Comments received on poems by NafisaSB
A teacher
mvvenkataraman said:
Lovely poem,
A true gem,
Words sparkle
Like stars twinkle!
September 10th, 2022 10:56
mvvenkataraman said:
Lovely poem,
A true gem,
Words sparkle
Like stars twinkle!
September 10th, 2022 10:56
a song
jarcher54 said:
PS Your title is a double entendre, because \"song\" is both your subject and your medium. Its a song about song. Good on you!
September 9th, 2022 02:21
jarcher54 said:
PS Your title is a double entendre, because \"song\" is both your subject and your medium. Its a song about song. Good on you!
September 9th, 2022 02:21
a song
jarcher54 said:
I am dubious of your final couplet, but I do appreciate your rendition of the doubt of the everyday writer of his or her competence or genius. Trying to express what a poem, or song, is is always a challenge. Thanks for sharing your unvarnished thoughts on the matter, with sincerity and wit.
September 9th, 2022 02:20
jarcher54 said:
I am dubious of your final couplet, but I do appreciate your rendition of the doubt of the everyday writer of his or her competence or genius. Trying to express what a poem, or song, is is always a challenge. Thanks for sharing your unvarnished thoughts on the matter, with sincerity and wit.
September 9th, 2022 02:20
a song
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A beautiful poem of nature, poetry and God\'s art acknowledged. Kudos!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
September 9th, 2022 01:13
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A beautiful poem of nature, poetry and God\'s art acknowledged. Kudos!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
September 9th, 2022 01:13
My shadow
Aradhya said:
i loved how you breathed life in the shadow and made me remember to appreciate everything in life, even the seemingly most unimportant ones just like a shadow. it accompanies us for life. beautifully done dear poetess!
August 24th, 2022 08:58
Aradhya said:
i loved how you breathed life in the shadow and made me remember to appreciate everything in life, even the seemingly most unimportant ones just like a shadow. it accompanies us for life. beautifully done dear poetess!
August 24th, 2022 08:58
Submit
dusk arising said:
Very true so long as you dont let the man made organised religion get in the way.
But \'he\' is a very outdated word along with silly ones like lord and saviour which are just man made affectations.
August 14th, 2022 01:15
dusk arising said:
Very true so long as you dont let the man made organised religion get in the way.
But \'he\' is a very outdated word along with silly ones like lord and saviour which are just man made affectations.
August 14th, 2022 01:15
Dear Editor
L. B. Mek said:
personally, i think you\'re Awesome!
(keep that mighty pen, busy
write mainly for yourself and enjoy
the journey...)
August 12th, 2022 04:16
L. B. Mek said:
personally, i think you\'re Awesome!
(keep that mighty pen, busy
write mainly for yourself and enjoy
the journey...)
August 12th, 2022 04:16
Cord
Ryan Robson-Bluer said:
my mum and i have been discussing this over coffee in the kitchen this morning - thank you for something so brief yet so perfectly sweet!
August 9th, 2022 03:55
Ryan Robson-Bluer said:
my mum and i have been discussing this over coffee in the kitchen this morning - thank you for something so brief yet so perfectly sweet!
August 9th, 2022 03:55
Cord
L. B. Mek said:
(even devoid of theological alignment
there is something very human
you\'ve depicted
within words of such brevity;
that aspect of internal struggle
between, that
we choose to place our faith in
and that, belated realisation
that we are never guaranteed
anything back, in return or reply
we
merely hope and pray
choosing to believe
this time, our despair
will be answered...)
this is so well written
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
August 9th, 2022 03:06
L. B. Mek said:
(even devoid of theological alignment
there is something very human
you\'ve depicted
within words of such brevity;
that aspect of internal struggle
between, that
we choose to place our faith in
and that, belated realisation
that we are never guaranteed
anything back, in return or reply
we
merely hope and pray
choosing to believe
this time, our despair
will be answered...)
this is so well written
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
August 9th, 2022 03:06
poetry
NafisaSB said:
made a major typo when posting my poem today. have edited it now to convey my true message
July 29th, 2022 08:03
NafisaSB said:
made a major typo when posting my poem today. have edited it now to convey my true message
July 29th, 2022 08:03
Be happy
NafisaSB said:
you are mistaken my friend. on the contrary i look forward to reading your in-depth analysis : it is refreshing to hear what you have to say.. i don\'t find it over zealous, and am not annoyed. glad to have your frank reviews in fact, so please don\'t tone it down - i welcome whatever thoughts and ideas the readers have to share. good day
July 23rd, 2022 00:57
NafisaSB said:
you are mistaken my friend. on the contrary i look forward to reading your in-depth analysis : it is refreshing to hear what you have to say.. i don\'t find it over zealous, and am not annoyed. glad to have your frank reviews in fact, so please don\'t tone it down - i welcome whatever thoughts and ideas the readers have to share. good day
July 23rd, 2022 00:57
Count on me
L. B. Mek said:
showcasing your wide shoulders
and your poetry\'s, empathetic
depths..
a lovely read, thank you!
July 22nd, 2022 04:53
L. B. Mek said:
showcasing your wide shoulders
and your poetry\'s, empathetic
depths..
a lovely read, thank you!
July 22nd, 2022 04:53
Be happy
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, happiness should be spread all around.
Andy
https://youtu.be/-4fIVD06lRQ
July 21st, 2022 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, happiness should be spread all around.
Andy
https://youtu.be/-4fIVD06lRQ
July 21st, 2022 01:13
white hair
AlitaOpal said:
Aging gracefully is the true beauty of our journey. My mother calls it wisdom hair 🌹
July 20th, 2022 08:45
AlitaOpal said:
Aging gracefully is the true beauty of our journey. My mother calls it wisdom hair 🌹
July 20th, 2022 08:45
white hair
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Nafisa, strangely my partner and I were talking about this last night after seeing something on the television about changing the way you look.
I have a philosophy in life:
\"This is me if you do not like what you see that is your problem, not mine\"
My partner feels the same and to me she is beautiful all the time.
Andy
July 20th, 2022 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Nafisa, strangely my partner and I were talking about this last night after seeing something on the television about changing the way you look.
I have a philosophy in life:
\"This is me if you do not like what you see that is your problem, not mine\"
My partner feels the same and to me she is beautiful all the time.
Andy
July 20th, 2022 01:19
clouds
Goldfinch60 said:
Clouds are wonderful things to look at and every one of them is unique.
Andy
July 19th, 2022 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Clouds are wonderful things to look at and every one of them is unique.
Andy
July 19th, 2022 01:10
the betrayal
L. B. Mek said:
PoeticDan
a fellow poet like you
here on MPS
shared with me a quote, i feel
relevant to your write
so i\'ll pass it on:
\'\"Those who matter
don\'t mind
and those that mind
don\'t matter\"
(sometimes, we fallible humans
can\'t see the gifts before us)
thanks for sharing
I too have experienced a similar
conundrum, in the past
where the more I made myself
available
and yearned, to help
I cheapened, my worth
in the eyes of that person
and they simply assumed
i would always be there..
sadly
life\'s not so easy, so in our
time of sweet parting
i consoled myself, with the thought
that I had, given it my all
and found acceptance
and a path to move on
anchoring, that memory
to that mindset..
(if it helps
fee; free to try it yourself
\'his/her loss
so, on
to the next
knowing
no one guaranteed me
do-over, tomorrow\'s
to waste, on a past
that i can\'t change\')
July 15th, 2022 03:23
L. B. Mek said:
PoeticDan
a fellow poet like you
here on MPS
shared with me a quote, i feel
relevant to your write
so i\'ll pass it on:
\'\"Those who matter
don\'t mind
and those that mind
don\'t matter\"
(sometimes, we fallible humans
can\'t see the gifts before us)
thanks for sharing
I too have experienced a similar
conundrum, in the past
where the more I made myself
available
and yearned, to help
I cheapened, my worth
in the eyes of that person
and they simply assumed
i would always be there..
sadly
life\'s not so easy, so in our
time of sweet parting
i consoled myself, with the thought
that I had, given it my all
and found acceptance
and a path to move on
anchoring, that memory
to that mindset..
(if it helps
fee; free to try it yourself
\'his/her loss
so, on
to the next
knowing
no one guaranteed me
do-over, tomorrow\'s
to waste, on a past
that i can\'t change\')
July 15th, 2022 03:23
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