Comments received on poems by Lyriclitty
Do it
Aleme Kao Gammo said:
amazing poem for adversity, it is important to live in courage, don\'t finish the mettle inside . Thought provoking lines in general.
December 6th, 2023 06:51
Aleme Kao Gammo said:
amazing poem for adversity, it is important to live in courage, don\'t finish the mettle inside . Thought provoking lines in general.
December 6th, 2023 06:51
Titillate my duality
Bobby O said:
This, Dear Poet, is excellent on several levels. “But not afraid to conquer the walls of hesitation” , How freakin cool is that ? And that Ninja technique, starting w a rose a thorn a pain/ pleasure comparing to life has real chance of only living in a place of phrase that is familiar, instead ( back to the Ninja thing) you laid in the weeds lulling snd leaving my non exercised anticipation hidden in the closet. But then, Those last mine lines released, challenging to get up to speed cuz you got no mercy for duffers with ill conceived predisposition. I barely caught up and glad I did cuz I so enjoyed a satisfying moment. Thanks and I’m a fan!!
May 10th, 2023 20:26
Bobby O said:
This, Dear Poet, is excellent on several levels. “But not afraid to conquer the walls of hesitation” , How freakin cool is that ? And that Ninja technique, starting w a rose a thorn a pain/ pleasure comparing to life has real chance of only living in a place of phrase that is familiar, instead ( back to the Ninja thing) you laid in the weeds lulling snd leaving my non exercised anticipation hidden in the closet. But then, Those last mine lines released, challenging to get up to speed cuz you got no mercy for duffers with ill conceived predisposition. I barely caught up and glad I did cuz I so enjoyed a satisfying moment. Thanks and I’m a fan!!
May 10th, 2023 20:26
Work of art
L. B. Mek said:
more, than a Picasso
because your originality
never came at the cost of a continent\'s
stolen heritage..
(wonderfully empowering words
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
stay You, stay Beautiful!
August 1st, 2022 03:20
L. B. Mek said:
more, than a Picasso
because your originality
never came at the cost of a continent\'s
stolen heritage..
(wonderfully empowering words
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
stay You, stay Beautiful!
August 1st, 2022 03:20
Unsourced state of mind
Lyriclitty said:
When I said not selfish love..
I was referring to how what people are mostly looking to receive love not give it
And looking for validation from everyone out side themselves
So I choose to embrace and appreciate myself first then extend that virtue to others I respect. Respect is a powerful word :
a feeling of deep admiration for someone or something elicited by their abilities, qualities, or achievements.
We should care more about the characteristics of a person and help them to fullfill their desires, not just want someone to be consumed in your own desire to feed your ego.
Respect ✊🏽 Is stronger than feelings
Because it is based upon concrete examples that can’t be denied.
Yeah that was a typo I know, know from now lol
November 29th, 2021 08:10
Lyriclitty said:
When I said not selfish love..
I was referring to how what people are mostly looking to receive love not give it
And looking for validation from everyone out side themselves
So I choose to embrace and appreciate myself first then extend that virtue to others I respect. Respect is a powerful word :
a feeling of deep admiration for someone or something elicited by their abilities, qualities, or achievements.
We should care more about the characteristics of a person and help them to fullfill their desires, not just want someone to be consumed in your own desire to feed your ego.
Respect ✊🏽 Is stronger than feelings
Because it is based upon concrete examples that can’t be denied.
Yeah that was a typo I know, know from now lol
November 29th, 2021 08:10
Unsourced state of mind
L. B. Mek said:
something different, for sure
owning, our intuitive selfishness
as a trait, to cement
our survival
of this chaotic world..
maybe that\'s an eventuality
we\'ll all
have to embrace someday..
thanks for sharing!
(just checking, but was \'now\'
spelt as \'know\', on purpose
or was it, that evil spellcheck
we all suffer from) lol
November 29th, 2021 07:42
L. B. Mek said:
something different, for sure
owning, our intuitive selfishness
as a trait, to cement
our survival
of this chaotic world..
maybe that\'s an eventuality
we\'ll all
have to embrace someday..
thanks for sharing!
(just checking, but was \'now\'
spelt as \'know\', on purpose
or was it, that evil spellcheck
we all suffer from) lol
November 29th, 2021 07:42
Pharmaceutical Russian roulette
jayb_garang said:
My hope is that you find it
November 24th, 2021 05:00
jayb_garang said:
My hope is that you find it
November 24th, 2021 05:00
We heal one another
L. B. Mek said:
that melted gold of goodness
bridging the gaps in our fallible nature,
thanks for sharing
October 28th, 2021 03:50
L. B. Mek said:
that melted gold of goodness
bridging the gaps in our fallible nature,
thanks for sharing
October 28th, 2021 03:50
Zen state of mind
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I love it when I feel peaceful … it’s such a nice feeling .
I like your poem 🙂
October 28th, 2021 02:15
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I love it when I feel peaceful … it’s such a nice feeling .
I like your poem 🙂
October 28th, 2021 02:15
We heal one another
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Love this … two broken pieces making a whole . Love can be so powerful .
Good poem )
October 28th, 2021 02:07
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Love this … two broken pieces making a whole . Love can be so powerful .
Good poem )
October 28th, 2021 02:07
Pharmaceutical Russian roulette
Floreann said:
One excellent write deep with emotion..
October 22nd, 2021 07:23
Floreann said:
One excellent write deep with emotion..
October 22nd, 2021 07:23
Pharmaceutical Russian roulette
L. B. Mek said:
I like your use of repetition, to highlight the despair element in your write,
allows for a more meaningful reading experience,
thanks for choosing to share
October 22nd, 2021 04:16
L. B. Mek said:
I like your use of repetition, to highlight the despair element in your write,
allows for a more meaningful reading experience,
thanks for choosing to share
October 22nd, 2021 04:16
Pharmaceutical Russian roulette
Thekkinkkattil said:
You have penned your emotions very well and very poetic.Take this route and all the problems will go away.Use your talent to gain health
October 21st, 2021 23:54
Thekkinkkattil said:
You have penned your emotions very well and very poetic.Take this route and all the problems will go away.Use your talent to gain health
October 21st, 2021 23:54
Zen state of mind
L. B. Mek said:
\'choose peace over chaos\'
Amen!
thanks for sharing
October 1st, 2021 04:01
L. B. Mek said:
\'choose peace over chaos\'
Amen!
thanks for sharing
October 1st, 2021 04:01
Zen state of mind
Goldfinch60 said:
May that peace fill us all.
Welcome to MPS.
October 1st, 2021 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
May that peace fill us all.
Welcome to MPS.
October 1st, 2021 00:53
