Comments received on poems by Bella Shepard
Mamma\'s Winter Coat
MendedFences27 said:
Such a loving memory. It always seems to be the very small things in life that we remember most.
This poem brought back a picture of the wingback chair I would sit in when very young. A very pleasant memory. thank you for that, - Phil A.
September 18th, 2023 21:53
MendedFences27 said:
Such a loving memory. It always seems to be the very small things in life that we remember most.
This poem brought back a picture of the wingback chair I would sit in when very young. A very pleasant memory. thank you for that, - Phil A.
September 18th, 2023 21:53
Mamma\'s Winter Coat
Pop64 said:
Absolutely beautiful and perfect in every way! Fantastic memory, imagery, rhyme and flow, just perfect!
September 18th, 2023 05:51
Pop64 said:
Absolutely beautiful and perfect in every way! Fantastic memory, imagery, rhyme and flow, just perfect!
September 18th, 2023 05:51
Mamma\'s Winter Coat
Goldfinch60 said:
Those childhood memories are so wonderful in our lives Bella.
Andy
September 18th, 2023 02:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Those childhood memories are so wonderful in our lives Bella.
Andy
September 18th, 2023 02:02
Mamma\'s Winter Coat
Neville said:
made me think of my Fathers old jacket ..
I didn\'t need to squeeze a tear from my eyes while reading .. they came from out of nowhere all on their own ..
this is a magnificently crafted poem Bella that truly took me on a far too brief journey back in time .. and for that alone, I thank you .. Neville
September 18th, 2023 01:13
Neville said:
made me think of my Fathers old jacket ..
I didn\'t need to squeeze a tear from my eyes while reading .. they came from out of nowhere all on their own ..
this is a magnificently crafted poem Bella that truly took me on a far too brief journey back in time .. and for that alone, I thank you .. Neville
September 18th, 2023 01:13
Mamma\'s Winter Coat
LIZ said:
Oh my God Bella!!! This is beautiful!!!!! Mommy\'s hug!!!!! Loved it!!!
September 18th, 2023 00:26
LIZ said:
Oh my God Bella!!! This is beautiful!!!!! Mommy\'s hug!!!!! Loved it!!!
September 18th, 2023 00:26
Mamma\'s Winter Coat
LIZ said:
Oh my God Bella!!! This is beautiful!!!!! Mommy\'s hug!!!!! Loved it!!!
September 18th, 2023 00:26
LIZ said:
Oh my God Bella!!! This is beautiful!!!!! Mommy\'s hug!!!!! Loved it!!!
September 18th, 2023 00:26
Mamma\'s Winter Coat
Doggerel Dave said:
Nostalgia - so rich I almost felt I knew that coat and would be looking out for it every time I visit a charity shop from now on. (It\'s where I get most of my clothing - but don\'t tell anyone).
For me, a large wing back chair...Thanks for the smooth ride - it really drew me in, Bella.
September 17th, 2023 21:36
Doggerel Dave said:
Nostalgia - so rich I almost felt I knew that coat and would be looking out for it every time I visit a charity shop from now on. (It\'s where I get most of my clothing - but don\'t tell anyone).
For me, a large wing back chair...Thanks for the smooth ride - it really drew me in, Bella.
September 17th, 2023 21:36
Mamma\'s Winter Coat
Christina8 said:
A great poem and a wonderful memory. Thank you for sharing with us! Such powerful imagery. And I remember what it was like to have a mom.
September 17th, 2023 14:22
Christina8 said:
A great poem and a wonderful memory. Thank you for sharing with us! Such powerful imagery. And I remember what it was like to have a mom.
September 17th, 2023 14:22
Mamma\'s Winter Coat
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful memory and metaphor of how we look to the strength and comfort of the past; our mother, that took away all of our fears and gave us a vote of confidence that we wish we could still feel today.. A touching and poignant poem.
September 17th, 2023 11:45
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful memory and metaphor of how we look to the strength and comfort of the past; our mother, that took away all of our fears and gave us a vote of confidence that we wish we could still feel today.. A touching and poignant poem.
September 17th, 2023 11:45
Mamma\'s Winter Coat
Parisab said:
Bella. you described these forever memories so gently and lovingly-her warmth and protection must feel so near-
September 17th, 2023 10:21
Parisab said:
Bella. you described these forever memories so gently and lovingly-her warmth and protection must feel so near-
September 17th, 2023 10:21
Mamma\'s Winter Coat
Teddy.15 said:
Well of course this is a wonderful poem, a beautiful scene hiding inside your mom\'s coat superbly written and left me smiling from ear to ear dear Bella. Dolly Parton\'s coat of many colours also came to mind. I adore that song she also wrote it for her mom. 💖
September 17th, 2023 10:00
Teddy.15 said:
Well of course this is a wonderful poem, a beautiful scene hiding inside your mom\'s coat superbly written and left me smiling from ear to ear dear Bella. Dolly Parton\'s coat of many colours also came to mind. I adore that song she also wrote it for her mom. 💖
September 17th, 2023 10:00
My Little Fantasy
L. B. Mek said:
(love your tonality
in this subtle droplet of wisdom
thank you! kind Poet)
yes, this is one of my coping methods
I will save a fantasy
or a song, or a movie, a book
anything
because I know when life
throws
those blind sided, punches n slaps
I\'m gonna need them
to help me hide and survive
till I can rise again, shake it off
and smile bright
September 15th, 2023 05:37
L. B. Mek said:
(love your tonality
in this subtle droplet of wisdom
thank you! kind Poet)
yes, this is one of my coping methods
I will save a fantasy
or a song, or a movie, a book
anything
because I know when life
throws
those blind sided, punches n slaps
I\'m gonna need them
to help me hide and survive
till I can rise again, shake it off
and smile bright
September 15th, 2023 05:37
My Little Fantasy
Neville said:
one can only imagine .. in the wake of a wish .. and wonder slow .. delightful in its brevity dear Bella .. Neville
September 15th, 2023 01:21
Neville said:
one can only imagine .. in the wake of a wish .. and wonder slow .. delightful in its brevity dear Bella .. Neville
September 15th, 2023 01:21
My Little Fantasy
sorenbarrett said:
Bella this is such a wonderful thought and piece of advice. We advise people to save their money for a rainy day but seldom are we told that it is just as important, if not more so, important to save emotional profit for those days as well. Loved this piece Bella
September 14th, 2023 17:25
sorenbarrett said:
Bella this is such a wonderful thought and piece of advice. We advise people to save their money for a rainy day but seldom are we told that it is just as important, if not more so, important to save emotional profit for those days as well. Loved this piece Bella
September 14th, 2023 17:25
Memories
Pop64 said:
While a beautifully formatted and flowing read, it contains the maudlin ideal of memories, how we might lose them and how we can gain them and treat them. A treat for the reader, but a sad truth for he or she suffering from this dilemma.
September 13th, 2023 13:46
Pop64 said:
While a beautifully formatted and flowing read, it contains the maudlin ideal of memories, how we might lose them and how we can gain them and treat them. A treat for the reader, but a sad truth for he or she suffering from this dilemma.
September 13th, 2023 13:46
My Little Fantasy
Pop64 said:
Fantasies are marvelous as they let us all indulge in more often those things we cannot have or are taboo. Yet, serve to provide a happiness when needed or wanted. Beautifully expressed.
September 13th, 2023 07:50
Pop64 said:
Fantasies are marvelous as they let us all indulge in more often those things we cannot have or are taboo. Yet, serve to provide a happiness when needed or wanted. Beautifully expressed.
September 13th, 2023 07:50
My Little Fantasy
orchidee said:
Best not tell me it. I might swoon! heehee.
I\'m in fantasy land with KP. Doh!
September 12th, 2023 01:38
orchidee said:
Best not tell me it. I might swoon! heehee.
I\'m in fantasy land with KP. Doh!
September 12th, 2023 01:38
My Little Fantasy
BlessedbyGod said:
Excellent piece Bella, and yes we do😉😉
September 12th, 2023 00:00
BlessedbyGod said:
Excellent piece Bella, and yes we do😉😉
September 12th, 2023 00:00
My Little Fantasy
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"My little fantasy” by Bella Shepard
When no solace or help is to be found from elsewhere, we can only delve deep within ourselves. We have no choice but to console ourselves. Thus, we must find and keep that strength within us. Soman Ragavan. 12 September, 2023.
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September 11th, 2023 20:34
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"My little fantasy” by Bella Shepard
When no solace or help is to be found from elsewhere, we can only delve deep within ourselves. We have no choice but to console ourselves. Thus, we must find and keep that strength within us. Soman Ragavan. 12 September, 2023.
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September 11th, 2023 20:34
My Little Fantasy
Teddy.15 said:
Rainy days and Mondays get me down... Awe dear Bella a beautiful write. 💖
September 11th, 2023 16:58
Teddy.15 said:
Rainy days and Mondays get me down... Awe dear Bella a beautiful write. 💖
September 11th, 2023 16:58
My Little Fantasy
Doggerel Dave said:
A teaser, Bella. I know - you will tell me that it is YOUR fantasy, and not to share....but still.... 🙂
September 11th, 2023 16:20
Doggerel Dave said:
A teaser, Bella. I know - you will tell me that it is YOUR fantasy, and not to share....but still.... 🙂
September 11th, 2023 16:20
My Little Fantasy
peto said:
Lovely to read as per
But you leave us wondering what the fantasy could be
A poem in the making possibly
Clever to leave the reader wanting more
I\'m sure I just heard a roar in the distance
September 11th, 2023 15:31
peto said:
Lovely to read as per
But you leave us wondering what the fantasy could be
A poem in the making possibly
Clever to leave the reader wanting more
I\'m sure I just heard a roar in the distance
September 11th, 2023 15:31
My Little Fantasy
LIZ said:
And I wonder....is today that rainy day? Because I\'m ready for that little fantasy! 😉 Beautiful! 🩷
September 11th, 2023 15:14
LIZ said:
And I wonder....is today that rainy day? Because I\'m ready for that little fantasy! 😉 Beautiful! 🩷
September 11th, 2023 15:14
When We Are One
AuburnScribbler said:
A gorgeously written poem here Bella, such an emphatic reminder of the base hope that is in all of us. Though the understandable infuriating tone you\'ve chosen for the last three lines, is a lament of the prolonged true horror story, that humanity continues to write.
Thank you for sharing, bravo, and I hope that all is well.
September 11th, 2023 11:56
AuburnScribbler said:
A gorgeously written poem here Bella, such an emphatic reminder of the base hope that is in all of us. Though the understandable infuriating tone you\'ve chosen for the last three lines, is a lament of the prolonged true horror story, that humanity continues to write.
Thank you for sharing, bravo, and I hope that all is well.
September 11th, 2023 11:56
When We Are One
Pop64 said:
So very true. I hope and pray for unity, a lasting unity. I cannot wait for hell to freeze over
September 11th, 2023 11:52
Pop64 said:
So very true. I hope and pray for unity, a lasting unity. I cannot wait for hell to freeze over
September 11th, 2023 11:52
When We Are One
peto said:
Like it started with your dreams or wishes for the world
Then ended with the reality
Great content and wisdom
A can\'t miss writer
September 10th, 2023 07:39
peto said:
Like it started with your dreams or wishes for the world
Then ended with the reality
Great content and wisdom
A can\'t miss writer
September 10th, 2023 07:39
When We Are One
Neville said:
too few take risks these day .. it feels increasingly like a tick a box, tap a key and pop a pill world we all live in .. I believe we have risk assessed ourselves into a corner ..
I also agree with every ingle word you have writ .. glad you broke the mould my friend & it didn\'t go the other way wink wink .. Neville
September 10th, 2023 02:26
Neville said:
too few take risks these day .. it feels increasingly like a tick a box, tap a key and pop a pill world we all live in .. I believe we have risk assessed ourselves into a corner ..
I also agree with every ingle word you have writ .. glad you broke the mould my friend & it didn\'t go the other way wink wink .. Neville
September 10th, 2023 02:26
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