Comments received on poems by Daves Bloke Poems
I\'m not stopping here
L. B. Mek said:
\'\'if you\'ve got the coin
we can flip, for it..\'\'
lol
(a fun read, although
as my little reply, alluded to
sadly, most times
people stay in those premises
for seemingly
having no other place, to stay..)
thanks for sharing
May 6th, 2022 03:50
L. B. Mek said:
\'\'if you\'ve got the coin
we can flip, for it..\'\'
lol
(a fun read, although
as my little reply, alluded to
sadly, most times
people stay in those premises
for seemingly
having no other place, to stay..)
thanks for sharing
May 6th, 2022 03:50
God\'s Green Earth
Crowns4Christ said:
Great job on that one,a terrifying day that will be for those that doesn\'t believe in Christ, I am thankful that we will be kept from all of this when the angels blow the trumpets
April 26th, 2022 15:33
Crowns4Christ said:
Great job on that one,a terrifying day that will be for those that doesn\'t believe in Christ, I am thankful that we will be kept from all of this when the angels blow the trumpets
April 26th, 2022 15:33
Honesty Is The Key To A Healthy Relationship.
Christina8 said:
A really great poem, it was a joy to read!
April 20th, 2022 09:17
Christina8 said:
A really great poem, it was a joy to read!
April 20th, 2022 09:17
Honesty Is The Key To A Healthy Relationship.
L. B. Mek said:
simple, romantic, hopeful, mirthful
(why do I think, there\'s a cocktail mix
that can blossom form this jarring words)
lol
thanks for sharing, such emphatically worded poetry
April 19th, 2022 04:34
L. B. Mek said:
simple, romantic, hopeful, mirthful
(why do I think, there\'s a cocktail mix
that can blossom form this jarring words)
lol
thanks for sharing, such emphatically worded poetry
April 19th, 2022 04:34
Honesty Is The Key To A Healthy Relationship.
Crowns4Christ said:
Yep you achieved erotic, and trust really is the secret to a healthy marriage, whether good or bad, honesty is always best
April 18th, 2022 21:04
Crowns4Christ said:
Yep you achieved erotic, and trust really is the secret to a healthy marriage, whether good or bad, honesty is always best
April 18th, 2022 21:04
Haiku or Senryu :) Maybe I\'ll know When I\'m Older.
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, it is a senryu.
You cannot teach experience.
Senryu tell of feelings and emotions, haiku are about nature.
Amdu
April 17th, 2022 01:03
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, it is a senryu.
You cannot teach experience.
Senryu tell of feelings and emotions, haiku are about nature.
Amdu
April 17th, 2022 01:03
Haiku or Senryu :) Maybe I\'ll know When I\'m Older.
Rozina said:
Good one. I learned about 5/7/5 and other forms of poetry from MPS, reading Teddy\'s and other poets\' offerings. It\'s not as easy as it looks! Putting a completed story into these few syllables needs a lot of thought and redoing, again and again (for me anyway). Well done.
April 16th, 2022 18:01
Rozina said:
Good one. I learned about 5/7/5 and other forms of poetry from MPS, reading Teddy\'s and other poets\' offerings. It\'s not as easy as it looks! Putting a completed story into these few syllables needs a lot of thought and redoing, again and again (for me anyway). Well done.
April 16th, 2022 18:01
Haiku or Senryu :) Maybe I\'ll know When I\'m Older.
Bella Shepard said:
I do like it. I\'m new to this form and learning.
April 16th, 2022 12:06
Bella Shepard said:
I do like it. I\'m new to this form and learning.
April 16th, 2022 12:06
Rhyme for Reflection
Rozina said:
I\'m glad you\'re feeling better. Yes, sharing your emotions through poetry can relieve some load from the mind. I like your poem.
April 15th, 2022 17:42
Rozina said:
I\'m glad you\'re feeling better. Yes, sharing your emotions through poetry can relieve some load from the mind. I like your poem.
April 15th, 2022 17:42
Supermarket Customer Complaint
Rozina said:
Hahaha! So true. Some customers will always find something to complain about. In a Melbourne cafe last month, they hired some actors to be the staff and this time the staff would complain to the customers about their bad eating habits, their choices of food etc. Customers were enticed to come with freebies given out after their experience!
April 14th, 2022 17:37
Rozina said:
Hahaha! So true. Some customers will always find something to complain about. In a Melbourne cafe last month, they hired some actors to be the staff and this time the staff would complain to the customers about their bad eating habits, their choices of food etc. Customers were enticed to come with freebies given out after their experience!
April 14th, 2022 17:37
Cute Teddy Bear
Crowns4Christ said:
This is such a sexy cute poem, I bet you\'ll always be the cute Teddy bear to your love
April 13th, 2022 15:28
Crowns4Christ said:
This is such a sexy cute poem, I bet you\'ll always be the cute Teddy bear to your love
April 13th, 2022 15:28
I\'m Perfectly Fine
Rozina said:
In just a few lines you\'ve explained how some people deal with this. I enjoyed reading your poem.
April 12th, 2022 17:51
Rozina said:
In just a few lines you\'ve explained how some people deal with this. I enjoyed reading your poem.
April 12th, 2022 17:51
An Office Romance
Christina8 said:
Before I was married I had a work romance and that little dalliance turned into quite the buzz around work. You have a gem of a poem here, great job!
April 10th, 2022 11:48
Christina8 said:
Before I was married I had a work romance and that little dalliance turned into quite the buzz around work. You have a gem of a poem here, great job!
April 10th, 2022 11:48
An Old Lie
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotions should never be \'bottled up\' as they show the real you.
Andy
April 9th, 2022 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotions should never be \'bottled up\' as they show the real you.
Andy
April 9th, 2022 00:38
Oh Pistachio!
L. B. Mek said:
intriguing...
personally, I\'m usually
too busy, trying to open
my pistachios, without
getting my fingers pinched
for me to contemplate
their potential, as metaphor..
lol
thanks for sharing, a fun idea
really well written
April 8th, 2022 03:25
L. B. Mek said:
intriguing...
personally, I\'m usually
too busy, trying to open
my pistachios, without
getting my fingers pinched
for me to contemplate
their potential, as metaphor..
lol
thanks for sharing, a fun idea
really well written
April 8th, 2022 03:25
Oh Pistachio!
dean langmuir said:
Fun write,I might love pistachios that much,take care
April 7th, 2022 16:21
dean langmuir said:
Fun write,I might love pistachios that much,take care
April 7th, 2022 16:21
