Comments received on poems by Pearcemelville ๅ ๆ
Boiled Fruit cake
L. B. Mek said:
ok so never noticed the FU in fun
being utilised like that
I might have to borrow it, lol
I too like to cook
so found this interesting, although
I usually use Rum, when I use alcohol
in my bakes
and have to admit, I buy Panettone
fruitcakes
rather than baking them myself
and then just add a drop of rum on my slice..
thanks for sharing
June 24th, 2022 03:52
L. B. Mek said:
ok so never noticed the FU in fun
being utilised like that
I might have to borrow it, lol
I too like to cook
so found this interesting, although
I usually use Rum, when I use alcohol
in my bakes
and have to admit, I buy Panettone
fruitcakes
rather than baking them myself
and then just add a drop of rum on my slice..
thanks for sharing
June 24th, 2022 03:52
๐
๐พ๐๏ธ๐ฝ๐
ธ๏ธ๐
ด๏ธ ๊ชถ๊ชฎ๊ชฎ๐ฌ แญ๊ซ๊ช๐ฝ ๐ ๐ฒแญ๐ณ๊ชฎ๐ฝ๊ซ
L. B. Mek said:
Awe inspiring, what poetic genius
you choose to share, dear Poet
(there is so many ways to read and interpret
but for me
that your continent, is so sparsely
inhabited
makes this dialogue, so poignant
a land where its Prime Minster
can go missing
and its not even that widely remembered
or known
insures, people like me
can never fully understands
the cultural mappings and workings
so yeah, the progressive
are the renting \'townies\'
while the backwater, unknowing
own, their lands
but
are marginalised in importance
sadly, its the same story all over..)
well that\'s my skewed reading
forgive me
June 23rd, 2022 04:28
L. B. Mek said:
Awe inspiring, what poetic genius
you choose to share, dear Poet
(there is so many ways to read and interpret
but for me
that your continent, is so sparsely
inhabited
makes this dialogue, so poignant
a land where its Prime Minster
can go missing
and its not even that widely remembered
or known
insures, people like me
can never fully understands
the cultural mappings and workings
so yeah, the progressive
are the renting \'townies\'
while the backwater, unknowing
own, their lands
but
are marginalised in importance
sadly, its the same story all over..)
well that\'s my skewed reading
forgive me
June 23rd, 2022 04:28
๐
๐พ๐๏ธ๐ฝ๐
ธ๏ธ๐
ด๏ธ ๊ชถ๊ชฎ๊ชฎ๐ฌ แญ๊ซ๊ช๐ฝ ๐ ๐ฒแญ๐ณ๊ชฎ๐ฝ๊ซ
orchidee said:
Great title there!
June 23rd, 2022 02:13
orchidee said:
Great title there!
June 23rd, 2022 02:13
He visits the Conscience
L. B. Mek said:
sad, that i see myself in this inked murky waters
then again my conceit has me being reflected
in almost every poem I read
what a shallow, existence
to be present
everywhere, but never
settled anywhere
a needy existence, maybe
even a wasted, existence..
oh well
\'we are, what
we will, become
we can but strive
till we witness
our outcomes...\'
one more sigh, forgotten
thoughts
of left-over lunches, gripped
as threadbare, lifelines
and so, onwards
we move
in-Hope
knowing, this too
shall pass
soon enough
June 20th, 2022 05:42
L. B. Mek said:
sad, that i see myself in this inked murky waters
then again my conceit has me being reflected
in almost every poem I read
what a shallow, existence
to be present
everywhere, but never
settled anywhere
a needy existence, maybe
even a wasted, existence..
oh well
\'we are, what
we will, become
we can but strive
till we witness
our outcomes...\'
one more sigh, forgotten
thoughts
of left-over lunches, gripped
as threadbare, lifelines
and so, onwards
we move
in-Hope
knowing, this too
shall pass
soon enough
June 20th, 2022 05:42
Bhutan salad
Bella Shepard said:
All I can say is YUM! Both spiritually and gastronomically.
June 15th, 2022 11:13
Bella Shepard said:
All I can say is YUM! Both spiritually and gastronomically.
June 15th, 2022 11:13
Wintry season
L. B. Mek said:
I do try to block out
all the noise, in generically
topical, #trending discussion
but
I have stumbled a few times
when coming, across
the zealotry passion, with which
people, fervently converse
that, most enthralling
of all subjects
\'The
Weather\'...
lol
we be funny creatures, we
be
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
forgive me
if I\'ve misunderstood your words
June 14th, 2022 04:47
L. B. Mek said:
I do try to block out
all the noise, in generically
topical, #trending discussion
but
I have stumbled a few times
when coming, across
the zealotry passion, with which
people, fervently converse
that, most enthralling
of all subjects
\'The
Weather\'...
lol
we be funny creatures, we
be
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
forgive me
if I\'ve misunderstood your words
June 14th, 2022 04:47
THEPLAGIARIST
orchidee said:
They who pinch other\'s words will incur the wrath of the original writers!
Someone elsewhere had the nerve to put his own pic next to some words he pinched. Poets were furious!
June 7th, 2022 08:06
orchidee said:
They who pinch other\'s words will incur the wrath of the original writers!
Someone elsewhere had the nerve to put his own pic next to some words he pinched. Poets were furious!
June 7th, 2022 08:06
THEPLAGIARIST
Pearcemelville ๅ ๆ said:
This poem was inspired by the rudeness with which I was treated so I devised
The Plagiarist
who has transcribed the poem of a guest poet from the group, enriched her metaphor, balanced the language timbre, enthused the dynamic, well, afforded it dynamic.
Result is a poem that satisfies my personal sense of worth, for a private collection. A worthy exercise, I feel, to free the mind from composition, to offer terms that strengthen metaphor, provide greater balance. If a poem begins in a style that speaks to a common, grassroots humanity, I ask why burden the reader with flowery language?
I am left with a kind of literary critique, with suggested edits for selected readers, safe in anonymity
within the public domain by not publishing the source text, though I have done so on this occasion.
If it is in your interest, perhaps I could send the original to your inbox, or provide me with an address.
June 7th, 2022 05:27
Pearcemelville ๅ ๆ said:
This poem was inspired by the rudeness with which I was treated so I devised
The Plagiarist
who has transcribed the poem of a guest poet from the group, enriched her metaphor, balanced the language timbre, enthused the dynamic, well, afforded it dynamic.
Result is a poem that satisfies my personal sense of worth, for a private collection. A worthy exercise, I feel, to free the mind from composition, to offer terms that strengthen metaphor, provide greater balance. If a poem begins in a style that speaks to a common, grassroots humanity, I ask why burden the reader with flowery language?
I am left with a kind of literary critique, with suggested edits for selected readers, safe in anonymity
within the public domain by not publishing the source text, though I have done so on this occasion.
If it is in your interest, perhaps I could send the original to your inbox, or provide me with an address.
June 7th, 2022 05:27
THEPLAGIARIST
L. B. Mek said:
I feel sorry for Plagiarist\'s
and even more so
for those
running around, accusing poets
of writing like this poet or other..
see
there is nothing crueller, than abusing
Yourslef
by forcing, Yourslef
to scrape those depths
of self-worthlessness
to degrade your creativity
by stealing from another...
its just so, so Pathetically futile
because
no one forces us, to endure
this writing thing, we Try
to do
so, to go to those lengths
warping
that sense of self-Enforced
ambition
is just, so
so Pathetic..
June 7th, 2022 04:41
L. B. Mek said:
I feel sorry for Plagiarist\'s
and even more so
for those
running around, accusing poets
of writing like this poet or other..
see
there is nothing crueller, than abusing
Yourslef
by forcing, Yourslef
to scrape those depths
of self-worthlessness
to degrade your creativity
by stealing from another...
its just so, so Pathetically futile
because
no one forces us, to endure
this writing thing, we Try
to do
so, to go to those lengths
warping
that sense of self-Enforced
ambition
is just, so
so Pathetic..
June 7th, 2022 04:41
We the uncarved blocks
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'assunder I hide
Chest hugged knees and silen..\'
(and from those broken, blocks
blossom weeds
and weary climbers as Nature\'s
bellflowers of hope)...
June 6th, 2022 05:39
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'assunder I hide
Chest hugged knees and silen..\'
(and from those broken, blocks
blossom weeds
and weary climbers as Nature\'s
bellflowers of hope)...
June 6th, 2022 05:39
Massacre below a TANK
Bella Shepard said:
Oh dear friend, thank you for reminding us, an anniversary date not be be forgotten. I remember watching this live on TV, and couldn\'t absorb the reality of what was happening. The bravery of the individual and the cowardice of the regime that cannot tolerate any form of criticism or protest. The human heart yearns to be free.
June 5th, 2022 13:08
Bella Shepard said:
Oh dear friend, thank you for reminding us, an anniversary date not be be forgotten. I remember watching this live on TV, and couldn\'t absorb the reality of what was happening. The bravery of the individual and the cowardice of the regime that cannot tolerate any form of criticism or protest. The human heart yearns to be free.
June 5th, 2022 13:08
Morning mist
L. B. Mek said:
if I confess
I find your poetic talent
resembling, that
of a modern day
Li Bo
I truly hope, you understand
the depth of such a compliment
dear Poet..
(I wish you all the success you desire;
I just hope
you stay humble
and enjoy, those simple
pleasures in life..
although, it must be hard
when you\'ve been gifted
such a brilliant, intellect...
I bow to your superior, poetic talent)
thank you! for Choosing
to share
June 3rd, 2022 04:12
L. B. Mek said:
if I confess
I find your poetic talent
resembling, that
of a modern day
Li Bo
I truly hope, you understand
the depth of such a compliment
dear Poet..
(I wish you all the success you desire;
I just hope
you stay humble
and enjoy, those simple
pleasures in life..
although, it must be hard
when you\'ve been gifted
such a brilliant, intellect...
I bow to your superior, poetic talent)
thank you! for Choosing
to share
June 3rd, 2022 04:12
Cotter Dam extension
arqios said:
Scat! More right angled than that of the eastern greys. If we only had more Beatrix Potters in Oz, we\'d probably have more green space. Farewell, Scatabout Creek.
June 3rd, 2022 01:43
arqios said:
Scat! More right angled than that of the eastern greys. If we only had more Beatrix Potters in Oz, we\'d probably have more green space. Farewell, Scatabout Creek.
June 3rd, 2022 01:43
convoluted cincalok recipe
Bella Shepard said:
Have to say I\'ve never heard of that dish. But it does sound intriguing, and dare I say impossible to screw up? Simple is best! Fun, great read!
June 1st, 2022 12:16
Bella Shepard said:
Have to say I\'ve never heard of that dish. But it does sound intriguing, and dare I say impossible to screw up? Simple is best! Fun, great read!
June 1st, 2022 12:16
Bring back Romance of The Swag
L. B. Mek said:
thank you! for the introduction
will add to reading list, asap
\'I am sitting in my dingy little office, where a stingy
Ray of sunlight struggles feebly down between the houses tall,
And the foetid air and gritty of the dusty, dirty city
Through the open window
floating,
spreads its foulness over all\'..
(Classic\'s, speak
in an eternally relevant
voice
that\'s the dividing line
of True, genius!)
May 31st, 2022 03:58
L. B. Mek said:
thank you! for the introduction
will add to reading list, asap
\'I am sitting in my dingy little office, where a stingy
Ray of sunlight struggles feebly down between the houses tall,
And the foetid air and gritty of the dusty, dirty city
Through the open window
floating,
spreads its foulness over all\'..
(Classic\'s, speak
in an eternally relevant
voice
that\'s the dividing line
of True, genius!)
May 31st, 2022 03:58
Cotter Dam extension
Jonas Robinson said:
I enjoyed how you use classic concepts with a casual form of modern rhetoric. Thank you for sharing. :)
May 28th, 2022 15:08
Jonas Robinson said:
I enjoyed how you use classic concepts with a casual form of modern rhetoric. Thank you for sharing. :)
May 28th, 2022 15:08
Cotter Dam extension
Pearcemelville ๅ ๆ said:
I worked as a labourer and dogman on the building of the viewing platform, my first job on return to Australia from Japan, 2010.
We destroyed an idyllic stream.
Wombat faeces are square so as not to roll.๐
May 28th, 2022 14:55
Pearcemelville ๅ ๆ said:
I worked as a labourer and dogman on the building of the viewing platform, my first job on return to Australia from Japan, 2010.
We destroyed an idyllic stream.
Wombat faeces are square so as not to roll.๐
May 28th, 2022 14:55
Cotter Dam extension
Bella Shepard said:
Being a Yank I had to google Cotter Dam Extension to find out about it. I see where this poem is coming from, and the terrible offset of nature with the needs of the population for water due to drought conditions. Climate change is after all, real. Wonderful write!
May 28th, 2022 14:51
Bella Shepard said:
Being a Yank I had to google Cotter Dam Extension to find out about it. I see where this poem is coming from, and the terrible offset of nature with the needs of the population for water due to drought conditions. Climate change is after all, real. Wonderful write!
May 28th, 2022 14:51
7 Siblings
L. B. Mek said:
our
Universe\'s complexities
Inked, in poetic
variegated genius!
Linked to our incessant
metaphysical, yearnings...
a privilege to read
\'I\'m afraid little violet\'s
assignedใ
for Refraction Duty today
Don\'t think of it as losing
an offspring, no longer
confined to remain
within the functional wave
that your packet exists in
Violet
may play out a new Volition bestow
to the world a purple perception\'..
(and in future generation\'s, volition
we bestow
the same, recycled
hope
the last generation, bestowed
upon us
and on
and on
...)
May 26th, 2022 06:25
L. B. Mek said:
our
Universe\'s complexities
Inked, in poetic
variegated genius!
Linked to our incessant
metaphysical, yearnings...
a privilege to read
\'I\'m afraid little violet\'s
assignedใ
for Refraction Duty today
Don\'t think of it as losing
an offspring, no longer
confined to remain
within the functional wave
that your packet exists in
Violet
may play out a new Volition bestow
to the world a purple perception\'..
(and in future generation\'s, volition
we bestow
the same, recycled
hope
the last generation, bestowed
upon us
and on
and on
...)
May 26th, 2022 06:25
over the FENCE
JudyStella said:
A human weakness of gossiping that is common. Thankyou for shedding light on this. Nice poem!
May 25th, 2022 16:43
JudyStella said:
A human weakness of gossiping that is common. Thankyou for shedding light on this. Nice poem!
May 25th, 2022 16:43
over the FENCE
Bella Shepard said:
A truth of human nature I guess. Be careful what you say and to whom. You\'ve captured this predicament very well. It takes on a life of its own, and too often becomes far from the truth. Good write.
May 25th, 2022 15:53
Bella Shepard said:
A truth of human nature I guess. Be careful what you say and to whom. You\'ve captured this predicament very well. It takes on a life of its own, and too often becomes far from the truth. Good write.
May 25th, 2022 15:53
No poem for taeko
Bella Shepard said:
Beautiful words, beautiful poem, beautiful picture of love in its purest form. Thank you dear poet for sharing.
May 22nd, 2022 11:20
Bella Shepard said:
Beautiful words, beautiful poem, beautiful picture of love in its purest form. Thank you dear poet for sharing.
May 22nd, 2022 11:20
Love at 1st Sight
Bella Shepard said:
This poem really comes to life as I read it aloud, as if I\'m watching the whole interaction played out. 1st love can be breathtaking and your words describe this so poignantly. Great write!
May 21st, 2022 13:36
Bella Shepard said:
This poem really comes to life as I read it aloud, as if I\'m watching the whole interaction played out. 1st love can be breathtaking and your words describe this so poignantly. Great write!
May 21st, 2022 13:36
Cheer Helen Housby!
Bella Shepard said:
You\'ve pulled me into the excitement. I find myself cheering as I\'m reading. Great descriptive words; darts, flys, spins, glides, amazing. Wow, I\'m exhausted, but great fun.
May 18th, 2022 14:59
Bella Shepard said:
You\'ve pulled me into the excitement. I find myself cheering as I\'m reading. Great descriptive words; darts, flys, spins, glides, amazing. Wow, I\'m exhausted, but great fun.
May 18th, 2022 14:59
6pack ๅ
ญใใใฏ
L. B. Mek said:
\'from stone caME MONKEY!
born of an egg rock\'
May 17th, 2022 05:59
L. B. Mek said:
\'from stone caME MONKEY!
born of an egg rock\'
May 17th, 2022 05:59
Class Antagonism
Bella Shepard said:
Ah, the fantasies of the young boy. How about us girls? Unfortunately in my Catholic school there was only one male, and he was the gym teacher. No one could fantasize about him. Love the poem, naughty but nice.
May 13th, 2022 15:21
Bella Shepard said:
Ah, the fantasies of the young boy. How about us girls? Unfortunately in my Catholic school there was only one male, and he was the gym teacher. No one could fantasize about him. Love the poem, naughty but nice.
May 13th, 2022 15:21
Class Antagonism
Saxon Crow said:
Miss Grimshaw, the English teacher was my school boy fantasy. And everyone else\'s for that matter. Great poem.
May 13th, 2022 03:46
Saxon Crow said:
Miss Grimshaw, the English teacher was my school boy fantasy. And everyone else\'s for that matter. Great poem.
May 13th, 2022 03:46
Emperor manning the HELM
Rocky Lagou said:
This was great visual poetry. That presentation of a sinking ship with the words slowly diminishing as the poem advances is really clever. Wonderful.
May 12th, 2022 09:45
Rocky Lagou said:
This was great visual poetry. That presentation of a sinking ship with the words slowly diminishing as the poem advances is really clever. Wonderful.
May 12th, 2022 09:45
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