Comments received on poems by NafisaSB
On war..
Cassie58 said:
Dear Safina, such a strong write. No one wins in war. Everyone loses. Words wisely chosen. Have a happy Saturday dear poet 🌹
September 14th, 2024 12:38
Cassie58 said:
Dear Safina, such a strong write. No one wins in war. Everyone loses. Words wisely chosen. Have a happy Saturday dear poet 🌹
September 14th, 2024 12:38
On war..
Doggerel Dave said:
;You shouldn\'t start me off again - I\'ve only just calmed down!😂
Strong write, safina.
September 14th, 2024 01:55
Doggerel Dave said:
;You shouldn\'t start me off again - I\'ve only just calmed down!😂
Strong write, safina.
September 14th, 2024 01:55
Diplomacy
Doggerel Dave said:
A very ambivalent attitude to a Diplomat, If I may say so….
I confess that at times I wasn’t absolutely certain if you were focusing on the professional Diplomat or a quality in an otherwise ordinary individual….
If the professional, I would say that they might achieve more than your average politician who goes in with his boots on.
If however the individual is in focus, then I tend to see such a person as potentially a hypocrite…..
A thoughtful write, Safina.
September 13th, 2024 06:24
Doggerel Dave said:
A very ambivalent attitude to a Diplomat, If I may say so….
I confess that at times I wasn’t absolutely certain if you were focusing on the professional Diplomat or a quality in an otherwise ordinary individual….
If the professional, I would say that they might achieve more than your average politician who goes in with his boots on.
If however the individual is in focus, then I tend to see such a person as potentially a hypocrite…..
A thoughtful write, Safina.
September 13th, 2024 06:24
A complaint
Doggerel Dave said:
I have absolutely no idea - but I\'m with the crows.
September 8th, 2024 23:35
Doggerel Dave said:
I have absolutely no idea - but I\'m with the crows.
September 8th, 2024 23:35
forever fighting
Cassie58 said:
A fine tribute Nafisa , to those doctors who worked tirelessly through COVID to save lives and keep us safe, while they themselves were also at risk. Not only them, but nurses too who also played their part. Penned with gratitude and read in total agreement. Have a beautiful day dear poet.
September 8th, 2024 03:43
Cassie58 said:
A fine tribute Nafisa , to those doctors who worked tirelessly through COVID to save lives and keep us safe, while they themselves were also at risk. Not only them, but nurses too who also played their part. Penned with gratitude and read in total agreement. Have a beautiful day dear poet.
September 8th, 2024 03:43
forever fighting
MR.apocalypse said:
loved the contant keep up of the samy sylabls and the wording chose is very complex very nice
September 7th, 2024 23:51
MR.apocalypse said:
loved the contant keep up of the samy sylabls and the wording chose is very complex very nice
September 7th, 2024 23:51
Premonition
sorenbarrett said:
Call it premonition or panic attack what ever it is a very unpleasant situation. Very nicely written with images enhancing its description.
August 26th, 2024 05:10
sorenbarrett said:
Call it premonition or panic attack what ever it is a very unpleasant situation. Very nicely written with images enhancing its description.
August 26th, 2024 05:10
Premonition
NafisaSB said:
you are only as young as you think- so welcome to our humble home anytime
take care..
August 26th, 2024 01:33
NafisaSB said:
you are only as young as you think- so welcome to our humble home anytime
take care..
August 26th, 2024 01:33
Premonition
Doggerel Dave said:
I know a competent tradesman who fixes roofs. Says he would be prepared to fix yours for a modest fee plus an expenses paid trip to India and return.... From your last neat stanza it feels like you have everything under control really..... 👍
August 26th, 2024 00:54
Doggerel Dave said:
I know a competent tradesman who fixes roofs. Says he would be prepared to fix yours for a modest fee plus an expenses paid trip to India and return.... From your last neat stanza it feels like you have everything under control really..... 👍
August 26th, 2024 00:54
their 1000 watt smile
Dan Williams said:
Hey, electricity runs everything else, why not smiles. A happy song. Nice work.
August 26th, 2024 00:08
Dan Williams said:
Hey, electricity runs everything else, why not smiles. A happy song. Nice work.
August 26th, 2024 00:08
their 1000 watt smile
sorenbarrett said:
I could feel the bubbling enthusiasm of children in this poem so nicely rhymed well done
August 25th, 2024 05:41
sorenbarrett said:
I could feel the bubbling enthusiasm of children in this poem so nicely rhymed well done
August 25th, 2024 05:41
their 1000 watt smile
Cassie58 said:
Dear Safina, your words flooded me with wonderful memories of my own grandchildren. I am lucky enough to have two them living with me still. A lovely tribute to the younger generation. May they always make you smile poet. 🌹 Nothing like the smile of a child to warm your heart.
August 25th, 2024 01:21
Cassie58 said:
Dear Safina, your words flooded me with wonderful memories of my own grandchildren. I am lucky enough to have two them living with me still. A lovely tribute to the younger generation. May they always make you smile poet. 🌹 Nothing like the smile of a child to warm your heart.
August 25th, 2024 01:21
My fitbit
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like another word for conscience. A most fun write
August 24th, 2024 09:07
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like another word for conscience. A most fun write
August 24th, 2024 09:07
My fitbit
Doggerel Dave said:
Each to their own, Safina. Your poem is so clear, so descriptive that it has scared me from all the way over here...🙃
And do I indeed detect some ambivalence there??
August 24th, 2024 01:07
Doggerel Dave said:
Each to their own, Safina. Your poem is so clear, so descriptive that it has scared me from all the way over here...🙃
And do I indeed detect some ambivalence there??
August 24th, 2024 01:07
Senior\'s day
Doggerel Dave said:
You can afford to be a day late when a Senior.... no more schedules , deadlines...Oh sorry, you haven\'t still got your nose to the grindstone, have you?
As a poetic celebration, you have cracked it!
August 22nd, 2024 07:55
Doggerel Dave said:
You can afford to be a day late when a Senior.... no more schedules , deadlines...Oh sorry, you haven\'t still got your nose to the grindstone, have you?
As a poetic celebration, you have cracked it!
August 22nd, 2024 07:55
Senior\'s day
sorenbarrett said:
Well stated a great message with good form and rhyme. Lovely
August 22nd, 2024 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
Well stated a great message with good form and rhyme. Lovely
August 22nd, 2024 04:31
Water
Thoughtless said:
Here in the United States, we seem to always be in a perpetual state of drought. It\'s especially that way here in Kansas which has always been dry. The first settlers here did so because of heavy rainfall. They soon found out that Kansas never gets that much rain. Now we get it in bursts with heavy flooding followed by long dry spells. People often do not understand climate change because the climate itself is not local. If we get a hard winter, somebody will have sign in their car window on which is written like this, Damn this global warming. They don\'t understand. I never finished university, yet some of the grads that I have known are less educated than I am. I could not have said that a few years ago. They pick one subject and only get a dilettante\'s view of math or earth sciences. They are sadly lacking in logical reasoning as well. That being written, some kids are beginning to study more subjects in depth. So, there is hope.
August 21st, 2024 22:20
Thoughtless said:
Here in the United States, we seem to always be in a perpetual state of drought. It\'s especially that way here in Kansas which has always been dry. The first settlers here did so because of heavy rainfall. They soon found out that Kansas never gets that much rain. Now we get it in bursts with heavy flooding followed by long dry spells. People often do not understand climate change because the climate itself is not local. If we get a hard winter, somebody will have sign in their car window on which is written like this, Damn this global warming. They don\'t understand. I never finished university, yet some of the grads that I have known are less educated than I am. I could not have said that a few years ago. They pick one subject and only get a dilettante\'s view of math or earth sciences. They are sadly lacking in logical reasoning as well. That being written, some kids are beginning to study more subjects in depth. So, there is hope.
August 21st, 2024 22:20
Water
Cassie58 said:
So eloquently written. Water is so precious. We have a great deal of rainfall, but not enough reservoirs to catch it when it falls. Instead, the rivers get overburdened and are prone to flooding. Not only that to the shame of our water companies, sewage pollutes our rivers. This is a huge subject to tackle and you dear poet have given us much to contemplate. A world wide problem, not just local. 🌹
August 21st, 2024 08:50
Cassie58 said:
So eloquently written. Water is so precious. We have a great deal of rainfall, but not enough reservoirs to catch it when it falls. Instead, the rivers get overburdened and are prone to flooding. Not only that to the shame of our water companies, sewage pollutes our rivers. This is a huge subject to tackle and you dear poet have given us much to contemplate. A world wide problem, not just local. 🌹
August 21st, 2024 08:50
Water
Neville said:
This little poem was crying out to be writ and screams out an important message to us all .. I am glad I came by this way today .. Kindest Regards, Neville
August 21st, 2024 04:59
Neville said:
This little poem was crying out to be writ and screams out an important message to us all .. I am glad I came by this way today .. Kindest Regards, Neville
August 21st, 2024 04:59
Water
sorenbarrett said:
The more people the more our need for water. Conserve water and stop population increase.
August 21st, 2024 04:53
sorenbarrett said:
The more people the more our need for water. Conserve water and stop population increase.
August 21st, 2024 04:53
Water
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful, I live in Italy, and it\'s more tropical these days, crazy weather, we recycle everything here in this country, the boats leave their trash in the sea though. A wonderful discussion. 🌹
August 21st, 2024 00:33
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful, I live in Italy, and it\'s more tropical these days, crazy weather, we recycle everything here in this country, the boats leave their trash in the sea though. A wonderful discussion. 🌹
August 21st, 2024 00:33
Water
NafisaSB said:
yes - sad but true that areas needing rain are being deprived, while others being inundated
someone surely laughing up there - bcos evaporation should cause rain, but there is more drought all around..
August 20th, 2024 23:57
NafisaSB said:
yes - sad but true that areas needing rain are being deprived, while others being inundated
someone surely laughing up there - bcos evaporation should cause rain, but there is more drought all around..
August 20th, 2024 23:57
Water
Doggerel Dave said:
The promise, apparently is that as the world heats more evaporation and hence increased rain. And in Sydney it is quite possible to believe that, as for the past several months more rain has poured down than we can possibly need. However, it appears that this effect is not evenly distributed....
Your poem has more content though, as you point to the general disregard of the environment which for the moment seems universal except for small scattered efforts. Thanks for that.
August 20th, 2024 23:49
Doggerel Dave said:
The promise, apparently is that as the world heats more evaporation and hence increased rain. And in Sydney it is quite possible to believe that, as for the past several months more rain has poured down than we can possibly need. However, it appears that this effect is not evenly distributed....
Your poem has more content though, as you point to the general disregard of the environment which for the moment seems universal except for small scattered efforts. Thanks for that.
August 20th, 2024 23:49
i will dance..
sorenbarrett said:
A great message sent in such a brief passage and cleverly written as well.
August 18th, 2024 06:41
sorenbarrett said:
A great message sent in such a brief passage and cleverly written as well.
August 18th, 2024 06:41
White hair
Doggerel Dave said:
You stay with it Girl - I\'m sure your hair has texture and grace.
August 11th, 2024 08:13
Doggerel Dave said:
You stay with it Girl - I\'m sure your hair has texture and grace.
August 11th, 2024 08:13
White hair
Cassie58 said:
I don’t dye mine either Safina. Happy to let nature take its course. I like my grey. Good health is far more important than hair colour. Enjoy yourself, come what may, is sage advice in this finely penned poem. Happy Sunday.
August 11th, 2024 01:53
Cassie58 said:
I don’t dye mine either Safina. Happy to let nature take its course. I like my grey. Good health is far more important than hair colour. Enjoy yourself, come what may, is sage advice in this finely penned poem. Happy Sunday.
August 11th, 2024 01:53
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