Comments received on poems by GenXer Shamrocker ☘️
The Warmth of His Embrace
orchidee said:
Maybe I should try some not over-long prose type pieces like these fine writes!
December 31st, 2023 13:34
orchidee said:
Maybe I should try some not over-long prose type pieces like these fine writes!
December 31st, 2023 13:34
The Warmth of His Embrace
Cassie58 said:
You have grown in strength because of your faith. A beautiful poem. May you always have that comfort. Happy new year to you.
December 31st, 2023 08:42
Cassie58 said:
You have grown in strength because of your faith. A beautiful poem. May you always have that comfort. Happy new year to you.
December 31st, 2023 08:42
Be Kind
sorenbarrett said:
\"Let darkness fear the light\" what a great ending. The message is a good one that needs more attention these days. Nicely done.
December 28th, 2023 08:49
sorenbarrett said:
\"Let darkness fear the light\" what a great ending. The message is a good one that needs more attention these days. Nicely done.
December 28th, 2023 08:49
My Calm
orchidee said:
There\'s a sort of line of thought too, when we may suddenly think and say \'But there\'s people starving in the world\', though we may not have given them much thought otherwise. It can be good to think of the poor though.
At some times it may be a bit like Judas though, when a woman broke a pot of expensive perfume and poured it over Jesus. He thought it was wasted and said it could have been sold and money given to the poor. But then it adds \'This he said, not because he cared for the poor, but because he was the treasurer, and stole from the funds\' Doh!
December 27th, 2023 07:52
orchidee said:
There\'s a sort of line of thought too, when we may suddenly think and say \'But there\'s people starving in the world\', though we may not have given them much thought otherwise. It can be good to think of the poor though.
At some times it may be a bit like Judas though, when a woman broke a pot of expensive perfume and poured it over Jesus. He thought it was wasted and said it could have been sold and money given to the poor. But then it adds \'This he said, not because he cared for the poor, but because he was the treasurer, and stole from the funds\' Doh!
December 27th, 2023 07:52
My Calm
orchidee said:
Yes, I fuss sometimes of folk enjoying themselves at church. But we (me included) need not feel guilty over it. We know we\'re not practising escapism from troubles, but that we are rejoicing in Him.
December 27th, 2023 07:49
orchidee said:
Yes, I fuss sometimes of folk enjoying themselves at church. But we (me included) need not feel guilty over it. We know we\'re not practising escapism from troubles, but that we are rejoicing in Him.
December 27th, 2023 07:49
Waiting
RSM0812 said:
I really like it. It let\'s you know that fear has a purpose and one needs to exploit fear and turn it to one\'s own benifit in life
December 26th, 2023 15:11
RSM0812 said:
I really like it. It let\'s you know that fear has a purpose and one needs to exploit fear and turn it to one\'s own benifit in life
December 26th, 2023 15:11
Waiting
orchidee said:
Me. I\'m waiting for the No.7 bus. Doh! It don\'t run on Sundays! I been at this bus stop 2 hours! lol.
December 26th, 2023 11:39
orchidee said:
Me. I\'m waiting for the No.7 bus. Doh! It don\'t run on Sundays! I been at this bus stop 2 hours! lol.
December 26th, 2023 11:39
Waiting
Dev Parth said:
In the quiet of anticipation, I stand,
Time\'s gentle touch, like shifting sand.
Eager heart, a patient serenade,
In the art of waiting, dreams are made.
Nice one Brother.
Thank you for sharing with us.
December 26th, 2023 08:43
Dev Parth said:
In the quiet of anticipation, I stand,
Time\'s gentle touch, like shifting sand.
Eager heart, a patient serenade,
In the art of waiting, dreams are made.
Nice one Brother.
Thank you for sharing with us.
December 26th, 2023 08:43
The Journey
orchidee said:
Good write G.
I just fell off the roundabout/merry-go-round in the park. It was going too fast. lol.
December 17th, 2023 10:45
orchidee said:
Good write G.
I just fell off the roundabout/merry-go-round in the park. It was going too fast. lol.
December 17th, 2023 10:45
Safe Place
orchidee said:
Do I always believe His love to me - to us? Whether I/we feel, remember, consider, are consciously aware of it, etc, or not?
There\'s simplicity in profundity (or in some profundities at least), and vice versa - profundity in simplicity.
Here\'s one example in this poem, at surely the highest level - or greatest depth, we may say.
I\'m \'gushing\' a bit here maybe! lol. But it\'s a vital theme surely.
December 15th, 2023 15:20
orchidee said:
Do I always believe His love to me - to us? Whether I/we feel, remember, consider, are consciously aware of it, etc, or not?
There\'s simplicity in profundity (or in some profundities at least), and vice versa - profundity in simplicity.
Here\'s one example in this poem, at surely the highest level - or greatest depth, we may say.
I\'m \'gushing\' a bit here maybe! lol. But it\'s a vital theme surely.
December 15th, 2023 15:20
In Dark Times
orchidee said:
A fine write GS.
In dark times - switch on a light bulb. Do shut up Orchi, says Fido. lol.
December 14th, 2023 02:48
orchidee said:
A fine write GS.
In dark times - switch on a light bulb. Do shut up Orchi, says Fido. lol.
December 14th, 2023 02:48
A Long Day
orchidee said:
That\'ll be that day the clocks went back - a 25 hour long day! heehee.
December 8th, 2023 06:05
orchidee said:
That\'ll be that day the clocks went back - a 25 hour long day! heehee.
December 8th, 2023 06:05
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