Comments received on poems by arqios
awakening (haiku cluster)
Doggerel Dave said:
Beyond that you cannot persuade me to like anything to do with snow, I have to grudgingly admit your haikus formed a rich read, Rik.
November 22nd, 2024 17:15
Doggerel Dave said:
Beyond that you cannot persuade me to like anything to do with snow, I have to grudgingly admit your haikus formed a rich read, Rik.
November 22nd, 2024 17:15
Pizza Fit for a Queen
sorenbarrett said:
I’ve had these pizza many times before and love it as well. A nice story and I loved it.
November 22nd, 2024 12:49
sorenbarrett said:
I’ve had these pizza many times before and love it as well. A nice story and I loved it.
November 22nd, 2024 12:49
Pizza Fit for a Queen
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I’m waiting for Nev’s take on this too! As for my take:Yum! I want some Pizza Margherita now! 😂 Excellent, informative, and hunger inducing, fun write!
November 22nd, 2024 08:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I’m waiting for Nev’s take on this too! As for my take:Yum! I want some Pizza Margherita now! 😂 Excellent, informative, and hunger inducing, fun write!
November 22nd, 2024 08:50
Where do dreams flow?
Dan Williams said:
Ah, this guy. Shone brightly, briefly, fell into an open grave a few days before taking his own life. Is this the definition of tragedy, or what? nice.
November 22nd, 2024 00:15
Dan Williams said:
Ah, this guy. Shone brightly, briefly, fell into an open grave a few days before taking his own life. Is this the definition of tragedy, or what? nice.
November 22nd, 2024 00:15
awakening (haiku cluster)
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 Clapping!
Terrific haiku clusters indeed!!
Eye pleasing imagery and
a real treat to read!!💯
Thanks for sharing my friend,!!
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
November 21st, 2024 23:30
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 Clapping!
Terrific haiku clusters indeed!!
Eye pleasing imagery and
a real treat to read!!💯
Thanks for sharing my friend,!!
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
November 21st, 2024 23:30
awakening (haiku cluster)
David Wakeling said:
This is what I\'m talkin\' \'bout. Real poetry. So many delightful phrases here helps to create a wonderful scene,Enjoyable
November 21st, 2024 16:23
David Wakeling said:
This is what I\'m talkin\' \'bout. Real poetry. So many delightful phrases here helps to create a wonderful scene,Enjoyable
November 21st, 2024 16:23
awakening (haiku cluster)
Cassie58 said:
Five haiku which gift the reader with a beautiful winter wonderland. From first flakes to a complete covering of the ground. From day to night. Quite lovely. A cluster of visual delight.
November 21st, 2024 12:45
Cassie58 said:
Five haiku which gift the reader with a beautiful winter wonderland. From first flakes to a complete covering of the ground. From day to night. Quite lovely. A cluster of visual delight.
November 21st, 2024 12:45
awakening (haiku cluster)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great write. With SAD, I am really longing for the new light. I want to love winter, but it is so very hard on me. One day at a time, right? LOL! Excellent write. With that said, there is nothing more peaceful and calming that a first snow ❄️ fall. This haiku sequence captures that brilliantly! Bravo friend! ❤️
November 21st, 2024 11:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great write. With SAD, I am really longing for the new light. I want to love winter, but it is so very hard on me. One day at a time, right? LOL! Excellent write. With that said, there is nothing more peaceful and calming that a first snow ❄️ fall. This haiku sequence captures that brilliantly! Bravo friend! ❤️
November 21st, 2024 11:44
awakening (haiku cluster)
Neville said:
each one a perfect little literary gem in its own right, but as a cluster shine like some otherworldly orb or heavenly jewel ..
November 21st, 2024 09:14
Neville said:
each one a perfect little literary gem in its own right, but as a cluster shine like some otherworldly orb or heavenly jewel ..
November 21st, 2024 09:14
awakening (haiku cluster)
sorenbarrett said:
Like a winter storm, each poem of flake falls, and accumulates until by the end, the ground is covered in white and a new beauty is painted. A wonderful cluster of haiku
November 21st, 2024 06:41
sorenbarrett said:
Like a winter storm, each poem of flake falls, and accumulates until by the end, the ground is covered in white and a new beauty is painted. A wonderful cluster of haiku
November 21st, 2024 06:41
Where do dreams flow?
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine write and acclamation arqios.
Andy
November 21st, 2024 02:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine write and acclamation arqios.
Andy
November 21st, 2024 02:08
Where do dreams flow?
Neville said:
This is excellent reads like an abridged version of Percival\'s Narrative .. Neville 😎👍👍
November 20th, 2024 08:32
Neville said:
This is excellent reads like an abridged version of Percival\'s Narrative .. Neville 😎👍👍
November 20th, 2024 08:32
Where do dreams flow?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful job friend. A fitting poetic tribute and raising awareness at the same time. Bravo! 🌹👏🖤
November 20th, 2024 07:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful job friend. A fitting poetic tribute and raising awareness at the same time. Bravo! 🌹👏🖤
November 20th, 2024 07:48
Where do dreams flow?
David Wakeling said:
This is quite a master piece. The cadence and rhyme are impeccable. There is an obvious sadness in Thomas Chatterton\'s life but this poem is a magnificent tribute to a poet who died at 17. Well done
November 20th, 2024 06:00
David Wakeling said:
This is quite a master piece. The cadence and rhyme are impeccable. There is an obvious sadness in Thomas Chatterton\'s life but this poem is a magnificent tribute to a poet who died at 17. Well done
November 20th, 2024 06:00
Where do dreams flow?
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful tribute to a poet warning about mental health issues. Very nicely captured in this biography, a poetic form.
November 20th, 2024 05:39
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful tribute to a poet warning about mental health issues. Very nicely captured in this biography, a poetic form.
November 20th, 2024 05:39
Archeology of Understanding
Goldfinch60 said:
Grief has many sages as it did for me when my wife died five years ago, but it does move on arqios and I am a great believer in that when we lose somebody we love we must learn not to live without them but to live with the love they left behind.
Andy
November 20th, 2024 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Grief has many sages as it did for me when my wife died five years ago, but it does move on arqios and I am a great believer in that when we lose somebody we love we must learn not to live without them but to live with the love they left behind.
Andy
November 20th, 2024 02:11
Archeology of Understanding
Dan Williams said:
Graceful, sincere. \"Only time will reveal if we will find clarity or remain lost.\" ever so true. Well done.
November 20th, 2024 01:58
Dan Williams said:
Graceful, sincere. \"Only time will reveal if we will find clarity or remain lost.\" ever so true. Well done.
November 20th, 2024 01:58
Archeology of Understanding
Cassie58 said:
No one can teach you how to grieve. It is a personal journey from the start. There is no ending. Only acceptance and learning to live with it. It is like the ocean, some days calm and on others it will consume you whole. There is much depth in your lines and this piece has left its mark on me.
November 19th, 2024 19:13
Cassie58 said:
No one can teach you how to grieve. It is a personal journey from the start. There is no ending. Only acceptance and learning to live with it. It is like the ocean, some days calm and on others it will consume you whole. There is much depth in your lines and this piece has left its mark on me.
November 19th, 2024 19:13
Archeology of Understanding
Thomas W Case said:
You nailed it. Powerful work.
November 19th, 2024 19:08
Thomas W Case said:
You nailed it. Powerful work.
November 19th, 2024 19:08
Archeology of Understanding
Doggerel Dave said:
There are no time limits to those unexpected moments you mention in your comments, Rik.
November 19th, 2024 18:53
Doggerel Dave said:
There are no time limits to those unexpected moments you mention in your comments, Rik.
November 19th, 2024 18:53
Archeology of Understanding
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very deep friend! There is no time limit to grief and we all, whether we want to or not, end up going through it uniquely. Thank you for sharing! 🙏
November 19th, 2024 14:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very deep friend! There is no time limit to grief and we all, whether we want to or not, end up going through it uniquely. Thank you for sharing! 🙏
November 19th, 2024 14:14
a true marriage of minds
Cassie58 said:
I enjoyed your lines here. Poets are a breed unto themselves, no one understands a poet like another poet. Your fourth stanza stood out for me in particular. Great piece.
November 19th, 2024 10:33
Cassie58 said:
I enjoyed your lines here. Poets are a breed unto themselves, no one understands a poet like another poet. Your fourth stanza stood out for me in particular. Great piece.
November 19th, 2024 10:33
Archeology of Understanding
Neville said:
You are absolutely right .. grief is a very personal experience & unique to any given individual it is also one which no one wishes to experience .. ever but one does .. I encounter much of it in my profession yet am a vary poor griever .. I am impressed with the words you shared here today .. & truly ..
November 19th, 2024 04:49
Neville said:
You are absolutely right .. grief is a very personal experience & unique to any given individual it is also one which no one wishes to experience .. ever but one does .. I encounter much of it in my profession yet am a vary poor griever .. I am impressed with the words you shared here today .. & truly ..
November 19th, 2024 04:49
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