Comments received on poems by jim56



a place in my dreams
sorenbarrett said:

A fun read Jim we all have a place of fantasy where we retreat from time to time. May yours always be peaceful.

July 15th, 2025 06:18

a place in my dreams
Priya Tomar said:

Very nice
Clever rhyming.....

July 15th, 2025 05:57

sun fun
arqios said:

Fun in the sun was always the happiest and at times the scariest of times. And the second skin precautions are always a good thing to remember doing. thanks for the fun read.๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป

July 14th, 2025 21:24

meadow melody
Priya Tomar said:

I can feel the meadow lark in your poetry.
So melodious your poetry too.

July 14th, 2025 09:56

sun fun
Priya Tomar said:

Well written
Its title is really good- SUN FUN

July 14th, 2025 07:20

sun fun
sorenbarrett said:

A joyous poem of summer and those things associated with it. Nicely done Jim

July 14th, 2025 05:24

firefly forest
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Jim

July 13th, 2025 07:41

firefly forest
sorenbarrett said:

I too love the fireflies and their floating lights over meadow and through forest. A beautiful picture you paint Jim

July 13th, 2025 05:26

cancer evil
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Jim

July 12th, 2025 18:41

cancer evil
arqios said:

Painfully relatable as that dread evil runs in our familyโ€™s genetic predispositions, cuts straight to the boneโ€”raw, honest, and excruciatingly real. Peace jim๐Ÿ•Š๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป

July 12th, 2025 07:04

fairy garden
arqios said:

Much enjoyed, Tony๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š

July 12th, 2025 06:20

cancer evil
sorenbarrett said:

Wow! Jim this time something that is dark and not so bright. I have gotten so used to your writes of nature, beauty, love of animals and peace and beauty that this one took me by surprise. Nicely worded

July 12th, 2025 05:05

robin rap
RSM0812 said:

Great spring rhyme. It made me giggle a bit picturing rapping robbins. ๐Ÿ˜† lol

July 11th, 2025 12:24

fairy garden
sorenbarrett said:

Cute Jim if it were a green light I would think of fireflies but I have never seen a white one. Good write

July 11th, 2025 05:48

natures beauty
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Jim

July 10th, 2025 12:22

natures beauty
sorenbarrett said:

Another very nice poem about nature. Well done Jim

July 10th, 2025 05:52

robin rap
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Jim

July 9th, 2025 12:17

robin rap
sorenbarrett said:

Another great nature verse that leaves one upbeat for the day.

July 9th, 2025 05:18

dogs know
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Jim

July 8th, 2025 09:46

dogs know
sorenbarrett said:

Dog man\'s best friend deserve all the praise that we can give. A wonderful species

July 8th, 2025 06:53

mining days
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Jim

July 7th, 2025 09:40

mining days
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful poem and tribute to brave men. My father was a miner and I worked summers in a copper mine. A different breed.

July 7th, 2025 05:47

meadow melody
RSM0812 said:

I can almost hear the song in your words. This is a great poem of one of natures gifts. The song of a lark. Nicely done. Another near perfection rhymr sceme also. A favorite for sure.


July 6th, 2025 21:28

meadow melody
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Jim

July 6th, 2025 08:22

meadow melody
sorenbarrett said:

The meadow lark a memory from my childhood is nostalgic and now a ghost that I haven\'t heard in year echoes in my memory as clear as when I was young. A distinctive song not chirp that has its own melody. Lovely and a fave thank you Jim for reminding me.

July 6th, 2025 05:43

when the bikers came
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Jim

July 5th, 2025 13:56

when the bikers came
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July 5th, 2025 05:40

when the bikers came
sorenbarrett said:

A most wonderful tribute to another remembered. Nicely done Jim

July 5th, 2025 05:40

mood change
sorenbarrett said:

A fun read Jim where moods are variable depending on situations and physiology. Looking for the silver lining in things can help. Good write

July 4th, 2025 05:08

just a little sunshine
sorenbarrett said:

Literal or metaphorical it is true. A little brightness helps. Nicely said Jim

July 3rd, 2025 06:05



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