Comments received on poems by Bella Shepard
Beware Of A.I.
Pop64 said:
and without compassion, there goes the conscience and the understanding of good/bad. Stated with clarity of flow.
July 28th, 2023 13:42
Pop64 said:
and without compassion, there goes the conscience and the understanding of good/bad. Stated with clarity of flow.
July 28th, 2023 13:42
Oh What A Beautiful Morning!
L. B. Mek said:
(oh such abundant gaiety in worded poetry
oh what imagery of nature\'s divine in a rhyme
how in-step with each musical note
fingertips digging deep in that coat)
hey, I get something for trying right?
lol
(but sadly my cherished friend
we have found something we don\'t agree on
\'such a sad day\'
musicals, are just a no no for me
I\'m so sorry, i mean no disrespect
but any time
I see people deep in conversation
and then a second later
they\'re all singing operatic facing the camera
I\'m just cringing, my insides being twisted something violent)
erm.. not that i have strong feelings about it
no, really
you know me, I\'m all easy going foolishness
.. just you know
I still have nightmares
about 2005 Producers and Chicago with richard gere
i still shudder at the mere thought
screeching \'where\'s me salt\')
lmao
I\'m half joking..
🤦♀️
please, forgive my uncultured ways
July 28th, 2023 03:39
L. B. Mek said:
(oh such abundant gaiety in worded poetry
oh what imagery of nature\'s divine in a rhyme
how in-step with each musical note
fingertips digging deep in that coat)
hey, I get something for trying right?
lol
(but sadly my cherished friend
we have found something we don\'t agree on
\'such a sad day\'
musicals, are just a no no for me
I\'m so sorry, i mean no disrespect
but any time
I see people deep in conversation
and then a second later
they\'re all singing operatic facing the camera
I\'m just cringing, my insides being twisted something violent)
erm.. not that i have strong feelings about it
no, really
you know me, I\'m all easy going foolishness
.. just you know
I still have nightmares
about 2005 Producers and Chicago with richard gere
i still shudder at the mere thought
screeching \'where\'s me salt\')
lmao
I\'m half joking..
🤦♀️
please, forgive my uncultured ways
July 28th, 2023 03:39
The Red MG
L. B. Mek said:
poem\'s like this, is why I\'m in love with Poetry
those cannon fodders
can keep their refinement elitism
their abstracted far-fetched imagery
all I need, are a few poetic words
of artistic sincerity
breathing life to a memory
a concept, a thought, a life\'s story...
I\'m in love with the elegance of this
decadently unfurling, poetic gem
just !!!Brilliant!!!
(I bow to your superior talent dear cherished Poet)
and it had to be a morgan
the last car manufacturers to use
actual wood in the frame of the cars
gave it that personalised feel
even in an assembly line batch, each car
had its own unique personality
clinging-on
to the days when artisans
put a little of themselves in that they crafted
with love
like you\'ve done with this Poem
my talented friend
(sorry for my overzealous enthusiasm
I genuinely admire works of subtle genius
so rare)
thank you!
July 28th, 2023 03:19
L. B. Mek said:
poem\'s like this, is why I\'m in love with Poetry
those cannon fodders
can keep their refinement elitism
their abstracted far-fetched imagery
all I need, are a few poetic words
of artistic sincerity
breathing life to a memory
a concept, a thought, a life\'s story...
I\'m in love with the elegance of this
decadently unfurling, poetic gem
just !!!Brilliant!!!
(I bow to your superior talent dear cherished Poet)
and it had to be a morgan
the last car manufacturers to use
actual wood in the frame of the cars
gave it that personalised feel
even in an assembly line batch, each car
had its own unique personality
clinging-on
to the days when artisans
put a little of themselves in that they crafted
with love
like you\'ve done with this Poem
my talented friend
(sorry for my overzealous enthusiasm
I genuinely admire works of subtle genius
so rare)
thank you!
July 28th, 2023 03:19
Oh What A Beautiful Morning!
peto said:
Chanting away
Lovely way to start the day
July 28th, 2023 01:15
peto said:
Chanting away
Lovely way to start the day
July 28th, 2023 01:15
The Red MG
Neville said:
I seem to have a knack of not being around at the off .. but am delighted to have arrived here now that the dust has settled .. and I am able to take my time and to take the whole thing in ..
This must surely be your flagship Bella at least to date that is ..
beautifully crafted throughout with not a word out of place .. and if it were not a contradiction in terms, I would go as far as to say, it is timeless ..
Full marks indeed from me to thee .. Neville
July 27th, 2023 23:26
Neville said:
I seem to have a knack of not being around at the off .. but am delighted to have arrived here now that the dust has settled .. and I am able to take my time and to take the whole thing in ..
This must surely be your flagship Bella at least to date that is ..
beautifully crafted throughout with not a word out of place .. and if it were not a contradiction in terms, I would go as far as to say, it is timeless ..
Full marks indeed from me to thee .. Neville
July 27th, 2023 23:26
The Red MG
Teddy.15 said:
There is a true lifetime in this poem dearest Bella ❤️ another magnificent read from your pen.
July 27th, 2023 12:05
Teddy.15 said:
There is a true lifetime in this poem dearest Bella ❤️ another magnificent read from your pen.
July 27th, 2023 12:05
Beware Of A.I.
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m sure it has a good purpose for something\'s dear Bella, but personally I\'m not a fan I find a hand shake and a hug or even just eye contact creates humans to be warmer. 💖 A fascinating subject
July 27th, 2023 12:03
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m sure it has a good purpose for something\'s dear Bella, but personally I\'m not a fan I find a hand shake and a hug or even just eye contact creates humans to be warmer. 💖 A fascinating subject
July 27th, 2023 12:03
Oh What A Beautiful Morning!
Teddy.15 said:
Oh no, I\'ll be singing all day now. Hugs ❣️🤗
July 27th, 2023 03:28
Teddy.15 said:
Oh no, I\'ll be singing all day now. Hugs ❣️🤗
July 27th, 2023 03:28
Oh What A Beautiful Morning!
Neville said:
read with a smile and a warm glow ..
that not even the prospect of the days work ahead is going to rob me of ..
Neville 🙂💜👍x
July 27th, 2023 00:42
Neville said:
read with a smile and a warm glow ..
that not even the prospect of the days work ahead is going to rob me of ..
Neville 🙂💜👍x
July 27th, 2023 00:42
Oh What A Beautiful Morning!
Caring dove said:
I’ve heard of this song .. and I like your lines about the trees ))
Lovely writing
July 26th, 2023 11:53
Caring dove said:
I’ve heard of this song .. and I like your lines about the trees ))
Lovely writing
July 26th, 2023 11:53
The Red MG
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Bella, that life together is so wonderful, I know.
Andy
July 26th, 2023 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Bella, that life together is so wonderful, I know.
Andy
July 26th, 2023 01:15
The Red MG
peto said:
Tremendous rhyme and flow as I\'ve come to expect from you
It\'s the content however that sets it apart
Superb Bella
July 25th, 2023 23:56
peto said:
Tremendous rhyme and flow as I\'ve come to expect from you
It\'s the content however that sets it apart
Superb Bella
July 25th, 2023 23:56
The Red MG
Parisab said:
Ain’t that a shame? ‘The house had weathered 60 years’ beautiful metaphor as well (her body)
July 25th, 2023 22:39
Parisab said:
Ain’t that a shame? ‘The house had weathered 60 years’ beautiful metaphor as well (her body)
July 25th, 2023 22:39
Shinrin-yoku (forest bathing)
Caring dove said:
Beautiful writing , Bella )) liked the read
Lovely gentle words
And that’s what a lot of nature is .. gentle and beautiful
July 18th, 2023 12:48
Caring dove said:
Beautiful writing , Bella )) liked the read
Lovely gentle words
And that’s what a lot of nature is .. gentle and beautiful
July 18th, 2023 12:48
Beware Of A.I.
Doggerel Dave said:
Not to worry too much (but not too little either), Bella. It is human actors which will use this tool - it\'s still humans we should worry about. Forget the BS speculation that AI of its own volition will take over the world.... (which is not what you were saying, I know - but to listen to the commentary in the media ....aah!)
July 18th, 2023 00:58
Doggerel Dave said:
Not to worry too much (but not too little either), Bella. It is human actors which will use this tool - it\'s still humans we should worry about. Forget the BS speculation that AI of its own volition will take over the world.... (which is not what you were saying, I know - but to listen to the commentary in the media ....aah!)
July 18th, 2023 00:58
Beware Of A.I.
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, kinda scary
how quickly, once theoretical
problems
are fast becoming our daily
nightmares..
(I so relate, dear Poet)
July 17th, 2023 04:45
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, kinda scary
how quickly, once theoretical
problems
are fast becoming our daily
nightmares..
(I so relate, dear Poet)
July 17th, 2023 04:45
Beware Of A.I.
Neville said:
NO .. you got it all wrong .. THIS is not just a thought at all, it is META truth in a nut shell .. and probably one of the most meaningful 575\'s I have come across in a very long while .. Kudos .. Neville
July 17th, 2023 02:00
Neville said:
NO .. you got it all wrong .. THIS is not just a thought at all, it is META truth in a nut shell .. and probably one of the most meaningful 575\'s I have come across in a very long while .. Kudos .. Neville
July 17th, 2023 02:00
Beware Of A.I.
orchidee said:
Does A.I. only ever do what humans programme it to do? Scary, if not.
Machines - dalek are talking dustbins. lol.
July 17th, 2023 01:52
orchidee said:
Does A.I. only ever do what humans programme it to do? Scary, if not.
Machines - dalek are talking dustbins. lol.
July 17th, 2023 01:52
Beware Of A.I.
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Bella - and many people believe it!
Andy
July 17th, 2023 01:04
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Bella - and many people believe it!
Andy
July 17th, 2023 01:04
Beware Of A.I.
Ok Waleed said:
Created by humans
Who have emotions
But an unbiased A.I can help
July 16th, 2023 22:00
Ok Waleed said:
Created by humans
Who have emotions
But an unbiased A.I can help
July 16th, 2023 22:00
Beware Of A.I.
sorenbarrett said:
So true Bella. I have been concerned about this before it became popular. I have written a couple of pomes on it and continue to voice my anxiety about it, not so much for me but for my grand children. Now even those in charge of AI are voicing their concerns but I think we have gone too far to turn back.
July 16th, 2023 15:43
sorenbarrett said:
So true Bella. I have been concerned about this before it became popular. I have written a couple of pomes on it and continue to voice my anxiety about it, not so much for me but for my grand children. Now even those in charge of AI are voicing their concerns but I think we have gone too far to turn back.
July 16th, 2023 15:43
I Remember
Goldfinch60 said:
Having a good childhood makes the world a better place for us all Bella.
Andy
July 16th, 2023 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Having a good childhood makes the world a better place for us all Bella.
Andy
July 16th, 2023 01:53
I Remember
Garth Rakumakoe said:
I love every fabric of this write. so much warmth! - Kudos, dear writer, very well penned!
July 14th, 2023 04:13
Garth Rakumakoe said:
I love every fabric of this write. so much warmth! - Kudos, dear writer, very well penned!
July 14th, 2023 04:13
I Remember
L. B. Mek said:
that accursed \'news\', forced down my repulsed throat
that two young girls died, outside their school
on the last day of the school year
recently
and i couldn\'t help sighing
we, so often
take for granted, how lucky we are
to take a breath, free of pain
to look back at a childhood we navigated
without too much trauma
and while reading your poetry today, cherished friend
as a I smiled, i felt
a little of the weary in my eyes
easing, even if just for a while
thank you!
July 14th, 2023 02:07
L. B. Mek said:
that accursed \'news\', forced down my repulsed throat
that two young girls died, outside their school
on the last day of the school year
recently
and i couldn\'t help sighing
we, so often
take for granted, how lucky we are
to take a breath, free of pain
to look back at a childhood we navigated
without too much trauma
and while reading your poetry today, cherished friend
as a I smiled, i felt
a little of the weary in my eyes
easing, even if just for a while
thank you!
July 14th, 2023 02:07
I Remember
sorenbarrett said:
For those of us fortunate enough to have had such a supportive, loving childhood this rhyme rings true and gives feelings of comfort and nostalgia. A lovely write friend. I so enjoy reading your poems keep writing.
July 13th, 2023 09:15
sorenbarrett said:
For those of us fortunate enough to have had such a supportive, loving childhood this rhyme rings true and gives feelings of comfort and nostalgia. A lovely write friend. I so enjoy reading your poems keep writing.
July 13th, 2023 09:15
I Remember
orchidee said:
Cooeee Bella. See, I did not forget this poem - I remembered it! lol.
July 13th, 2023 01:45
orchidee said:
Cooeee Bella. See, I did not forget this poem - I remembered it! lol.
July 13th, 2023 01:45
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