Comments received on poems by Firefall
False Spring
sorenbarrett said:
The analogy was a good one and was unexpected despite the title. Nicely done.
March 5th, 2024 15:14
sorenbarrett said:
The analogy was a good one and was unexpected despite the title. Nicely done.
March 5th, 2024 15:14
The Beat Goes On
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and yet hopeful. Short and to the point. It sends its message well.
January 21st, 2024 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and yet hopeful. Short and to the point. It sends its message well.
January 21st, 2024 03:52
Guilt of Longing
Firefall said:
Thank you! I really appreciate your feedback.
November 18th, 2023 20:31
Firefall said:
Thank you! I really appreciate your feedback.
November 18th, 2023 20:31
Guilt of Longing
jarcher54 said:
A fine soliloquy, simple and honest, very universal. Those fading sensations, like the missed scent of a lost pet or the fading recollection of your grandmother\'s face, are indeed painful. We also miss the scent, taste, and touch. The line \"It\'s either the loveliest dream or never-ending nightmare\" is brilliant.
November 18th, 2023 19:14
jarcher54 said:
A fine soliloquy, simple and honest, very universal. Those fading sensations, like the missed scent of a lost pet or the fading recollection of your grandmother\'s face, are indeed painful. We also miss the scent, taste, and touch. The line \"It\'s either the loveliest dream or never-ending nightmare\" is brilliant.
November 18th, 2023 19:14
Autumn\'s Kiss
arqios said:
Nothing like a seal from someone that is dear! TFS
November 16th, 2023 09:09
arqios said:
Nothing like a seal from someone that is dear! TFS
November 16th, 2023 09:09
Autumn\'s Kiss
Bella Shepard said:
Autumn is my favorite time of the year, and you have so exquisitely framed it around this tale of love. Beautiful imagery paints this wonderful scene, and the last line is icing on the cake. Loved every line!
November 8th, 2023 11:57
Bella Shepard said:
Autumn is my favorite time of the year, and you have so exquisitely framed it around this tale of love. Beautiful imagery paints this wonderful scene, and the last line is icing on the cake. Loved every line!
November 8th, 2023 11:57
Sinking into Sadness
jarcher54 said:
Your poems are consistently rewarding. Simple on the surface, sincere and deep in meaning.
November 4th, 2023 20:36
jarcher54 said:
Your poems are consistently rewarding. Simple on the surface, sincere and deep in meaning.
November 4th, 2023 20:36
Autumn\'s Kiss
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful writing ))
November 3rd, 2023 17:04
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful writing ))
November 3rd, 2023 17:04
Guilt of Longing
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful. The pain and longing are palpable.
October 17th, 2023 16:07
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful. The pain and longing are palpable.
October 17th, 2023 16:07
After Midnight
L. B. Mek said:
I really like this poem dear Poet
\'I measure the rhythm of my pain
Hoping to numb the ache
But each pulse echoes your name
And what I gave up for love\'s sake\'
Brilliant poetry, thank you again!
September 29th, 2023 04:29
L. B. Mek said:
I really like this poem dear Poet
\'I measure the rhythm of my pain
Hoping to numb the ache
But each pulse echoes your name
And what I gave up for love\'s sake\'
Brilliant poetry, thank you again!
September 29th, 2023 04:29
After Midnight
L. B. Mek said:
so relatable, thanks for sharing
I can\'t help remembering
a song by Nikki titled \'urs\'
(
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3o0N2n-k4vc
)
September 22nd, 2023 05:28
L. B. Mek said:
so relatable, thanks for sharing
I can\'t help remembering
a song by Nikki titled \'urs\'
(
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3o0N2n-k4vc
)
September 22nd, 2023 05:28
Another Chance
Pop64 said:
An emotional piece about having, letting go and possibility of having again. Life and love can be a roller coaster at times. Very well expressed.
August 25th, 2023 16:06
Pop64 said:
An emotional piece about having, letting go and possibility of having again. Life and love can be a roller coaster at times. Very well expressed.
August 25th, 2023 16:06
Summer Memories
L. B. Mek said:
a Beautiful read
especially like how there\'s no preamble
your lines dive straight in and never surfaced
till you painted your vividly succinct scene..
thank you for sharing, dear poet
what a great showcasing of your wonderful talent
August 25th, 2023 00:09
L. B. Mek said:
a Beautiful read
especially like how there\'s no preamble
your lines dive straight in and never surfaced
till you painted your vividly succinct scene..
thank you for sharing, dear poet
what a great showcasing of your wonderful talent
August 25th, 2023 00:09
Just One Word
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful writing )
June 26th, 2023 11:28
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful writing )
June 26th, 2023 11:28
Timeless Abyss
L. B. Mek said:
this that resolve of love\'s ideal
loyalty, as guaranteed
as breath to a heartbeat
forever, as a promise
anchored
upon unwavering sincerity..
(a great shorty, dear Poet)
June 16th, 2023 01:49
L. B. Mek said:
this that resolve of love\'s ideal
loyalty, as guaranteed
as breath to a heartbeat
forever, as a promise
anchored
upon unwavering sincerity..
(a great shorty, dear Poet)
June 16th, 2023 01:49
Timeless Abyss
sorenbarrett said:
A thought that many of us have had put into a few concise poetic words.
June 3rd, 2023 06:27
sorenbarrett said:
A thought that many of us have had put into a few concise poetic words.
June 3rd, 2023 06:27
Firefly
L. B. Mek said:
Beautiful!
\'the more ephemeral
the more, precious
the more inspirational\'
Thank you!
May 29th, 2023 01:20
L. B. Mek said:
Beautiful!
\'the more ephemeral
the more, precious
the more inspirational\'
Thank you!
May 29th, 2023 01:20
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