Comments received on poems by arqios
not your day, either?
Cassie58 said:
Some great metaphors here arqios, but I would be lying if I told you I felt no pain. I did.
wrenched dreams
Another fine write from your prolific pen. Have a word with my muse will you. She’s slacking.
February 16th, 2025 12:18
Cassie58 said:
Some great metaphors here arqios, but I would be lying if I told you I felt no pain. I did.
wrenched dreams
Another fine write from your prolific pen. Have a word with my muse will you. She’s slacking.
February 16th, 2025 12:18
once upon a long ago
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Clunky means more room to play. This \"work in progress\" is quite good as is, my friend.
\"Lines emerged, each a reminder of the struggle, a / record of the battle waged on paper.\" These words really hit home. I know that battle! ❤️🙏
February 16th, 2025 11:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Clunky means more room to play. This \"work in progress\" is quite good as is, my friend.
\"Lines emerged, each a reminder of the struggle, a / record of the battle waged on paper.\" These words really hit home. I know that battle! ❤️🙏
February 16th, 2025 11:00
once upon a long ago
orchidee said:
Good write A. Is that an olive tree/branch there? (Do shut up Orchi. lol).
February 16th, 2025 10:42
orchidee said:
Good write A. Is that an olive tree/branch there? (Do shut up Orchi. lol).
February 16th, 2025 10:42
reflection by the sea
whats write for me said:
Enthralling verse, thank you.
February 16th, 2025 09:39
whats write for me said:
Enthralling verse, thank you.
February 16th, 2025 09:39
once upon a long ago
Neville said:
There\'s nowt wrong with a bit o good old clunk now n then .. and in this case it seems to work well .. Neville
February 16th, 2025 07:24
Neville said:
There\'s nowt wrong with a bit o good old clunk now n then .. and in this case it seems to work well .. Neville
February 16th, 2025 07:24
cowardly survivor
Ma5on said:
arqios,
Your poem paints a gripping & emotionally charged portrait of a fugitive, or perhaps a haunted soul, struggling between fear & survival. The imagery is vivid, the pacing urgent, & the tone reflective.
This is a well-crafted, gripping poem with a powerful message about survival. The flow is sometimes a little awkward but to me that adds a gritty emphasis, overall, it’s a compelling piece.
Very much enjoyed,
regards
Ma5on
February 16th, 2025 07:22
Ma5on said:
arqios,
Your poem paints a gripping & emotionally charged portrait of a fugitive, or perhaps a haunted soul, struggling between fear & survival. The imagery is vivid, the pacing urgent, & the tone reflective.
This is a well-crafted, gripping poem with a powerful message about survival. The flow is sometimes a little awkward but to me that adds a gritty emphasis, overall, it’s a compelling piece.
Very much enjoyed,
regards
Ma5on
February 16th, 2025 07:22
once upon a long ago
Poetic Licence said:
A single thought, or a single spark, or a single bit of hope and if you take it how everything can change, enjoyed the read from long ago
February 16th, 2025 06:13
Poetic Licence said:
A single thought, or a single spark, or a single bit of hope and if you take it how everything can change, enjoyed the read from long ago
February 16th, 2025 06:13
once upon a long ago
sorenbarrett said:
Birth is not an easy process, conception, development, birth itself with the pains that accompany it. This poem in some way reminded me of Poe and that was strange given the topic. I above all else love the title it could easily be the title of a book or movie.
February 16th, 2025 03:44
sorenbarrett said:
Birth is not an easy process, conception, development, birth itself with the pains that accompany it. This poem in some way reminded me of Poe and that was strange given the topic. I above all else love the title it could easily be the title of a book or movie.
February 16th, 2025 03:44
not your day, either?
Goldfinch60 said:
But the good times came arqios.
Andy
February 16th, 2025 02:47
Goldfinch60 said:
But the good times came arqios.
Andy
February 16th, 2025 02:47
not your day, either?
David Wakeling said:
There seems to be some memories here that are good bad and ugly. Hope better days have followed
February 15th, 2025 20:58
David Wakeling said:
There seems to be some memories here that are good bad and ugly. Hope better days have followed
February 15th, 2025 20:58
not your day, either?
arqios said:
Thanks for the fave: @Mutley Ravishes and @Cheeky Missy 🪶🙏🏻🕊🌷
February 15th, 2025 20:20
arqios said:
Thanks for the fave: @Mutley Ravishes and @Cheeky Missy 🪶🙏🏻🕊🌷
February 15th, 2025 20:20
“my bloody valentine”
Kevin Hulme said:
The Seven Members of the ‘North Side’ gang had a bad Valentine’s Day In 1929 as well.
This is a fine Poem about the Origins of the Tradition. Well Said.
February 15th, 2025 10:07
Kevin Hulme said:
The Seven Members of the ‘North Side’ gang had a bad Valentine’s Day In 1929 as well.
This is a fine Poem about the Origins of the Tradition. Well Said.
February 15th, 2025 10:07
not your day, either?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Living life with the tools we\'ve got. This is a poem of the struggle of living life with less than what is needed to get by. A car that barely rumbles along, is falling apart, and is running on fumes and flat tires. Brilliant metaphor, my friend! 🌹👏
February 15th, 2025 09:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Living life with the tools we\'ve got. This is a poem of the struggle of living life with less than what is needed to get by. A car that barely rumbles along, is falling apart, and is running on fumes and flat tires. Brilliant metaphor, my friend! 🌹👏
February 15th, 2025 09:39
not your day, either?
My Boy Ryngkhlem said:
Raw, emotional, and beautifully written. These words will stay with me for a while🙏
February 15th, 2025 08:35
My Boy Ryngkhlem said:
Raw, emotional, and beautifully written. These words will stay with me for a while🙏
February 15th, 2025 08:35
not your day, either?
Poetic Licence said:
I could be completely off the mark here and probably am, but i get the sense of a sad childhood, nothing to dream for, lack of hope, best that they can do is try to survive, sorry if i have got it wrong. To me this a emotional and haunting write.
February 15th, 2025 08:12
Poetic Licence said:
I could be completely off the mark here and probably am, but i get the sense of a sad childhood, nothing to dream for, lack of hope, best that they can do is try to survive, sorry if i have got it wrong. To me this a emotional and haunting write.
February 15th, 2025 08:12
not your day, either?
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphors of past now rusted dreams and memories in the squalor of the present where action not taken has led to languor and a settling into malaise. May be way off but this is the feel I get
February 15th, 2025 07:06
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphors of past now rusted dreams and memories in the squalor of the present where action not taken has led to languor and a settling into malaise. May be way off but this is the feel I get
February 15th, 2025 07:06
“my bloody valentine”
My Boy Ryngkhlem said:
Beautiful poem! It really captures the true meaning of Valentine\'s story. Well written, dude!
February 15th, 2025 04:10
My Boy Ryngkhlem said:
Beautiful poem! It really captures the true meaning of Valentine\'s story. Well written, dude!
February 15th, 2025 04:10
all thinkers great and small
Kevin Hulme said:
Fine words . It takes all Sorts ( Not the Liquorice Kind) to make a World. I always try to learn something new every day by reading.
February 14th, 2025 20:08
Kevin Hulme said:
Fine words . It takes all Sorts ( Not the Liquorice Kind) to make a World. I always try to learn something new every day by reading.
February 14th, 2025 20:08
“my bloody valentine”
David Wakeling said:
This is a powerful history lesson. I always thought Valentines day was suspicious. Now I know why.Excellent
February 14th, 2025 15:46
David Wakeling said:
This is a powerful history lesson. I always thought Valentines day was suspicious. Now I know why.Excellent
February 14th, 2025 15:46
“my bloody valentine”
sorenbarrett said:
Very timely and historical, mythical, metaphorical and poetic. A most lovely write that captured my heart and deserves a fave
February 14th, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
Very timely and historical, mythical, metaphorical and poetic. A most lovely write that captured my heart and deserves a fave
February 14th, 2025 04:33
“my bloody valentine”
Poetic Licence said:
I was not aware of the history of valentine, so through this historical piece i have learnt something. Like the lay out like an old classic, enjoyed the read.
February 14th, 2025 03:36
Poetic Licence said:
I was not aware of the history of valentine, so through this historical piece i have learnt something. Like the lay out like an old classic, enjoyed the read.
February 14th, 2025 03:36
“my bloody valentine”
Cassie58 said:
A historical write with a tragic ending arqios. And since then there have been a multitude of perfect love matches resulting in happiness and probably a similar number of tragedies. Hoping your day is special.
February 14th, 2025 03:30
Cassie58 said:
A historical write with a tragic ending arqios. And since then there have been a multitude of perfect love matches resulting in happiness and probably a similar number of tragedies. Hoping your day is special.
February 14th, 2025 03:30
“my bloody valentine”
orchidee said:
A fine historical write A. It has a classical feel to it - ye olden days, yet a new poem.
I say this (title) to KP, but not in the same sense. Ooh lol!
February 14th, 2025 03:12
orchidee said:
A fine historical write A. It has a classical feel to it - ye olden days, yet a new poem.
I say this (title) to KP, but not in the same sense. Ooh lol!
February 14th, 2025 03:12
“my bloody valentine”
Goldfinch60 said:
But the following Valetines have been full of love aqios.
Andy
February 14th, 2025 02:51
Goldfinch60 said:
But the following Valetines have been full of love aqios.
Andy
February 14th, 2025 02:51
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