Comments received on poems by Bella Shepard
Morning Breaks
Teddy.15 said:
Dear Bella, Just waking each day is a miracle
Your poem is very wise and so very enjoyable the fancy rhyme.
The goal is to survive
To flourish and to thrive
From all that I derive
Be glad to be alive
I had a chuckle as only you could rhyme so flawlessly 💖
September 3rd, 2023 10:59
Teddy.15 said:
Dear Bella, Just waking each day is a miracle
Your poem is very wise and so very enjoyable the fancy rhyme.
The goal is to survive
To flourish and to thrive
From all that I derive
Be glad to be alive
I had a chuckle as only you could rhyme so flawlessly 💖
September 3rd, 2023 10:59
Morning Breaks
orchidee said:
Now behave Orchi. No guffawing in church over the \'speaking blackbird\' line! Doh, it\'s poetic expression, Fido tells me.
But he talks to blackbirds. lol.
September 3rd, 2023 10:47
orchidee said:
Now behave Orchi. No guffawing in church over the \'speaking blackbird\' line! Doh, it\'s poetic expression, Fido tells me.
But he talks to blackbirds. lol.
September 3rd, 2023 10:47
Morning Breaks
peto said:
Rhyme rhythm and flow are tremendous
Well worth waiting for
Superb writing Bella
September 3rd, 2023 10:32
peto said:
Rhyme rhythm and flow are tremendous
Well worth waiting for
Superb writing Bella
September 3rd, 2023 10:32
Treading The Path Of Life
Pop64 said:
A wonderful depiction of the need to act, to tend to and be part of the goodness of the world. FFan them so they can grow and not put them out. A beautiful read.
September 1st, 2023 14:43
Pop64 said:
A wonderful depiction of the need to act, to tend to and be part of the goodness of the world. FFan them so they can grow and not put them out. A beautiful read.
September 1st, 2023 14:43
Being
orchidee said:
Though I know two or three of Shakey\'s quotes - \'Hamlet\' is quite \'quote-y\', if that\'s even a word?! lol.
August 30th, 2023 01:51
orchidee said:
Though I know two or three of Shakey\'s quotes - \'Hamlet\' is quite \'quote-y\', if that\'s even a word?! lol.
August 30th, 2023 01:51
Being
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes - comes when suddenly aware that sometime I won\'t be, but right now I am.
(not a bad or sad feeling).
August 29th, 2023 18:40
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes - comes when suddenly aware that sometime I won\'t be, but right now I am.
(not a bad or sad feeling).
August 29th, 2023 18:40
Being
Neville said:
ever so and often .. but not so much these daze .. till now & it hit me too, yet so very tenderly .. 💛
August 29th, 2023 14:32
Neville said:
ever so and often .. but not so much these daze .. till now & it hit me too, yet so very tenderly .. 💛
August 29th, 2023 14:32
Being
Pop64 said:
Only those lucky enough can say yes. And yes! it\'s an amazing feeling to just be, be still, be a part of everything, finding symbiosis. Terrific haiku!
August 29th, 2023 13:53
Pop64 said:
Only those lucky enough can say yes. And yes! it\'s an amazing feeling to just be, be still, be a part of everything, finding symbiosis. Terrific haiku!
August 29th, 2023 13:53
Being
peto said:
Are we human beings
Or human becoming
Short sharp and thought provoking
August 29th, 2023 13:06
peto said:
Are we human beings
Or human becoming
Short sharp and thought provoking
August 29th, 2023 13:06
Being
orchidee said:
I be - or I not be? That is the question!
It\'s cultured on \'ere, ya know - bit of Shakespeare there, a little mis-quoted! lol.
August 29th, 2023 12:23
orchidee said:
I be - or I not be? That is the question!
It\'s cultured on \'ere, ya know - bit of Shakespeare there, a little mis-quoted! lol.
August 29th, 2023 12:23
The Touron
Neville said:
probably one of the most apt neogilisms I have ever encountered .. and woven so seamlessly and well throughout your bloomin brilliant poem Bella .. I heard of similar behaviour being demonstrated by grossly irresponsible so called adults involving bears when I last visited Canada some years back ... Neville
August 28th, 2023 12:24
Neville said:
probably one of the most apt neogilisms I have ever encountered .. and woven so seamlessly and well throughout your bloomin brilliant poem Bella .. I heard of similar behaviour being demonstrated by grossly irresponsible so called adults involving bears when I last visited Canada some years back ... Neville
August 28th, 2023 12:24
The Touron
Goldfinch60 said:
Some people are just plain stupid when being with wildlife, I always treat wildlife with absolute respect.
Andy
August 27th, 2023 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Some people are just plain stupid when being with wildlife, I always treat wildlife with absolute respect.
Andy
August 27th, 2023 01:45
The Touron
Christina8 said:
Our city doubles it\'s population in summer and it\'s full of \"Tourons\". They drive like idiots too! Anyway, loved your poem, i see the manner in which you\'ve described in our state park also. Great job!
August 26th, 2023 05:17
Christina8 said:
Our city doubles it\'s population in summer and it\'s full of \"Tourons\". They drive like idiots too! Anyway, loved your poem, i see the manner in which you\'ve described in our state park also. Great job!
August 26th, 2023 05:17
The Touron
orchidee said:
Why do so many small children chase away birds and frighten them? And why do the parents let them?
Is it just innocent fun, or are they naughty brats? A bit of both?
August 26th, 2023 01:53
orchidee said:
Why do so many small children chase away birds and frighten them? And why do the parents let them?
Is it just innocent fun, or are they naughty brats? A bit of both?
August 26th, 2023 01:53
The Touron
orchidee said:
Erm, I saw a sign on a door \'Beware of the cat!\'. A domestic cat, not that they kept a lion/tiger, etc. Is that near enough to a wildlife park in the UK? heehee.
Oh, and the notice on my door is \'Beware of trouts\' (KP\') lol.
August 26th, 2023 01:52
orchidee said:
Erm, I saw a sign on a door \'Beware of the cat!\'. A domestic cat, not that they kept a lion/tiger, etc. Is that near enough to a wildlife park in the UK? heehee.
Oh, and the notice on my door is \'Beware of trouts\' (KP\') lol.
August 26th, 2023 01:52
The Touron
Doggerel Dave said:
Bella, if ever there was a word worthy of incorporation into the world’s lexicon it’s ‘touron’. New to me, although what it names is not. They are everywhere, and I may have had occasion to include them in one of my rants sometime. Not just in Yellowstone but in art galleries and museums and streets and beaches with tourist features and monuments and on and…… I now have a fantasy that a bison should be stationed at each of those situations to sort idiot tourists out…
Enjoyed this piece thoroughly… 🤣
August 25th, 2023 17:06
Doggerel Dave said:
Bella, if ever there was a word worthy of incorporation into the world’s lexicon it’s ‘touron’. New to me, although what it names is not. They are everywhere, and I may have had occasion to include them in one of my rants sometime. Not just in Yellowstone but in art galleries and museums and streets and beaches with tourist features and monuments and on and…… I now have a fantasy that a bison should be stationed at each of those situations to sort idiot tourists out…
Enjoyed this piece thoroughly… 🤣
August 25th, 2023 17:06
The Touron
Parisab said:
Touron? Love it! They should have listened to ‘Mama bison’ and now they better listen to your poem…
August 25th, 2023 15:46
Parisab said:
Touron? Love it! They should have listened to ‘Mama bison’ and now they better listen to your poem…
August 25th, 2023 15:46
We Experience Life
vividvoid14 said:
i love this peom, it reminds me of my mom alot
August 24th, 2023 14:00
vividvoid14 said:
i love this peom, it reminds me of my mom alot
August 24th, 2023 14:00
Lost In Love
sorenbarrett said:
At least you were not so blind as to not see the sign. Short but such good advice Bella
August 24th, 2023 11:14
sorenbarrett said:
At least you were not so blind as to not see the sign. Short but such good advice Bella
August 24th, 2023 11:14
We Experience Life
sorenbarrett said:
Good advice to a population that is near sighted, closed minded and deaf to what is around us. We all should question what we see, hear and even think. Nicely said
August 24th, 2023 11:12
sorenbarrett said:
Good advice to a population that is near sighted, closed minded and deaf to what is around us. We all should question what we see, hear and even think. Nicely said
August 24th, 2023 11:12
Lost In Love
Goldfinch60 said:
I seem to have had a net above me to save me from those rocks Bella.
Andy
August 24th, 2023 01:01
Goldfinch60 said:
I seem to have had a net above me to save me from those rocks Bella.
Andy
August 24th, 2023 01:01
We Experience Life
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Bella, many never listen, I do.
Andy
August 24th, 2023 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Bella, many never listen, I do.
Andy
August 24th, 2023 00:49
We Experience Life
Pradeep Gopi said:
Thanks for the message and you conveyed very beautifully🙏
August 23rd, 2023 17:29
Pradeep Gopi said:
Thanks for the message and you conveyed very beautifully🙏
August 23rd, 2023 17:29
We Experience Life
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes - be open to it, interpret and apply. But first be open to it, otherwise.....
You have it there, Bella.
August 23rd, 2023 17:04
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes - be open to it, interpret and apply. But first be open to it, otherwise.....
You have it there, Bella.
August 23rd, 2023 17:04
We Experience Life
orchidee said:
Yes, one thing we\'re meant to be slow to do - speak; and two things quick to do - hear, and become angry - says James in his letter/epistle.
Some sharp things there, including \'you fool\', \'you vain person\'. Oops!
August 23rd, 2023 14:29
orchidee said:
Yes, one thing we\'re meant to be slow to do - speak; and two things quick to do - hear, and become angry - says James in his letter/epistle.
Some sharp things there, including \'you fool\', \'you vain person\'. Oops!
August 23rd, 2023 14:29
We Experience Life
Pop64 said:
It\'s much like anything else, if one doesn\'t want to see something, they never will. We need to be open to it, willing to accept. Very clear and concise write. If I may, \"But all to often\" should be \"But all too often\", otherwise a well received meaning and write
August 23rd, 2023 13:44
Pop64 said:
It\'s much like anything else, if one doesn\'t want to see something, they never will. We need to be open to it, willing to accept. Very clear and concise write. If I may, \"But all to often\" should be \"But all too often\", otherwise a well received meaning and write
August 23rd, 2023 13:44
We Experience Life
LIZ said:
Very nice! We take so much for granted, step over the lessons at times....and get lost in the noise. Must start really listening! Thank you for this!
August 23rd, 2023 13:24
LIZ said:
Very nice! We take so much for granted, step over the lessons at times....and get lost in the noise. Must start really listening! Thank you for this!
August 23rd, 2023 13:24
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