Comments received on poems by NafisaSB
the cycle ride
Goldfinch60 said:
Some memories just cannot be forgotten as they were so meaningful.
Andy
March 22nd, 2023 03:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Some memories just cannot be forgotten as they were so meaningful.
Andy
March 22nd, 2023 03:45
all the trinkets
Myth said:
You did cite it correctly. .
Most of the time .. humans do more harm to each other than nature .. It is shame when political elites plan a war, then project every aspect of their decision .. even the number of casualties. . Death toll..!
March 21st, 2023 16:24
Myth said:
You did cite it correctly. .
Most of the time .. humans do more harm to each other than nature .. It is shame when political elites plan a war, then project every aspect of their decision .. even the number of casualties. . Death toll..!
March 21st, 2023 16:24
Gliding
Myth said:
Even if the flight were very short one I always overwhelmed by feeling of abandoning mother earth .. I never thought of writing a poem while I\'m being locked in a metal box and thrown between clouds ..
I wonder is this a poem depicting air flight or just moment of meditation.? .
(In both cases it a 👍piece)
March 20th, 2023 10:14
Myth said:
Even if the flight were very short one I always overwhelmed by feeling of abandoning mother earth .. I never thought of writing a poem while I\'m being locked in a metal box and thrown between clouds ..
I wonder is this a poem depicting air flight or just moment of meditation.? .
(In both cases it a 👍piece)
March 20th, 2023 10:14
Be \'the best\'
Ok Waleed said:
I never liked the point a finger, 4 back at me line. I’ve always thought it was stupid. But good poem
February 12th, 2023 08:34
Ok Waleed said:
I never liked the point a finger, 4 back at me line. I’ve always thought it was stupid. But good poem
February 12th, 2023 08:34
musings-2
jarcher54 said:
The long tradition of poetry to pass on advice and wisdom continues! Sweet little piece.
January 28th, 2023 01:37
jarcher54 said:
The long tradition of poetry to pass on advice and wisdom continues! Sweet little piece.
January 28th, 2023 01:37
Peace of mind
mvvenkataraman said:
Outstanding poem indeed,
Thanks for this real beauty,
Perfect in every aspect,
Carry on to inspire all!
January 19th, 2023 01:50
mvvenkataraman said:
Outstanding poem indeed,
Thanks for this real beauty,
Perfect in every aspect,
Carry on to inspire all!
January 19th, 2023 01:50
Art of living
jarcher54 said:
A nice little throwback to those medieval didactic poems teaching people how to live well. Sometimes a break from modern style is interesting! Thanks.
January 14th, 2023 13:02
jarcher54 said:
A nice little throwback to those medieval didactic poems teaching people how to live well. Sometimes a break from modern style is interesting! Thanks.
January 14th, 2023 13:02
Seventy
jarcher54 said:
I\'m just a couple years behind you... thanks for leading the way with humility and grace!
January 14th, 2023 13:01
jarcher54 said:
I\'m just a couple years behind you... thanks for leading the way with humility and grace!
January 14th, 2023 13:01
who are friends
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful, thanks for sharing
Happy New Year to you, too
January 13th, 2023 05:51
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful, thanks for sharing
Happy New Year to you, too
January 13th, 2023 05:51
in appreciation
mvvenkataraman said:
Thank you for the poem as it has a positive note,
Being positive always shows us the right route!
January 10th, 2023 02:35
mvvenkataraman said:
Thank you for the poem as it has a positive note,
Being positive always shows us the right route!
January 10th, 2023 02:35
Old year vs new
mvvenkataraman said:
I like this reasonable comparison,
You have perfectly analyzed indeed,
A homage to the Old Year kindly
And a well-wish for the New Year!
January 1st, 2023 01:28
mvvenkataraman said:
I like this reasonable comparison,
You have perfectly analyzed indeed,
A homage to the Old Year kindly
And a well-wish for the New Year!
January 1st, 2023 01:28
things i love..
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Yeah i too love doves, grass, flowers, and i esp hate conmen, rats, but i dont hate dogs, i just fear them lots, i dont hate or fear bats though. You expressed in a fab way. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
Wishing u a happy new year.
December 29th, 2022 12:03
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Yeah i too love doves, grass, flowers, and i esp hate conmen, rats, but i dont hate dogs, i just fear them lots, i dont hate or fear bats though. You expressed in a fab way. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
Wishing u a happy new year.
December 29th, 2022 12:03
things i love..
L. B. Mek said:
this definitely resonates with me, dear poet
welcome back! thanks for sharing
December 12th, 2022 02:27
L. B. Mek said:
this definitely resonates with me, dear poet
welcome back! thanks for sharing
December 12th, 2022 02:27
A teacher
mvvenkataraman said:
Lovely poem,
A true gem,
Words sparkle
Like stars twinkle!
September 10th, 2022 10:56
mvvenkataraman said:
Lovely poem,
A true gem,
Words sparkle
Like stars twinkle!
September 10th, 2022 10:56
a song
jarcher54 said:
PS Your title is a double entendre, because \"song\" is both your subject and your medium. Its a song about song. Good on you!
September 9th, 2022 02:21
jarcher54 said:
PS Your title is a double entendre, because \"song\" is both your subject and your medium. Its a song about song. Good on you!
September 9th, 2022 02:21
a song
jarcher54 said:
I am dubious of your final couplet, but I do appreciate your rendition of the doubt of the everyday writer of his or her competence or genius. Trying to express what a poem, or song, is is always a challenge. Thanks for sharing your unvarnished thoughts on the matter, with sincerity and wit.
September 9th, 2022 02:20
jarcher54 said:
I am dubious of your final couplet, but I do appreciate your rendition of the doubt of the everyday writer of his or her competence or genius. Trying to express what a poem, or song, is is always a challenge. Thanks for sharing your unvarnished thoughts on the matter, with sincerity and wit.
September 9th, 2022 02:20
a song
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A beautiful poem of nature, poetry and God\'s art acknowledged. Kudos!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
September 9th, 2022 01:13
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A beautiful poem of nature, poetry and God\'s art acknowledged. Kudos!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
September 9th, 2022 01:13
My shadow
Aradhya said:
i loved how you breathed life in the shadow and made me remember to appreciate everything in life, even the seemingly most unimportant ones just like a shadow. it accompanies us for life. beautifully done dear poetess!
August 24th, 2022 08:58
Aradhya said:
i loved how you breathed life in the shadow and made me remember to appreciate everything in life, even the seemingly most unimportant ones just like a shadow. it accompanies us for life. beautifully done dear poetess!
August 24th, 2022 08:58
Submit
dusk arising said:
Very true so long as you dont let the man made organised religion get in the way.
But \'he\' is a very outdated word along with silly ones like lord and saviour which are just man made affectations.
August 14th, 2022 01:15
dusk arising said:
Very true so long as you dont let the man made organised religion get in the way.
But \'he\' is a very outdated word along with silly ones like lord and saviour which are just man made affectations.
August 14th, 2022 01:15
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