Comments received on poems by arqios
wharfside reverie
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
But Fido is suspect of \'reverie\'. He won\'t allow me any in case it gets too jolly, or any hint of hotness! Nor any ardour or excitement. He says it\'s for my own good, in case I swoon too much! lol.
March 1st, 2023 13:31
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
But Fido is suspect of \'reverie\'. He won\'t allow me any in case it gets too jolly, or any hint of hotness! Nor any ardour or excitement. He says it\'s for my own good, in case I swoon too much! lol.
March 1st, 2023 13:31
wharfside reverie
Bella Shepard said:
You pose such an intriguing scenario dear poet. Do we truly listen, or simply look to distract ourselves. Such a good write!
March 1st, 2023 12:13
Bella Shepard said:
You pose such an intriguing scenario dear poet. Do we truly listen, or simply look to distract ourselves. Such a good write!
March 1st, 2023 12:13
confrontational history
orchidee said:
It\'s a true write, because it\'s neither \'the good old days\' nor \'the bad old days\'.
And \'I wouldn\'t have done that when I was your age\' does not ring true, because they would have done it at our age! Whatever \'it\' was.
February 27th, 2023 13:10
orchidee said:
It\'s a true write, because it\'s neither \'the good old days\' nor \'the bad old days\'.
And \'I wouldn\'t have done that when I was your age\' does not ring true, because they would have done it at our age! Whatever \'it\' was.
February 27th, 2023 13:10
confrontational history
2781 said:
There\'s nothing new under the sun, it\'s all been here before. Good writing.
February 27th, 2023 06:58
2781 said:
There\'s nothing new under the sun, it\'s all been here before. Good writing.
February 27th, 2023 06:58
within reach
Bella Shepard said:
Dear friend you direct our attention to the state of the world in a most profound way. Your second stanza,\"if a measure of wisdom still remains\" begs the question do we realize what we have lost? Your last stanza a vision of what can be. Brilliant!
February 26th, 2023 13:55
Bella Shepard said:
Dear friend you direct our attention to the state of the world in a most profound way. Your second stanza,\"if a measure of wisdom still remains\" begs the question do we realize what we have lost? Your last stanza a vision of what can be. Brilliant!
February 26th, 2023 13:55
cursors and curses
Bella Shepard said:
That keyboard dance does get away from us at times. I find my fingers flying, striking keys I don\'t want to strike and inadvertently hitting a button from which there is no recovery. If this is the dilema, you\'ve it the nail on the head. This one\'s fun!
February 19th, 2023 14:14
Bella Shepard said:
That keyboard dance does get away from us at times. I find my fingers flying, striking keys I don\'t want to strike and inadvertently hitting a button from which there is no recovery. If this is the dilema, you\'ve it the nail on the head. This one\'s fun!
February 19th, 2023 14:14
cursors and curses
Fay Slimm. said:
I truly admire the use of word=play in this telling write Rik. Cursed indeed are the hours I spend trying to find the right keyboard dance .
February 19th, 2023 12:18
Fay Slimm. said:
I truly admire the use of word=play in this telling write Rik. Cursed indeed are the hours I spend trying to find the right keyboard dance .
February 19th, 2023 12:18
star signed
Bella Shepard said:
Your poem and music bring such delight. At this time of year I can step out on my deck each night and see Orion and the The Big Dipper, and bid them goodnight before I go to bed. Thank you dear poet, for this love of constellations!
February 16th, 2023 13:38
Bella Shepard said:
Your poem and music bring such delight. At this time of year I can step out on my deck each night and see Orion and the The Big Dipper, and bid them goodnight before I go to bed. Thank you dear poet, for this love of constellations!
February 16th, 2023 13:38
more than counting sheep
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one CB.
At my age every time I get a new memory and old one falls off the other end. LOL
Andy
February 14th, 2023 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one CB.
At my age every time I get a new memory and old one falls off the other end. LOL
Andy
February 14th, 2023 02:22
hidden valentine
Bella Shepard said:
Thank you dear poet for this look into a hidden history. Some good decisions by Valens, and some not so good, it all depends on the writing of history, or rewriting in many instances. I know more than I did before and I will remember this come Valentine\'s Day. Thank you for this very thoughtful piece.
February 10th, 2023 15:58
Bella Shepard said:
Thank you dear poet for this look into a hidden history. Some good decisions by Valens, and some not so good, it all depends on the writing of history, or rewriting in many instances. I know more than I did before and I will remember this come Valentine\'s Day. Thank you for this very thoughtful piece.
February 10th, 2023 15:58
hidden valentine
L. B. Mek said:
this is strangely, feels like
both a championing, of
and a commentary, of
valentine\'s cultural traditions
a great read, dear Poet
February 10th, 2023 06:46
L. B. Mek said:
this is strangely, feels like
both a championing, of
and a commentary, of
valentine\'s cultural traditions
a great read, dear Poet
February 10th, 2023 06:46
inside out
Neville said:
you speak on behalf of many here CB .. speaking as a child of the .... \'s that is :)
February 8th, 2023 06:06
Neville said:
you speak on behalf of many here CB .. speaking as a child of the .... \'s that is :)
February 8th, 2023 06:06
peering and squinting
Goldfinch60 said:
We must always keep our eyes open cb as there is much that we may miss in our lives.
Andy
February 8th, 2023 02:45
Goldfinch60 said:
We must always keep our eyes open cb as there is much that we may miss in our lives.
Andy
February 8th, 2023 02:45
tongue in cheek
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes - any communication is not worth a candle until it is received and acknowledged.
February 6th, 2023 21:42
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes - any communication is not worth a candle until it is received and acknowledged.
February 6th, 2023 21:42
tongue in cheek
Bella Shepard said:
Oh, the anticipation of acceptance the validation, don\'t we all seek it? The rush when you get the notification someone has commented on your poem. You hold your breath, click and sign in. They liked it! You bring it all to fruition in this delightful poem dear friend. What a wonderful feeling of community when we all support each other.
February 6th, 2023 16:17
Bella Shepard said:
Oh, the anticipation of acceptance the validation, don\'t we all seek it? The rush when you get the notification someone has commented on your poem. You hold your breath, click and sign in. They liked it! You bring it all to fruition in this delightful poem dear friend. What a wonderful feeling of community when we all support each other.
February 6th, 2023 16:17
tongue in cheek
Fay Slimm. said:
An intriguing question hidden in these phrases that refer yet do not disclose names or faces - hoping your piece will be read and without tongue in cheek then digested by whomsoever with pleasing results An engaging read.
February 6th, 2023 10:08
Fay Slimm. said:
An intriguing question hidden in these phrases that refer yet do not disclose names or faces - hoping your piece will be read and without tongue in cheek then digested by whomsoever with pleasing results An engaging read.
February 6th, 2023 10:08
tongue in cheek
orchidee said:
What thought process did I ever have, with me 3 brain cells? They often go on holiday, so I don\'t even have 3 sometimes! lol.
February 6th, 2023 07:57
orchidee said:
What thought process did I ever have, with me 3 brain cells? They often go on holiday, so I don\'t even have 3 sometimes! lol.
February 6th, 2023 07:57
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