Comments received on poems by Bella Shepard
Sad Little Puppy
sorenbarrett said:
Bella, this took me back to my childhood and I felt like my mother was reading it to me as a bedtime story. When I had finished it dawned on me there was more here than meets the eye. This was a parable and yes what is good for one is not always good for another. Be careful of what you believe from what others tell you. Advice from a stranger can lead to problems. As to the length dear Bella it should never be a worry it is the quality of the work that counts and this was great, thanks for sharing.
January 28th, 2023 13:01
sorenbarrett said:
Bella, this took me back to my childhood and I felt like my mother was reading it to me as a bedtime story. When I had finished it dawned on me there was more here than meets the eye. This was a parable and yes what is good for one is not always good for another. Be careful of what you believe from what others tell you. Advice from a stranger can lead to problems. As to the length dear Bella it should never be a worry it is the quality of the work that counts and this was great, thanks for sharing.
January 28th, 2023 13:01
Sad Little Puppy
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh a wonderful story and with a good moral too - - thank you dear Bella for sharing its impressive rhyming --- - this child at heart likes every line - in fact I must read it again for when my young family visits so into my list of faves goes this lovely puppy tale.
January 28th, 2023 11:41
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh a wonderful story and with a good moral too - - thank you dear Bella for sharing its impressive rhyming --- - this child at heart likes every line - in fact I must read it again for when my young family visits so into my list of faves goes this lovely puppy tale.
January 28th, 2023 11:41
Sad Little Puppy
orchidee said:
A lovely story Bella.
I saw two cats in a porch way, maybe waiting to get indoors. They were snuggled up, one partly on top of the other one. They were very sweet!
January 28th, 2023 11:32
orchidee said:
A lovely story Bella.
I saw two cats in a porch way, maybe waiting to get indoors. They were snuggled up, one partly on top of the other one. They were very sweet!
January 28th, 2023 11:32
The Music Wraps Around Me
L. B. Mek said:
\'without Music, life would be a mistake\'
Friedrich Nietzsche
(so glad I found this
simply Beautiful
dear cherished Poet)
thank you!
January 27th, 2023 03:33
L. B. Mek said:
\'without Music, life would be a mistake\'
Friedrich Nietzsche
(so glad I found this
simply Beautiful
dear cherished Poet)
thank you!
January 27th, 2023 03:33
The Violin Wept
Doggerel Dave said:
What a subtle way of providing an angry (sad?) political message, Bella. wish I could do that sometimes instead of my full frontal clod hopping way...but are people listening to the message or the violin? I hope both....
January 11th, 2023 07:01
Doggerel Dave said:
What a subtle way of providing an angry (sad?) political message, Bella. wish I could do that sometimes instead of my full frontal clod hopping way...but are people listening to the message or the violin? I hope both....
January 11th, 2023 07:01
Distractions
Doggerel Dave said:
I find Bella, as each day, month, year passes I come to welcome silence more and more....... is that a preparation for something......?
January 11th, 2023 06:52
Doggerel Dave said:
I find Bella, as each day, month, year passes I come to welcome silence more and more....... is that a preparation for something......?
January 11th, 2023 06:52
The Violin Wept
sorenbarrett said:
I used to play the violin and I love the minor key but maybe this is because the violine is weeping for me. Silence is the consent by omission and the worst way of condoning. Well done Bella
January 10th, 2023 11:39
sorenbarrett said:
I used to play the violin and I love the minor key but maybe this is because the violine is weeping for me. Silence is the consent by omission and the worst way of condoning. Well done Bella
January 10th, 2023 11:39
The Violin Wept
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow, this is truly a work of art dear Bella.
Your words never fail to deliver such a heartfelt message, and this one was so sobering.
I loved the violin metaphor, and then again, am unable to seperate the metaphor from the deeper meaning. It\'s so wonderfully tied together.
I feel like the usage of the word \"plaintiff\" is very direct and free from ambiguity.
While the word \"case\" is a double entendre being the literal case of the violin, and also the \"case\" as in the court case.
Kudos to you beloved poet, such a real reflection.
January 9th, 2023 14:01
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow, this is truly a work of art dear Bella.
Your words never fail to deliver such a heartfelt message, and this one was so sobering.
I loved the violin metaphor, and then again, am unable to seperate the metaphor from the deeper meaning. It\'s so wonderfully tied together.
I feel like the usage of the word \"plaintiff\" is very direct and free from ambiguity.
While the word \"case\" is a double entendre being the literal case of the violin, and also the \"case\" as in the court case.
Kudos to you beloved poet, such a real reflection.
January 9th, 2023 14:01
The Violin Wept
Neville said:
much like your good self it seems, I rarely listen to the news these days without involuntarily wincing .. I also much prefer the language of the violin .. I am glad you posted these words Bella, it helps when one is made aware that they are not the only one tuned into that particular station ... Neville
January 9th, 2023 03:25
Neville said:
much like your good self it seems, I rarely listen to the news these days without involuntarily wincing .. I also much prefer the language of the violin .. I am glad you posted these words Bella, it helps when one is made aware that they are not the only one tuned into that particular station ... Neville
January 9th, 2023 03:25
The Violin Wept
Goldfinch60 said:
I have seen the film and listened to the music and played the theme on clarinet, it is a wonderful piece of music that means so much and always brings tears. Wonderful words Bella
January 9th, 2023 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
I have seen the film and listened to the music and played the theme on clarinet, it is a wonderful piece of music that means so much and always brings tears. Wonderful words Bella
January 9th, 2023 02:24
The Violin Wept
arqios said:
For this reason I am rarely found supping on broadcast news 📰.
January 8th, 2023 22:07
arqios said:
For this reason I am rarely found supping on broadcast news 📰.
January 8th, 2023 22:07
The Violin Wept
Fay Slimm. said:
The power of your words flooded my heart too as the violin brought with its minor key all the woes and the sadness humanity is challenged with in these very difficult days - -my tears fall so many times yet things still stay the same - - such an apt choice of violin music too.
January 8th, 2023 17:16
Fay Slimm. said:
The power of your words flooded my heart too as the violin brought with its minor key all the woes and the sadness humanity is challenged with in these very difficult days - -my tears fall so many times yet things still stay the same - - such an apt choice of violin music too.
January 8th, 2023 17:16
The Violin Wept
orchidee said:
And the \'news\' does not make it any better. We can be totally confused sometimes - are some things really as bad as reported? Re: that terrible weather you were forecast to have, for example.
January 8th, 2023 11:15
orchidee said:
And the \'news\' does not make it any better. We can be totally confused sometimes - are some things really as bad as reported? Re: that terrible weather you were forecast to have, for example.
January 8th, 2023 11:15
Distractions
L. B. Mek said:
simple, says it best dear Poet
oft, we\'re so busy running
we\'ve become deaf
to our own intuitive thoughts
and now we\'re susceptible
to every little lie, or fake news
having lost
our capacity, to heed the veracity
in those wise, silence whispers
our ancestors
spent so long trying to cultivate..
I truly believe, all that we need
we can excavate from within
even that trait, to welcome
stillness and solitude
as a utility in our lives and not necessarily
a guaranteed, gateway to depression
and misery..
we\'re all so much more capable
than we Fear, we are
I think, that\'s the message
I read in your succinct write
such a soothing and empowering message!
thank you
January 6th, 2023 04:51
L. B. Mek said:
simple, says it best dear Poet
oft, we\'re so busy running
we\'ve become deaf
to our own intuitive thoughts
and now we\'re susceptible
to every little lie, or fake news
having lost
our capacity, to heed the veracity
in those wise, silence whispers
our ancestors
spent so long trying to cultivate..
I truly believe, all that we need
we can excavate from within
even that trait, to welcome
stillness and solitude
as a utility in our lives and not necessarily
a guaranteed, gateway to depression
and misery..
we\'re all so much more capable
than we Fear, we are
I think, that\'s the message
I read in your succinct write
such a soothing and empowering message!
thank you
January 6th, 2023 04:51
Distractions
Goldfinch60 said:
That silence can bring so much wonder into our minds Bella.
Andy
January 2nd, 2023 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
That silence can bring so much wonder into our minds Bella.
Andy
January 2nd, 2023 02:44
Distractions
sorenbarrett said:
A good point and although it may be true for many, for me I prefer the sile3nce. I guess I am just old.
January 1st, 2023 15:59
sorenbarrett said:
A good point and although it may be true for many, for me I prefer the sile3nce. I guess I am just old.
January 1st, 2023 15:59
Distractions
Neville said:
the point you make is made so very bloomin well & poemed to the very pinnacle of poetic perfection ..
indeed, I am sure that others besides my own self would have liked to have penned it first .. :) x
January 1st, 2023 12:31
Neville said:
the point you make is made so very bloomin well & poemed to the very pinnacle of poetic perfection ..
indeed, I am sure that others besides my own self would have liked to have penned it first .. :) x
January 1st, 2023 12:31
Distractions
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes lots I believe react badly to silence and solitude in these chaotically busy days -- I pity those whose New Year continues full of material distractions that stifle so easily the lessons of silence. Such a thought provoking write dear Bella and thank you for this needed reminder.
January 1st, 2023 11:31
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes lots I believe react badly to silence and solitude in these chaotically busy days -- I pity those whose New Year continues full of material distractions that stifle so easily the lessons of silence. Such a thought provoking write dear Bella and thank you for this needed reminder.
January 1st, 2023 11:31
Mr. Bean
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow fabulous poem so well expressed on mr. Bean, a fav comedian .! I have a poem on him too. Kudos for yours!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
Wishing u a happy new year.
December 29th, 2022 11:53
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow fabulous poem so well expressed on mr. Bean, a fav comedian .! I have a poem on him too. Kudos for yours!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
Wishing u a happy new year.
December 29th, 2022 11:53
Mr. Bean
sorenbarrett said:
Bella I look forward to your poems and how they share the common beauty in this world that often goes unnoticed. My favorite episodes and movies by Mr. Bean were just that because he didn\'t speak. He needed no words to convey comedy and make me laugh. laughter is the best ,medicine.
December 23rd, 2022 15:36
sorenbarrett said:
Bella I look forward to your poems and how they share the common beauty in this world that often goes unnoticed. My favorite episodes and movies by Mr. Bean were just that because he didn\'t speak. He needed no words to convey comedy and make me laugh. laughter is the best ,medicine.
December 23rd, 2022 15:36
Mr. Bean
rhmn_7 said:
Well Mr. Bean is a bit silly in his own way, that\'s why we love him so much!
December 23rd, 2022 07:42
rhmn_7 said:
Well Mr. Bean is a bit silly in his own way, that\'s why we love him so much!
December 23rd, 2022 07:42
Mr. Bean
L. B. Mek said:
love this!
\'Aligning pencils on the desk
Unable to take action\'
so relatable, in our procrastination
all humanity is aligned...
lol
(just the other day
I was reminiscing with someone
about the mr bean specials on tv
and how festive season tv, as a whole
was such a central part of our childhoods
how we would get the tv guides
and circle everything we wanted to watch..
I appreciate progress
but I mourn for those nuggets
that accumulated, to make
our festive seasons that more special
because it took effort to make them, so...
oh well, my grey\'s allows me
to nag a little, but only a little...
(Hope you have a lovely festive season, dear Poet
thanks for all the great reads you\'ve shared)
December 23rd, 2022 07:23
L. B. Mek said:
love this!
\'Aligning pencils on the desk
Unable to take action\'
so relatable, in our procrastination
all humanity is aligned...
lol
(just the other day
I was reminiscing with someone
about the mr bean specials on tv
and how festive season tv, as a whole
was such a central part of our childhoods
how we would get the tv guides
and circle everything we wanted to watch..
I appreciate progress
but I mourn for those nuggets
that accumulated, to make
our festive seasons that more special
because it took effort to make them, so...
oh well, my grey\'s allows me
to nag a little, but only a little...
(Hope you have a lovely festive season, dear Poet
thanks for all the great reads you\'ve shared)
December 23rd, 2022 07:23
Mr. Bean
Fay Slimm. said:
What a delightful picture to head your excellent rhyme dear Bella which I am sure Mr Bean would be honoured to read. Thank you for giving me such a big smile.
December 23rd, 2022 03:54
Fay Slimm. said:
What a delightful picture to head your excellent rhyme dear Bella which I am sure Mr Bean would be honoured to read. Thank you for giving me such a big smile.
December 23rd, 2022 03:54
Mr. Bean
Neville said:
If I could offer an award for bringing a smile to this old fellas face, I would unreservedly award you gold for this magnificent take on one of my favourite characters
.. Nine yes x9 perfectly formed rhyming verses and each one building on its predecessor and keeping to script is no easy task .. I rarely change my mind these days having once made it up, but on this occasion feel compelled to swap the gold star for a platinum one :) x
December 23rd, 2022 03:23
Neville said:
If I could offer an award for bringing a smile to this old fellas face, I would unreservedly award you gold for this magnificent take on one of my favourite characters
.. Nine yes x9 perfectly formed rhyming verses and each one building on its predecessor and keeping to script is no easy task .. I rarely change my mind these days having once made it up, but on this occasion feel compelled to swap the gold star for a platinum one :) x
December 23rd, 2022 03:23
Mr. Bean
Goldfinch60 said:
Well he brought some fine words to you in these one Bella.
Andy
December 23rd, 2022 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Well he brought some fine words to you in these one Bella.
Andy
December 23rd, 2022 02:48
Mr. Bean
arqios said:
Here is my year\'s sanity in a poem. A good way to end the year with!
December 22nd, 2022 21:37
arqios said:
Here is my year\'s sanity in a poem. A good way to end the year with!
December 22nd, 2022 21:37
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