Comments received on poems by NafisaSB
The leaves
sorenbarrett said:
So well written this poem introduces a metaphor or girls and leaves as well. Love the rhyme and the flow of the poem it dances like the leaves in a breeze.
October 24th, 2024 05:12
sorenbarrett said:
So well written this poem introduces a metaphor or girls and leaves as well. Love the rhyme and the flow of the poem it dances like the leaves in a breeze.
October 24th, 2024 05:12
Fascinating colors
Neville said:
Lobsters are only red when they are dead, a bit like old poets books really .. A fun read indeed, my literary friend .. Neville
October 24th, 2024 00:34
Neville said:
Lobsters are only red when they are dead, a bit like old poets books really .. A fun read indeed, my literary friend .. Neville
October 24th, 2024 00:34
Emancipation
Neville said:
I sincerely hope that many will come to this place and worship the words you have laid here before them .. it would be a crying shame if your message was not heard, and understood by the masses .. Neville
October 21st, 2024 03:32
Neville said:
I sincerely hope that many will come to this place and worship the words you have laid here before them .. it would be a crying shame if your message was not heard, and understood by the masses .. Neville
October 21st, 2024 03:32
3 parts of a man
Neville said:
This is a very ambitious post and I think under the circumstances you have excelled and probably achieved your objectives .. kindest of regards, Neville
October 21st, 2024 03:28
Neville said:
This is a very ambitious post and I think under the circumstances you have excelled and probably achieved your objectives .. kindest of regards, Neville
October 21st, 2024 03:28
3 parts of a man
sorenbarrett said:
A great insight into the nature of the human being who like some animals, swells up to appear bigger than he is and sometimes to attract a mate. The three forms you presented are an interesting breakdown of how people have false presentations nicely done
October 20th, 2024 05:42
sorenbarrett said:
A great insight into the nature of the human being who like some animals, swells up to appear bigger than he is and sometimes to attract a mate. The three forms you presented are an interesting breakdown of how people have false presentations nicely done
October 20th, 2024 05:42
Diplomacy
sorenbarrett said:
I agree diplomats are a part of government which I find a necessary evil in a world of too many people. I can hear the anger and revultion in this poem and it rings all the way through. It is powerful and sounds its bell. Nicely done
October 19th, 2024 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
I agree diplomats are a part of government which I find a necessary evil in a world of too many people. I can hear the anger and revultion in this poem and it rings all the way through. It is powerful and sounds its bell. Nicely done
October 19th, 2024 05:05
\"U\" AND \"I\"
Neville said:
On a grey day like today, these words of yours brought a little ray of sunshine with them .. IOU for the gift of that .. Neville
October 19th, 2024 02:13
Neville said:
On a grey day like today, these words of yours brought a little ray of sunshine with them .. IOU for the gift of that .. Neville
October 19th, 2024 02:13
Emancipation
Doggerel Dave said:
I understand and acknowledge the rich scene you hint at. It is a note of optimism all should encompass despite the dark times present right now..
Thanks for the read.
October 17th, 2024 08:19
Doggerel Dave said:
I understand and acknowledge the rich scene you hint at. It is a note of optimism all should encompass despite the dark times present right now..
Thanks for the read.
October 17th, 2024 08:19
Fascinating colors
sorenbarrett said:
Your poems deserve more reads they are really well metered and rhymed and the messages are well thought out
October 17th, 2024 06:48
sorenbarrett said:
Your poems deserve more reads they are really well metered and rhymed and the messages are well thought out
October 17th, 2024 06:48
Emancipation
sorenbarrett said:
Such a smooth flow of words with rhyme to accompany the meter. All with a great message becomes a symphony of a poem
October 17th, 2024 06:37
sorenbarrett said:
Such a smooth flow of words with rhyme to accompany the meter. All with a great message becomes a symphony of a poem
October 17th, 2024 06:37
\"U\" AND \"I\"
sorenbarrett said:
Creative the use of letters to represent words and a sweet message of unity in this similarity.
October 17th, 2024 06:15
sorenbarrett said:
Creative the use of letters to represent words and a sweet message of unity in this similarity.
October 17th, 2024 06:15
Twain will meet..
sorenbarrett said:
Ambition and arrogance are a major human flaw that can lead to a disasterous fall. So well personified and a good metaphor.
October 4th, 2024 05:14
sorenbarrett said:
Ambition and arrogance are a major human flaw that can lead to a disasterous fall. So well personified and a good metaphor.
October 4th, 2024 05:14
Twain will meet..
Neville said:
Q) who could possibly arrive here and leave again without
1) being impressed
2) hitting the heart shaped icon
3) leaving their kindest regards
A) I doubt if anybody could ..
Kindest Regards, Neville
October 4th, 2024 01:58
Neville said:
Q) who could possibly arrive here and leave again without
1) being impressed
2) hitting the heart shaped icon
3) leaving their kindest regards
A) I doubt if anybody could ..
Kindest Regards, Neville
October 4th, 2024 01:58
Fascinating colors
Cassie58 said:
A shade palette. I love all those names when I am searching for colours to paint my walls. They all sound so poetic. Frost white is poetry lol. I mean plain white is positively dull and boring. A beautiful poem Safina. Much enjoyed. Hope all is well with you.
September 26th, 2024 08:43
Cassie58 said:
A shade palette. I love all those names when I am searching for colours to paint my walls. They all sound so poetic. Frost white is poetry lol. I mean plain white is positively dull and boring. A beautiful poem Safina. Much enjoyed. Hope all is well with you.
September 26th, 2024 08:43
Fascinating colors
Doggerel Dave said:
I think you have just cracked it immediately above here: (Become a big company\'s marketing manager). Rename at least some of them \"Subtle Blue\", \"Subtle Green\", etc....
Thanks for a fun write.
September 25th, 2024 09:35
Doggerel Dave said:
I think you have just cracked it immediately above here: (Become a big company\'s marketing manager). Rename at least some of them \"Subtle Blue\", \"Subtle Green\", etc....
Thanks for a fun write.
September 25th, 2024 09:35
\'Eyes\'
Thad Wilk said:
A delightful poem
great brevity!! 👍
A treat to read;
love it, 😍
penned superbly!✌️
Best wishes 🍀 🤗 🌹 Thad
September 17th, 2024 08:48
Thad Wilk said:
A delightful poem
great brevity!! 👍
A treat to read;
love it, 😍
penned superbly!✌️
Best wishes 🍀 🤗 🌹 Thad
September 17th, 2024 08:48
On war..
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words Children show anger but not hatred that has to be taught.
September 17th, 2024 03:08
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words Children show anger but not hatred that has to be taught.
September 17th, 2024 03:08
\'Eyes\'
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully said in most poetic form. Short and in this case less is more.
September 17th, 2024 03:05
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully said in most poetic form. Short and in this case less is more.
September 17th, 2024 03:05
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