Comments received on poems by hzugman
And nothing but the truth
willowthewisp said:
Scary! But I agree--not nearly as scary as it sounds🙂
February 13th, 2023 14:33
willowthewisp said:
Scary! But I agree--not nearly as scary as it sounds🙂
February 13th, 2023 14:33
Meant to be
Ok Waleed said:
Thoughts on people not following their purpose in life ?
February 12th, 2023 11:37
Ok Waleed said:
Thoughts on people not following their purpose in life ?
February 12th, 2023 11:37
Day by day
Ok Waleed said:
I’ve been on a roll posting everyday on this site as well. Thanks for sharing your work
February 11th, 2023 09:58
Ok Waleed said:
I’ve been on a roll posting everyday on this site as well. Thanks for sharing your work
February 11th, 2023 09:58
Whose wine is it, anyway?
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks OKW for sorting that one.
I see you\'ve noted, H so...
How about (second line) \" Ain\'t getting none of mine\"..................Double negative?......Damn - back to the drawing board....well not the drawing board, exactly.....what\'s that thingo? ........ keyboard?....whatever...good luck anyway...
February 9th, 2023 23:42
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks OKW for sorting that one.
I see you\'ve noted, H so...
How about (second line) \" Ain\'t getting none of mine\"..................Double negative?......Damn - back to the drawing board....well not the drawing board, exactly.....what\'s that thingo? ........ keyboard?....whatever...good luck anyway...
February 9th, 2023 23:42
Me and she and the dog
Eileen Clark said:
I love it, short cute sweet and I can see the two of you.
February 8th, 2023 13:17
Eileen Clark said:
I love it, short cute sweet and I can see the two of you.
February 8th, 2023 13:17
Me and she and the dog
willowthewisp said:
This made me smile—such a joyful and warm image
February 7th, 2023 10:20
willowthewisp said:
This made me smile—such a joyful and warm image
February 7th, 2023 10:20
Choose Or Not
Neville said:
this is almost zen like .. & might well become juxtaposed to a tree falling in a forest with no one around to check whether it makes a sound or not ... and I kinda liked it really ............. Neville
February 7th, 2023 01:39
Neville said:
this is almost zen like .. & might well become juxtaposed to a tree falling in a forest with no one around to check whether it makes a sound or not ... and I kinda liked it really ............. Neville
February 7th, 2023 01:39
Climbing up the ladder
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot have I been telling you? Extend the wordage and the world (well MPS) is your oyster.....
Mine rarely appear and then hover around the bottom...oh woe is me...I shrink into a foetal position and refuse food or drink.....the world is dead to me....Oh do me a favour - what care I if my genius remains unacknowledged ..........................??
February 6th, 2023 21:05
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot have I been telling you? Extend the wordage and the world (well MPS) is your oyster.....
Mine rarely appear and then hover around the bottom...oh woe is me...I shrink into a foetal position and refuse food or drink.....the world is dead to me....Oh do me a favour - what care I if my genius remains unacknowledged ..........................??
February 6th, 2023 21:05
Unconnected thoughts
Doggerel Dave said:
So it would seem, H. thanks for extending the riff...
February 5th, 2023 20:04
Doggerel Dave said:
So it would seem, H. thanks for extending the riff...
February 5th, 2023 20:04
Unconnected thoughts
jarcher54 said:
Very creative way of cheating by submitting two (or three?) poems in one day! Howard, I do look forward to your contributions! You are like a Dr. Seuss for adults!
February 5th, 2023 11:25
jarcher54 said:
Very creative way of cheating by submitting two (or three?) poems in one day! Howard, I do look forward to your contributions! You are like a Dr. Seuss for adults!
February 5th, 2023 11:25
Unconnected thoughts
Ok Waleed said:
I’m assuming you don’t believe in evolution ?
February 5th, 2023 10:25
Ok Waleed said:
I’m assuming you don’t believe in evolution ?
February 5th, 2023 10:25
Name calling
Doggerel Dave said:
Same system applies here with respect to \'Friends\'.
I like most of your stuff H, I\'d like to see some answers though......
February 4th, 2023 18:43
Doggerel Dave said:
Same system applies here with respect to \'Friends\'.
I like most of your stuff H, I\'d like to see some answers though......
February 4th, 2023 18:43
Name calling
orchidee said:
We have to be careful.
There could be all sorts of shifty looking folk wanting to be our \'friends\'. Not all are like that though. lol.
February 4th, 2023 10:12
orchidee said:
We have to be careful.
There could be all sorts of shifty looking folk wanting to be our \'friends\'. Not all are like that though. lol.
February 4th, 2023 10:12
Know thy country
itsme rachel said:
Those ignorant Americans didn\'t emerge from their mothers\' wombs any more cognizant of their nationality than any Somali, Italian, or Czech--I think many are lost in the zeitgeist, searching. That said, I\'ve no doubt there are plenty of immigrants who could teach many of us a thing or two about both the bliss and the responsibility of liberty.
February 3rd, 2023 15:23
itsme rachel said:
Those ignorant Americans didn\'t emerge from their mothers\' wombs any more cognizant of their nationality than any Somali, Italian, or Czech--I think many are lost in the zeitgeist, searching. That said, I\'ve no doubt there are plenty of immigrants who could teach many of us a thing or two about both the bliss and the responsibility of liberty.
February 3rd, 2023 15:23
Seldom or Never
orchidee said:
Good write H.
Similar to some people explaining things?
They say it.
Then they say it again slightly differently.
Then they say again what they originally said!
We\'ll be confused laddies! lol.
February 2nd, 2023 09:46
orchidee said:
Good write H.
Similar to some people explaining things?
They say it.
Then they say it again slightly differently.
Then they say again what they originally said!
We\'ll be confused laddies! lol.
February 2nd, 2023 09:46
A sad event
Natalie Gladmir said:
Double trouble. I\'m sorry and I sympathize
February 2nd, 2023 05:49
Natalie Gladmir said:
Double trouble. I\'m sorry and I sympathize
February 2nd, 2023 05:49
A sad event
Natalie Gladmir said:
Dear author,
your quatrain is not only a sad reminder of the loss of a loved one, but also pleasant moments of living together with your woman. Let this day be more of a reminder of how good it was for you with your wife.
February 2nd, 2023 05:47
Natalie Gladmir said:
Dear author,
your quatrain is not only a sad reminder of the loss of a loved one, but also pleasant moments of living together with your woman. Let this day be more of a reminder of how good it was for you with your wife.
February 2nd, 2023 05:47
Poetry for everyone
Ok Waleed said:
Welcome to the lonely boring lame club of poetry! Great contribution btw
January 31st, 2023 10:45
Ok Waleed said:
Welcome to the lonely boring lame club of poetry! Great contribution btw
January 31st, 2023 10:45
Don\'t be so sure
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
I too am a student of Humility
dear poet
thank you for sharing your wisdom
(I read and strive, to heed)
January 27th, 2023 04:42
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
I too am a student of Humility
dear poet
thank you for sharing your wisdom
(I read and strive, to heed)
January 27th, 2023 04:42
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