Comments received on poems by Bella Shepard
Into The Universe
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes dear Bella when we seek silence and breathe night\'s peace we learn our smallness as more life fills our hearts - -- a inspiring read.
April 28th, 2022 15:33
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes dear Bella when we seek silence and breathe night\'s peace we learn our smallness as more life fills our hearts - -- a inspiring read.
April 28th, 2022 15:33
Try To Remember
sorenbarrett said:
Bella I loved this write and its humorous but sad focus on old age and memory. My memory too is not what it used to be, but then I just kid myself that it is because of all the junk I\'ve stored upstairs over the years. Great poem.
April 25th, 2022 20:10
sorenbarrett said:
Bella I loved this write and its humorous but sad focus on old age and memory. My memory too is not what it used to be, but then I just kid myself that it is because of all the junk I\'ve stored upstairs over the years. Great poem.
April 25th, 2022 20:10
Just Because (senryu-maybe)
Rocky Lagou said:
This is excellent, to see you fit it in the senryu form as well is spectacular. This delightfully reminds me of a Lana Del Rey poem called \"Never to Heaven\" in which she say:
\"The whys in this lifetime I\'ve found are inconsequential
compared to the magic of the nowness - the solution to most
questions
there are no reasons\"
This poem is amazing, thank you.
April 25th, 2022 13:25
Rocky Lagou said:
This is excellent, to see you fit it in the senryu form as well is spectacular. This delightfully reminds me of a Lana Del Rey poem called \"Never to Heaven\" in which she say:
\"The whys in this lifetime I\'ve found are inconsequential
compared to the magic of the nowness - the solution to most
questions
there are no reasons\"
This poem is amazing, thank you.
April 25th, 2022 13:25
Try To Remember
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Bella, we can remember those wonderful times but where the keys are can be quite a problem, like the question of why did I come up stairs?
Andy
April 25th, 2022 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Bella, we can remember those wonderful times but where the keys are can be quite a problem, like the question of why did I come up stairs?
Andy
April 25th, 2022 00:46
Try To Remember
MendedFences27 said:
\" Let me tell you Bella, they\'re most likely there in your pocketbook.\" I have lived this poem. It was like looking in a mirror. Well written and an amusing read. Just the other day, I went downstairs to fetch a book I left on my desk, got distracted and had to make three trips.
Your poem hit home for me. Liked the rhymes. Enjoyed the entire read. - Phil A.
April 24th, 2022 21:13
MendedFences27 said:
\" Let me tell you Bella, they\'re most likely there in your pocketbook.\" I have lived this poem. It was like looking in a mirror. Well written and an amusing read. Just the other day, I went downstairs to fetch a book I left on my desk, got distracted and had to make three trips.
Your poem hit home for me. Liked the rhymes. Enjoyed the entire read. - Phil A.
April 24th, 2022 21:13
Try To Remember
Rozina said:
I know this song. I sang your lines to the tune. Very nice.
April 24th, 2022 17:23
Rozina said:
I know this song. I sang your lines to the tune. Very nice.
April 24th, 2022 17:23
Just Because (senryu-maybe)
Goldfinch60 said:
Good senryu Bella, true words.
Andy
April 24th, 2022 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Good senryu Bella, true words.
Andy
April 24th, 2022 00:46
Just Because (senryu-maybe)
Rozina said:
Yes this makes perfect sense. Good one.
April 23rd, 2022 17:32
Rozina said:
Yes this makes perfect sense. Good one.
April 23rd, 2022 17:32
Just Because (senryu-maybe)
Distant View said:
Indeed, things just are, and we can do nothing about SOME of the things that just are!
April 23rd, 2022 13:27
Distant View said:
Indeed, things just are, and we can do nothing about SOME of the things that just are!
April 23rd, 2022 13:27
Just Because (senryu-maybe)
orchidee said:
Or, as some say, \'It is what it is\'!
April 23rd, 2022 12:48
orchidee said:
Or, as some say, \'It is what it is\'!
April 23rd, 2022 12:48
The Piano Man
Neville said:
sadly, the world today needs more piano men .. a timely and most poignant observational prose if ever there was Bella x
April 22nd, 2022 01:33
Neville said:
sadly, the world today needs more piano men .. a timely and most poignant observational prose if ever there was Bella x
April 22nd, 2022 01:33
The Music Wraps Around Me
Pearcemelville 兎敏 said:
Really like this. I am captured in the first verse and lead through each with words and images that draw me alongside with a touch of candidness. Lovely
April 21st, 2022 17:01
Pearcemelville 兎敏 said:
Really like this. I am captured in the first verse and lead through each with words and images that draw me alongside with a touch of candidness. Lovely
April 21st, 2022 17:01
A Mouse\'s Tale
Neville said:
I was hooked from the off and found the whole thing, yep .. in its entirety .. both an appealing and compelling read throughout .. top marks from me Bella, I have no doubt that folk of all ages will/would find that reading \'A Mouse\'s Tale\' or having it read to them a splendid way to spend an evening ..... Neville :)
April 19th, 2022 12:59
Neville said:
I was hooked from the off and found the whole thing, yep .. in its entirety .. both an appealing and compelling read throughout .. top marks from me Bella, I have no doubt that folk of all ages will/would find that reading \'A Mouse\'s Tale\' or having it read to them a splendid way to spend an evening ..... Neville :)
April 19th, 2022 12:59
To Nike
Neville said:
Odds bodkins, forsooth & by Saint John dear mistress Bella .. whilst tis possible to beat ye egg & ye drum and even ye carpet ... Let\'s beat around ye olde bush & try to kid our selves .. Tis nigh on impossible to beat ye comfort, style & durability of a pair of Nike footwear ........... Neville :)
April 17th, 2022 02:41
Neville said:
Odds bodkins, forsooth & by Saint John dear mistress Bella .. whilst tis possible to beat ye egg & ye drum and even ye carpet ... Let\'s beat around ye olde bush & try to kid our selves .. Tis nigh on impossible to beat ye comfort, style & durability of a pair of Nike footwear ........... Neville :)
April 17th, 2022 02:41
Afternoon Tea
spilleronsheet said:
A very cheerful poetry dear Bella
Nothing better than connecting with nature
Those birds sweet and chirpy makes mood lighten a lot
Really enjoyed your poetry
April 16th, 2022 15:08
spilleronsheet said:
A very cheerful poetry dear Bella
Nothing better than connecting with nature
Those birds sweet and chirpy makes mood lighten a lot
Really enjoyed your poetry
April 16th, 2022 15:08
Afternoon Tea
Paul Bell said:
Never mind inviting the birds.
Invite me, I\'m into luxury. Granted, I\'m going to look a bit daft in the bird feeder, but I don\'t care.
April 16th, 2022 03:48
Paul Bell said:
Never mind inviting the birds.
Invite me, I\'m into luxury. Granted, I\'m going to look a bit daft in the bird feeder, but I don\'t care.
April 16th, 2022 03:48
Afternoon Tea
Neville said:
This is absolutely delightful Ma\'am
simple as that ......................... N :)
April 16th, 2022 02:36
Neville said:
This is absolutely delightful Ma\'am
simple as that ......................... N :)
April 16th, 2022 02:36
Afternoon Tea
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful poem Bella, having tea with the birds is super - as are you words.
Andy
April 14th, 2022 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful poem Bella, having tea with the birds is super - as are you words.
Andy
April 14th, 2022 01:38
Afternoon Tea
Rozina said:
I enjoyed reading your delightful poem! I can just imagine having tea and a friendly conversation with a human friend, a friendly bird or animal!
April 13th, 2022 21:13
Rozina said:
I enjoyed reading your delightful poem! I can just imagine having tea and a friendly conversation with a human friend, a friendly bird or animal!
April 13th, 2022 21:13
Afternoon Tea
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful tale or tail. Anthropomorphism is underrated, I always loved parables and fables. You have a wonderful way of telling them in such nice rhyme and meter. Loved it.
April 13th, 2022 13:25
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful tale or tail. Anthropomorphism is underrated, I always loved parables and fables. You have a wonderful way of telling them in such nice rhyme and meter. Loved it.
April 13th, 2022 13:25
Afternoon Tea
Rocky Lagou said:
I love when the muse transports the writer into little fantasies. This right here is such a fun and colorful tale. I enjoyed your approach and your words tell a story divine!
April 13th, 2022 12:51
Rocky Lagou said:
I love when the muse transports the writer into little fantasies. This right here is such a fun and colorful tale. I enjoyed your approach and your words tell a story divine!
April 13th, 2022 12:51
To Nike
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words Bella, may you walk in comfort forever.
Andy
April 8th, 2022 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words Bella, may you walk in comfort forever.
Andy
April 8th, 2022 00:38
To Nike
Paul Bell said:
You can\'t beat Nike, for running shoes. Did move to Adidas for a time, but had to get back to my favourites.
April 7th, 2022 16:04
Paul Bell said:
You can\'t beat Nike, for running shoes. Did move to Adidas for a time, but had to get back to my favourites.
April 7th, 2022 16:04
To Nike
orchidee said:
I never met that Nike gal in person. Have you?! She\'s very old! heehee.
April 7th, 2022 14:16
orchidee said:
I never met that Nike gal in person. Have you?! She\'s very old! heehee.
April 7th, 2022 14:16
To Nike
sorenbarrett said:
Bella What a great poem. It was amusing to read and easy too in that it flowed so well. I often read too much into things but it seemed to me an analogy as well and I couldn\'t help thinking that you in praying to the shoe god were baptizing them with shoe goo to them renew. Loved it
April 7th, 2022 13:15
sorenbarrett said:
Bella What a great poem. It was amusing to read and easy too in that it flowed so well. I often read too much into things but it seemed to me an analogy as well and I couldn\'t help thinking that you in praying to the shoe god were baptizing them with shoe goo to them renew. Loved it
April 7th, 2022 13:15
To Nike
Caring dove said:
You are a good writer ! This is such an engaging good poem .. nicely expressed 🙂
April 7th, 2022 10:06
Caring dove said:
You are a good writer ! This is such an engaging good poem .. nicely expressed 🙂
April 7th, 2022 10:06
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