Comments received on poems by hzugman



Choose Or Not
Neville said:



this is almost zen like .. & might well become juxtaposed to a tree falling in a forest with no one around to check whether it makes a sound or not ... and I kinda liked it really ............. Neville


February 7th, 2023 01:39

Climbing up the ladder
Doggerel Dave said:

Wot have I been telling you? Extend the wordage and the world (well MPS) is your oyster.....
Mine rarely appear and then hover around the bottom...oh woe is me...I shrink into a foetal position and refuse food or drink.....the world is dead to me....Oh do me a favour - what care I if my genius remains unacknowledged ..........................??

February 6th, 2023 21:05

Unconnected thoughts
Doggerel Dave said:

So it would seem, H. thanks for extending the riff...

February 5th, 2023 20:04

Unconnected thoughts
jarcher54 said:

Very creative way of cheating by submitting two (or three?) poems in one day! Howard, I do look forward to your contributions! You are like a Dr. Seuss for adults!

February 5th, 2023 11:25

Unconnected thoughts
orchidee said:

Good write H.

February 5th, 2023 10:32

Unconnected thoughts
Ok Waleed said:

I’m assuming you don’t believe in evolution ?

February 5th, 2023 10:25

Name calling
Doggerel Dave said:

Same system applies here with respect to \'Friends\'.
I like most of your stuff H, I\'d like to see some answers though......

February 4th, 2023 18:43

Name calling
orchidee said:

We have to be careful.
There could be all sorts of shifty looking folk wanting to be our \'friends\'. Not all are like that though. lol.

February 4th, 2023 10:12

Know thy country
itsme rachel said:

Those ignorant Americans didn\'t emerge from their mothers\' wombs any more cognizant of their nationality than any Somali, Italian, or Czech--I think many are lost in the zeitgeist, searching. That said, I\'ve no doubt there are plenty of immigrants who could teach many of us a thing or two about both the bliss and the responsibility of liberty.

February 3rd, 2023 15:23

Seldom or Never
orchidee said:

Good write H.
Similar to some people explaining things?
They say it.
Then they say it again slightly differently.
Then they say again what they originally said!
We\'ll be confused laddies! lol.

February 2nd, 2023 09:46

A sad event
Natalie Gladmir said:

Double trouble. I\'m sorry and I sympathize

February 2nd, 2023 05:49

A sad event
Natalie Gladmir said:

Dear author,
your quatrain is not only a sad reminder of the loss of a loved one, but also pleasant moments of living together with your woman. Let this day be more of a reminder of how good it was for you with your wife.

February 2nd, 2023 05:47

Poetry for everyone
jarcher54 said:

High minded and lowbrow! LOL

January 31st, 2023 11:02

Poetry for everyone
Ok Waleed said:

Welcome to the lonely boring lame club of poetry! Great contribution btw

January 31st, 2023 10:45

The magic Mixture
orchidee said:

Good write H.

January 29th, 2023 02:57

Don\'t be so sure
jarcher54 said:

I am CERTAIN this is witty and cute!

January 28th, 2023 20:07

Don\'t be so sure
L. B. Mek said:

Amen!
I too am a student of Humility
dear poet
thank you for sharing your wisdom
(I read and strive, to heed)

January 27th, 2023 04:42

Don\'t be so sure
orchidee said:

I\'m doggoned sure this is a good write H!

January 26th, 2023 15:13

It just takes one
orchidee said:

A fine write H.

January 25th, 2023 11:37

New information may bring new attitudes
orchidee said:

A fine write H.

January 21st, 2023 10:06

Today
orchidee said:

Today - well, every day - a fine poem by you H.

January 20th, 2023 14:33

Old guy on the 88s
Lillian said:

This poem is inspiring and encourages me to want to go perfect my skills in other areas of life.

January 17th, 2023 11:55

Set realistic goals
orchidee said:

A fine write H.

January 15th, 2023 13:24

On the average
orchidee said:

Good write H.

January 14th, 2023 14:47

Right or Wrong
Kinsey Peterson said:

You get to have an opinion but you don\'t always get to be right... words to live by dear poet

January 13th, 2023 11:33

And that\'s the truth
Doggerel Dave said:

I\'ve got nothing against trannies, mate - even though I don\'t understand - best you take the advice, that\'s all I can say....🙂

January 11th, 2023 03:18

A sad event
orchidee said:

A sensitive write H.

January 9th, 2023 12:57

Be your real self
orchidee said:

A fine write H.

January 7th, 2023 12:50

Hey, I\'m getting wet
Micahh said:

Simple, yet really good!

January 5th, 2023 11:51

Hey, I\'m getting wet
orchidee said:

Got that brolly?! lol.

January 5th, 2023 11:19



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