Comments received on poems by Firefall



Night Wanderings
sorenbarrett said:

A lovely poem that personifies nature and makes this holy siren a living soul. Lovely

June 20th, 2025 13:51

Silver Threads
arqios said:

As a child I had separation anxiety and abandonment issues, having been handed over from relative to relative. It makes me ask if the post cocoon beauty is worth all that... but in hindsight, I guess it truly is, without meaning to condone the practise. Beautiful work here. A Fave 🤩

June 18th, 2025 17:36

Silver Threads
Poetic Licence said:

A heart surrounded by another persons broken word and promises, the only way to be free is to do it themselves, enjoyed the read

June 18th, 2025 16:09

Silver Threads
sorenbarrett said:

Separation requires a metamorphosis at times. A lovely write.

June 18th, 2025 14:09

Will we meet again?
sorenbarrett said:

We all have those moments when someone touchs our heart and if not acted on they prey upon our mind. Fantasies are built as time passes and they won\'t let us go. All this comes through in this poem of a most haunting nature. Good write

January 30th, 2025 13:21

Will we meet again?
orchidee said:

Yes, we\'ll meet again, you and I.
But how? We\'ve not even met to start with. How will we know what each other looks like?! heehee.

July 25th, 2024 01:17

Will we meet again?
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent.

July 22nd, 2024 18:00

Will we meet again?
Firefall said:

Thank you! I appreciate your kind words.

July 22nd, 2024 15:00

False Spring
Firefall said:

Thank you!

July 22nd, 2024 14:59

False Spring
Caring dove said:

Love the mention of nature in your poem about love . Lovely way with words Liked the read

July 22nd, 2024 14:57

Will we meet again?
Caring dove said:

Sad yet beautiful way with words .. nice flow to your poem too

July 22nd, 2024 14:55

False Spring
Firefall said:

Thank you. I appreciate your kind words.

March 5th, 2024 16:07

False Spring
sorenbarrett said:

The analogy was a good one and was unexpected despite the title. Nicely done.

March 5th, 2024 15:14

The Beat Goes On
sorenbarrett said:

Sad and yet hopeful. Short and to the point. It sends its message well.

January 21st, 2024 03:52

Self Deception
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful.

November 18th, 2023 20:33

Guilt of Longing
Firefall said:

Thank you! I really appreciate your feedback.

November 18th, 2023 20:31

Guilt of Longing
jarcher54 said:

A fine soliloquy, simple and honest, very universal. Those fading sensations, like the missed scent of a lost pet or the fading recollection of your grandmother\'s face, are indeed painful. We also miss the scent, taste, and touch. The line \"It\'s either the loveliest dream or never-ending nightmare\" is brilliant.

November 18th, 2023 19:14

Summer Memories
Muse Gong said:

Nice memory.

November 18th, 2023 06:23

Autumn\'s Kiss
arqios said:

Nothing like a seal from someone that is dear! TFS

November 16th, 2023 09:09

Autumn\'s Kiss
orchidee said:

A fine write F.

November 16th, 2023 02:59

Lost Love Found
Muse Gong said:

What a beauty.

November 14th, 2023 21:55

Autumn\'s Kiss
Bella Shepard said:

Autumn is my favorite time of the year, and you have so exquisitely framed it around this tale of love. Beautiful imagery paints this wonderful scene, and the last line is icing on the cake. Loved every line!

November 8th, 2023 11:57

Sinking into Sadness
jarcher54 said:

Your poems are consistently rewarding. Simple on the surface, sincere and deep in meaning.

November 4th, 2023 20:36

Autumn\'s Kiss
Muse Gong said:

lovely

November 3rd, 2023 20:07

Autumn\'s Kiss
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous.

November 3rd, 2023 17:06

Autumn\'s Kiss
Caring dove said:

Beautiful writing ))

November 3rd, 2023 17:04

After Midnight
Thomas W Case said:

Totally relate. Superb.

November 3rd, 2023 16:59

Guilt of Longing
sorenbarrett said:

A strong poem with a sense of loss.

October 26th, 2023 11:12

Guilt of Longing
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful. The pain and longing are palpable.

October 17th, 2023 16:07

After Midnight
L. B. Mek said:

I really like this poem dear Poet
\'I measure the rhythm of my pain
Hoping to numb the ache
But each pulse echoes your name
And what I gave up for love\'s sake\'
Brilliant poetry, thank you again!

September 29th, 2023 04:29

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