Comments received on poems by Bella Shepard
A Mouse\'s Tale
sorenbarrett said:
Bella this wonderful tail brought images of the mouse from the movie \"The Green Mile\". The story was engaging and was wonderful for people of any age. It was so well rhymed and metered it just flowed. Well done
April 3rd, 2022 15:13
sorenbarrett said:
Bella this wonderful tail brought images of the mouse from the movie \"The Green Mile\". The story was engaging and was wonderful for people of any age. It was so well rhymed and metered it just flowed. Well done
April 3rd, 2022 15:13
A Mouse\'s Tale
tallisman said:
Wonderful, some stories want to be told! This is told so well. Loved it!
April 3rd, 2022 13:06
tallisman said:
Wonderful, some stories want to be told! This is told so well. Loved it!
April 3rd, 2022 13:06
A Mouse\'s Tale
Christina8 said:
Dear Bella, I read every word, all the rhymes so wonderful! When I read \"The scent of lilac in the air\", I swear I could actually smell them. Wonderful!
April 3rd, 2022 13:01
Christina8 said:
Dear Bella, I read every word, all the rhymes so wonderful! When I read \"The scent of lilac in the air\", I swear I could actually smell them. Wonderful!
April 3rd, 2022 13:01
A Mouse\'s Tale
dusk arising said:
I really enjoyed this moving tale with so many sentiments between the lines.
There is something for all ages here.
Into my favourites, thank you.
April 3rd, 2022 12:54
dusk arising said:
I really enjoyed this moving tale with so many sentiments between the lines.
There is something for all ages here.
Into my favourites, thank you.
April 3rd, 2022 12:54
Hey Little Kitty
FallenAngel1๐ said:
Great work here Bella. Iโve had many cats over the years,since I was a little kid. Iโve only had three black ones though. Midnight,Sindey and Jazz. No particular reason for only three,just worked out that way. If you look at a black cats face long enough it startโs to look like a panther.๐ just imagine it much bigger๐ cheers ๐ฅ๐น๐๐
April 3rd, 2022 08:56
FallenAngel1๐ said:
Great work here Bella. Iโve had many cats over the years,since I was a little kid. Iโve only had three black ones though. Midnight,Sindey and Jazz. No particular reason for only three,just worked out that way. If you look at a black cats face long enough it startโs to look like a panther.๐ just imagine it much bigger๐ cheers ๐ฅ๐น๐๐
April 3rd, 2022 08:56
Little Birdie
FallenAngel1๐ said:
Absolutely lovely. Springtime sure is a special time of year.๐ฅ๐น๐๐
April 3rd, 2022 08:41
FallenAngel1๐ said:
Absolutely lovely. Springtime sure is a special time of year.๐ฅ๐น๐๐
April 3rd, 2022 08:41
Alzheimers
Paul Bell said:
Great write, Bella. Yes, this must be the cruellest disease ever, slowing stealing the life and memory, and knowing it\'s happening makes it worse.
April 3rd, 2022 04:02
Paul Bell said:
Great write, Bella. Yes, this must be the cruellest disease ever, slowing stealing the life and memory, and knowing it\'s happening makes it worse.
April 3rd, 2022 04:02
Little Birdie
sorenbarrett said:
I have a special affinity for nature and I think we underestimate animals as well. Our own biases preclude accepting them as equals. We do know birds do communicate and are very intelligent. A beautiful flow to the poem that emulates the song of a bird and the rhyme was soothing as well. Well done
April 2nd, 2022 12:46
sorenbarrett said:
I have a special affinity for nature and I think we underestimate animals as well. Our own biases preclude accepting them as equals. We do know birds do communicate and are very intelligent. A beautiful flow to the poem that emulates the song of a bird and the rhyme was soothing as well. Well done
April 2nd, 2022 12:46
Alzheimers
Neville said:
I know this beast & know it well .. I pray alongside you .................. N
March 31st, 2022 16:04
Neville said:
I know this beast & know it well .. I pray alongside you .................. N
March 31st, 2022 16:04
This Wonderful Place
Neville said:
What a delight it was to find these words of yours Bella .. I am sure your posts will be appreciated by many others too .. Write on my friend and I just know that you will be read over and over .... Neville
March 30th, 2022 12:13
Neville said:
What a delight it was to find these words of yours Bella .. I am sure your posts will be appreciated by many others too .. Write on my friend and I just know that you will be read over and over .... Neville
March 30th, 2022 12:13
The Piano Man
Paul Bell said:
Sort of reminds me of the Titanic when the orchestra played on till she sank. Hopefully he gets to play again in better times.
March 30th, 2022 11:00
Paul Bell said:
Sort of reminds me of the Titanic when the orchestra played on till she sank. Hopefully he gets to play again in better times.
March 30th, 2022 11:00
Little Birdie
Rocky Lagou said:
I adore your steady and rhythmic rhyming patterns. It really suits the tone you\'re going for. I can imagine the birds passing by and singing a song of pure delight. Wonderfully executed!
March 30th, 2022 10:50
Rocky Lagou said:
I adore your steady and rhythmic rhyming patterns. It really suits the tone you\'re going for. I can imagine the birds passing by and singing a song of pure delight. Wonderfully executed!
March 30th, 2022 10:50
Little Birdie
Goldfinch60 said:
The beauty of Nature\'s Chorus is a delight Bella.
Andy
March 28th, 2022 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
The beauty of Nature\'s Chorus is a delight Bella.
Andy
March 28th, 2022 01:11
Alzheimers
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:
Deterioration of body, mind and soul of a loved one most be a worse fate than death. I cannot attest to experiencing such horrible wasting away, nor could yours truly (me) envision such suffering impacting kin or kin, though discerning my father meeting his demise courtesy congestive heart failure, yet.. he maintained his wherewithal until his last dying breath, which exhalation occurred October seventh two thousand and twenty.
March 27th, 2022 12:12
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:
Deterioration of body, mind and soul of a loved one most be a worse fate than death. I cannot attest to experiencing such horrible wasting away, nor could yours truly (me) envision such suffering impacting kin or kin, though discerning my father meeting his demise courtesy congestive heart failure, yet.. he maintained his wherewithal until his last dying breath, which exhalation occurred October seventh two thousand and twenty.
March 27th, 2022 12:12
Little Birdie
Fay Slimm. said:
A symphony of bird-song and penned so sweetly I felt I was there with you on your morning walk Bella - - lovely read.
March 27th, 2022 10:38
Fay Slimm. said:
A symphony of bird-song and penned so sweetly I felt I was there with you on your morning walk Bella - - lovely read.
March 27th, 2022 10:38
Little Birdie
Neville said:
I love this .. and being something of a birdie myself can really understand where you are coming from ..
All Good Things my friend ... Neville
March 27th, 2022 10:34
Neville said:
I love this .. and being something of a birdie myself can really understand where you are coming from ..
All Good Things my friend ... Neville
March 27th, 2022 10:34
Little Birdie
Paul Bell said:
The birds sure are singing a merry tune just now, which I assume is mating season.
March 27th, 2022 07:54
Paul Bell said:
The birds sure are singing a merry tune just now, which I assume is mating season.
March 27th, 2022 07:54
Alzheimers
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks Bella for a portrait which is true and to the point, encompassing as it does Both the mystification of the afflicted and the loss suffered by those close to what was someone they knew and loved.
Raises questions which can be very threatening also as we might query our own existence as an autonomous humanโฆ..
March 27th, 2022 06:02
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks Bella for a portrait which is true and to the point, encompassing as it does Both the mystification of the afflicted and the loss suffered by those close to what was someone they knew and loved.
Raises questions which can be very threatening also as we might query our own existence as an autonomous humanโฆ..
March 27th, 2022 06:02
My Eyes Are Closed
sorenbarrett said:
Bella it\'s like that old Frank Sinatra song \"I did it my way\". Very well written and worded.
March 26th, 2022 22:03
sorenbarrett said:
Bella it\'s like that old Frank Sinatra song \"I did it my way\". Very well written and worded.
March 26th, 2022 22:03
Alzheimers
sorenbarrett said:
An insidious illness that strikes at will and shows no mercy. A well written poem. I have worked with many with this illness and it can be heart wrenching.
March 25th, 2022 20:01
sorenbarrett said:
An insidious illness that strikes at will and shows no mercy. A well written poem. I have worked with many with this illness and it can be heart wrenching.
March 25th, 2022 20:01
To Ignorance
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderfully metered and rhymed but more important the message was clearly stated in so many different ways. This truly was a grand poem and one that is so true. I loved it from beginning to end.
March 24th, 2022 09:03
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderfully metered and rhymed but more important the message was clearly stated in so many different ways. This truly was a grand poem and one that is so true. I loved it from beginning to end.
March 24th, 2022 09:03
Hey Little Kitty
sorenbarrett said:
Dear Bella I loved this poem it holds a good deal of deeper meaning. We had a black cat that our dog loved so much that in licking him, the cat lost all the hair off his bottom half and had to move to our neighbors house to grow it back. I\'ve never known a bad black cat. The only mean cat I knew was all white.
March 23rd, 2022 15:23
sorenbarrett said:
Dear Bella I loved this poem it holds a good deal of deeper meaning. We had a black cat that our dog loved so much that in licking him, the cat lost all the hair off his bottom half and had to move to our neighbors house to grow it back. I\'ve never known a bad black cat. The only mean cat I knew was all white.
March 23rd, 2022 15:23
Alzheimers
spilleronsheet said:
Thanks for sharing this thoughtful poetry
Indeed no denial Alzheimer is truly scary
And painful for both the sufferer and their family
And thunderclaps and thousand words of thanks and appreciation for the noble service your delivering
We canโt live the pains for others
But atleast we can do our best to reduce it
And I hope medical science soon finds a cure for it
Amen
March 22nd, 2022 14:13
spilleronsheet said:
Thanks for sharing this thoughtful poetry
Indeed no denial Alzheimer is truly scary
And painful for both the sufferer and their family
And thunderclaps and thousand words of thanks and appreciation for the noble service your delivering
We canโt live the pains for others
But atleast we can do our best to reduce it
And I hope medical science soon finds a cure for it
Amen
March 22nd, 2022 14:13
My Eyes Are Closed
rrodriguez said:
Well, I\'m not that old and I go back to my memories and think. They provide me with great insight. Now, there are others I\'d like to displaced, but they\'re there forever. Nicely done. Well structured. Bravo!
March 22nd, 2022 13:28
rrodriguez said:
Well, I\'m not that old and I go back to my memories and think. They provide me with great insight. Now, there are others I\'d like to displaced, but they\'re there forever. Nicely done. Well structured. Bravo!
March 22nd, 2022 13:28
This Wonderful Place
rrodriguez said:
Clever! Nicely done. And thank you for your friendship.
March 22nd, 2022 09:32
rrodriguez said:
Clever! Nicely done. And thank you for your friendship.
March 22nd, 2022 09:32
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