Comments received on poems by GenXer Shamrocker ☘️
Coming Up With A Plan
sorenbarrett said:
You have a knack at transitioning forward to the next episode. Serial poetry seems your specialty and I love the concept
February 5th, 2025 17:18
sorenbarrett said:
You have a knack at transitioning forward to the next episode. Serial poetry seems your specialty and I love the concept
February 5th, 2025 17:18
Coming Up With A Plan
Poetic Licence said:
i am not sure she will take to kindly to that, until tomorrow, enjoyed the read
February 5th, 2025 15:59
Poetic Licence said:
i am not sure she will take to kindly to that, until tomorrow, enjoyed the read
February 5th, 2025 15:59
Coming Up With A Plan
Cassie58 said:
Interesting. He wants to change the name of her business? I am intrigued as to what she will think about this proposal. I’ll be checking in to find out :)
February 5th, 2025 14:50
Cassie58 said:
Interesting. He wants to change the name of her business? I am intrigued as to what she will think about this proposal. I’ll be checking in to find out :)
February 5th, 2025 14:50
Back Story on Linens and Things
sorenbarrett said:
A hopeful sense to this piece of the story. Nicely laid out in your style
February 4th, 2025 08:21
sorenbarrett said:
A hopeful sense to this piece of the story. Nicely laid out in your style
February 4th, 2025 08:21
Back Story on Linens and Things
Cassie58 said:
Enjoyed your story with a cup
of tea this morning. Thank you. Happy Tuesday.
February 4th, 2025 06:35
Cassie58 said:
Enjoyed your story with a cup
of tea this morning. Thank you. Happy Tuesday.
February 4th, 2025 06:35
Back Story on Linens and Things
Poetic Licence said:
thank you for todays update, enjoyed the read
February 4th, 2025 06:32
Poetic Licence said:
thank you for todays update, enjoyed the read
February 4th, 2025 06:32
Riordan’s First Day 2
Poetic Licence said:
Than k you for todays instalment, enjoyed
February 3rd, 2025 12:26
Poetic Licence said:
Than k you for todays instalment, enjoyed
February 3rd, 2025 12:26
Riordan’s First Day 2
sorenbarrett said:
Upon reading your story poems in the beginning in my blindness I did not see the creativity you displayed. Now that I have awoken form my rigid views I see a wonderful work of art in this style. This one continues to pull the reader along with its internal rhyme and continued segments that draw the reader back to your next one. Very nicely done you have incoporated the art of poetry with the genious of a mini series.
February 3rd, 2025 09:29
sorenbarrett said:
Upon reading your story poems in the beginning in my blindness I did not see the creativity you displayed. Now that I have awoken form my rigid views I see a wonderful work of art in this style. This one continues to pull the reader along with its internal rhyme and continued segments that draw the reader back to your next one. Very nicely done you have incoporated the art of poetry with the genious of a mini series.
February 3rd, 2025 09:29
Riordan’s First Day!
sorenbarrett said:
Real life as it is. Raw and pulling no punches. A good write with continued internal rhyme from time to time greasing the flow.
February 2nd, 2025 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
Real life as it is. Raw and pulling no punches. A good write with continued internal rhyme from time to time greasing the flow.
February 2nd, 2025 04:54
Linens And Things!
Cassie58 said:
Is this the perfect set up? Will have to read more in the future to find out.
January 29th, 2025 17:32
Cassie58 said:
Is this the perfect set up? Will have to read more in the future to find out.
January 29th, 2025 17:32
Linens And Things!
sorenbarrett said:
Every story and piece of music needs a bridge and this is it. Nicely done
January 29th, 2025 15:42
sorenbarrett said:
Every story and piece of music needs a bridge and this is it. Nicely done
January 29th, 2025 15:42
Linens And Things!
Poetic Licence said:
It can go either way, till the next one, enjoyed the read
January 29th, 2025 13:34
Poetic Licence said:
It can go either way, till the next one, enjoyed the read
January 29th, 2025 13:34
Riordan
sorenbarrett said:
Again so nicely written in your personal style full of adventure and mystery as well as packed with hidden rhyme. Lovely
January 28th, 2025 06:50
sorenbarrett said:
Again so nicely written in your personal style full of adventure and mystery as well as packed with hidden rhyme. Lovely
January 28th, 2025 06:50
Riordan
Poetic Licence said:
At the moment things are looking up, enjoyed the read
January 28th, 2025 05:26
Poetic Licence said:
At the moment things are looking up, enjoyed the read
January 28th, 2025 05:26
Pause
Teddy.15 said:
Full of wisdom, judgement and haste are two things I myself dislike, if the world was more empathetic and kind I guess positivity would come easier. 🌹
January 27th, 2025 13:41
Teddy.15 said:
Full of wisdom, judgement and haste are two things I myself dislike, if the world was more empathetic and kind I guess positivity would come easier. 🌹
January 27th, 2025 13:41
Riosin
sorenbarrett said:
I have gotten used to your style and the more I read it the more I like it. The subtlety of rhyme and near rhyme in the flowing text gives it its appeal. Don\'t ever let that go it is your strong suit a growing masters hand hidden in the shadows. Very nicely done.
January 27th, 2025 12:13
sorenbarrett said:
I have gotten used to your style and the more I read it the more I like it. The subtlety of rhyme and near rhyme in the flowing text gives it its appeal. Don\'t ever let that go it is your strong suit a growing masters hand hidden in the shadows. Very nicely done.
January 27th, 2025 12:13
Pause
Poetic Licence said:
Never judge a book by its cover, read some of the story first, lovely write with positive message
January 27th, 2025 02:49
Poetic Licence said:
Never judge a book by its cover, read some of the story first, lovely write with positive message
January 27th, 2025 02:49
Pause
orchidee said:
Yes, 99% of the time I blunder in with KP. \'I\'m always right,\' I say! lol.
January 26th, 2025 14:53
orchidee said:
Yes, 99% of the time I blunder in with KP. \'I\'m always right,\' I say! lol.
January 26th, 2025 14:53
Pause
sorenbarrett said:
Agreed it is often better to pause. Good advice in more poetic form
January 26th, 2025 12:27
sorenbarrett said:
Agreed it is often better to pause. Good advice in more poetic form
January 26th, 2025 12:27
Pause
Demar Desu said:
That’s fair… but what if you automatically don’t vibe with that person will you eventually?
January 26th, 2025 12:14
Demar Desu said:
That’s fair… but what if you automatically don’t vibe with that person will you eventually?
January 26th, 2025 12:14
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