Comments received on poems by arqios
hearticulate
orchidee said:
Dang it! Spell-checker\'s gone again!
I have to harticulate that it\'s a fine write!
April 19th, 2023 11:37
orchidee said:
Dang it! Spell-checker\'s gone again!
I have to harticulate that it\'s a fine write!
April 19th, 2023 11:37
hearticulate
sorenbarrett said:
They say that walking early is a help to reading and writhing. In this piece I got the message that we sould think about things before we put them to paper. That what we put down between those \"undulating lines\" casts shadows that remain afterward. Such writing should be uplifting to thouse that follow. I truely enjoyed this one.
April 19th, 2023 08:30
sorenbarrett said:
They say that walking early is a help to reading and writhing. In this piece I got the message that we sould think about things before we put them to paper. That what we put down between those \"undulating lines\" casts shadows that remain afterward. Such writing should be uplifting to thouse that follow. I truely enjoyed this one.
April 19th, 2023 08:30
pyrite-technic
Goldfinch60 said:
Once that true love arrives in your life you will recover.
Andy
April 19th, 2023 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Once that true love arrives in your life you will recover.
Andy
April 19th, 2023 01:00
pyrite-technic
Bobby O said:
The risk , the offered kinship w the promise of more must be a goal, setbacks aside, the true measure of true heart is in the vital pursuit of nurtur and attachment. Nice piece
April 18th, 2023 21:19
Bobby O said:
The risk , the offered kinship w the promise of more must be a goal, setbacks aside, the true measure of true heart is in the vital pursuit of nurtur and attachment. Nice piece
April 18th, 2023 21:19
pyrite-technic
Bella Shepard said:
Great title! Lessons learned and hopefully the wiser for? It doesn\'t lessen the pain, and can only hope for better. Wishing you a soothing balm dear friend.
April 18th, 2023 14:32
Bella Shepard said:
Great title! Lessons learned and hopefully the wiser for? It doesn\'t lessen the pain, and can only hope for better. Wishing you a soothing balm dear friend.
April 18th, 2023 14:32
come and get it
Bella Shepard said:
Three lovely lines seem to symbolize the peace and comfort of a simple routine. We have a routine to bring in the bird feeder at 7:00 PM every evening because we have a four legged bandit that likes to strike in the dead of night.
April 17th, 2023 16:05
Bella Shepard said:
Three lovely lines seem to symbolize the peace and comfort of a simple routine. We have a routine to bring in the bird feeder at 7:00 PM every evening because we have a four legged bandit that likes to strike in the dead of night.
April 17th, 2023 16:05
come and get it
Rocky Lagou said:
Haikus are forceful and potent...this proves that very fact
April 17th, 2023 12:40
Rocky Lagou said:
Haikus are forceful and potent...this proves that very fact
April 17th, 2023 12:40
come and get it
sorenbarrett said:
This one rings a bell. I used to bring cows in at night from the pasture and it brings back memories just like echoes.
April 17th, 2023 08:49
sorenbarrett said:
This one rings a bell. I used to bring cows in at night from the pasture and it brings back memories just like echoes.
April 17th, 2023 08:49
bedtime symphony
2781 said:
It\'s tricky to comment on..\"one generation passes away and another generation comes; but the earth abides forever.\" I used to think smart phones were evil.
April 16th, 2023 07:58
2781 said:
It\'s tricky to comment on..\"one generation passes away and another generation comes; but the earth abides forever.\" I used to think smart phones were evil.
April 16th, 2023 07:58
Kernou
sorenbarrett said:
Having been raised for the first two years of my life in a mining town (Now a ghost town) so the lines: \"ghosts of centuries of mining towns and specters of legend\" have a special meaning for me. Although they say that one does not remember befor they aquire language I have vivid visual memories of this mountain mining town that the details were confirked by my parents. In this town in a house next to ours there was a card game where a man was shot to death and the word spectre has meaning. dydh da to you as well.
April 16th, 2023 06:09
sorenbarrett said:
Having been raised for the first two years of my life in a mining town (Now a ghost town) so the lines: \"ghosts of centuries of mining towns and specters of legend\" have a special meaning for me. Although they say that one does not remember befor they aquire language I have vivid visual memories of this mountain mining town that the details were confirked by my parents. In this town in a house next to ours there was a card game where a man was shot to death and the word spectre has meaning. dydh da to you as well.
April 16th, 2023 06:09
Kernou
Neville said:
I was raised in gullworthy cottages a mere spit from the banks of the good old Tamar who has featured variously amongst my own little scribbles over a good many years .. Girt lush squire .. I will have to give lady Fay a nudge since I believe she resides thereabouts ... Neville
April 15th, 2023 14:27
Neville said:
I was raised in gullworthy cottages a mere spit from the banks of the good old Tamar who has featured variously amongst my own little scribbles over a good many years .. Girt lush squire .. I will have to give lady Fay a nudge since I believe she resides thereabouts ... Neville
April 15th, 2023 14:27
Kernou
Bella Shepard said:
Dear Bard, did some googling on this one and found the answers to my questions. In doing so I learned something about the Cornish tongue, and it is lovely. I\'m a huge fan of \"Doc Martin\", and scenes of the beautiful Cornish coast. What a delightful piece, thank you!
April 15th, 2023 13:16
Bella Shepard said:
Dear Bard, did some googling on this one and found the answers to my questions. In doing so I learned something about the Cornish tongue, and it is lovely. I\'m a huge fan of \"Doc Martin\", and scenes of the beautiful Cornish coast. What a delightful piece, thank you!
April 15th, 2023 13:16
Kernou
orchidee said:
Bit of French there? Doh! I\'m not expanding my Cornish vocabulary! lol.
April 15th, 2023 10:55
orchidee said:
Bit of French there? Doh! I\'m not expanding my Cornish vocabulary! lol.
April 15th, 2023 10:55
Kernou
Eugene S. said:
Interesting. I\'m expanding my Cornish vocabulary and my understand of the UK landscape. dydh da
April 15th, 2023 10:27
Eugene S. said:
Interesting. I\'m expanding my Cornish vocabulary and my understand of the UK landscape. dydh da
April 15th, 2023 10:27
life from home
Neville said:
lockdown days off to a T sir ..
funny thing is, I\'ve been thinking a lot about light emitting diodes myself recently ... 🐧
April 15th, 2023 03:43
Neville said:
lockdown days off to a T sir ..
funny thing is, I\'ve been thinking a lot about light emitting diodes myself recently ... 🐧
April 15th, 2023 03:43
life from home
2781 said:
Sounds nifty. We have ducted with a long hose, awkward but the decibels give the neighbours blower some competition.
April 14th, 2023 07:58
2781 said:
Sounds nifty. We have ducted with a long hose, awkward but the decibels give the neighbours blower some competition.
April 14th, 2023 07:58
seasonal diabetes
Neville said:
Great title lost somewhere in translation ...... maybe :)
April 13th, 2023 13:06
Neville said:
Great title lost somewhere in translation ...... maybe :)
April 13th, 2023 13:06
seasonal diabetes
sorenbarrett said:
This one left me thinking and that is dangerous. I often see things that others don\'t and that is called hallucinations, delusions or just plain crazy. Here the reversal of the letters reveal poetically stated the mental part of illness. \"emditation\" meditation, \"dictated maladies\" too many m\'s and another reversal of letters for intimidation- quite intimidating indeed. Another reversal on climbing. Not aware of seasonal diabetes, unless you over eat candies and sugars on the holidays. If there were I\'m sure it would have a temporary effect on the eyesight and maybe the spelling. Or was it just deliberate to boggle my mind?
April 13th, 2023 12:39
sorenbarrett said:
This one left me thinking and that is dangerous. I often see things that others don\'t and that is called hallucinations, delusions or just plain crazy. Here the reversal of the letters reveal poetically stated the mental part of illness. \"emditation\" meditation, \"dictated maladies\" too many m\'s and another reversal of letters for intimidation- quite intimidating indeed. Another reversal on climbing. Not aware of seasonal diabetes, unless you over eat candies and sugars on the holidays. If there were I\'m sure it would have a temporary effect on the eyesight and maybe the spelling. Or was it just deliberate to boggle my mind?
April 13th, 2023 12:39
seasonal diabetes
orchidee said:
That spell-checker didn\'t work today then?! lol.
April 13th, 2023 11:54
orchidee said:
That spell-checker didn\'t work today then?! lol.
April 13th, 2023 11:54
full stop
Bella Shepard said:
Dear friend I am of two thoughts here, the light at the intersection of the road, or the intersection of life. Either one will require patience and consideration as we proceed. Just loved this one!
April 8th, 2023 13:01
Bella Shepard said:
Dear friend I am of two thoughts here, the light at the intersection of the road, or the intersection of life. Either one will require patience and consideration as we proceed. Just loved this one!
April 8th, 2023 13:01
full stop
sorenbarrett said:
Been there, done that. That is to say in literal traffic and also metaphorically. The traffic now days is really bad.
April 5th, 2023 09:18
sorenbarrett said:
Been there, done that. That is to say in literal traffic and also metaphorically. The traffic now days is really bad.
April 5th, 2023 09:18
full stop
Neville said:
knuckles clenched & turning white .. drowning in adrenaline ..
I know those lights only too well ..
April 5th, 2023 08:50
Neville said:
knuckles clenched & turning white .. drowning in adrenaline ..
I know those lights only too well ..
April 5th, 2023 08:50
full stop
orchidee said:
Good write CB. Now for my next poem: \'comma\', or it might be \'colon\' - notice one got in there in this comment?
April 5th, 2023 07:54
orchidee said:
Good write CB. Now for my next poem: \'comma\', or it might be \'colon\' - notice one got in there in this comment?
April 5th, 2023 07:54
full stop
2781 said:
My wife tells me they target yellow light runners now. I don\'t want to curse myself so I will shut up.
April 5th, 2023 07:25
2781 said:
My wife tells me they target yellow light runners now. I don\'t want to curse myself so I will shut up.
April 5th, 2023 07:25
stairs
Neville said:
I hear stairs have their own local accent or dialect .. I sure wooden be surprised ............. N :)
April 4th, 2023 12:16
Neville said:
I hear stairs have their own local accent or dialect .. I sure wooden be surprised ............. N :)
April 4th, 2023 12:16
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