Comments received on poems by hzugman



It\'s on the the tip of my tongue
Doggerel Dave said:

Garn - that just told you the neurones were firing; didn\'t indicate they fired to good effect....πŸ˜‡!!!

April 4th, 2023 07:09

It\'s on the the tip of my tongue
Doggerel Dave said:

πŸ˜‡!!! Almost?

April 4th, 2023 02:21

She\'s real
Ok Waleed said:

Great feeling

April 2nd, 2023 20:27

The biggest gift
Doggerel Dave said:

Wish I knew who or what to thank;
Only we\'re here because we\'re here:
All other questions draw a blank --
So have a beer, be of good cheer.

March 31st, 2023 00:49

Two sides of a coin
Ok Waleed said:

Good poem

March 26th, 2023 19:59

Well, at least I\'m not late
MendedFences27 said:

This resonated with me. I guess it\'s part of the retired life. Try some longer poems. You can do it. - Phil A.

March 24th, 2023 13:10

Well, at least I\'m not late
Ok Waleed said:

Not having to clock in we truly lose control of time funny incident

March 24th, 2023 11:54

Do it!
orchidee said:

Yes, I was going to do it - then I forgot what I was going to do! Doh! lol.

March 24th, 2023 03:14

My place or your place
L. B. Mek said:

so true, dear poet
(victories as our ideal\'s
journey, as our solace of sincere
we affirm our worth, devoid
of results
accepting, in giving it our best
we\'ve fulfilled
all, that anyone may ask of us
and that, is enough...)

March 21st, 2023 04:17

Either way
L. B. Mek said:

a wise way to be
thanks for sharing

March 17th, 2023 04:44

It doesn\'t hurt to be lucky
jarcher54 said:

You can be so subtle! Making love and dinners parallel puts love in perspective, makes it a little less abstract. And equating it (indirectly) with dinners reminds us how miraculous even small pleasures and a little social company make life rich.

March 14th, 2023 10:09

Good advice
Ok Waleed said:

Great advice

March 13th, 2023 10:45

words rhyme sometimes
2781 said:

Falling on your sporange, sounds painful

March 11th, 2023 17:23

Do it yourself
hzugman said:

Thanx for the update 2781. And thanx for the compliment. Had careers in engineering and later sales but I never could nail down the hangman gig.

March 6th, 2023 10:37

Do it yourself
2781 said:

Pull the other one

March 6th, 2023 09:07

Whole lotta shakin\' goin\' on
L. B. Mek said:

(scorched fingers and heart\'s
tend, to teach us
to pace our adventure\'s in life)
a wonderfully relatable poem
admire your succinct wording
thanks for sharing, dear poet

March 6th, 2023 05:10

True friend
orchidee said:

Good write H.

March 4th, 2023 12:50

True friend
Ok Waleed said:

Sad

March 4th, 2023 12:12

Friendship
Natalie Gladmir said:

Dear Sir,
I admire your sense of humor!
Thank God, I don\'t have friends either who will tell me that my tights are torn. lol

March 3rd, 2023 16:00

Her
orchidee said:

Will that be \'She (or Her) who must be obeyed?!\' lol.

March 1st, 2023 13:33

Raise your hand if you know the question
Eileen Clark said:

Hi, short but so cool. If that word isn\'t used anymore try this one, great!

February 26th, 2023 15:48

Raise your hand if you know the question
orchidee said:

Good write H.

February 26th, 2023 11:08

Let it go
Ok Waleed said:

I agree, poetry is the souls piss and poop πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

February 25th, 2023 11:28

Let it go
orchidee said:

And baked beans?! lol.

February 25th, 2023 10:48

Depends upon how you look at it
hzugman said:

Wow! Thanx for the comment J54.

February 23rd, 2023 15:33

Depends upon how you look at it
jarcher54 said:

You get a like just for the humorous rhyme!

February 23rd, 2023 15:06

Dream Away
Ok Waleed said:

Glad to hear you’re dreaming of me

February 21st, 2023 11:09

Seriously
2781 said:

The greatest among them shall be your servant.

February 20th, 2023 16:56

Now hear this
Doggerel Dave said:

Sage advice, H.

Considered before being acted out?

February 19th, 2023 20:17

Yummy!
Natalie Gladmir said:

Even if you have errors in the diet, nothing bad will happen. You are funny, sir. Thanks for the good mood.

February 19th, 2023 15:38



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