Comments received on poems by Bella Shepard
Clarity
Distant View said:
Indeed, as long as we have our faculties we can gain clarity, when our mind is in the right place!
May 25th, 2022 07:38
Distant View said:
Indeed, as long as we have our faculties we can gain clarity, when our mind is in the right place!
May 25th, 2022 07:38
Swan Lake
spilleronsheet said:
The balance of passion and perfection
The connection to soul that rhythm
A ballet means so much
Imbibed in an innocent heart
Stays forever with us
Truly appreciate your lines and I am so glad you did justice to an artist
Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece
It inspires me…
May 25th, 2022 02:09
spilleronsheet said:
The balance of passion and perfection
The connection to soul that rhythm
A ballet means so much
Imbibed in an innocent heart
Stays forever with us
Truly appreciate your lines and I am so glad you did justice to an artist
Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece
It inspires me…
May 25th, 2022 02:09
Clarity
spilleronsheet said:
Words of wisdom
Stringed as senryu
So true my dear friend…
I keep rereading those lines to connect so many situations in life…
May 25th, 2022 02:05
spilleronsheet said:
Words of wisdom
Stringed as senryu
So true my dear friend…
I keep rereading those lines to connect so many situations in life…
May 25th, 2022 02:05
Clarity
Rocky Lagou said:
Amen to this Bella, honestly. Being \"woke\" and tactful in a time like this is honestly a treasure. I know that with enough kindness and love we can save ourselves from out impending doom.
May 24th, 2022 08:59
Rocky Lagou said:
Amen to this Bella, honestly. Being \"woke\" and tactful in a time like this is honestly a treasure. I know that with enough kindness and love we can save ourselves from out impending doom.
May 24th, 2022 08:59
Clarity
L. B. Mek said:
beautifully worded, distilled wisdom
thanks for sharing, dear poet
May 24th, 2022 03:51
L. B. Mek said:
beautifully worded, distilled wisdom
thanks for sharing, dear poet
May 24th, 2022 03:51
Clarity
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Bella, that clarity is always there but many people just look without seeing.
Andy
May 24th, 2022 00:24
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Bella, that clarity is always there but many people just look without seeing.
Andy
May 24th, 2022 00:24
Clarity
dusk arising said:
The moment clarity shows the way... succinctly captured.
May 23rd, 2022 17:25
dusk arising said:
The moment clarity shows the way... succinctly captured.
May 23rd, 2022 17:25
Clarity
JudyStella said:
A great fact presented in a simple yet powerful manner!
May 23rd, 2022 15:14
JudyStella said:
A great fact presented in a simple yet powerful manner!
May 23rd, 2022 15:14
Swan Lake
Paul Bell said:
That is a sad state, yet the music brings her back to life for a while.
I suppose stardom is fleeting and must be grabbed with both hands.
May 23rd, 2022 11:00
Paul Bell said:
That is a sad state, yet the music brings her back to life for a while.
I suppose stardom is fleeting and must be grabbed with both hands.
May 23rd, 2022 11:00
Swan Lake
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tribute Bella, music is so important when suffering like this as it was for my wife during her dementia.
Music is so powerful in our lives.
Andy
May 22nd, 2022 00:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tribute Bella, music is so important when suffering like this as it was for my wife during her dementia.
Music is so powerful in our lives.
Andy
May 22nd, 2022 00:31
Swan Lake
Rozina said:
A very beautiful tribute. So touching to watch this amazing dancer perform.
May 21st, 2022 18:13
Rozina said:
A very beautiful tribute. So touching to watch this amazing dancer perform.
May 21st, 2022 18:13
Swan Lake
rrodriguez said:
Very thoughtful of you to write this fine piece. Bravo!
May 21st, 2022 15:23
rrodriguez said:
Very thoughtful of you to write this fine piece. Bravo!
May 21st, 2022 15:23
Into The Universe
Aradhya said:
the universe is vast and unfathomable and it is as much a part of us as we are a part of it. every breathe we take and release resonates that deep rooted connection. great lines Bella!
May 21st, 2022 10:21
Aradhya said:
the universe is vast and unfathomable and it is as much a part of us as we are a part of it. every breathe we take and release resonates that deep rooted connection. great lines Bella!
May 21st, 2022 10:21
Swan Lake
Aradhya said:
A very perceptive, beautifully written poem, portraying the reality of life. keep on it!
May 21st, 2022 10:03
Aradhya said:
A very perceptive, beautifully written poem, portraying the reality of life. keep on it!
May 21st, 2022 10:03
Try To Remember
Pearcemelville 兎敏 said:
Your thoughts laid out well
Smooth flow
Ageing can be fraught with duch sentiment
For balance, as all is not in vain, another side which you alsi may have experienced
Age
freedom
Freedom from nonsensical worry
To not matter is 解放,
what is the word liberation
He is bothering me turns to
he was bothering me
Relax enjoy enjoy some more
sleep perhaps sleepsomemore
Awakening
Freedom
freedom
age
May 20th, 2022 06:04
Pearcemelville 兎敏 said:
Your thoughts laid out well
Smooth flow
Ageing can be fraught with duch sentiment
For balance, as all is not in vain, another side which you alsi may have experienced
Age
freedom
Freedom from nonsensical worry
To not matter is 解放,
what is the word liberation
He is bothering me turns to
he was bothering me
Relax enjoy enjoy some more
sleep perhaps sleepsomemore
Awakening
Freedom
freedom
age
May 20th, 2022 06:04
Phoenix
Neville said:
it would be very naughty not to love this shorty .... succinct and very much to the point ... Neville
May 18th, 2022 16:00
Neville said:
it would be very naughty not to love this shorty .... succinct and very much to the point ... Neville
May 18th, 2022 16:00
Phoenix
spilleronsheet said:
It was truly amazing
From phoenix to self
The human embroiled in it
And the words so true
Very intriguing
Really enjoyed it dear Bella…
May 18th, 2022 13:50
spilleronsheet said:
It was truly amazing
From phoenix to self
The human embroiled in it
And the words so true
Very intriguing
Really enjoyed it dear Bella…
May 18th, 2022 13:50
Phoenix
Paul Bell said:
It is a great analogy. Does it have to burn. Does it need to hurt before I feel the benefit. The answer is always yes, yet there\'s always just that little doubt in the back of your head.
May 14th, 2022 04:35
Paul Bell said:
It is a great analogy. Does it have to burn. Does it need to hurt before I feel the benefit. The answer is always yes, yet there\'s always just that little doubt in the back of your head.
May 14th, 2022 04:35
Try To Remember
rrodriguez said:
Excellent flow and thought pattern. Thank you for sharing it with us.
May 13th, 2022 14:16
rrodriguez said:
Excellent flow and thought pattern. Thank you for sharing it with us.
May 13th, 2022 14:16
Phoenix
Goldfinch60 said:
Much meaning in these few words Bella, good write.
Andy
May 13th, 2022 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Much meaning in these few words Bella, good write.
Andy
May 13th, 2022 00:26
Phoenix
Distant View said:
A thought-provoking write. Sometimes we must cut away (or burn) the bad to see the good.
May 12th, 2022 14:47
Distant View said:
A thought-provoking write. Sometimes we must cut away (or burn) the bad to see the good.
May 12th, 2022 14:47
Phoenix
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes Bella! What a dazzling 5/7/5 that speaks so many meanings in so little words. I adore the way you presented this with a question, it makes it feel like I walked into a conversation. This pheonix analogy reminds me of Sylvia Plath\'s most iconic lines in the poem \"Lady Lazarus\" in which she concludes the poem with, \"Beware. Out of the ash. I rise with my red hair. And I eat men like air.\" The \"red hair\" hinting at a phoenix type of resurrection. Your poem is so true, in order to make it far, we have to be willing to \"grab the match\" and light ourselves aflame. Marvelous Bella, just marvelous.
May 12th, 2022 12:13
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes Bella! What a dazzling 5/7/5 that speaks so many meanings in so little words. I adore the way you presented this with a question, it makes it feel like I walked into a conversation. This pheonix analogy reminds me of Sylvia Plath\'s most iconic lines in the poem \"Lady Lazarus\" in which she concludes the poem with, \"Beware. Out of the ash. I rise with my red hair. And I eat men like air.\" The \"red hair\" hinting at a phoenix type of resurrection. Your poem is so true, in order to make it far, we have to be willing to \"grab the match\" and light ourselves aflame. Marvelous Bella, just marvelous.
May 12th, 2022 12:13
Fatalist?
Rocky Lagou said:
Period. This is literally golden though, a great delve into the human mind. We truly are our own obstacles. Great job Bella!
May 12th, 2022 10:45
Rocky Lagou said:
Period. This is literally golden though, a great delve into the human mind. We truly are our own obstacles. Great job Bella!
May 12th, 2022 10:45
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