Comments received on poems by Pearcemelville ๅ ๆ
Mao\'s Mausoleum
Doggerel Dave said:
Nice timing - reminds us that other parts of the world have revered leaders too.
September 18th, 2022 01:20
Doggerel Dave said:
Nice timing - reminds us that other parts of the world have revered leaders too.
September 18th, 2022 01:20
To a Happy Place
Bella Shepard said:
I just had to smile as I read this. Here\'s to all those happy places where we can find respite, if just for a while. Thank you!
August 14th, 2022 10:44
Bella Shepard said:
I just had to smile as I read this. Here\'s to all those happy places where we can find respite, if just for a while. Thank you!
August 14th, 2022 10:44
To a Happy Place
Bella Shepard said:
I just had to smile as I read this. Here\'s to all those happy places where we can find respite, if just for a while. Thank you!
August 14th, 2022 10:44
Bella Shepard said:
I just had to smile as I read this. Here\'s to all those happy places where we can find respite, if just for a while. Thank you!
August 14th, 2022 10:44
Shopping mall Hearing Test
L. B. Mek said:
\'I bet away from your Vocation
in private.\'
such a simple line, but
what eloquence and talent
it so, demonstrates
I am so grateful
you choose to share your genius, dear poet
thank you! for every instructive snippet
(oh and yes, aesthetic and mannerism
beauty
may not make the world go round
but it sure makes our days
a little easier, to tolerate
and daydreams, that bit more sweet)
August 12th, 2022 02:42
L. B. Mek said:
\'I bet away from your Vocation
in private.\'
such a simple line, but
what eloquence and talent
it so, demonstrates
I am so grateful
you choose to share your genius, dear poet
thank you! for every instructive snippet
(oh and yes, aesthetic and mannerism
beauty
may not make the world go round
but it sure makes our days
a little easier, to tolerate
and daydreams, that bit more sweet)
August 12th, 2022 02:42
I\'ll Never find
Bella Shepard said:
I went to YouTube and watched a video of Judith from 1968, solo performance, in black and white. She sang Danny Boy, one of my favorites, and it was the most beautiful rendition I have ever heard. Thank you for this tribute to an incredible voice.
August 9th, 2022 11:44
Bella Shepard said:
I went to YouTube and watched a video of Judith from 1968, solo performance, in black and white. She sang Danny Boy, one of my favorites, and it was the most beautiful rendition I have ever heard. Thank you for this tribute to an incredible voice.
August 9th, 2022 11:44
I\'ll Never find
L. B. Mek said:
so abstract and eloquent
what a sincere dedication..
may she rest in peace
thank you! dear Poet
August 9th, 2022 03:00
L. B. Mek said:
so abstract and eloquent
what a sincere dedication..
may she rest in peace
thank you! dear Poet
August 9th, 2022 03:00
๐๐ฎ๐ช๐ฝ๐ฑ๐ฎ๐ป ๐ข๐ฝ๐ช๐ท๐ญ๐ฒ๐ท๐ฐ ๐ฃ๐ช๐ต๐ต
Pearcemelville ๅ ๆ said:
Thank you LB, Heather is in transition to become female.
I asked if I may write her a poem
She consented and I then asked which title shall I use. Heather said she.
August 8th, 2022 05:31
Pearcemelville ๅ ๆ said:
Thank you LB, Heather is in transition to become female.
I asked if I may write her a poem
She consented and I then asked which title shall I use. Heather said she.
August 8th, 2022 05:31
๐๐ฎ๐ช๐ฝ๐ฑ๐ฎ๐ป ๐ข๐ฝ๐ช๐ท๐ญ๐ฒ๐ท๐ฐ ๐ฃ๐ช๐ต๐ต
L. B. Mek said:
lol
found this humorous, in tone
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
(I do believe in that red string of fate
tethering our heart\'s to all those
supposedly, destined relationships
in our lives;
and so
we can make many connections
in life
that seem, surreally fated or important..
and then again, we can
read a line in poetry
and feel, that very same thing...)
August 8th, 2022 04:39
L. B. Mek said:
lol
found this humorous, in tone
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
(I do believe in that red string of fate
tethering our heart\'s to all those
supposedly, destined relationships
in our lives;
and so
we can make many connections
in life
that seem, surreally fated or important..
and then again, we can
read a line in poetry
and feel, that very same thing...)
August 8th, 2022 04:39
Black Mercedes
Pearcemelville ๅ ๆ said:
ๆด่ตฐๆ Bousouzoku means
running wildly gang,
many in Japan, all over, Yakuza recruitment source, mostly teenagers.
50cc motorcycles snaking slowly, holding up traffic. Taeko used to bring the neighborhood youth into line with admonishment and threats to tell their mothers. They always showed her respect. โค๏ธ
August 3rd, 2022 17:14
Pearcemelville ๅ ๆ said:
ๆด่ตฐๆ Bousouzoku means
running wildly gang,
many in Japan, all over, Yakuza recruitment source, mostly teenagers.
50cc motorcycles snaking slowly, holding up traffic. Taeko used to bring the neighborhood youth into line with admonishment and threats to tell their mothers. They always showed her respect. โค๏ธ
August 3rd, 2022 17:14
Black Mercedes
Bella Shepard said:
I googled Bosozoku Hooning, and I definitely get it, without a trace.
August 3rd, 2022 12:11
Bella Shepard said:
I googled Bosozoku Hooning, and I definitely get it, without a trace.
August 3rd, 2022 12:11
morning monday
L. B. Mek said:
yeah well, write\'s like this
is why they created intro\'s, prologues and preludes...
lol
(I love dogs, and
your characterisation skills)
a wonderful read
August 2nd, 2022 03:56
L. B. Mek said:
yeah well, write\'s like this
is why they created intro\'s, prologues and preludes...
lol
(I love dogs, and
your characterisation skills)
a wonderful read
August 2nd, 2022 03:56
Green Eggs & boneless HAM
L. B. Mek said:
lmao!
erm
no thanks! I\'ll let you culinary daredevils, mess
with the gangrene coloured eggs
I\'ll just stick to the bland, normal
variety
and contemplate the deeper questions
in life, during my loo visits
like, which came first
the yolk or the egg white....
..
.
lol
(thanks for the chuckle)
August 2nd, 2022 03:53
L. B. Mek said:
lmao!
erm
no thanks! I\'ll let you culinary daredevils, mess
with the gangrene coloured eggs
I\'ll just stick to the bland, normal
variety
and contemplate the deeper questions
in life, during my loo visits
like, which came first
the yolk or the egg white....
..
.
lol
(thanks for the chuckle)
August 2nd, 2022 03:53
Green Eggs & boneless HAM
Bella Shepard said:
Dr. Seuss would never have expected this one, and children will always be curiouser and curiouser. Now that I know that they\'re safe, I might try green eggs for breakfast. A fun read!
July 30th, 2022 13:38
Bella Shepard said:
Dr. Seuss would never have expected this one, and children will always be curiouser and curiouser. Now that I know that they\'re safe, I might try green eggs for breakfast. A fun read!
July 30th, 2022 13:38
Journey to the West Poem๏ผTranslation
Pearcemelville ๅ ๆ said:
ๅJoy to translate. Am working on chapter 2.
One original translation I used to cross reference wrote pints instead if litres.
I will be replying to your previous conment on Resolution โค๏ธ
July 29th, 2022 23:19
Pearcemelville ๅ ๆ said:
ๅJoy to translate. Am working on chapter 2.
One original translation I used to cross reference wrote pints instead if litres.
I will be replying to your previous conment on Resolution โค๏ธ
July 29th, 2022 23:19
Anniversary of Love
Pearcemelville ๅ ๆ said:
Thank you Bella. She is extraordinary. Her ex husband and his father years ago sent her with s wad of cash to sort out trouble with a Yakuza boss. She spoke with him, tucked the money in his vest pocket snd asked,. We Good?
YES was his reply, then added,. I have never met a lady like you.
Four years ago I had a major breakdown when I lost my job, shaking my confidence. In hindsight the answers were before me but I coukd not see, shrouded by my ego and selfpity. Two years ago I emerged from my shell and began writing in December.
I am now the strongest spiritually and emotionally, irony is I cry daily fron joy and empathy. I am more able to assist her financially. She lives alone in Japan. We haven\'t seen each other for over five years as the visa application fee is 19,000 dollars. This poem was not written for her nor with her in mind, but as an addition to My Poetic Wedding, a business I have started but too early yet for customers. Weddings should pick up come Spring. It has generic resonance with most people and it is on the poem selection list for clients who wish to renew Vows.
I charge $150 for a tailored poem and recital along with their selection fron the list.
I offer to remain and write individual poems for reception guests and ask the Bride and Groom to decide the price. I suggest it could be a thank you gift. Hope it kicks off. I searched and could not find anyone else in Canberra offering this service.
Will be replying to you on A Silencing of Poets -resolution soon โค๏ธ
July 29th, 2022 11:38
Pearcemelville ๅ ๆ said:
Thank you Bella. She is extraordinary. Her ex husband and his father years ago sent her with s wad of cash to sort out trouble with a Yakuza boss. She spoke with him, tucked the money in his vest pocket snd asked,. We Good?
YES was his reply, then added,. I have never met a lady like you.
Four years ago I had a major breakdown when I lost my job, shaking my confidence. In hindsight the answers were before me but I coukd not see, shrouded by my ego and selfpity. Two years ago I emerged from my shell and began writing in December.
I am now the strongest spiritually and emotionally, irony is I cry daily fron joy and empathy. I am more able to assist her financially. She lives alone in Japan. We haven\'t seen each other for over five years as the visa application fee is 19,000 dollars. This poem was not written for her nor with her in mind, but as an addition to My Poetic Wedding, a business I have started but too early yet for customers. Weddings should pick up come Spring. It has generic resonance with most people and it is on the poem selection list for clients who wish to renew Vows.
I charge $150 for a tailored poem and recital along with their selection fron the list.
I offer to remain and write individual poems for reception guests and ask the Bride and Groom to decide the price. I suggest it could be a thank you gift. Hope it kicks off. I searched and could not find anyone else in Canberra offering this service.
Will be replying to you on A Silencing of Poets -resolution soon โค๏ธ
July 29th, 2022 11:38
Journey to the West Poem๏ผTranslation
L. B. Mek said:
initially I thought this would be about the film, or one of the films
but this is so deep, makes me want read the whole lore
I will be sure to look it up..
\'Peddling firewood to buy wine. Laughing wildly at my own pleasure.\'
(these words seem to carry the spirit Liu Ling,
that icon of Li Bai
that great, \'banished immortal\')
lol
July 29th, 2022 03:35
L. B. Mek said:
initially I thought this would be about the film, or one of the films
but this is so deep, makes me want read the whole lore
I will be sure to look it up..
\'Peddling firewood to buy wine. Laughing wildly at my own pleasure.\'
(these words seem to carry the spirit Liu Ling,
that icon of Li Bai
that great, \'banished immortal\')
lol
July 29th, 2022 03:35
The Silenced Poet ~ resolution
Bella Shepard said:
Poetry\'s own! I read aloud and marvel. Woe to those who listen with deaf ears, for they lack the ability to appreciate the depths of the human soul. Such a wonderful write my friend.
July 25th, 2022 09:19
Bella Shepard said:
Poetry\'s own! I read aloud and marvel. Woe to those who listen with deaf ears, for they lack the ability to appreciate the depths of the human soul. Such a wonderful write my friend.
July 25th, 2022 09:19
The Silenced Poet ~ resolution
Bella Shepard said:
Poetry\'s own! I read aloud and marvel. Woe to those who listen with deaf ears, for they lack the ability to appreciate the depths of the human soul. Such a wonderful write my friend.
July 25th, 2022 09:19
Bella Shepard said:
Poetry\'s own! I read aloud and marvel. Woe to those who listen with deaf ears, for they lack the ability to appreciate the depths of the human soul. Such a wonderful write my friend.
July 25th, 2022 09:19
Verbal Piano & indefinite ideas
L. B. Mek said:
\'Upon readers\' Minds it sits
Affected by varying thoughts and memories words within they change
with scarce and bare affinity with dictionary or metaphoric
incarnations\'
modernity
is devoid of morality, its spine
as bent as that last snap-tic-Insta
fad
that failed, a second
into, its existence
as that promise, clip
all was awaiting to heal
their fears..
where as traditional, or I guess
by now - deemed, archaic
tools, used
to enlighten and entertain
have been, commentated
to warped realms of toxic
seas
while humanity, swims
upon landlocked rivers
of hope and fear...
(thanks for sharing, such a thought provoking
read)
July 22nd, 2022 03:36
L. B. Mek said:
\'Upon readers\' Minds it sits
Affected by varying thoughts and memories words within they change
with scarce and bare affinity with dictionary or metaphoric
incarnations\'
modernity
is devoid of morality, its spine
as bent as that last snap-tic-Insta
fad
that failed, a second
into, its existence
as that promise, clip
all was awaiting to heal
their fears..
where as traditional, or I guess
by now - deemed, archaic
tools, used
to enlighten and entertain
have been, commentated
to warped realms of toxic
seas
while humanity, swims
upon landlocked rivers
of hope and fear...
(thanks for sharing, such a thought provoking
read)
July 22nd, 2022 03:36
immeasurable certainty
Pearcemelville ๅ ๆ said:
two years private turmoil
any one needing to talk
message me
July 21st, 2022 00:34
Pearcemelville ๅ ๆ said:
two years private turmoil
any one needing to talk
message me
July 21st, 2022 00:34
Anniversary of Love
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully penned with words of such love and appreciation. Lucky lady, lucky you, but then it\'s all about truly loving.
July 17th, 2022 11:26
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully penned with words of such love and appreciation. Lucky lady, lucky you, but then it\'s all about truly loving.
July 17th, 2022 11:26
Surf & Turf
Bella Shepard said:
A wonderful telling of a wonderful coincidence that led to love. Are we just in the right place at the right time, or is destiny at work? Either way I really enjoyed the poem and wish you all the best. By the way, you seemed to have found the only remaining pic of chicken lake. The ballet was only performed once, it was felt that once was enough.
July 16th, 2022 12:34
Bella Shepard said:
A wonderful telling of a wonderful coincidence that led to love. Are we just in the right place at the right time, or is destiny at work? Either way I really enjoyed the poem and wish you all the best. By the way, you seemed to have found the only remaining pic of chicken lake. The ballet was only performed once, it was felt that once was enough.
July 16th, 2022 12:34
Broken Soul
L. B. Mek said:
\'Bereft of Spirit
Bereft of Thought
Wrenched in Grief
Broken soul
cannot see forward\'..
(so relatable
people rarely mention
when Nietzsche proclaimed
\'God is Dead\'
he was decrying, what the hole
in losing
that monumental aspect
of everyday life
would translate into
for future generations, like us
devoid of threads to spirituality
in any form
or a willingness to believe
and intrust hope
in the everyday miracles, we witness
and so reducing, everything
to that bleak, black and white
of science, touch or experience
proven certainties..
evermore withdrawing from concepts
of potential and achievement
ashamed to stand out
clipping our own wings, to fit in
mindsets, as cynical as zebra stripes
of herd, survival)
thank you! dear poet
a great write
July 15th, 2022 01:48
L. B. Mek said:
\'Bereft of Spirit
Bereft of Thought
Wrenched in Grief
Broken soul
cannot see forward\'..
(so relatable
people rarely mention
when Nietzsche proclaimed
\'God is Dead\'
he was decrying, what the hole
in losing
that monumental aspect
of everyday life
would translate into
for future generations, like us
devoid of threads to spirituality
in any form
or a willingness to believe
and intrust hope
in the everyday miracles, we witness
and so reducing, everything
to that bleak, black and white
of science, touch or experience
proven certainties..
evermore withdrawing from concepts
of potential and achievement
ashamed to stand out
clipping our own wings, to fit in
mindsets, as cynical as zebra stripes
of herd, survival)
thank you! dear poet
a great write
July 15th, 2022 01:48
Failure
Bella Shepard said:
Amazing how many people, how many empires have failed from the pursuit of wealth and power. It does seem to be ageless. Maybe if we didn\'t have pockets we wouldn\'t always be looking for something to line them with. Love the way you have framed this dilemma, good write dear poet!
July 9th, 2022 11:38
Bella Shepard said:
Amazing how many people, how many empires have failed from the pursuit of wealth and power. It does seem to be ageless. Maybe if we didn\'t have pockets we wouldn\'t always be looking for something to line them with. Love the way you have framed this dilemma, good write dear poet!
July 9th, 2022 11:38
Georgia & Laura & Laura and Georgia
L. B. Mek said:
sadly
so much went over my head
so, jealous of your intellect
still this conversational, style
is a poetic, format
I find
so alluringly inviting..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
July 5th, 2022 04:45
L. B. Mek said:
sadly
so much went over my head
so, jealous of your intellect
still this conversational, style
is a poetic, format
I find
so alluringly inviting..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
July 5th, 2022 04:45
yangingayin
L. B. Mek said:
we both come from an uninterrupted
heritage, thousands of years
in the making
and thus, I innately relate
to so much of your writing
because in it, I see tethers
to depths
I sadly, will never amount
to fathom, for myself...;
still, in You
and those genius\' like you
I remain
leaching, one read at a time
whatever wisdom, i can glean
just
so i can strive, to be worthy
of this pitiful, poetic gift
I wield with such, foolish
abandon..
yearning
to exist, within the gifted guidance
of Tao, balance
and Kวng Fลซzว\' veracity of Ren
to cultivate, what pitiful meaning
I can, from my chosen way of life:
\'What are doing? Stringing along
Waiting..\'
\'..Oh what a feeling a tipply tingling
Smiling away
Yanging the Yin\'
June 30th, 2022 06:44
L. B. Mek said:
we both come from an uninterrupted
heritage, thousands of years
in the making
and thus, I innately relate
to so much of your writing
because in it, I see tethers
to depths
I sadly, will never amount
to fathom, for myself...;
still, in You
and those genius\' like you
I remain
leaching, one read at a time
whatever wisdom, i can glean
just
so i can strive, to be worthy
of this pitiful, poetic gift
I wield with such, foolish
abandon..
yearning
to exist, within the gifted guidance
of Tao, balance
and Kวng Fลซzว\' veracity of Ren
to cultivate, what pitiful meaning
I can, from my chosen way of life:
\'What are doing? Stringing along
Waiting..\'
\'..Oh what a feeling a tipply tingling
Smiling away
Yanging the Yin\'
June 30th, 2022 06:44
PRIMARY School
L. B. Mek said:
as a refugee, I relate
to you rage, fuelled
by other\'s, indifferent
hate..
(thanks for sharing)
June 28th, 2022 04:08
L. B. Mek said:
as a refugee, I relate
to you rage, fuelled
by other\'s, indifferent
hate..
(thanks for sharing)
June 28th, 2022 04:08
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