Comments received on poems by vicecream



Telescopes, Microscopes
sorenbarrett said:

A most different point of view, Nicely written,

December 20th, 2024 19:56

Telescopes, Microscopes
TobaniNataiella said:

An interesting and make you think read, i especially like the last 2 lines, enjoyable read, Thank you

December 20th, 2024 17:30

The Snake that Eats its Own Tail
Doggerel Dave said:

In Australia we have the hoop snake - imported, it would seem from the USA - another feral pest.

December 17th, 2024 16:43

The Snake that Eats its Own Tail
TobaniNataiella said:

Very clever piece of writing, enjoyed the read

December 17th, 2024 16:29

The Snake that Eats its Own Tail
sorenbarrett said:

Ouroboros the circle of life in a snake devouring its tail, birth, life death. Although it is a circle we can never go back it is a new life. Nicely said and written

December 17th, 2024 13:06

Reality Check
TobaniNataiella said:

A enjoyable and thought provoking read, Thank you

December 12th, 2024 23:49

Reality Check
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wow! Love the structure and the stream-of-consciousness style to this. Well done, friend! 🌹👏 Faved!

December 12th, 2024 19:27

Reality Check
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 12th, 2024 14:03

Reality Check
sorenbarrett said:

What we consider real and why is a most interesting question. Based on senses and faith

December 12th, 2024 10:54

Granny Squares
sorenbarrett said:

So well expressed the response to seeing other\'s pain

December 12th, 2024 09:44

Today I Sang to the Dawn
sorenbarrett said:

Beautiful, simply beautiful.

December 12th, 2024 09:42

Today I Sang to the Dawn
TobaniNataiella said:

Enjoyable read, Thank you

December 3rd, 2024 10:52

Today I Sang to the Dawn
Demar Desu said:

*tosses roses to the stage*

December 3rd, 2024 08:32

Granny Squares
Demar Desu said:

Give your pain to art

November 27th, 2024 00:12

Devotion ≠ Exclusivity
Thoughtless said:

A nice thought about love and its levels.

September 6th, 2024 14:54

A series of \"automatic writings\"
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic work.

December 19th, 2023 22:07

BEING
Lorenz said:

Bite or beat ?

November 15th, 2023 03:37

Inanna’s Descent
Bobby O said:

Relinquish all reigning
Love that line. All at once it’s humble , Power, confident, and intelligent.
Nice write good read

August 14th, 2023 19:14

Inanna’s Descent
peto said:

This is a great read
Not sure what is holding you back
One day hopefully soon you can allow yourself the pleasure of it
Ta for allowing the reader to share said pleasure

August 14th, 2023 18:05

O, I Sea
Pop64 said:

Many times, we do not or dare not see what lies beneath the surface, churning. Society so often dictates morals and therefore we suppress, but yet...underneath. Terrific write, great imagery and well composed thought.

August 4th, 2023 13:58