggerel Dave said:
Sussed out several of your poems - so I know your heart is very much in the right place.
Your lines \'How can a nation rise When its folks are not wise\' is the question, the answer not easy. If the folks can, they should study the processes of history, for “Those who do not learn history are doomed to repeat it.”
That is, if they have the chance....
March 3rd, 2022 04:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Sussed out several of your poems - so I know your heart is very much in the right place.
Your lines \'How can a nation rise When its folks are not wise\' is the question, the answer not easy. If the folks can, they should study the processes of history, for “Those who do not learn history are doomed to repeat it.”
That is, if they have the chance....
March 3rd, 2022 04:28
a complaint
L. B. Mek said:
a different and intriguing read, thanks for sharing..
(still, I wonder
are those savages, leaving
the Crows
or are the crowd\'s, waiting
till they can freely pick
their rewards
of, of
each others demise
cyclical reality
of that cannibalism
of ideal\'s...)
February 24th, 2022 06:25
L. B. Mek said:
a different and intriguing read, thanks for sharing..
(still, I wonder
are those savages, leaving
the Crows
or are the crowd\'s, waiting
till they can freely pick
their rewards
of, of
each others demise
cyclical reality
of that cannibalism
of ideal\'s...)
February 24th, 2022 06:25
a complaint
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
Lesson learned, kill all the birds you want. Those bastards had it easy for far too long.
February 24th, 2022 05:03
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
Lesson learned, kill all the birds you want. Those bastards had it easy for far too long.
February 24th, 2022 05:03
a complaint
jark said:
oh i love the emotion of this! \"why oh why they asked of me\" the narrative is surreal and striking! loved!
February 24th, 2022 03:01
jark said:
oh i love the emotion of this! \"why oh why they asked of me\" the narrative is surreal and striking! loved!
February 24th, 2022 03:01
Mom\'s hands
Bella Shepard said:
What a beautiful tribute to a dear mother. Loved it!
February 22nd, 2022 06:38
Bella Shepard said:
What a beautiful tribute to a dear mother. Loved it!
February 22nd, 2022 06:38
your choice
L. B. Mek said:
if only..
still, a soothing song in a read..
thanks for sharing
February 21st, 2022 06:57
L. B. Mek said:
if only..
still, a soothing song in a read..
thanks for sharing
February 21st, 2022 06:57
the choice
Bragee said:
Enjoy the small things because once you’re done running you can’t go back.
Thanks for Sharing!
February 20th, 2022 12:30
Bragee said:
Enjoy the small things because once you’re done running you can’t go back.
Thanks for Sharing!
February 20th, 2022 12:30
forever fighting
Rocky Lagou said:
Amen! We need to appreciate our heroes that our fighting for our lives daily! Lovely message! 👍💖
February 16th, 2022 11:19
Rocky Lagou said:
Amen! We need to appreciate our heroes that our fighting for our lives daily! Lovely message! 👍💖
February 16th, 2022 11:19
hope
Rozina said:
Glass half empty or half full. Absolutely agree. We must be hopeful.
January 25th, 2022 03:55
Rozina said:
Glass half empty or half full. Absolutely agree. We must be hopeful.
January 25th, 2022 03:55
stand up for self
Rozina said:
You are right. Sometimes though so many pick on 1 person and it is hard and frightening for that person to retaliate for fear of worse abuse. Schools, families, community, governments must all work loudly to educate especially from a young age. Thank you for highlighting this important issue.
January 10th, 2022 03:55
Rozina said:
You are right. Sometimes though so many pick on 1 person and it is hard and frightening for that person to retaliate for fear of worse abuse. Schools, families, community, governments must all work loudly to educate especially from a young age. Thank you for highlighting this important issue.
January 10th, 2022 03:55
wake up call
L. B. Mek said:
\'Sustainability is dying
The earth is now just crying
No lesson have we learnt
Though more than fingers burnt\'
Amen!
(my favourite poem of the year so far
thanks for choosing to share, dear poet
and Happy New Year!)
January 4th, 2022 06:52
L. B. Mek said:
\'Sustainability is dying
The earth is now just crying
No lesson have we learnt
Though more than fingers burnt\'
Amen!
(my favourite poem of the year so far
thanks for choosing to share, dear poet
and Happy New Year!)
January 4th, 2022 06:52
wake up call
Rozina said:
You are right. We must all do our bit to preserve our world. Too many unexpected disasters eg floods in unlikely places, landslides, fires. Too much greed.
January 4th, 2022 03:52
Rozina said:
You are right. We must all do our bit to preserve our world. Too many unexpected disasters eg floods in unlikely places, landslides, fires. Too much greed.
January 4th, 2022 03:52
count your blessings
Rozina said:
Totally agree with your positive message. Happy New Year.
January 1st, 2022 03:32
Rozina said:
Totally agree with your positive message. Happy New Year.
January 1st, 2022 03:32
my silence is my undoing
Rozina said:
Your poem has given me an idea to write on a related subject. So many times I regret not speaking up immediately too. Thank you for sharing.
December 30th, 2021 23:30
Rozina said:
Your poem has given me an idea to write on a related subject. So many times I regret not speaking up immediately too. Thank you for sharing.
December 30th, 2021 23:30
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