Comments received on poems by Pearcemelville 兎敏
ChasM
arqios said:
Haha! Been there, one that, LOL! Awesome putting them into words.
May 12th, 2022 00:03
arqios said:
Haha! Been there, one that, LOL! Awesome putting them into words.
May 12th, 2022 00:03
Miaree Pool
arqios said:
An idyllic time and place to getaway. For us perhaps it may not be Miaree but there are other such places if we know where to look! Thanks for sharing such a fun and refreshing poem. /Rik.
May 11th, 2022 03:41
arqios said:
An idyllic time and place to getaway. For us perhaps it may not be Miaree but there are other such places if we know where to look! Thanks for sharing such a fun and refreshing poem. /Rik.
May 11th, 2022 03:41
ChasM
Bella Shepard said:
Ah, to bridge the divide. Do we ever really resolve, or is there the ongoing struggle to know another. Who knows, maybe sometimes the chasm is what keeps us safe. I loved the playfulness of your words and the dilemma rolled into one. Great write!
May 8th, 2022 14:01
Bella Shepard said:
Ah, to bridge the divide. Do we ever really resolve, or is there the ongoing struggle to know another. Who knows, maybe sometimes the chasm is what keeps us safe. I loved the playfulness of your words and the dilemma rolled into one. Great write!
May 8th, 2022 14:01
❗Viva Le Tissier❗
Bella Shepard said:
I can hear the roar going up from the crowd. I was a complete soccer nut when I was in high school, many moons ago. This brings it all back. Thanks for the memory!
May 7th, 2022 13:57
Bella Shepard said:
I can hear the roar going up from the crowd. I was a complete soccer nut when I was in high school, many moons ago. This brings it all back. Thanks for the memory!
May 7th, 2022 13:57
Pandemonium
Nicholas Browning said:
This has to be one of the most clever and insanity ridden things I\'ve ever read. What a unique perspective. Credit to whoever the author is!
May 6th, 2022 05:50
Nicholas Browning said:
This has to be one of the most clever and insanity ridden things I\'ve ever read. What a unique perspective. Credit to whoever the author is!
May 6th, 2022 05:50
ROCK paintings
Bella Shepard said:
I\'ve seen many of these pictographs in Arizona and Utah, and I love your description. It makes you realize the need all along to leave something behind. Great poem, great subject.
April 28th, 2022 15:25
Bella Shepard said:
I\'ve seen many of these pictographs in Arizona and Utah, and I love your description. It makes you realize the need all along to leave something behind. Great poem, great subject.
April 28th, 2022 15:25
UNCARVED block
Bella Shepard said:
Being unfamiliar with Daoist philosophy I looked it up. The uncarved block is played upon by life, may suffer scars but can be soothed in the end. I love the symbolism and wonderful message of the piece. Not sure if I got it right , but I loved reading it.
April 27th, 2022 11:20
Bella Shepard said:
Being unfamiliar with Daoist philosophy I looked it up. The uncarved block is played upon by life, may suffer scars but can be soothed in the end. I love the symbolism and wonderful message of the piece. Not sure if I got it right , but I loved reading it.
April 27th, 2022 11:20
2゜of Summer
Bella Shepard said:
2 degrees of summer, reality? Summer garden, reverie? A beautiful portrait of nature as the balm that soothes and gives us respite. A beautiful poem!
April 23rd, 2022 08:45
Bella Shepard said:
2 degrees of summer, reality? Summer garden, reverie? A beautiful portrait of nature as the balm that soothes and gives us respite. A beautiful poem!
April 23rd, 2022 08:45
天津冬菜炒飯 Tianjindongcai Fried Rice
Bella Shepard said:
Who knew that fried rice, not just any fried rice, but Tianjin Dongcai, could add so much spice to life. Sounds like a wonderful recipe, got hungry just reading it. You\'ve lightened my day!
April 21st, 2022 13:06
Bella Shepard said:
Who knew that fried rice, not just any fried rice, but Tianjin Dongcai, could add so much spice to life. Sounds like a wonderful recipe, got hungry just reading it. You\'ve lightened my day!
April 21st, 2022 13:06
在長城睡夜 Great Wall Beauty
Bella Shepard said:
Snake, roast rabbit, brew tea, exchange tales, green plots. Ordinary things that cross paths with marching horses, soldiers, messages in puffs of smoke. What I take away from this is cherish the ordinary and simple because you never know when the tide of life may turn on something as simple as a puff of smoke. I love the way you have phrased this, it really seems to imbue the culture. A great write!
April 19th, 2022 09:20
Bella Shepard said:
Snake, roast rabbit, brew tea, exchange tales, green plots. Ordinary things that cross paths with marching horses, soldiers, messages in puffs of smoke. What I take away from this is cherish the ordinary and simple because you never know when the tide of life may turn on something as simple as a puff of smoke. I love the way you have phrased this, it really seems to imbue the culture. A great write!
April 19th, 2022 09:20
在長城睡夜 Great Wall Beauty
Rocky Lagou said:
An amazing and engaging tale. A neat ending as well. All in all, wonderful.
April 19th, 2022 08:42
Rocky Lagou said:
An amazing and engaging tale. A neat ending as well. All in all, wonderful.
April 19th, 2022 08:42
Image in Light
DestinysPerspectives said:
This was a very informative poem! I loved it!
April 18th, 2022 16:32
DestinysPerspectives said:
This was a very informative poem! I loved it!
April 18th, 2022 16:32
Colour
spilleronsheet said:
Colours played with ink of yours
So beautiful and serene
A beautiful poetry with a very vivid imagery
Truly enjoyed the scenic beauty your poetry created
April 16th, 2022 15:17
spilleronsheet said:
Colours played with ink of yours
So beautiful and serene
A beautiful poetry with a very vivid imagery
Truly enjoyed the scenic beauty your poetry created
April 16th, 2022 15:17
Colour
Pearcemelville 兎敏 said:
Like musical coda taking us to
a previous moment
Therapeutic colours as affective
as fragrance
April 16th, 2022 13:55
Pearcemelville 兎敏 said:
Like musical coda taking us to
a previous moment
Therapeutic colours as affective
as fragrance
April 16th, 2022 13:55
Colour
Bella Shepard said:
Oh, how beautiful! Color evokes so many feelings, images, memories. It can turn a mood or create one. Thank you for this lovely piece.
April 16th, 2022 13:26
Bella Shepard said:
Oh, how beautiful! Color evokes so many feelings, images, memories. It can turn a mood or create one. Thank you for this lovely piece.
April 16th, 2022 13:26
Red Dog 紅犬
Cassia DeSousa said:
Hello pearcemelville
oh the companionship of a dog is truly remarkable...tchau...Cassia DeSousa
April 15th, 2022 15:32
Cassia DeSousa said:
Hello pearcemelville
oh the companionship of a dog is truly remarkable...tchau...Cassia DeSousa
April 15th, 2022 15:32
Quantum Love: Bard Heard Songs
Bella Shepard said:
Poetry written in the language of physics, but then physics is our whole existence. So much that you have covered is familiar, and I wish I could understand it all, but I\'m content to know that it all exists and there are those people who never have, nor ever will stop the quest to learn all that is possible about everything. A challenging, but most enjoyable read, I\'ve always liked a challenge.
April 14th, 2022 13:21
Bella Shepard said:
Poetry written in the language of physics, but then physics is our whole existence. So much that you have covered is familiar, and I wish I could understand it all, but I\'m content to know that it all exists and there are those people who never have, nor ever will stop the quest to learn all that is possible about everything. A challenging, but most enjoyable read, I\'ve always liked a challenge.
April 14th, 2022 13:21
Gravity
Bella Shepard said:
The subject of your poem just draws me in. I love all things cosmic, and your knowledge and description is stellar. I love a poem that really makes me think, and you\'ve done that, thank you.
April 14th, 2022 10:19
Bella Shepard said:
The subject of your poem just draws me in. I love all things cosmic, and your knowledge and description is stellar. I love a poem that really makes me think, and you\'ve done that, thank you.
April 14th, 2022 10:19
The Bard Returns from the Future
Bella Shepard said:
When I found this title I had to read, and oh what a read! Wonderfully and intelligently crafted. You take us on an amazing ride through history, with the bard as guide. I can imagine how thrilled Shakespeare would have been to see the future, and what he might have written about it. The more I read the more I loved.
April 14th, 2022 10:11
Bella Shepard said:
When I found this title I had to read, and oh what a read! Wonderfully and intelligently crafted. You take us on an amazing ride through history, with the bard as guide. I can imagine how thrilled Shakespeare would have been to see the future, and what he might have written about it. The more I read the more I loved.
April 14th, 2022 10:11
Gravity
spilleronsheet said:
A very unique and exotic poetry dear poet giving me a vast field to expand my thoughts….enjoyed reading it….keep penning and post it…
April 13th, 2022 02:25
spilleronsheet said:
A very unique and exotic poetry dear poet giving me a vast field to expand my thoughts….enjoyed reading it….keep penning and post it…
April 13th, 2022 02:25
Gravity
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is full of great lines. My favorite is the same as L.B. Mek\'s . You bring western and eastern views together. Well done.
April 12th, 2022 20:42
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is full of great lines. My favorite is the same as L.B. Mek\'s . You bring western and eastern views together. Well done.
April 12th, 2022 20:42
Gravity
Neville said:
a most intriguing and otherwise interesting post .. I am delighted to have been drawn here ... Neville
April 12th, 2022 15:27
Neville said:
a most intriguing and otherwise interesting post .. I am delighted to have been drawn here ... Neville
April 12th, 2022 15:27
Gravity
L. B. Mek said:
\'A force Strength in Weakness
like Daoist Dualism
crosses a Chasm
A universal link
Ubiquitous existence
Interaction at a distance
Avoiding cataclysm and Chaos\'..
what a verse! a great read
thanks for sharing dear poet
(I hope, somewhere
there\'s a white hole
to juxtapose, its twin - black
like that Daoist, ideal
that threadbare balance in our universe
a thought, that has us hoping
for our bad days, someone
gets a nice day
and we in turn
await for karma, to return
that same favour...)
April 12th, 2022 05:04
L. B. Mek said:
\'A force Strength in Weakness
like Daoist Dualism
crosses a Chasm
A universal link
Ubiquitous existence
Interaction at a distance
Avoiding cataclysm and Chaos\'..
what a verse! a great read
thanks for sharing dear poet
(I hope, somewhere
there\'s a white hole
to juxtapose, its twin - black
like that Daoist, ideal
that threadbare balance in our universe
a thought, that has us hoping
for our bad days, someone
gets a nice day
and we in turn
await for karma, to return
that same favour...)
April 12th, 2022 05:04
Palos de la Frontera
L. B. Mek said:
(loved this thought provoking
and challenging, read
thanks for sharing and inspiring
my feeble reply, dear Poet)
sometimes I can\'t help thinking, what if
Marco
had met, Genghis
instead..
what would our world Map
look like
and would it still be
that first come, first serve
of Speed
ruling, our reality\'s ambitions..
and what if those Celtic, Gaul\'s
hadn\'t underestimated, Caesar
and what if Caesar, had never created
\'Acta Diurna\'
would modernity, still have ended-up
being toyed with
by politically motivated
endlessly sensationalised
treacherous, bulletin reels..
or maybe
would we have evolved
into a world, that first waited
to see who crossed
that finishing line, of fate
before celebrating
our assumption of victory
in life...
April 11th, 2022 05:35
L. B. Mek said:
(loved this thought provoking
and challenging, read
thanks for sharing and inspiring
my feeble reply, dear Poet)
sometimes I can\'t help thinking, what if
Marco
had met, Genghis
instead..
what would our world Map
look like
and would it still be
that first come, first serve
of Speed
ruling, our reality\'s ambitions..
and what if those Celtic, Gaul\'s
hadn\'t underestimated, Caesar
and what if Caesar, had never created
\'Acta Diurna\'
would modernity, still have ended-up
being toyed with
by politically motivated
endlessly sensationalised
treacherous, bulletin reels..
or maybe
would we have evolved
into a world, that first waited
to see who crossed
that finishing line, of fate
before celebrating
our assumption of victory
in life...
April 11th, 2022 05:35
Pilbara Cyclone
voices of ghosts said:
yep they come with fury then just but a dream, good job poet 👌
April 10th, 2022 10:58
voices of ghosts said:
yep they come with fury then just but a dream, good job poet 👌
April 10th, 2022 10:58
The Bard Returns from the Future
L. B. Mek said:
\'This day I return from future
rifts\'..
then it just got better and better
your knowledge, range
and depth, is admittedly
intimidating, but
what an illuminating, experience
having a conversation with you
must be..
thanks for sharing, a great read
April 8th, 2022 05:32
L. B. Mek said:
\'This day I return from future
rifts\'..
then it just got better and better
your knowledge, range
and depth, is admittedly
intimidating, but
what an illuminating, experience
having a conversation with you
must be..
thanks for sharing, a great read
April 8th, 2022 05:32
Cannonball
L. B. Mek said:
\'Waiting for Tide to turn to test mettleagainstreefrock Rockyreefsrock
Rockyreeff
Rockyreefsrock
rockyreefs
REEFSSS
reefrockysh
RRsshh
Waves against the timberhull \'..
this was such a fun reading experience, thanks for sharing..
(makes me want to shout
\'Pirates Ahoy!\'
randomly, for no reason..)
lol
April 7th, 2022 06:37
L. B. Mek said:
\'Waiting for Tide to turn to test mettleagainstreefrock Rockyreefsrock
Rockyreeff
Rockyreefsrock
rockyreefs
REEFSSS
reefrockysh
RRsshh
Waves against the timberhull \'..
this was such a fun reading experience, thanks for sharing..
(makes me want to shout
\'Pirates Ahoy!\'
randomly, for no reason..)
lol
April 7th, 2022 06:37
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