Comments received on poems by GenXer Shamrocker ☘️
Second Chances
sorenbarrett said:
Another episode and on we go toward what we hope will be romance or maybe just freindship we\'ll see
December 20th, 2024 11:30
sorenbarrett said:
Another episode and on we go toward what we hope will be romance or maybe just freindship we\'ll see
December 20th, 2024 11:30
Forgiveness??
Melancholic~Onion said:
Wow, just wow. This was nicely written. Looking forward to the next!👀
December 19th, 2024 14:48
Melancholic~Onion said:
Wow, just wow. This was nicely written. Looking forward to the next!👀
December 19th, 2024 14:48
Forgiveness??
Poetic Licence said:
After 15 years it probably is not the right decision, but we wait to see, Another enjoyable read.
December 19th, 2024 14:43
Poetic Licence said:
After 15 years it probably is not the right decision, but we wait to see, Another enjoyable read.
December 19th, 2024 14:43
Forgiveness??
sorenbarrett said:
As life goes on so does everyone\'s story. A good read. I\'ll be back.
December 19th, 2024 14:38
sorenbarrett said:
As life goes on so does everyone\'s story. A good read. I\'ll be back.
December 19th, 2024 14:38
Settling In
orchidee said:
You started me off on a - maybe occasional - short story format, as you\'ve posted here!
December 18th, 2024 09:47
orchidee said:
You started me off on a - maybe occasional - short story format, as you\'ve posted here!
December 18th, 2024 09:47
Settling In
sorenbarrett said:
I have to beg your utmost pardon Shamrocker. I have read your work before but it never struck me like today where your talent lies. Like music there are the notes with pitch and rhythm. I\'ve heard your pitch before and in the rhyme and story of its melody commented but just today became aware of the beat and rhythm in your flow and it with the internal rhyme is a different music for the ear. Sorry I have missed it all this time, not your loss mine. You can bet I\'ll be looking for it in the future all music and poems need a beat. Your\'s is remarkable
December 18th, 2024 09:20
sorenbarrett said:
I have to beg your utmost pardon Shamrocker. I have read your work before but it never struck me like today where your talent lies. Like music there are the notes with pitch and rhythm. I\'ve heard your pitch before and in the rhyme and story of its melody commented but just today became aware of the beat and rhythm in your flow and it with the internal rhyme is a different music for the ear. Sorry I have missed it all this time, not your loss mine. You can bet I\'ll be looking for it in the future all music and poems need a beat. Your\'s is remarkable
December 18th, 2024 09:20
Settling In
Poetic Licence said:
She probably will, this series is an enjoyable read, thank you
December 18th, 2024 08:36
Poetic Licence said:
She probably will, this series is an enjoyable read, thank you
December 18th, 2024 08:36
The Promise
sorenbarrett said:
Enticing work with internal rhyme as well. We\'ll have to see what happens as the saga like the road unwinds
December 17th, 2024 06:59
sorenbarrett said:
Enticing work with internal rhyme as well. We\'ll have to see what happens as the saga like the road unwinds
December 17th, 2024 06:59
The Promise
Poetic Licence said:
To be forgiven, they have to want to forgive you, another enjoyable read
December 17th, 2024 06:40
Poetic Licence said:
To be forgiven, they have to want to forgive you, another enjoyable read
December 17th, 2024 06:40
Neas
Poetic Licence said:
A tale of forgiveness given or required, enjoyable read
December 16th, 2024 10:02
Poetic Licence said:
A tale of forgiveness given or required, enjoyable read
December 16th, 2024 10:02
Neriah
sorenbarrett said:
I have to say you have a most unique manner of bringing the reader back. Good story here
December 15th, 2024 11:46
sorenbarrett said:
I have to say you have a most unique manner of bringing the reader back. Good story here
December 15th, 2024 11:46
Neriah
Poetic Licence said:
I guess we will have to, enjoyable read, thank you
December 15th, 2024 11:38
Poetic Licence said:
I guess we will have to, enjoyable read, thank you
December 15th, 2024 11:38
Why Not Try?
orchidee said:
A fine write GS.
Doh! I got it all wrong. I thought \'What have I got to lose by being nasty to KP?\' lol.
December 11th, 2024 10:56
orchidee said:
A fine write GS.
Doh! I got it all wrong. I thought \'What have I got to lose by being nasty to KP?\' lol.
December 11th, 2024 10:56
Why Not Try?
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing .. I like all the different questions in this
December 11th, 2024 09:53
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing .. I like all the different questions in this
December 11th, 2024 09:53
Why Not Try?
Poetic Licence said:
A question everyone should ask themselves, what have they got to lose by looking out for someone else, i echo all written so well in this poem, Thank you
December 11th, 2024 09:52
Poetic Licence said:
A question everyone should ask themselves, what have they got to lose by looking out for someone else, i echo all written so well in this poem, Thank you
December 11th, 2024 09:52
Sweet Ending!
sorenbarrett said:
Another chapter completed in nicely written form. I\'ll wait for the next chapter and further characters
December 9th, 2024 15:25
sorenbarrett said:
Another chapter completed in nicely written form. I\'ll wait for the next chapter and further characters
December 9th, 2024 15:25
Dinner With Mellan
sorenbarrett said:
Your placing rhyme in paragraph format is certainly unique and Ilike it. It is subtle and creates a flow in the reading. Very creative.
December 6th, 2024 13:40
sorenbarrett said:
Your placing rhyme in paragraph format is certainly unique and Ilike it. It is subtle and creates a flow in the reading. Very creative.
December 6th, 2024 13:40
Sight Seeing With Melllan part 2
sorenbarrett said:
I grew up in the cold and snow so I know what that’s about. I tuned back in for another chapter of the continuing saga.
December 3rd, 2024 10:35
sorenbarrett said:
I grew up in the cold and snow so I know what that’s about. I tuned back in for another chapter of the continuing saga.
December 3rd, 2024 10:35
Sight Seeing with Mellan
orchidee said:
Good write GS. KP says: No need to go sightseeing, dear; just look at the sight of me, me, me!\' lol. I must \'get my coat\' and \'get out more\', as the sayings go. I\'ve had enough of staying indoors and looking at old trouts! heehee.
December 2nd, 2024 03:11
orchidee said:
Good write GS. KP says: No need to go sightseeing, dear; just look at the sight of me, me, me!\' lol. I must \'get my coat\' and \'get out more\', as the sayings go. I\'ve had enough of staying indoors and looking at old trouts! heehee.
December 2nd, 2024 03:11
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