Comments received on poems by Bella Shepard
My Eyes Are Closed
AuburnScribbler said:
Brilliantly written here Bella, the rhythm and rhyme are masterful, and the poem tells me that you are indeed a strong character.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
March 14th, 2022 09:41
AuburnScribbler said:
Brilliantly written here Bella, the rhythm and rhyme are masterful, and the poem tells me that you are indeed a strong character.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
March 14th, 2022 09:41
The Music Wraps Around Me
sorenbarrett said:
Very well said. Not only did the meter flow well but the message was a powerful one. Music is so deeply rooted in all of us that it can evoke all types of emotions. It together with verse can change the world.
March 13th, 2022 19:46
sorenbarrett said:
Very well said. Not only did the meter flow well but the message was a powerful one. Music is so deeply rooted in all of us that it can evoke all types of emotions. It together with verse can change the world.
March 13th, 2022 19:46
My Eyes Are Closed
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful positive piece, full of hope and taking ones own responsibility. Well done
March 13th, 2022 19:41
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful positive piece, full of hope and taking ones own responsibility. Well done
March 13th, 2022 19:41
My Eyes Are Closed
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Bella and probably very true, my wife was in a care home before she passed and I used to see the residents like this as well.
Andy
March 12th, 2022 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Bella and probably very true, my wife was in a care home before she passed and I used to see the residents like this as well.
Andy
March 12th, 2022 01:36
My Eyes Are Closed
Rozina said:
I really loved reading your poem. Thank you for sharing.
March 11th, 2022 22:01
Rozina said:
I really loved reading your poem. Thank you for sharing.
March 11th, 2022 22:01
My Eyes Are Closed
Bella Shepard said:
You know exactly what I mean. I worked with geriatric patients as a COTA for a number of years, and I have the utmost respect for the nurses who care for them. They not only provide excellent medical care, but emotional care as well. They are a very special population. Thank you for your kind comments.
March 11th, 2022 14:22
Bella Shepard said:
You know exactly what I mean. I worked with geriatric patients as a COTA for a number of years, and I have the utmost respect for the nurses who care for them. They not only provide excellent medical care, but emotional care as well. They are a very special population. Thank you for your kind comments.
March 11th, 2022 14:22
My Eyes Are Closed
Christina8 said:
That was a wonderful well written poem. I myself am a nurse who works with the geriatric population and this is so relatable. Great job!
March 11th, 2022 14:08
Christina8 said:
That was a wonderful well written poem. I myself am a nurse who works with the geriatric population and this is so relatable. Great job!
March 11th, 2022 14:08
My Eyes Are Closed
Bella Shepard said:
Thank you so much dear Teddy. You have no idea how much that means to me. I am fortunate to be inspired by so many wonderful, talented people on this site.
March 11th, 2022 13:50
Bella Shepard said:
Thank you so much dear Teddy. You have no idea how much that means to me. I am fortunate to be inspired by so many wonderful, talented people on this site.
March 11th, 2022 13:50
When Trees Go To Sleep
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful description of the tree cycle. Anthropomorphized in such a gentle and peaceful way. A beautiful picture.
March 10th, 2022 13:34
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful description of the tree cycle. Anthropomorphized in such a gentle and peaceful way. A beautiful picture.
March 10th, 2022 13:34
The Piano Man
Bella Shepard said:
Thank you so much for your insightful comment!
March 7th, 2022 17:41
Bella Shepard said:
Thank you so much for your insightful comment!
March 7th, 2022 17:41
The Piano Man
sorenbarrett said:
Incongruities often bring issues out of focus into focus. To notice the incongruities in life is one way of expanding our vision. An interesting write.
March 7th, 2022 16:45
sorenbarrett said:
Incongruities often bring issues out of focus into focus. To notice the incongruities in life is one way of expanding our vision. An interesting write.
March 7th, 2022 16:45
The Piano Man
Rocky Lagou said:
I also saw this spectacle on the news and I was truly astonished. The way this man showed such sympathy for others as if a symbol of hope. Well done on describing it and I hope peace will come soon!
March 7th, 2022 11:19
Rocky Lagou said:
I also saw this spectacle on the news and I was truly astonished. The way this man showed such sympathy for others as if a symbol of hope. Well done on describing it and I hope peace will come soon!
March 7th, 2022 11:19
The Music Wraps Around Me
Goldfinch60 said:
I have been listening to music all my long life, it is part of my life and I know that the more I get to know about music the more ignorant I realise I am as there is so much music to be heard and played.
Andy
March 2nd, 2022 01:33
Goldfinch60 said:
I have been listening to music all my long life, it is part of my life and I know that the more I get to know about music the more ignorant I realise I am as there is so much music to be heard and played.
Andy
March 2nd, 2022 01:33
The Music Wraps Around Me
Rozina said:
Enjoyed reading your poem. Happy lines about the music at different times of your life. I remember this in my life too.
March 2nd, 2022 01:07
Rozina said:
Enjoyed reading your poem. Happy lines about the music at different times of your life. I remember this in my life too.
March 2nd, 2022 01:07
The Music Wraps Around Me
Bella Shepard said:
Thank you so much. I Like to think that we we created music from the very beginning because it\'s good for our souls.
March 1st, 2022 15:48
Bella Shepard said:
Thank you so much. I Like to think that we we created music from the very beginning because it\'s good for our souls.
March 1st, 2022 15:48
The Music Wraps Around Me
Rocky Lagou said:
Expressed so well! Music is powerful and definitely moves our hearts throughout our lives. Great poem!
March 1st, 2022 15:03
Rocky Lagou said:
Expressed so well! Music is powerful and definitely moves our hearts throughout our lives. Great poem!
March 1st, 2022 15:03
To Ignorance
Bella Shepard said:
Thank you for your kind words. I feel so fortunate to have found a venue of expression with so many wonderful, like minded people. It is a privilege to be here.
March 1st, 2022 11:59
Bella Shepard said:
Thank you for your kind words. I feel so fortunate to have found a venue of expression with so many wonderful, like minded people. It is a privilege to be here.
March 1st, 2022 11:59
To Ignorance
sorenbarrett said:
It is security that we all search for in an ever changing world where there is none. Change promotes fear and fear distrust. A well written poem that incapsulates the frustrations of life.
March 1st, 2022 07:48
sorenbarrett said:
It is security that we all search for in an ever changing world where there is none. Change promotes fear and fear distrust. A well written poem that incapsulates the frustrations of life.
March 1st, 2022 07:48
When Trees Go To Sleep
rew4er2nail said:
Instantaneously, I experience affinity to your ebullient energizing magical way with words, and would feel flattered if a regular exchange, (albeit courtesy flow of electrons) could allow, enable and provide an acquaintanceship to manifest.
:) Friendship akin to meth hid den Magic crystalline beauty
ah, how me heart doth alight
at ability to share
electronic cheerful byte
analogous how snowfall
etches n sketches silhouettes
once dusk shed daylight
spurring this summer e poetic flight
akin to frozen precipitation
sculpted in natural
bas relief ascension
from horizon to heavenly height
albedo effect from
glistening snow light
though downy soft,
n chess tan ordinary knight
wintry skittering
carpet exudes might
sans luminescence
transforming night
effacing terrestrial
and human blemish and/or plight
mother nature quite
adept to a right
human imprint into blinding sight
from pure flakes
of incandescent white
so enjoy this moment
and regale each sight
celestial vault intimates might
aboot five feet ten inches in height
envying those who know
how to meld words
with power to delight.
February 27th, 2022 12:20
rew4er2nail said:
Instantaneously, I experience affinity to your ebullient energizing magical way with words, and would feel flattered if a regular exchange, (albeit courtesy flow of electrons) could allow, enable and provide an acquaintanceship to manifest.
:) Friendship akin to meth hid den Magic crystalline beauty
ah, how me heart doth alight
at ability to share
electronic cheerful byte
analogous how snowfall
etches n sketches silhouettes
once dusk shed daylight
spurring this summer e poetic flight
akin to frozen precipitation
sculpted in natural
bas relief ascension
from horizon to heavenly height
albedo effect from
glistening snow light
though downy soft,
n chess tan ordinary knight
wintry skittering
carpet exudes might
sans luminescence
transforming night
effacing terrestrial
and human blemish and/or plight
mother nature quite
adept to a right
human imprint into blinding sight
from pure flakes
of incandescent white
so enjoy this moment
and regale each sight
celestial vault intimates might
aboot five feet ten inches in height
envying those who know
how to meld words
with power to delight.
February 27th, 2022 12:20
To Ignorance
Bella Shepard said:
I love your verbosity and share your passion for words. Thank you for for being such a kindred spirit.
February 27th, 2022 10:29
Bella Shepard said:
I love your verbosity and share your passion for words. Thank you for for being such a kindred spirit.
February 27th, 2022 10:29
To Ignorance
rew4er2nail said:
mellifluous metered rhyming poem buffeted my mindset down a long and winding road, the one taken - upon espying a figurative forked juncture. additional, i favor reading and writing somewhat lengthy poems, and receive slight jabs many anonymous readers dislike prolixity of mine, but passion with English language finds me bounding forth and expounding upon a theme with a plethora of words.
February 27th, 2022 09:19
rew4er2nail said:
mellifluous metered rhyming poem buffeted my mindset down a long and winding road, the one taken - upon espying a figurative forked juncture. additional, i favor reading and writing somewhat lengthy poems, and receive slight jabs many anonymous readers dislike prolixity of mine, but passion with English language finds me bounding forth and expounding upon a theme with a plethora of words.
February 27th, 2022 09:19
When Trees Go To Sleep
spilleronsheet said:
A wonderful poetry
Justifying the beautiful nature with a wonderful imagery
February 23rd, 2022 16:55
spilleronsheet said:
A wonderful poetry
Justifying the beautiful nature with a wonderful imagery
February 23rd, 2022 16:55
When Trees Go To Sleep
Paul Bell said:
Yes, the trees sure do a great job for mankind. Always wanted to meet a tree hugger.
February 23rd, 2022 11:56
Paul Bell said:
Yes, the trees sure do a great job for mankind. Always wanted to meet a tree hugger.
February 23rd, 2022 11:56
When Trees Go To Sleep
Desertwind said:
The poem is very nice , I like it .
February 20th, 2022 20:29
Desertwind said:
The poem is very nice , I like it .
February 20th, 2022 20:29
When Trees Go To Sleep
Rainbow said:
Really beautiful lovely poem full of very nice imagery
February 20th, 2022 17:20
Rainbow said:
Really beautiful lovely poem full of very nice imagery
February 20th, 2022 17:20
The Lone Cyclist
Quijote said:
Awareness is a great thing……but ever get irritated by those cyclists riding in the middle of country roads 🚲 🤬 lol
February 19th, 2022 03:14
Quijote said:
Awareness is a great thing……but ever get irritated by those cyclists riding in the middle of country roads 🚲 🤬 lol
February 19th, 2022 03:14
The Lone Cyclist
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
As a life long lone cyclist myself (I’ve ridden all over southern Ontario)I must say Bravo! Thanks for sharing this. Cheers🍷🍷🌞🕊
February 17th, 2022 15:36
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
As a life long lone cyclist myself (I’ve ridden all over southern Ontario)I must say Bravo! Thanks for sharing this. Cheers🍷🍷🌞🕊
February 17th, 2022 15:36
The Lone Cyclist
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow. I would\'ve never imagined a cyclist could change your life so drastically. This was great though! I enjoy the rhyming pattern and the message behind the piece. ✨💖
February 17th, 2022 13:32
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow. I would\'ve never imagined a cyclist could change your life so drastically. This was great though! I enjoy the rhyming pattern and the message behind the piece. ✨💖
February 17th, 2022 13:32
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