Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Transformation
Parisab said:

Simple and beautifully clean!

February 4th, 2024 12:38

Transformation
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

February 4th, 2024 10:53

Transformation
2781 said:

Another good analogy.

February 4th, 2024 07:50

Transformation
Teddy.15 said:

Wow, putting my senryu to shame. 😂 Oh my dear Sorenbarret an outstanding 5/7/5 absolutely a huge kudos inspiring and gosh, your imagery wow. 🦋

February 4th, 2024 07:50

From time to time
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words soren taking me to those former places in your mind.

Andy

February 4th, 2024 02:20

Blossoms to ground
2781 said:

Let\'s hope it\'s an analogy for the world.

February 3rd, 2024 17:22

From time to time
arqios said:

Verses of pastoral bliss. Enraptured here in this forest. Thanks Soren 🙏🏻

February 3rd, 2024 06:33

From time to time
Teddy.15 said:

So deep in thought you have made a moving film. Absolutely beautiful. 🤗

February 3rd, 2024 06:03

From time to time
orchidee said:

Good write SB.
You been there before?! heehee.

February 3rd, 2024 05:30

From time to time
Doggerel Dave said:

I\'m not skilled with metaphor, as I may have mentioned before once or twice...........
However this, so rich in imagery leaves me in total concordance as it perfectly describes the flavour of my from time to time reveries, although with more truth than I could achieve.
Great write, Soren.


February 3rd, 2024 05:10

Blossoms to ground
Goldfinch60 said:

May that new life always be there soren.

Andy

February 3rd, 2024 03:25

Blossoms to ground
Bella Shepard said:

The cycle of life in beautiful verse. Love it!

February 2nd, 2024 16:30

Going home
Bella Shepard said:

When it\'s over, is it really over? What was love is always there, locked away in a compartment of memory, for better or worse. Two incredible stanzas that says it all so eloquently.

February 2nd, 2024 14:49

Blossoms to ground
Teddy.15 said:

Wow simply gorgeous and what a wonderful seed it be. ❤️

February 2nd, 2024 04:56

Blossoms to ground
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

February 2nd, 2024 04:52

Going home
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful emotive words soren.

Andy

February 2nd, 2024 02:51

Going home
orchidee said:

A fine write SB.
If it wasn\'t so poignant a theme - when did ya see me breathing? And why won\'t ya be here tomorrow - where ya going?! heehee.
Do shut up Orchi, says Fido.

February 1st, 2024 09:55

Going home
Teddy.15 said:

Just so sad yet so beautiful. I wanted to choose a favourite part but every line is perfect, hidden under a blanket of deep pain. 💜

February 1st, 2024 04:23

One, Two, See
Thomas W Case said:

Superb work.

January 31st, 2024 12:02

One, Two, See
orchidee said:

There\'s a poet who wrote for children, I think. She decided to write in only one-syllable words!
Why yes - The cat sat on the mat! lol.

January 31st, 2024 05:44

One, Two, See
Teddy.15 said:

LoL such an endearing poem children all over would absolutely love this. As do I 🤗

January 31st, 2024 05:27

Trash to treasure
Goldfinch60 said:

In this world there are many people who are not willing to read words properly to see what they mean so they just dismiss them as trash but there are others who appreciate all words written as I do yours soren.

Andy

January 31st, 2024 02:21

Trash to treasure
Doggerel Dave said:

Because much of that is bull shit (the \'Many think my poems are trash\'), I\'ll volunteer to be a metaphorical fly....😂
Come on - get on with it.........

January 30th, 2024 20:34

Trash to treasure
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic.

January 30th, 2024 19:59

Trash to treasure
Bella Shepard said:

It would be a very dull world if the only color was red, the only fruit kumquats and the only instrument we ever heard was a tuba. We need to blend beautiful colors, and make fruit salad, and hear an entire orchestra. Well written, and oh so true my friend!

January 30th, 2024 16:03

Trash to treasure
Teddy.15 said:

LoL well personally I think they are fantastic and I mean that from the bottom of my heart, I\'m forever privileged to read them. Keep them coming your subtle satire well I just love it. 💜

January 30th, 2024 12:40

Trash to treasure
2781 said:

Like the bold.

January 30th, 2024 07:13

Friendship
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true soren with those good friends in our lives.

Andy

January 30th, 2024 03:20

Ugly Truth
Neville said:



it is hard to know what\'s real these days or what is true and right .. I fear it will only get worse and the deceivers of which there are far too many will win another round .. but artificial intelligence will probably win in extra time if it is allowed ..

You have posted a very important observation here sorenbarrett & one that I entirely agree with .. Neville

January 29th, 2024 12:20

Friendship
Neville said:


you can beat an egg and a drum of course, but you just can\'t beat true friendship .. a real treat of a poem in an increasingly compromised world ..

January 29th, 2024 07:05



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