Comments received on poems by arqios



Boy and Bonnet
FrasMac said:

full of sweetness, this travels well to my senses.

November 30th, 2024 15:59

Boy and Bonnet
Tony36 said:

Beautiful

November 30th, 2024 12:01

Boy and Bonnet
orchidee said:

Good write A.

November 30th, 2024 11:53

Boy and Bonnet
sorenbarrett said:

That’s very heartwarming and I’m sure all mothers feel the same. A very tender poem and nicely done.

November 30th, 2024 10:12

Boy and Bonnet
Neville said:



this has a very dated feel to it .. for a moment I thought Robert Herrick who I have a soft spot for .. but then it took off and I still liked it muchly .. Neville

November 30th, 2024 08:31

Boy and Bonnet
Tristan Robert Lange said:

There’s nothing like a mother’s love and SPRING!!!! Thank you for bringing it up here! Well done, friend! 🌹👏

November 30th, 2024 08:13

Boy and Bonnet
Cassie58 said:

Maternal love, nothing like it. This poem warms my heart on a cold grey day. Beautiful poetry. Thank you for some sunshine. Nice posted image too.

November 30th, 2024 06:44

winter’s embrace
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful words arqios and so true.

Andy

November 30th, 2024 02:23

winter’s embrace
Doggerel Dave said:

For me I try to extract something from a poem I\'ve read...but find it terrible hard when the subject is winter and snow..... but hang on a minute... nonet? Down the rabbit hole... I\'m on my way....
Thanks.

November 29th, 2024 17:34

winter’s embrace
David Wakeling said:

This is clever.I have never seen snow so it transported me there.Excellent

November 29th, 2024 14:47

winter’s embrace
Tristan Robert Lange said:

A Northern Hemisphere folk myself! Thank you for this. May not be a fan of the dark days and the cold, but you’ve hit the beauty of a winter night so well. Bravo friend! 👏🌹

November 29th, 2024 10:54

winter’s embrace
Neville said:



Disorientatingly beautiful .. for a moment I thought I woke up in a snow globe .. Neville

November 29th, 2024 09:31

winter’s embrace
Cassie58 said:

Perfect winter’s scene, picture postcard and words to match. I guess you are sitting on the beach lapping up the sun. Lovely imagery, nice brevity.

November 29th, 2024 07:23

winter’s embrace
2781 said:

I wondered where you were...
You took me there, clear skies after snow. The wind cuts like a knife. You need a good fire!

November 29th, 2024 06:26

winter’s embrace
sorenbarrett said:

I can feel it Cryptic I can see it and that’s all that’s needed for it to be poetic

November 29th, 2024 06:03

mateship’s duty of care
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words arqios, may that light always be shining for you.

Andy

November 29th, 2024 02:51

mateship’s duty of care
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Indeed, a blessing to be thankful for! Well done friend! And since you are at least observing poetically, a Happy Thanksgiving to you my friend! Your poem captures the true essence! 🌹👏

November 28th, 2024 09:16

mateship’s duty of care
Cassie58 said:

The true meaning of thanksgiving. The sincerity here was marvelous. A special bond and you are truly thankful. Wonderful.

November 28th, 2024 08:43

mateship’s duty of care
Neville said:



This is absolutely lovely .. I just knew it was about the bond between brothers from the off .. your authors note confirmed that & reminded me of the relationship I have with my own younger brother .. Neville

November 28th, 2024 08:00

mateship’s duty of care
Doggerel Dave said:

Kinship, mateship, brother doesn\'t necessarily have to imply a connection by blood, does it? Where it occurs it can anchor and stabilize one\'s existence. Good call.

November 28th, 2024 07:30

mateship’s duty of care
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of kinship and closeness very nicely worded, convey the feeling of family weather of blood or just spirit

November 28th, 2024 06:54

mateship’s duty of care
Poetic Licence said:

Beautifully written

November 28th, 2024 06:05

mateship’s duty of care
2781 said:

Amen.

November 28th, 2024 05:22

when the downpour ends
Teddy.15 said:

Exquisite poetry 🌹

November 28th, 2024 04:36

when the downpour ends
Goldfinch60 said:

The silence after the rainfall is so encompassing arqios, fine words.

Andy

November 28th, 2024 01:41

when the downpour ends
Thad Wilk said:

A very touching and
emotional poem so
eloquently expressed!! 👍
Strong feelings and
message,, just resonates
with greatness!! Love it! 🤩
Thanks for sharing, much enjoyed!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad


November 27th, 2024 21:28

when the downpour ends
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful work.

November 27th, 2024 20:47

when the downpour ends
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wow! Knowing this was written in April 2020, during beginning pandemic, adds a ton this already impactful poem. A wonderful write my friend that shows hope in the midst of sadness and seeming hopelessness. Brilliant and beautiful! 🌹👏

November 27th, 2024 11:16

when the downpour ends
rin said:

People have paths they have lived and will live, and there is no hope for them unless the dots are connected, but it is very nice that a route is shown to fill in the problems there.

November 27th, 2024 09:13

when the downpour ends
2781 said:

Timely again! We\' could be in for a soaking after the heat.

November 27th, 2024 08:25



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