Comments received on poems by hzugman



It CAN be better to give than receive
Ok Waleed said:

Your favorite non profit should be www.priceofwisdom.art

April 25th, 2023 09:34

Contrast is important
Audrey A. said:

I wonder if you are a super smeller like me? As thats probably the only thing that seems to wait the longest to be funkified. You drink the wine to wash away the carbs. The cheese keeps them both craved.

April 24th, 2023 20:37

Contrast is important
2781 said:

I agree.

April 24th, 2023 18:20

Contrast is important
orchidee said:

Good write H.

April 24th, 2023 12:57

Contrast is important
MysteryGhost said:

I don\'t know. I enjoy cheese and wine and can have them all the time. Great poem anyways!

April 24th, 2023 11:53

The intelligence gap
hzugman said:

Thanx for the comment Parisab.

April 23rd, 2023 09:11

The intelligence gap
Parisab said:

And forever more, good poet

April 22nd, 2023 13:22

The things that count
Rocky Lagou said:

Couldn\'t agree more, life is so precious. And this poem epitomizes the message so sweetly.

April 17th, 2023 11:22

Don\'t give up
Goldfinch60 said:

Persistence is the key to success in life.

Andy

April 17th, 2023 00:27

Is it true?
jarcher54 said:

Dark humor is always edgy. Good little aphorism!

April 11th, 2023 23:41

We should
Lorna said:

I measure, then cut and it\'s still wrong.

April 7th, 2023 01:39

We should
jarcher54 said:

Maybe so, but I am much more likely to eyeball it and cut first! I am not sure if think this is good advice, but your little ditty is in the great tradition of ancient didactic poetry-- how to farm, how to cure disease, etc. Poetry and advice often go hand in hand!

April 7th, 2023 01:33

We should
MysteryGhost said:

This is a very good life lesson in general. Always calculate everything you do to make sure its the right decision. Stoatin\'!

April 6th, 2023 15:50

We should
MysteryGhost said:

This is a very good life lesson in general. Always calculate everything you do to make sure its the right decision. Stoatin\'!

April 6th, 2023 15:50

It\'s on the the tip of my tongue
Doggerel Dave said:

Garn - that just told you the neurones were firing; didn\'t indicate they fired to good effect....😇!!!

April 4th, 2023 07:09

It\'s on the the tip of my tongue
Doggerel Dave said:

😇!!! Almost?

April 4th, 2023 02:21

She\'s real
Ok Waleed said:

Great feeling

April 2nd, 2023 20:27

The biggest gift
Doggerel Dave said:

Wish I knew who or what to thank;
Only we\'re here because we\'re here:
All other questions draw a blank --
So have a beer, be of good cheer.

March 31st, 2023 00:49

Two sides of a coin
Ok Waleed said:

Good poem

March 26th, 2023 19:59

Well, at least I\'m not late
MendedFences27 said:

This resonated with me. I guess it\'s part of the retired life. Try some longer poems. You can do it. - Phil A.

March 24th, 2023 13:10

Well, at least I\'m not late
Ok Waleed said:

Not having to clock in we truly lose control of time funny incident

March 24th, 2023 11:54

Do it!
orchidee said:

Yes, I was going to do it - then I forgot what I was going to do! Doh! lol.

March 24th, 2023 03:14

My place or your place
L. B. Mek said:

so true, dear poet
(victories as our ideal\'s
journey, as our solace of sincere
we affirm our worth, devoid
of results
accepting, in giving it our best
we\'ve fulfilled
all, that anyone may ask of us
and that, is enough...)

March 21st, 2023 04:17

Either way
L. B. Mek said:

a wise way to be
thanks for sharing

March 17th, 2023 04:44

It doesn\'t hurt to be lucky
jarcher54 said:

You can be so subtle! Making love and dinners parallel puts love in perspective, makes it a little less abstract. And equating it (indirectly) with dinners reminds us how miraculous even small pleasures and a little social company make life rich.

March 14th, 2023 10:09

Good advice
Ok Waleed said:

Great advice

March 13th, 2023 10:45

words rhyme sometimes
2781 said:

Falling on your sporange, sounds painful

March 11th, 2023 17:23

Do it yourself
hzugman said:

Thanx for the update 2781. And thanx for the compliment. Had careers in engineering and later sales but I never could nail down the hangman gig.

March 6th, 2023 10:37

Do it yourself
2781 said:

Pull the other one

March 6th, 2023 09:07

Whole lotta shakin\' goin\' on
L. B. Mek said:

(scorched fingers and heart\'s
tend, to teach us
to pace our adventure\'s in life)
a wonderfully relatable poem
admire your succinct wording
thanks for sharing, dear poet

March 6th, 2023 05:10



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