Comments received on poems by GenXer Shamrocker ☘️



Linens And Things!
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

January 29th, 2025 15:57

Linens And Things!
sorenbarrett said:

Every story and piece of music needs a bridge and this is it. Nicely done

January 29th, 2025 15:42

Linens And Things!
Poetic Licence said:

It can go either way, till the next one, enjoyed the read

January 29th, 2025 13:34

Riordan
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 28th, 2025 15:29

Riordan
orchidee said:

Good write GS.

January 28th, 2025 09:11

Riordan
sorenbarrett said:

Again so nicely written in your personal style full of adventure and mystery as well as packed with hidden rhyme. Lovely

January 28th, 2025 06:50

Riordan
Poetic Licence said:

At the moment things are looking up, enjoyed the read

January 28th, 2025 05:26

Riosin
Cassie58 said:

Nice creative writing. Enjoyed the read. Thank you.

January 27th, 2025 14:22

Pause
Teddy.15 said:

Full of wisdom, judgement and haste are two things I myself dislike, if the world was more empathetic and kind I guess positivity would come easier. 🌹

January 27th, 2025 13:41

Riosin
sorenbarrett said:

I have gotten used to your style and the more I read it the more I like it. The subtlety of rhyme and near rhyme in the flowing text gives it its appeal. Don\'t ever let that go it is your strong suit a growing masters hand hidden in the shadows. Very nicely done.

January 27th, 2025 12:13

Riosin
Poetic Licence said:

Will do, enjoyed the read

January 27th, 2025 11:36

Riosin
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 27th, 2025 10:48

Pause
Poetic Licence said:

Never judge a book by its cover, read some of the story first, lovely write with positive message

January 27th, 2025 02:49

Pause
orchidee said:

Yes, 99% of the time I blunder in with KP. \'I\'m always right,\' I say! lol.

January 26th, 2025 14:53

Pause
sorenbarrett said:

Agreed it is often better to pause. Good advice in more poetic form

January 26th, 2025 12:27

Pause
Demar Desu said:

That’s fair… but what if you automatically don’t vibe with that person will you eventually?

January 26th, 2025 12:14

In The End
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

January 25th, 2025 15:03

In The End
sorenbarrett said:

A fave for the message in this poem written with a flow that carried the reader down stream and with occasional rhyme to give attraction along the way.

January 25th, 2025 07:58

Everything Changes
Poetic Licence said:

Change needs to be for the better and not just for the sake of change, enjoyed the read

January 24th, 2025 07:15

Everything Changes
sorenbarrett said:

Change within limits is good so true preventing boredom but there is always too much of a good thing too. A nicely written message of value

January 24th, 2025 04:45

Keep Your Head Up
Cassie58 said:

An inspirational write. So true, all things eventually pass. Enjoyed my visit here. Thank you.

January 22nd, 2025 12:06

Keep Your Head Up
orchidee said:

Good write GS.

January 22nd, 2025 09:46

Keep Your Head Up
Poetic Licence said:

A positive and uplifting message for doom and gloom mongers like me !!!, enjoyed the read.

January 22nd, 2025 07:45

Keep Your Head Up
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of reassurance and hope. Nicely stated

January 22nd, 2025 07:29

Grief
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

January 21st, 2025 12:55

Grief
orchidee said:

Good write GS.

January 21st, 2025 11:23

Grief
sorenbarrett said:

I loved this piece it echos with rhyme and near rhyme in a pros style that is yours and yours alone. I have seldom seen this format used before and it works well for you. Lovely

January 21st, 2025 08:37

Grief
Cassie58 said:

It is the anniversary of my Dad’s death. Thirty four years ago. Reading your poem about grief reminds me that it is a journey. The rawness has gone, there is the softness of acceptance and the bond of love remains as strong. Thank you for posting.

January 21st, 2025 06:10

Bitter Sweet
sorenbarrett said:

I liked this final chapter that was realistic and poetic. Your rhyme and near rhyme inside the poem pulls the reader along and gives a sense of completion to the words. Very nicely done

January 15th, 2025 10:45

Bitter Sweet
orchidee said:

Good write GS.

January 15th, 2025 09:53



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