Comments received on poems by Bella Shepard



I Remember
Doggerel Dave said:

The kind of work I can appreciate, Bella. Aroused all my poetic sensibilities (such as they are). Complete enjoyment.

Kudos to your parents as they managed to maintain the illusion.

July 12th, 2023 19:55

I Remember
peto said:

Terrific writing
Flow and rhyme are magnificent
It\'s the content however that really stands out
You took me back to a bus ride with my mum and wee sister
To keep us amused she had us see how many xmas trees we could see in windows on journey
Also loved the last 6th verse especially

July 12th, 2023 14:10

I Remember
Parisab said:

Very heartfelt, so it was relatable-

July 12th, 2023 13:11

I Remember
orchidee said:

I shall remember this is a fine write Bella!

July 12th, 2023 12:55

I Remember
Neville said:


this is an amazing poem Bella, clearly autobiographical & the love contained within it & which indeed inspired it, lends a very welcome warm glow at the end of a bloomin long day .. Perfectly crafted in every respect ..

Respect my friend & truly .. Neville



July 12th, 2023 12:51

Birdsong
Pop64 said:

a haiku in true form with wonderful imagery. Beautiful

July 12th, 2023 12:22

I Remember
Pop64 said:

the read is effortless and so very smooth with it\'s rhyme and timing. The imagery is quite clear and wonderfully descriptive. A very good and enjoyable write, a reminder of youth and how our elders protected and shielded us.

July 12th, 2023 12:18

I Remember
Teddy.15 said:

Dear Bella I actually admire your incredible childhood. Such a warm and joyful read. 💖

July 12th, 2023 11:54

My Eyes Are Closed
L. B. Mek said:

\'So rich, so sweet
When in my youth
They were complete\'

\'Because of age
I now have time
To drift and think
To render sublime

The love, the life
That was my own\'
Brilliant!
just such a beautiful
showcasing of your empathy
dear Poet, thank you!

July 10th, 2023 03:03

Blow Wind
Caring dove said:

Hi Bella lovely writing ))

July 9th, 2023 11:33

Birdsong
Teddy.15 said:

Beautiful ❤️

July 4th, 2023 17:08

Vacation Time
sorenbarrett said:

Missed you Bella but hope you had a wonderful time. Loved the poem wherever your destination.

July 3rd, 2023 15:37

A Taste of Tears
Teddy.15 said:

Such a tender poem, I\'ve cried in silence many times, you really have this perfectly written ❤️


July 3rd, 2023 12:38

Birdsong
Caring dove said:

Hi Bella )

A lovely writing

Birds always make me smile even if I may be feeling sad .. I see a bird a part of me can’t help but smile

They make us feel better sometimes .. even if it s just for s moment


July 3rd, 2023 12:19

Vacation Time
Neville said:


I must have been away at the same time .. its the only reason I can think of why I have not passed this way before now .. I hope you had a FAB time and are now fully charged n raring to write ... Neville :)

July 3rd, 2023 01:12

Memories
Teddy.15 said:

Dear Bella, Bursting with empathy and compassion. Wonderfully written 🤗

July 2nd, 2023 15:35

Vacation Time
Doggerel Dave said:

Always an excellent idea to go on holiday, Bella - good for you. I hope it\'s working out to be the best you\'ve ever had!

June 16th, 2023 19:35

Vacation Time
Goldfinch60 said:

Enjoy your time in relaxing enjoyment Bella.

Andy

June 10th, 2023 00:49

Vacation Time
L. B. Mek said:

hope you n yours have a lovely break
I\'m sure much deserved!
stay safe my cherished friend

June 9th, 2023 01:55

Vacation Time
arqios said:

Have a refreshing time. You will be missed!

June 8th, 2023 07:25

Vacation Time
orchidee said:

See you soon! :)

June 8th, 2023 01:23

Vacation Time
Laura🌻 said:

Dear Bella,

Enjoy your vacation!

Laura🌻

June 7th, 2023 15:28

Memories
MendedFences27 said:

Wow! This is so bittersweet that it is beautiful. I\'ve never seen the experience of Alzheimer\'s presented in such a graphic yet understanding way. It is a tearjerking poem, yet I felt it as a clearly visual scene. Just wonderful. - Phil A.

May 30th, 2023 14:10

Memories
Bella Shepard said:

Thank you so much my cherished friend. I love that you saw those sentiments in all of us, it is an unavoidable part of life, that we reflect and perhaps better understand their value. I truly appreciate the fav. God bless!

May 29th, 2023 08:51

Memories
L. B. Mek said:

BRILLIANT!!!
\'It’s funny how they still hold the faint scent of mothballs and lavender

Here are memories of life and love
Of promises kept and hopes deferred\'

\'I desperately need to visit each, one last time

So I carry them into the garden and we spend a lovely afternoon together
Reminiscing, laughing, crying\'
(even devoid of the Alzheimer\'s context
these sentiments of longing
ring true for most of us
\'as time goes by\')
you have me in tears, kind Poet
thank you!

May 29th, 2023 01:28

Memories
rhmn_7 said:

Some memories hold a sweet scent, others a bitter taste. But embracing them all together shows how much one has matured.

May 28th, 2023 15:42

Memories
Neville said:

Heart-wrenchingly real and heartbreakingly sad .. I know for a fact, both professionally and from personal experience of insidiously loosing loved ones and those I hold dear .. the beast is so indiscriminate and has no pride whatsoever .. it touches and steals away whomsoever it pleases .. I seriously pray that before too long, it will have had its day by virtue of new and innovative medical advances .. Sadly this must surely now be my favouwrite Bella Shepard post to date .. Neville 💜

May 28th, 2023 01:46

Memories
sorenbarrett said:

This is often sadder for those watching than those that go through it. What they often experience is confusion and frustration. Those lucky enough to be trapped in a good spot are happy and those trapped in a sad spot relive times of sadness in their lives. You have written this with such a haunting feel Bella it does somehow feel lost. So well done.

May 27th, 2023 14:59

Memories
orchidee said:

A thoughtful write Bella.

May 27th, 2023 10:22

Treading The Path Of Life
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

A wonderful poem inspiring good and righteous sentiments, to fan the embers of goodness yayy. If everyone thought like that the world could be better for all. Kudos!!

Plz also read and comment on my newest poem.

May 26th, 2023 05:38



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