Comments received on poems by Bella Shepard
The Red MG
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Bella, that life together is so wonderful, I know.
Andy
July 26th, 2023 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Bella, that life together is so wonderful, I know.
Andy
July 26th, 2023 01:15
The Red MG
peto said:
Tremendous rhyme and flow as I\'ve come to expect from you
It\'s the content however that sets it apart
Superb Bella
July 25th, 2023 23:56
peto said:
Tremendous rhyme and flow as I\'ve come to expect from you
It\'s the content however that sets it apart
Superb Bella
July 25th, 2023 23:56
The Red MG
Parisab said:
Ain’t that a shame? ‘The house had weathered 60 years’ beautiful metaphor as well (her body)
July 25th, 2023 22:39
Parisab said:
Ain’t that a shame? ‘The house had weathered 60 years’ beautiful metaphor as well (her body)
July 25th, 2023 22:39
Shinrin-yoku (forest bathing)
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful writing , Bella )) liked the read
Lovely gentle words
And that’s what a lot of nature is .. gentle and beautiful
July 18th, 2023 12:48
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful writing , Bella )) liked the read
Lovely gentle words
And that’s what a lot of nature is .. gentle and beautiful
July 18th, 2023 12:48
Beware Of A.I.
Doggerel Dave said:
Not to worry too much (but not too little either), Bella. It is human actors which will use this tool - it\'s still humans we should worry about. Forget the BS speculation that AI of its own volition will take over the world.... (which is not what you were saying, I know - but to listen to the commentary in the media ....aah!)
July 18th, 2023 00:58
Doggerel Dave said:
Not to worry too much (but not too little either), Bella. It is human actors which will use this tool - it\'s still humans we should worry about. Forget the BS speculation that AI of its own volition will take over the world.... (which is not what you were saying, I know - but to listen to the commentary in the media ....aah!)
July 18th, 2023 00:58
Beware Of A.I.
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, kinda scary
how quickly, once theoretical
problems
are fast becoming our daily
nightmares..
(I so relate, dear Poet)
July 17th, 2023 04:45
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, kinda scary
how quickly, once theoretical
problems
are fast becoming our daily
nightmares..
(I so relate, dear Poet)
July 17th, 2023 04:45
Beware Of A.I.
Neville said:
NO .. you got it all wrong .. THIS is not just a thought at all, it is META truth in a nut shell .. and probably one of the most meaningful 575\'s I have come across in a very long while .. Kudos .. Neville
July 17th, 2023 02:00
Neville said:
NO .. you got it all wrong .. THIS is not just a thought at all, it is META truth in a nut shell .. and probably one of the most meaningful 575\'s I have come across in a very long while .. Kudos .. Neville
July 17th, 2023 02:00
Beware Of A.I.
orchidee said:
Does A.I. only ever do what humans programme it to do? Scary, if not.
Machines - dalek are talking dustbins. lol.
July 17th, 2023 01:52
orchidee said:
Does A.I. only ever do what humans programme it to do? Scary, if not.
Machines - dalek are talking dustbins. lol.
July 17th, 2023 01:52
Beware Of A.I.
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Bella - and many people believe it!
Andy
July 17th, 2023 01:04
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Bella - and many people believe it!
Andy
July 17th, 2023 01:04
Beware Of A.I.
Ok Waleed said:
Created by humans
Who have emotions
But an unbiased A.I can help
July 16th, 2023 22:00
Ok Waleed said:
Created by humans
Who have emotions
But an unbiased A.I can help
July 16th, 2023 22:00
Beware Of A.I.
sorenbarrett said:
So true Bella. I have been concerned about this before it became popular. I have written a couple of pomes on it and continue to voice my anxiety about it, not so much for me but for my grand children. Now even those in charge of AI are voicing their concerns but I think we have gone too far to turn back.
July 16th, 2023 15:43
sorenbarrett said:
So true Bella. I have been concerned about this before it became popular. I have written a couple of pomes on it and continue to voice my anxiety about it, not so much for me but for my grand children. Now even those in charge of AI are voicing their concerns but I think we have gone too far to turn back.
July 16th, 2023 15:43
I Remember
Goldfinch60 said:
Having a good childhood makes the world a better place for us all Bella.
Andy
July 16th, 2023 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Having a good childhood makes the world a better place for us all Bella.
Andy
July 16th, 2023 01:53
I Remember
Garth Rakumakoe said:
I love every fabric of this write. so much warmth! - Kudos, dear writer, very well penned!
July 14th, 2023 04:13
Garth Rakumakoe said:
I love every fabric of this write. so much warmth! - Kudos, dear writer, very well penned!
July 14th, 2023 04:13
I Remember
L. B. Mek said:
that accursed \'news\', forced down my repulsed throat
that two young girls died, outside their school
on the last day of the school year
recently
and i couldn\'t help sighing
we, so often
take for granted, how lucky we are
to take a breath, free of pain
to look back at a childhood we navigated
without too much trauma
and while reading your poetry today, cherished friend
as a I smiled, i felt
a little of the weary in my eyes
easing, even if just for a while
thank you!
July 14th, 2023 02:07
L. B. Mek said:
that accursed \'news\', forced down my repulsed throat
that two young girls died, outside their school
on the last day of the school year
recently
and i couldn\'t help sighing
we, so often
take for granted, how lucky we are
to take a breath, free of pain
to look back at a childhood we navigated
without too much trauma
and while reading your poetry today, cherished friend
as a I smiled, i felt
a little of the weary in my eyes
easing, even if just for a while
thank you!
July 14th, 2023 02:07
I Remember
sorenbarrett said:
For those of us fortunate enough to have had such a supportive, loving childhood this rhyme rings true and gives feelings of comfort and nostalgia. A lovely write friend. I so enjoy reading your poems keep writing.
July 13th, 2023 09:15
sorenbarrett said:
For those of us fortunate enough to have had such a supportive, loving childhood this rhyme rings true and gives feelings of comfort and nostalgia. A lovely write friend. I so enjoy reading your poems keep writing.
July 13th, 2023 09:15
I Remember
orchidee said:
Cooeee Bella. See, I did not forget this poem - I remembered it! lol.
July 13th, 2023 01:45
orchidee said:
Cooeee Bella. See, I did not forget this poem - I remembered it! lol.
July 13th, 2023 01:45
I Remember
Doggerel Dave said:
The kind of work I can appreciate, Bella. Aroused all my poetic sensibilities (such as they are). Complete enjoyment.
Kudos to your parents as they managed to maintain the illusion.
July 12th, 2023 19:55
Doggerel Dave said:
The kind of work I can appreciate, Bella. Aroused all my poetic sensibilities (such as they are). Complete enjoyment.
Kudos to your parents as they managed to maintain the illusion.
July 12th, 2023 19:55
I Remember
peto said:
Terrific writing
Flow and rhyme are magnificent
It\'s the content however that really stands out
You took me back to a bus ride with my mum and wee sister
To keep us amused she had us see how many xmas trees we could see in windows on journey
Also loved the last 6th verse especially
July 12th, 2023 14:10
peto said:
Terrific writing
Flow and rhyme are magnificent
It\'s the content however that really stands out
You took me back to a bus ride with my mum and wee sister
To keep us amused she had us see how many xmas trees we could see in windows on journey
Also loved the last 6th verse especially
July 12th, 2023 14:10
I Remember
Neville said:
this is an amazing poem Bella, clearly autobiographical & the love contained within it & which indeed inspired it, lends a very welcome warm glow at the end of a bloomin long day .. Perfectly crafted in every respect ..
Respect my friend & truly .. Neville
July 12th, 2023 12:51
Neville said:
this is an amazing poem Bella, clearly autobiographical & the love contained within it & which indeed inspired it, lends a very welcome warm glow at the end of a bloomin long day .. Perfectly crafted in every respect ..
Respect my friend & truly .. Neville
July 12th, 2023 12:51
I Remember
Pop64 said:
the read is effortless and so very smooth with it\'s rhyme and timing. The imagery is quite clear and wonderfully descriptive. A very good and enjoyable write, a reminder of youth and how our elders protected and shielded us.
July 12th, 2023 12:18
Pop64 said:
the read is effortless and so very smooth with it\'s rhyme and timing. The imagery is quite clear and wonderfully descriptive. A very good and enjoyable write, a reminder of youth and how our elders protected and shielded us.
July 12th, 2023 12:18
I Remember
Teddy.15 said:
Dear Bella I actually admire your incredible childhood. Such a warm and joyful read. 💖
July 12th, 2023 11:54
Teddy.15 said:
Dear Bella I actually admire your incredible childhood. Such a warm and joyful read. 💖
July 12th, 2023 11:54
My Eyes Are Closed
L. B. Mek said:
\'So rich, so sweet
When in my youth
They were complete\'
\'Because of age
I now have time
To drift and think
To render sublime
The love, the life
That was my own\'
Brilliant!
just such a beautiful
showcasing of your empathy
dear Poet, thank you!
July 10th, 2023 03:03
L. B. Mek said:
\'So rich, so sweet
When in my youth
They were complete\'
\'Because of age
I now have time
To drift and think
To render sublime
The love, the life
That was my own\'
Brilliant!
just such a beautiful
showcasing of your empathy
dear Poet, thank you!
July 10th, 2023 03:03
Blow Wind
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Hi Bella lovely writing ))
July 9th, 2023 11:33
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Hi Bella lovely writing ))
July 9th, 2023 11:33
Vacation Time
sorenbarrett said:
Missed you Bella but hope you had a wonderful time. Loved the poem wherever your destination.
July 3rd, 2023 15:37
sorenbarrett said:
Missed you Bella but hope you had a wonderful time. Loved the poem wherever your destination.
July 3rd, 2023 15:37
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