Comments received on poems by arqios
drunken suspension bridge
Cassie58 said:
Your lines resonated with me and not in a metaphorical way, but from experience of earlier years. Alcoholism is an illness and I experienced that with a partner. Sober, he was a completely different person. He certainly loved his drink though. Much to think about here and reflect on. Up to your usual high standard arqios.
December 22nd, 2024 14:21
Cassie58 said:
Your lines resonated with me and not in a metaphorical way, but from experience of earlier years. Alcoholism is an illness and I experienced that with a partner. Sober, he was a completely different person. He certainly loved his drink though. Much to think about here and reflect on. Up to your usual high standard arqios.
December 22nd, 2024 14:21
drunken suspension bridge
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I can certainly relate to this, my friend, both in how I have seen substances destroy the lives of those I love...and the way it started to destroy my own. Thankfully...I am a semicolon in this way and in others. A brilliant poem that sees the humanity in someone struggling as opposed to merely the problem. Well done, my friend, well done! 🌹👏
December 22nd, 2024 07:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I can certainly relate to this, my friend, both in how I have seen substances destroy the lives of those I love...and the way it started to destroy my own. Thankfully...I am a semicolon in this way and in others. A brilliant poem that sees the humanity in someone struggling as opposed to merely the problem. Well done, my friend, well done! 🌹👏
December 22nd, 2024 07:28
drunken suspension bridge
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful piece layered with anger and pain, they can see without the alcohol there is love to be had. A worthwhile read.
December 22nd, 2024 04:05
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful piece layered with anger and pain, they can see without the alcohol there is love to be had. A worthwhile read.
December 22nd, 2024 04:05
drunken suspension bridge
sorenbarrett said:
If taken literal it is so difficult to deal with substances in a relationship on the metaphoric side drunken on fantasies one can not create a deep and meaningful relationship. In its simplicity it says so much.
December 22nd, 2024 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
If taken literal it is so difficult to deal with substances in a relationship on the metaphoric side drunken on fantasies one can not create a deep and meaningful relationship. In its simplicity it says so much.
December 22nd, 2024 03:50
21-12-24
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories of our youth are still there arqios.
Andy
December 22nd, 2024 02:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories of our youth are still there arqios.
Andy
December 22nd, 2024 02:15
21-12-24
Kevin Hulme said:
I know what you mean. Somethings just stay with you.
My Mother loved the Frank Sinatra Christmas Album. So that’s special for me .
Have a good one.
December 21st, 2024 20:04
Kevin Hulme said:
I know what you mean. Somethings just stay with you.
My Mother loved the Frank Sinatra Christmas Album. So that’s special for me .
Have a good one.
December 21st, 2024 20:04
love unspoken
Kevin Hulme said:
Once again, Strange. I just Published ‘I hate to see you Cry’ and your Poem is of similar theme.
Yes to stand back and see someone you Love suffer is unbearable. Good Poem.
December 21st, 2024 19:47
Kevin Hulme said:
Once again, Strange. I just Published ‘I hate to see you Cry’ and your Poem is of similar theme.
Yes to stand back and see someone you Love suffer is unbearable. Good Poem.
December 21st, 2024 19:47
21-12-24
David Wakeling said:
The truth about growing up.It can be a lot different.Thoughtful poem
December 21st, 2024 14:49
David Wakeling said:
The truth about growing up.It can be a lot different.Thoughtful poem
December 21st, 2024 14:49
21-12-24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes, despite my poetry’s focus as of late, I too, do have that inner child within me, longing for Christmas Eve/Day. Thank you for bringing that less cynical kiddo out with this wonderful gem, my friend! 🌹👏
December 21st, 2024 13:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes, despite my poetry’s focus as of late, I too, do have that inner child within me, longing for Christmas Eve/Day. Thank you for bringing that less cynical kiddo out with this wonderful gem, my friend! 🌹👏
December 21st, 2024 13:45
21-12-24
Cassie58 said:
Lovely and upbeat and brings out my inner child. Great imagery. I still get excited about Christmas with family. Enjoyed my visit and your posted music arqios.
December 21st, 2024 13:25
Cassie58 said:
Lovely and upbeat and brings out my inner child. Great imagery. I still get excited about Christmas with family. Enjoyed my visit and your posted music arqios.
December 21st, 2024 13:25
21-12-24
Thad Wilk said:
A beautiful Christmas
poem and thoughts penned! ⛄🧑🎄
I still feel the same about
it, as I did then!! 👍
Love it!!😍 Great read my friend!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 21st, 2024 11:01
Thad Wilk said:
A beautiful Christmas
poem and thoughts penned! ⛄🧑🎄
I still feel the same about
it, as I did then!! 👍
Love it!!😍 Great read my friend!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 21st, 2024 11:01
21-12-24
sorenbarrett said:
Caught the feeling in this poem so well expressed with memories of childhood and the anticipation of Christmas morning. Yes it is a feeling that can\'t be shaken. A most lovely write.
December 21st, 2024 08:46
sorenbarrett said:
Caught the feeling in this poem so well expressed with memories of childhood and the anticipation of Christmas morning. Yes it is a feeling that can\'t be shaken. A most lovely write.
December 21st, 2024 08:46
21-12-24
2781 said:
Yep, I get caught up in the mania.
It\'s the one time of year I allow myself to get ripped off.
Wait a minute, today I bought oysters from the farmer for $15 a dozen, and 5kg of frozen wild caught king pawns for $27.50, and got given a watermelon by the Syrian grocer. Great time of year,
Cheers
December 21st, 2024 07:14
2781 said:
Yep, I get caught up in the mania.
It\'s the one time of year I allow myself to get ripped off.
Wait a minute, today I bought oysters from the farmer for $15 a dozen, and 5kg of frozen wild caught king pawns for $27.50, and got given a watermelon by the Syrian grocer. Great time of year,
Cheers
December 21st, 2024 07:14
21-12-24
Neville said:
If its your BIG DAY then many congratulations .. if it\'s not, then here, have even more .. congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, 🧑🎄👍
December 21st, 2024 06:57
Neville said:
If its your BIG DAY then many congratulations .. if it\'s not, then here, have even more .. congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, 🧑🎄👍
December 21st, 2024 06:57
21-12-24
Poetic Licence said:
We all retain some part of being a child inside us, a happy enjoyable read to brighten up what here is a horrible cold wet day, Thank you
December 21st, 2024 06:35
Poetic Licence said:
We all retain some part of being a child inside us, a happy enjoyable read to brighten up what here is a horrible cold wet day, Thank you
December 21st, 2024 06:35
21-12-24
cellinic said:
A very nice, deep and multifaceted piece of work. Best wishes and warm regards,
December 21st, 2024 05:57
cellinic said:
A very nice, deep and multifaceted piece of work. Best wishes and warm regards,
December 21st, 2024 05:57
love unspoken
Goldfinch60 said:
True friendship is such a blessing arqios.
Andy
December 21st, 2024 02:45
Goldfinch60 said:
True friendship is such a blessing arqios.
Andy
December 21st, 2024 02:45
love unspoken
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful write that really tears at the heartstrings my friend. This expresses love a much a deeper level than is oft written about, imho. Well done, friend! 🌹👏
December 20th, 2024 09:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful write that really tears at the heartstrings my friend. This expresses love a much a deeper level than is oft written about, imho. Well done, friend! 🌹👏
December 20th, 2024 09:28
love unspoken
cellinic said:
This poem gives a very excellent and true vision of what unspoken love is... very touching and sincere. Best wishes,
December 20th, 2024 08:32
cellinic said:
This poem gives a very excellent and true vision of what unspoken love is... very touching and sincere. Best wishes,
December 20th, 2024 08:32
love unspoken
sorenbarrett said:
Most tender and at the time most splendid in images this poem speaks to the heart of anyone that has ever held another dear. Lovely
December 20th, 2024 08:14
sorenbarrett said:
Most tender and at the time most splendid in images this poem speaks to the heart of anyone that has ever held another dear. Lovely
December 20th, 2024 08:14
love unspoken
Poetic Licence said:
A beautifully written piece of poetry, riddled with tenderness and love, and i feel the love was never actually made public. Well worth the read, Thank you
December 20th, 2024 08:12
Poetic Licence said:
A beautifully written piece of poetry, riddled with tenderness and love, and i feel the love was never actually made public. Well worth the read, Thank you
December 20th, 2024 08:12
love unspoken
Cassie58 said:
The greatest loss this side of heaven, is surely one that can only be disclosed to the closest of friends. You penned this poem with absolute depth and feeling. A wonderful write of love unspoken. Well done arqios.
December 20th, 2024 07:53
Cassie58 said:
The greatest loss this side of heaven, is surely one that can only be disclosed to the closest of friends. You penned this poem with absolute depth and feeling. A wonderful write of love unspoken. Well done arqios.
December 20th, 2024 07:53
poetic persona
Kevin Hulme said:
We all find our-selfs in there somewhere, and tell different stories to the World.
Good One and Nice Picture
December 19th, 2024 09:37
Kevin Hulme said:
We all find our-selfs in there somewhere, and tell different stories to the World.
Good One and Nice Picture
December 19th, 2024 09:37
searching for a season
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write. That opening line was fantastic.
December 19th, 2024 09:18
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write. That opening line was fantastic.
December 19th, 2024 09:18
poetic persona
cellinic said:
Exquisitely and fundamentally composed... Best wishes,
December 19th, 2024 04:47
cellinic said:
Exquisitely and fundamentally composed... Best wishes,
December 19th, 2024 04:47
poetic persona
sorenbarrett said:
We play many roles in this life and each with a different face. Very nicely worded Cryptic
December 19th, 2024 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
We play many roles in this life and each with a different face. Very nicely worded Cryptic
December 19th, 2024 04:34
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