Comments received on poems by jim56



valentine verse
Caring dove said:

Never had a’ valentines ‘ lucky people who have ‘ relationships because some people don’t . It’s just another day .. anyway .. load of nonsense really .. they seem to have a day for everything

November 18th, 2024 15:47

dancing parrot
Caring dove said:

You had a friend who had a bearded dragon .. really … ok . I’ve never had one so ..

November 18th, 2024 13:33

miss muffet
Cassie58 said:

You know, I couldn’t kill a spider Jim. In fact I can’t kill anything. I don’t even like stepping on ants. Little Miss Muffet wasn’t very nice to the poor little spider who spins beautiful lace webs for us. Nothing like a cobweb covered in mist, lit up by sunlight. Happy Monday.

November 18th, 2024 13:05

dancing parrot
Caring dove said:

I know someone who had a bearded dragon .. parrots are nice

November 18th, 2024 12:17

night fall
Caring dove said:

Do you play guitar aswell ? Nice writing

November 18th, 2024 12:13

inner peace
NafisaSB said:

i agree with your views..it is all the more necessary in today\'s difficult times - beautiful thought, well expressed

November 18th, 2024 08:43

miss muffet
Caring dove said:

Why write a poem about someone being ‘horrible ‘ to something …

November 18th, 2024 06:44

miss muffet
Caring dove said:

That’s not very nice of her … oh , poor spider ((

November 18th, 2024 06:35

nearly christmas
NafisaSB said:

good write - Christmas - a time of anticipation for the kids to open up their stockings, and see what they got - and for mankind to spread goodwill
Merry X\'mas in advance to you and all fellow poets

November 18th, 2024 00:50

inner peace
Demar Desu said:

Been having some inner turmoil lately, this is nice to read.

November 17th, 2024 08:38

inner peace
Cassie58 said:

So true Jim, but sometimes it takes searching for. Happy Sunday. Cool and blowy, but some nice bright sunshine here. Hope the sun is out for you.

November 17th, 2024 06:52

inner peace
sorenbarrett said:

A most wonderful thought and belief put into poetic form. Lovely

November 17th, 2024 06:40

stay the same
Caring dove said:

Inner child is important but sometimes our inner child can be hurt ( by life )


Well .. age is just a number .


November 16th, 2024 14:53

best friend
Caring dove said:

Animals are lovely .. really

November 16th, 2024 14:37

best friend
Caring dove said:

I like dogs tho prefer cats . I had a friend once who called their dog ‘ spike ‘ we give our pets all sorts of names don’t we .

November 16th, 2024 14:37

cruel and kind
Caring dove said:

It can be confusing can’t it we can be upset in life .. have people being unfair , havjng thjngs go wrong



November 16th, 2024 14:35

nearly christmas
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 16th, 2024 12:48

sincerity
Caring dove said:

Truth is very important .. some people lie ,

November 16th, 2024 09:38

nearly christmas
Cassie58 said:

Hello Jim, another lovely seasonal write. I have been planning a Christmas party for my extended family. Going to be on 28th Dec at our local. Just chosen the buffet. Your beautiful poem reminded me that Christmas is just round the corner. Have a fab Saturday Jim. All good wishes.

November 16th, 2024 09:29

nearly christmas
Caring dove said:

You can give presents at any time if the year ..

November 16th, 2024 08:05

nearly christmas
arqios said:

“It’s the most wonderful time of the year…”

November 16th, 2024 07:18

nearly christmas
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Indeed, while holidays are really hard for some people, for those who enjoy the holidays, the time is filled with a happiness that is usually short-lived. Man would it be nice if that happiness stuck around always. Well written, my friend. 🖤❤️🖤🌹👏

November 16th, 2024 07:15

nearly christmas
Caring dove said:

Can’t always be happy just because we’re ‘ expected to be

I havnt been feeling happy today .. tired

November 16th, 2024 06:41

nearly christmas
Caring dove said:

Some people struggle at Christmas .. I don’t like it to be honest and just because it’s Christmas . It doesn’t take away any problems/

November 16th, 2024 06:40

christmas verse
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wonderful Jim! Just in time for the start of the holiday season! Looking forward to Christmas indeed...though less so the winter weather. 😉 Bravo! 👏🌹

November 15th, 2024 16:27

christmas verse
Tony36 said:

Great write Jim

November 15th, 2024 10:51

christmas verse
sorenbarrett said:



November 15th, 2024 09:08

christmas verse
sorenbarrett said:

A joyful Christmas poem coined out of many almost familiar lines that have been bent into your own original verse wonderful

November 15th, 2024 09:08

christmas verse
Cassie58 said:

Plenty of warm and colorful Christmas imagery here Jim. Open fires are wonderful and I do love carol singing as it gets nearer to the event. A special time of year especially for children. A lovely poem. Have a happy Friday.

November 15th, 2024 08:24

all the lonely people
sorenbarrett said:

Alienation is a problem for many. This poem tells well the sense of isolation that goes with many peoples lives. Very nicely worded.

November 14th, 2024 14:28



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