Comments received on poems by Jade Wolf
We rage against the norms
G84 said:
love this, i feel the same ive wrote similar poems too. good job with the write love anything that expresses the same frustrations i have with modern society
July 8th, 2022 12:19
G84 said:
love this, i feel the same ive wrote similar poems too. good job with the write love anything that expresses the same frustrations i have with modern society
July 8th, 2022 12:19
We rage against the norms
L. B. Mek said:
I think i will watch some Matrix
this weekend
spend a few hours, dodging
invisible bullets
to remind myself of the time\'s
when words, like yours
would have felt, so empowering
to read..
but sadly
at this point of a splintered heart
perspective, on life
I have come to realise, run
or escape, as far as we may
that mirror, tapestry
of soul crushing societal
disappointments, exist
everywhere and anywhere
since
we can\'t, outrun
ourselves..
so yes, we can escape
from those
who cause us pain
but, escaping boredom
or repetitions
monotonous routines
is a little harder, to accomplish
\'in my humble, opinion\'
best, maybe
to Awaken, ourselves
to those traits, within ourselves
that make us feel
like, there\'s something wrong
with normality..
that existing
without pain and suffering
is a burden..
once we get to the bottom
of those, truth\'s
then should we choose
to run, hide or \'Awaken\'
we\'ll have a better chance
to aspire, towards
that which offers us, a glimpse
of that something more
we seem to be looking for...
July 8th, 2022 04:08
L. B. Mek said:
I think i will watch some Matrix
this weekend
spend a few hours, dodging
invisible bullets
to remind myself of the time\'s
when words, like yours
would have felt, so empowering
to read..
but sadly
at this point of a splintered heart
perspective, on life
I have come to realise, run
or escape, as far as we may
that mirror, tapestry
of soul crushing societal
disappointments, exist
everywhere and anywhere
since
we can\'t, outrun
ourselves..
so yes, we can escape
from those
who cause us pain
but, escaping boredom
or repetitions
monotonous routines
is a little harder, to accomplish
\'in my humble, opinion\'
best, maybe
to Awaken, ourselves
to those traits, within ourselves
that make us feel
like, there\'s something wrong
with normality..
that existing
without pain and suffering
is a burden..
once we get to the bottom
of those, truth\'s
then should we choose
to run, hide or \'Awaken\'
we\'ll have a better chance
to aspire, towards
that which offers us, a glimpse
of that something more
we seem to be looking for...
July 8th, 2022 04:08
Broken dreams
KRWonder said:
A lovely though sad brevity with powerful words. You’ve uniquely captured an entire world in this.
March 10th, 2022 21:59
KRWonder said:
A lovely though sad brevity with powerful words. You’ve uniquely captured an entire world in this.
March 10th, 2022 21:59
Children of the wild
KRWonder said:
The last two stanzas really captured me and the words spoken could not be more true. It is an awful thing when one loses the ability to dream. This was a beautiful piece you’ve put together and I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing!
March 10th, 2022 21:57
KRWonder said:
The last two stanzas really captured me and the words spoken could not be more true. It is an awful thing when one loses the ability to dream. This was a beautiful piece you’ve put together and I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing!
March 10th, 2022 21:57
Children of the wild
Rocky Lagou said:
What a gracious piece! I love the imagery you portrayed and I feel like the meaning is universal. We\'re always little dreamers wishing and hoping for so much more, but often times, the world is against us. Great job! 💖
March 2nd, 2022 11:35
Rocky Lagou said:
What a gracious piece! I love the imagery you portrayed and I feel like the meaning is universal. We\'re always little dreamers wishing and hoping for so much more, but often times, the world is against us. Great job! 💖
March 2nd, 2022 11:35
Broken dreams
Draven said:
I love this!! I have such a picture in my mind from these words. Well done
December 20th, 2021 22:11
Draven said:
I love this!! I have such a picture in my mind from these words. Well done
December 20th, 2021 22:11
Broken dreams
Jade Wolf said:
Thats exactly what i wanted this piece to convey... \"the other side of the coin\"... everybody is so wrapped up in themselves that nobody even stops to think about those who live that life... people throw them a few coins or old clothes and think its done... but no, they still suffer.. they still dream.. just like we do... but their dreams just get smothered and choked inside their heads...
December 20th, 2021 15:43
Jade Wolf said:
Thats exactly what i wanted this piece to convey... \"the other side of the coin\"... everybody is so wrapped up in themselves that nobody even stops to think about those who live that life... people throw them a few coins or old clothes and think its done... but no, they still suffer.. they still dream.. just like we do... but their dreams just get smothered and choked inside their heads...
December 20th, 2021 15:43
Broken dreams
Paul Bell said:
Probably not just the diner, either, the gutter is never faraway in the land of broken dreams.
December 20th, 2021 13:23
Paul Bell said:
Probably not just the diner, either, the gutter is never faraway in the land of broken dreams.
December 20th, 2021 13:23
Broken dreams
L. B. Mek said:
as important
as it is eloquent, a great write!
(an issue
that we lucky few, need
to be reminded of, especially
at this - gifting, Time of year
indeed:
\'let us share
our empathy, as we do
our wallets...\')
December 20th, 2021 06:32
L. B. Mek said:
as important
as it is eloquent, a great write!
(an issue
that we lucky few, need
to be reminded of, especially
at this - gifting, Time of year
indeed:
\'let us share
our empathy, as we do
our wallets...\')
December 20th, 2021 06:32
Requiem for love
Caring dove said:
Lovely poem , nice flow ) I like your words .,, some people are just not meant to be together ..and are too different
December 17th, 2021 16:52
Caring dove said:
Lovely poem , nice flow ) I like your words .,, some people are just not meant to be together ..and are too different
December 17th, 2021 16:52
The demons within
Nicholas Browning said:
Sinister, realistic, full of metaphor. Quite a nice read. That\'s just what I got from it :P
November 23rd, 2021 11:20
Nicholas Browning said:
Sinister, realistic, full of metaphor. Quite a nice read. That\'s just what I got from it :P
November 23rd, 2021 11:20
I want to write
Goldfinch60 said:
That place is so full of dreams that may become reality one day.
Welcome to MPS.
November 10th, 2021 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
That place is so full of dreams that may become reality one day.
Welcome to MPS.
November 10th, 2021 01:38
I want to write
dusk arising said:
That\'s a place I goto regularly and write about on here..... so lets see some of what you have got please.
Welcome to MPS.
November 9th, 2021 17:23
dusk arising said:
That\'s a place I goto regularly and write about on here..... so lets see some of what you have got please.
Welcome to MPS.
November 9th, 2021 17:23
