Comments received on poems by NafisaSB
Water
Doggerel Dave said:
The promise, apparently is that as the world heats more evaporation and hence increased rain. And in Sydney it is quite possible to believe that, as for the past several months more rain has poured down than we can possibly need. However, it appears that this effect is not evenly distributed....
Your poem has more content though, as you point to the general disregard of the environment which for the moment seems universal except for small scattered efforts. Thanks for that.
August 20th, 2024 23:49
Doggerel Dave said:
The promise, apparently is that as the world heats more evaporation and hence increased rain. And in Sydney it is quite possible to believe that, as for the past several months more rain has poured down than we can possibly need. However, it appears that this effect is not evenly distributed....
Your poem has more content though, as you point to the general disregard of the environment which for the moment seems universal except for small scattered efforts. Thanks for that.
August 20th, 2024 23:49
i will dance..
sorenbarrett said:
A great message sent in such a brief passage and cleverly written as well.
August 18th, 2024 06:41
sorenbarrett said:
A great message sent in such a brief passage and cleverly written as well.
August 18th, 2024 06:41
White hair
Doggerel Dave said:
You stay with it Girl - I\'m sure your hair has texture and grace.
August 11th, 2024 08:13
Doggerel Dave said:
You stay with it Girl - I\'m sure your hair has texture and grace.
August 11th, 2024 08:13
White hair
Cassie58 said:
I don’t dye mine either Safina. Happy to let nature take its course. I like my grey. Good health is far more important than hair colour. Enjoy yourself, come what may, is sage advice in this finely penned poem. Happy Sunday.
August 11th, 2024 01:53
Cassie58 said:
I don’t dye mine either Safina. Happy to let nature take its course. I like my grey. Good health is far more important than hair colour. Enjoy yourself, come what may, is sage advice in this finely penned poem. Happy Sunday.
August 11th, 2024 01:53
A hug
sorenbarrett said:
True statements here holding someone close promotes union and a sense of security. Nicely said.
August 4th, 2024 05:35
sorenbarrett said:
True statements here holding someone close promotes union and a sense of security. Nicely said.
August 4th, 2024 05:35
A hug
Cassie58 said:
Really nice sentiment to share here for friendship day. A hug is so warming. Sending a virtual one to you dear poet and flowers too.
((. )) 💐
August 4th, 2024 01:15
Cassie58 said:
Really nice sentiment to share here for friendship day. A hug is so warming. Sending a virtual one to you dear poet and flowers too.
((. )) 💐
August 4th, 2024 01:15
The leaves
Doggerel Dave said:
Where I live too many people want to sweep them up into a bin. The trees they come from are older than the concrete paths which are swept.
I enjoy the multicolours of autumn.
Well painted picture you\'ve written.
July 10th, 2024 23:39
Doggerel Dave said:
Where I live too many people want to sweep them up into a bin. The trees they come from are older than the concrete paths which are swept.
I enjoy the multicolours of autumn.
Well painted picture you\'ve written.
July 10th, 2024 23:39
The country child
sheta said:
its amazing safina!!!!
i hope to see another poem soon!!!!!
July 7th, 2024 22:47
sheta said:
its amazing safina!!!!
i hope to see another poem soon!!!!!
July 7th, 2024 22:47
The country child
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Yep, there\'s always room to be a leader, though. Thanks Nafisa.
July 7th, 2024 09:57
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Yep, there\'s always room to be a leader, though. Thanks Nafisa.
July 7th, 2024 09:57
The country child
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
I must be rare in that case. Found one... Myself, lol. Good write!
July 7th, 2024 01:03
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
I must be rare in that case. Found one... Myself, lol. Good write!
July 7th, 2024 01:03
The Lake
MendedFences27 said:
Wonderful descriptions and imagery.
It seemed a peaceful lake, yet one must be wary where one walks. Was this reflective of something you saw, or something created from your imagination? - Phil A.
July 5th, 2024 15:14
MendedFences27 said:
Wonderful descriptions and imagery.
It seemed a peaceful lake, yet one must be wary where one walks. Was this reflective of something you saw, or something created from your imagination? - Phil A.
July 5th, 2024 15:14
What is love
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes, most of those would be love and not infatuation. Most take time to build and mature; they are not ephemeral.
July 2nd, 2024 01:54
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes, most of those would be love and not infatuation. Most take time to build and mature; they are not ephemeral.
July 2nd, 2024 01:54
the cycle ride
Doggerel Dave said:
No broken bones? The very first time I mastered the bicycle was a revelation. Good memory invoked. Many thanks.
July 1st, 2024 18:51
Doggerel Dave said:
No broken bones? The very first time I mastered the bicycle was a revelation. Good memory invoked. Many thanks.
July 1st, 2024 18:51
the cycle ride
sorenbarrett said:
An exuberant and joyful read and ride. Very nice and light hearted.
July 1st, 2024 08:09
sorenbarrett said:
An exuberant and joyful read and ride. Very nice and light hearted.
July 1st, 2024 08:09
The beauty of Ooty
Cassie58 said:
You took me there with your beautiful poetry. I enjoyed the visit very much. Such beauty in your mountains and valleys. A lovely write. Thank you dear poet.
June 30th, 2024 02:52
Cassie58 said:
You took me there with your beautiful poetry. I enjoyed the visit very much. Such beauty in your mountains and valleys. A lovely write. Thank you dear poet.
June 30th, 2024 02:52
Sailing on the sea
Cassie58 said:
The ocean holds many moods and many adventures. I like where you took me here. Nicely penned dear poet.
June 29th, 2024 05:41
Cassie58 said:
The ocean holds many moods and many adventures. I like where you took me here. Nicely penned dear poet.
June 29th, 2024 05:41
Rural life
NafisaSB said:
Thank you. One item on my bucket list was a small bungalow in the countryside. Now that we have shifted to a high rise tower in a bustling city like Mumbai I think it will remain a pipe dream , though am happy where life has brought me
June 25th, 2024 09:46
NafisaSB said:
Thank you. One item on my bucket list was a small bungalow in the countryside. Now that we have shifted to a high rise tower in a bustling city like Mumbai I think it will remain a pipe dream , though am happy where life has brought me
June 25th, 2024 09:46
Rural life
sorenbarrett said:
The imagery is such that I feel that I am there. Peaceful and beautiful. I have washed my cloths on a board in a hollow log and identify with a rustic life. I identify with the gong from the church having heard the church bell from a distant small country church. Happiness and less strife for sure. So nicely written it brings happiness to the soul.
June 25th, 2024 09:04
sorenbarrett said:
The imagery is such that I feel that I am there. Peaceful and beautiful. I have washed my cloths on a board in a hollow log and identify with a rustic life. I identify with the gong from the church having heard the church bell from a distant small country church. Happiness and less strife for sure. So nicely written it brings happiness to the soul.
June 25th, 2024 09:04
Rural life
Neilton said:
ah simple life without technology .perfect discription!
June 25th, 2024 08:15
Neilton said:
ah simple life without technology .perfect discription!
June 25th, 2024 08:15
Puddles
Cassie58 said:
Rain when there has been drought, such a blessing. Even those muddy puddles look good. Beautiful description here in your lines. All good wishes.
June 21st, 2024 02:42
Cassie58 said:
Rain when there has been drought, such a blessing. Even those muddy puddles look good. Beautiful description here in your lines. All good wishes.
June 21st, 2024 02:42
Rain,rain,rain
Cassie58 said:
I’ve heard the monsoon season is a blessing for scorched earth. I can imagine everything bursting into life after the downpours. A visually pleasing poem. Lovely work.
June 20th, 2024 00:07
Cassie58 said:
I’ve heard the monsoon season is a blessing for scorched earth. I can imagine everything bursting into life after the downpours. A visually pleasing poem. Lovely work.
June 20th, 2024 00:07
Rain,rain,rain
Doggerel Dave said:
If rain is what you want and need, I\'m happy for you.... sometimes though know it is quite possible to have too much of a good thing.....LOL
June 19th, 2024 07:56
Doggerel Dave said:
If rain is what you want and need, I\'m happy for you.... sometimes though know it is quite possible to have too much of a good thing.....LOL
June 19th, 2024 07:56
My treasure trove
Cassie58 said:
Rich in imagery and meaning. Money isn’t everything. Much enjoyed NafisaSB. Have a beautiful day.
June 18th, 2024 07:32
Cassie58 said:
Rich in imagery and meaning. Money isn’t everything. Much enjoyed NafisaSB. Have a beautiful day.
June 18th, 2024 07:32
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